Poetry competition CLOSED 11th June 2014 5:06pm
WINNER
souladareatease
souladareatease
RUNNERS-UP:
Imagining
and EngrVV
DU Member Grace
POP!
So loving
so soothing and peaceful
like music her words play
close your eyes and glide
listen to them with your mind
soft and gentle,a sweet lullaby
then...POP!
like a jack in the box
she springs on you
words that surprise
take you somewhere unexpected
painful pleasure,dark and scary
hot and juicy
that's Grace
sweet and innocent
but be ready to tuck and roll
when she lights you on fire.
Just never know what you''ll get.
So loving
so soothing and peaceful
like music her words play
close your eyes and glide
listen to them with your mind
soft and gentle,a sweet lullaby
then...POP!
like a jack in the box
she springs on you
words that surprise
take you somewhere unexpected
painful pleasure,dark and scary
hot and juicy
that's Grace
sweet and innocent
but be ready to tuck and roll
when she lights you on fire.
Just never know what you''ll get.
I thank all the participants. I am honoured and humbled by your views about me. I fall short of all of them, but I wish I am I wish I were as ethereally beautiful as depicted. All of you wrote tremendously well and are all winners in my sight; however we can only award one trophy.
HEAVENLY GRACE by EngrVV: That was a beautiful poem; you see the part of me that is stuck in the romantic part of life. I wish that so much at times; that only the good, kind, honest and sweet exist; which alas are mere fantasy. Thank you so much.
The Glowing Guardian by Souladareatease: Soul, thank you for that poem. You touched my thoughts on many levels, although not as wise as depicted. Be that I am. Star lights in my eyes, Yes. Thank You!!
LUNAR MERMAID by Mourganna: I love your poem, as it depicted the side of me that love the twilight; I often walk under the moonlit sky; fantasizing about magical worlds and past lives. Thank you so much, Mourganna.
Dryad by Glynis: So beautiful. I love the woods, and nature as a whole; they inspire me in their stark beauty and if I was a spirit of the woods, I would choose the oak. A Dryad I would be. Thank you, dear Glynis.
POP by Hashman: Very kind words from you; I am honoured that you think of me like that. I feel pretty when you say it that way. Thank you so much, Hashman.
I am passing the baton now to the next winner. Good Luck.
HEAVENLY GRACE by EngrVV: That was a beautiful poem; you see the part of me that is stuck in the romantic part of life. I wish that so much at times; that only the good, kind, honest and sweet exist; which alas are mere fantasy. Thank you so much.
The Glowing Guardian by Souladareatease: Soul, thank you for that poem. You touched my thoughts on many levels, although not as wise as depicted. Be that I am. Star lights in my eyes, Yes. Thank You!!
LUNAR MERMAID by Mourganna: I love your poem, as it depicted the side of me that love the twilight; I often walk under the moonlit sky; fantasizing about magical worlds and past lives. Thank you so much, Mourganna.
Dryad by Glynis: So beautiful. I love the woods, and nature as a whole; they inspire me in their stark beauty and if I was a spirit of the woods, I would choose the oak. A Dryad I would be. Thank you, dear Glynis.
POP by Hashman: Very kind words from you; I am honoured that you think of me like that. I feel pretty when you say it that way. Thank you so much, Hashman.
I am passing the baton now to the next winner. Good Luck.
