Poetry competition CLOSED 13th December 2014 4:02am
WINNER
Indie (Miss Indie)
Indie (Miss Indie)
RUNNER-UP:
case28
on depression
Anonymous
The Catacomb
's
vault pounds
with neuroticism
chiseling the feeble
bones
cracking
the shaft of pain
treading the craggy
waves of the marrow
sinking in the abyss
of a revolution
in necrosis.
's
vault pounds
with neuroticism
chiseling the feeble
bones
cracking
the shaft of pain
treading the craggy
waves of the marrow
sinking in the abyss
of a revolution
in necrosis.
Anonymous
Paper White flowers
bundled in barbed wires rusted
eye cold, blackened glass
Folded love letters
Broken hearth can’t hold ashes
No breath for blossoms of hope
wilting in forgotten dream
----"Paper Whites"
bundled in barbed wires rusted
eye cold, blackened glass
Folded love letters
Broken hearth can’t hold ashes
No breath for blossoms of hope
wilting in forgotten dream
----"Paper Whites"
Anonymous
Bumped
Just so my guest judges can find it
Will have the winners as soon as I get all the info from judges totalled up
Just so my guest judges can find it
Will have the winners as soon as I get all the info from judges totalled up
Anonymous
Writers that made the first cut were-
Lobodesanpedro for Reading in the dark
Alexander Case for Don't forget to breathe and Dish pig
And My Dad
Waterviolet for ...Drifting minds...
Ms Imperfect for Letting my depression swallow me whole
Atakti for Stained
Souladaratease for Out in Emptiness
And I Bought Into it
Viddax for Just rather empty
Caxton for ...Thirty Words seem like a lot...
Jaspersilence for The See Through
Uma for Fly Ash
Jemac for Degrees
Grace for cacophony on Silence
Mourganna for Hidden passage
Pseudonymous for On depression
Vee for Origami
Gabriel for On Depression
Miss Indie for Mornings and Midnight Cigarette burns
Writers who progressed to round 2
Miss Indie for Mornings and Midnight
Cigarette burns
Vee for Origami
Alexander Case for Don't forget to breathe and Dish pig
And My Dad
Atakti for Stained
Jemac for Degrees
After some discussion and re-reading, the winners were decided on as follows:
Third place- Vee
Second place -Alexander Case
First place- Miss Indie
Congrats winners and thank you all, these all have their wonderful attributes!
Thanks to Carpe_,noctem and to our non DUP helper too!
for the assistance with judging
I will add here that there were some tense moments in deciding between mr Case and Ms Indie for first place as all judges were thoroughly impressed by both! Great work
Lobodesanpedro for Reading in the dark
Alexander Case for Don't forget to breathe and Dish pig
And My Dad
Waterviolet for ...Drifting minds...
Ms Imperfect for Letting my depression swallow me whole
Atakti for Stained
Souladaratease for Out in Emptiness
And I Bought Into it
Viddax for Just rather empty
Caxton for ...Thirty Words seem like a lot...
Jaspersilence for The See Through
Uma for Fly Ash
Jemac for Degrees
Grace for cacophony on Silence
Mourganna for Hidden passage
Pseudonymous for On depression
Vee for Origami
Gabriel for On Depression
Miss Indie for Mornings and Midnight Cigarette burns
Writers who progressed to round 2
Miss Indie for Mornings and Midnight
Cigarette burns
Vee for Origami
Alexander Case for Don't forget to breathe and Dish pig
And My Dad
Atakti for Stained
Jemac for Degrees
After some discussion and re-reading, the winners were decided on as follows:
Third place- Vee
Second place -Alexander Case
First place- Miss Indie
Congrats winners and thank you all, these all have their wonderful attributes!
Thanks to Carpe_,noctem and to our non DUP helper too!
for the assistance with judging
I will add here that there were some tense moments in deciding between mr Case and Ms Indie for first place as all judges were thoroughly impressed by both! Great work
