Poetry competition CLOSED 2nd December 2014 11:06am
WINNER
HadesRising
HadesRising
RUNNERS-UP:
Quill-in-Heart
and RalfTheNose
MÅNE,LA LUNA,LADY MOON
Anonymous
Great composition,Tony,thank you for joining in...
Anonymous
Looking forward to your entry, Hades!!!
THE QUEEN OF NIGHT
Her great eye stares through the abyss
Piercing the hearts of beasts
Running wild to hunt at night
Kissed and blessed in the full moon light
Wolf mother, like no other
Enchanting me in silver light
Beast inside, it needs to dine
On haunted moors, the eerie cry
The barking of the hunting pack
I still remember the first seduction
The suction and rutting one cold winter evening
Then to dismember the last princess bride
In ballrooms with heirlooms splattered red when she screamed
Luna, wolf mother
Bless my heart with your shining light
Luna, moon mother
Unleash the beast to prowl the night
Devour, the midnight hour
Draws ever closer for the hunt
The tall tales of living hell
Are told behind closed doors, recount
Beyond the sight of Luna’s eye
The rapid beating of their frantic hearts
Reveal the parting so daunting, flesh rips apart
Ravenous eating under Luna’s watch
Entwined bestial, lustful, howling wicked screams
Luna, moon mother
Why must you leave? Why won’t you stay?
Luna, wolf mother
You keep the morning far away
Is it a blessing
Or a curse
To rehearse
The kill in the dark?
To give into
The wolf heart
Desire
To kill again
To lap the warm blood
Of fresh kills
Is my right
I am the alpha
Under her eye
She beckons
Silver light
To feast again
Her great eye, a spark of magic
She is the queen of night
With her pack of hungry wolves
Kissed and blessed in the winter woods
Luna, moon mother
Why must you leave? Why won’t you stay?
Luna, wolf mother
You keep the morning far away
Luna, wolf mother
Bless my heart with your shining light
Luna, moon mother
Unleash the beast to prowl the night
Vee said:
Akh-Tamar (O' Tamar)
Come to me,
in the light of the bewitching moon
curious beams carved with the breeze
illuminating the path of blinded destiny.
Whip the soul,
in flaming arms of passionate despair
the lantern guiding to the forbidden
shores, forsaking truth in death.
Vows ere-sworn,
parting whispers at maiden's bower
kisses quench wantonness flames
at dawn's first light, flight to watery grave.
The efface stamped,
sundering worlds and defiant minds
the glow which once wooed lovers
crestfallen from the mystical sky.
A lullaby ascents,
in the stillness of the night
the icy silvery moon, indifferent
to the cries of a broken heart.
Akh' Tamar!
Note: Based on the legend of Akh-Tamar, which is the second largest island in Lake Van (Akdamar) located in eastern part of Anatolia region of Turkey, was named after the legendary tale.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akdamar_Island
Btflly dark piece, Vee!
LeFay, great comp n entries here, tq:)
Akh-Tamar (O' Tamar)
Come to me,
in the light of the bewitching moon
curious beams carved with the breeze
illuminating the path of blinded destiny.
Whip the soul,
in flaming arms of passionate despair
the lantern guiding to the forbidden
shores, forsaking truth in death.
Vows ere-sworn,
parting whispers at maiden's bower
kisses quench wantonness flames
at dawn's first light, flight to watery grave.
The efface stamped,
sundering worlds and defiant minds
the glow which once wooed lovers
crestfallen from the mystical sky.
A lullaby ascents,
in the stillness of the night
the icy silvery moon, indifferent
to the cries of a broken heart.
Akh' Tamar!
Note: Based on the legend of Akh-Tamar, which is the second largest island in Lake Van (Akdamar) located in eastern part of Anatolia region of Turkey, was named after the legendary tale.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Akdamar_Island
Btflly dark piece, Vee!
LeFay, great comp n entries here, tq:)
yours murderously, the nihilistic moon
A tempting hafbitten golden slice
you were lying molten, shimmering
in magnificence that took my breaths
but that was all about
of those tricky blinded nights of lusty love
that you shamelessly bolstered
its bewildering growth
to the more alluring, the naked fullmoon
nailing your unedited mangoed fruition
over overcrowded scapegoats, millions like myself
maddeningly trancing from your yellowed transfusions
And then your cratered graveyard mind
plotted the awaited macabre
with a sly shruken phase
your secretly grimacingy uglier face
giving chronic death shots unasked
Still, the bonding magnetic waves you radiated
blinded masses in severe romanctic clutches
who never pintdoubted your masked magicploys
One out of the flock, you showed your real face
The No Moonness
Massacred were all in hysterical fissures over little left sanity minds
Atleast, you were kind enough a bit in the wholesome brutality episode
Imbibed death lessons from your nihilistic eyes
Nothing existed ever. here or anywhere
that would be called light, life. and love
A tempting hafbitten golden slice
you were lying molten, shimmering
in magnificence that took my breaths
but that was all about
of those tricky blinded nights of lusty love
that you shamelessly bolstered
its bewildering growth
to the more alluring, the naked fullmoon
nailing your unedited mangoed fruition
over overcrowded scapegoats, millions like myself
maddeningly trancing from your yellowed transfusions
And then your cratered graveyard mind
plotted the awaited macabre
with a sly shruken phase
your secretly grimacingy uglier face
giving chronic death shots unasked
Still, the bonding magnetic waves you radiated
blinded masses in severe romanctic clutches
who never pintdoubted your masked magicploys
One out of the flock, you showed your real face
The No Moonness
Massacred were all in hysterical fissures over little left sanity minds
Atleast, you were kind enough a bit in the wholesome brutality episode
Imbibed death lessons from your nihilistic eyes
Nothing existed ever. here or anywhere
that would be called light, life. and love
Anonymous
I am enjoying the tremendous amount of talent here....
Hades,thanks for a journey of magical words...
Uma,sheer dark lunar creation
Hades,thanks for a journey of magical words...
Uma,sheer dark lunar creation
Anonymous
Ahhhh,I am totally enchanted by so much moon magic.
I might select some people to vote to help make the descision
I might select some people to vote to help make the descision
Anonymous
Thank you very much,Kayla,for your vuluntary vote,highly appreciated
GREAT IDEA about an endless moon thread
GREAT IDEA about an endless moon thread
HadesRising said:
THE QUEEN OF NIGHT
Her great eye stares through the abyss
Piercing the hearts of beasts
Running wild to hunt at night
Kissed and blessed in the full moon light
Wolf mother, like no other
Enchanting me in silver light
Beast inside, it needs to dine
On haunted moors, the eerie cry
The barking of the hunting pack
I still remember the first seduction
The suction and rutting one cold winter evening
Then to dismember the last princess bride
In ballrooms with heirlooms splattered red when she screamed
Luna, wolf mother
Bless my heart with your shining light
Luna, moon mother
Unleash the beast to prowl the night
Devour, the midnight hour
Draws ever closer for the hunt
The tall tales of living hell
Are told behind closed doors, recount
Beyond the sight of Luna’s eye
The rapid beating of their frantic hearts
Reveal the parting so daunting, flesh rips apart
Ravenous eating under Luna’s watch
Entwined bestial, lustful, howling wicked screams
Luna, moon mother
Why must you leave? Why won’t you stay?
Luna, wolf mother
You keep the morning far away
Is it a blessing
Or a curse
To rehearse
The kill in the dark?
To give into
The wolf heart
Desire
To kill again
To lap the warm blood
Of fresh kills
Is my right
I am the alpha
Under her eye
She beckons
Silver light
To feast again
Her great eye, a spark of magic
She is the queen of night
With her pack of hungry wolves
Kissed and blessed in the winter woods
Luna, moon mother
Why must you leave? Why won’t you stay?
Luna, wolf mother
You keep the morning far away
Luna, wolf mother
Bless my heart with your shining light
Luna, moon mother
Unleash the beast to prowl the night
You know I love your poetry, Hades, and this one is definitely one of my favorites of yours! Very good choice to submit it to this contest, it is easily one of the best of the bunch. :D
THE QUEEN OF NIGHT
Her great eye stares through the abyss
Piercing the hearts of beasts
Running wild to hunt at night
Kissed and blessed in the full moon light
Wolf mother, like no other
Enchanting me in silver light
Beast inside, it needs to dine
On haunted moors, the eerie cry
The barking of the hunting pack
I still remember the first seduction
The suction and rutting one cold winter evening
Then to dismember the last princess bride
In ballrooms with heirlooms splattered red when she screamed
Luna, wolf mother
Bless my heart with your shining light
Luna, moon mother
Unleash the beast to prowl the night
Devour, the midnight hour
Draws ever closer for the hunt
The tall tales of living hell
Are told behind closed doors, recount
Beyond the sight of Luna’s eye
The rapid beating of their frantic hearts
Reveal the parting so daunting, flesh rips apart
Ravenous eating under Luna’s watch
Entwined bestial, lustful, howling wicked screams
Luna, moon mother
Why must you leave? Why won’t you stay?
Luna, wolf mother
You keep the morning far away
Is it a blessing
Or a curse
To rehearse
The kill in the dark?
To give into
The wolf heart
Desire
To kill again
To lap the warm blood
Of fresh kills
Is my right
I am the alpha
Under her eye
She beckons
Silver light
To feast again
Her great eye, a spark of magic
She is the queen of night
With her pack of hungry wolves
Kissed and blessed in the winter woods
Luna, moon mother
Why must you leave? Why won’t you stay?
Luna, wolf mother
You keep the morning far away
Luna, wolf mother
Bless my heart with your shining light
Luna, moon mother
Unleash the beast to prowl the night
You know I love your poetry, Hades, and this one is definitely one of my favorites of yours! Very good choice to submit it to this contest, it is easily one of the best of the bunch. :D
Anonymous
I have selected six poets to assist me in this comp.
Four have accepted this offer so far
Their names will be revealed later
Four have accepted this offer so far
Their names will be revealed later
Anonymous
All poets whom I contacted,accepted the request,PROUD AND HAPPY about that,so far,seems two poems are chosen.
Am waiting for the last reply,will post all replies so that each poet or poem gets all credits given.
Am waiting for the last reply,will post all replies so that each poet or poem gets all credits given.
