Poetry competition CLOSED 20th April 2014 11:38am
WINNER
Madintellect (Mike stew)
Madintellect (Mike stew)
RUNNERS-UP:
Satyr
and gazellemon
new rap battle
Madintellect said:Lol thats funny..
Your eyes black coal:D i'll shackle your soul
Are u on crack? I think so.
You have phycosis, thats fine
Its all in your mind...
That fact is your really just a person
With a reality perversion lol
Its a good occurs when..
I read your stuff
But I call your bluff
Your weak. Not tuff
Horns? Enough!
Of your dillusional fantasy
your conclusion? Should be to plan to see
The devils not real, god dammit the..
Shit you say...
is not ok
Just walk away
You rock? No way
Think this rap? Ok
But its not
your mentally insane, and I hope u caught
Talking crazyness
The doctors will take your piss
And check drugs
I dont respect slugs
Who believe in delusions
You need institution
to moniter u
I mean that, no joke.
Your fucking nuts
The devil:D bwah ahaha
U gotta be kidding
Who the F u pretend to be..
Is your bussiness...
Coo.coo.catcho
Its time to grow up and stop living in fantasy land
Its too late to defend
drop your hate you send
Your literally crazy my friend
the end
What if I told you I was crazy... Would you believe me? Or what if I told you that it was you who have breached the boundaries ov reality, and it is I that is perfectly sane!
You can call me psychotic, but it's more like schizophrenic
In the sanctum ov my mind, my words are pathogenic
Dementia is the game
In the mind ov the insane
Dropping hate onto others
When you're the one to blame
I've already been institutionalized
Been there too long to leave me fucking traumatized
I don't claim to be the D
Just host to one or several
Ov the demons in His horde
In His legions unexplored
From the horrors ov this testament
I'll leave you with this detriment
That your thoughts are all irrelevant
And your intelligence is an impediment
In the eyes ov this decadent affectionate
Your eyes black coal:D i'll shackle your soul
Are u on crack? I think so.
You have phycosis, thats fine
Its all in your mind...
That fact is your really just a person
With a reality perversion lol
Its a good occurs when..
I read your stuff
But I call your bluff
Your weak. Not tuff
Horns? Enough!
Of your dillusional fantasy
your conclusion? Should be to plan to see
The devils not real, god dammit the..
Shit you say...
is not ok
Just walk away
You rock? No way
Think this rap? Ok
But its not
your mentally insane, and I hope u caught
Talking crazyness
The doctors will take your piss
And check drugs
I dont respect slugs
Who believe in delusions
You need institution
to moniter u
I mean that, no joke.
Your fucking nuts
The devil:D bwah ahaha
U gotta be kidding
Who the F u pretend to be..
Is your bussiness...
Coo.coo.catcho
Its time to grow up and stop living in fantasy land
Its too late to defend
drop your hate you send
Your literally crazy my friend
the end
What if I told you I was crazy... Would you believe me? Or what if I told you that it was you who have breached the boundaries ov reality, and it is I that is perfectly sane!
You can call me psychotic, but it's more like schizophrenic
In the sanctum ov my mind, my words are pathogenic
Dementia is the game
In the mind ov the insane
Dropping hate onto others
When you're the one to blame
I've already been institutionalized
Been there too long to leave me fucking traumatized
I don't claim to be the D
Just host to one or several
Ov the demons in His horde
In His legions unexplored
From the horrors ov this testament
I'll leave you with this detriment
That your thoughts are all irrelevant
And your intelligence is an impediment
In the eyes ov this decadent affectionate
Ok, so.. you are the most fucked in the head,
i hope you haven't bred yet,
your genes shouldn't spread they are a threat to humanity's success,
instead I abet you drop dead,
outdated like cassettes and pencil lead,
I tend to say what upsets,
you got cold sweats over what i said,
present you with a 9 for Russian roulette,
i bet you forget there is no reset,
Brain matter makes a lovely vignette,
No one wept when they read it in the gazette,
because no one respects your attempt to connect,
(PLEASE DON'T KILL YOURSELF. I RESPECT YOU SIR. THIS IS JUST A GAME.)
i hope you haven't bred yet,
your genes shouldn't spread they are a threat to humanity's success,
instead I abet you drop dead,
outdated like cassettes and pencil lead,
I tend to say what upsets,
you got cold sweats over what i said,
present you with a 9 for Russian roulette,
i bet you forget there is no reset,
Brain matter makes a lovely vignette,
No one wept when they read it in the gazette,
because no one respects your attempt to connect,
(PLEASE DON'T KILL YOURSELF. I RESPECT YOU SIR. THIS IS JUST A GAME.)
Anonymous
Most of those verses read like text book entries
intro to Psychology terminology and the glossary
with a snippet or two from Biology 101
forced rhymes that make no sense and mixing up
clever rap skill with plain old offensive
we would've had more humor if there'd been more intelligence
what i'm saying is irrelevant
and there's nothing more offensive to me
than what I write and publish on myself
I sometimes wish I could be someone else
I'm sick of having to decipher they're from their
and there and a hundred other things like it
I think that words and language should matter to writers
or maybe the reader should matter more and that's what
spell-check was invented for
ninety-eight percent of whats typed on here
shouldn't be
hard to believe so many think they have talent
makes me wonder
so I don't say that much anymore
Are u trying to say none of us have talent? I was just playing around I dont actually think im better than anyone here. I think I hate rap battles. It just promotes arrogance and ego.. Which is the problem people. I dont even know why I entered this. Now that I read i feel like a tool. And sorry I dont have spell check in case you didnt notice.
Anyway, the winner is..... Mica the moon dancer!!! If 3crows is ok with that lol. No hard feeling to anybody btw. your name is a good one three crows, was just fucking with. And satyr? Sorry to hear u have scitzophenia man thats a tuff go. Keep your head up bud, your a talented rhymer 100%
Peace!
Anyway, the winner is..... Mica the moon dancer!!! If 3crows is ok with that lol. No hard feeling to anybody btw. your name is a good one three crows, was just fucking with. And satyr? Sorry to hear u have scitzophenia man thats a tuff go. Keep your head up bud, your a talented rhymer 100%
Peace!
mikimoondancer said:
Most of those verses read like text book entries
intro to Psychology terminology and the glossary
with a snippet or two from Biology 101
forced rhymes that make no sense and mixing up
clever rap skill with plain old offensive
we would've had more humor if there'd been more intelligence
what i'm saying is irrelevant
and there's nothing more offensive to me
than what I write and publish on myself
I sometimes wish I could be someone else
I'm sick of having to decipher they're from their
and there and a hundred other things like it
I think that words and language should matter to writers
or maybe the reader should matter more and that's what
spell-check was invented for
ninety-eight percent of whats typed on here
shouldn't be
hard to believe so many think they have talent
makes me wonder
so I don't say that much anymore
Now I'll agree with you that grammar is essential
When dealing with these neanderthals, nobody has potential
To differentiate between their, there, and they're
Perhaps they should take a lesson in reading from Voltaire
As for the other comparisons and correlations,
Who are you to start making these accusations?
For generations, fluctuations ov Great Expectations
Have befallen us all, changing the language with deliberation
Taking our dialects and dialogues under extreme consideration
The fact that you think yourself so "posh"
Has earned yourself a seat in the center ov this mosh
Ov proportions so epic
It's about to get hectic
Our minds are frenetic
No longer empathetic
To your critical thoughts
On our grammar producing this verbal dross
Such an atrocity caused by this response
At a loss
Most of those verses read like text book entries
intro to Psychology terminology and the glossary
with a snippet or two from Biology 101
forced rhymes that make no sense and mixing up
clever rap skill with plain old offensive
we would've had more humor if there'd been more intelligence
what i'm saying is irrelevant
and there's nothing more offensive to me
than what I write and publish on myself
I sometimes wish I could be someone else
I'm sick of having to decipher they're from their
and there and a hundred other things like it
I think that words and language should matter to writers
or maybe the reader should matter more and that's what
spell-check was invented for
ninety-eight percent of whats typed on here
shouldn't be
hard to believe so many think they have talent
makes me wonder
so I don't say that much anymore
Now I'll agree with you that grammar is essential
When dealing with these neanderthals, nobody has potential
To differentiate between their, there, and they're
Perhaps they should take a lesson in reading from Voltaire
As for the other comparisons and correlations,
Who are you to start making these accusations?
For generations, fluctuations ov Great Expectations
Have befallen us all, changing the language with deliberation
Taking our dialects and dialogues under extreme consideration
The fact that you think yourself so "posh"
Has earned yourself a seat in the center ov this mosh
Ov proportions so epic
It's about to get hectic
Our minds are frenetic
No longer empathetic
To your critical thoughts
On our grammar producing this verbal dross
Such an atrocity caused by this response
At a loss
Anonymous
hey, I'm on the spectrum...but wow I was high! don't recall even writing that...
gazellemon said:Ok, so.. you are the most fucked in the head,
i hope you haven't bred yet,
your genes shouldn't spread they are a threat to humanity's success,
instead I abet you drop dead,
outdated like cassettes and pencil lead,
I tend to say what upsets,
you got cold sweats over what i said,
present you with a 9 for Russian roulette,
i bet you forget there is no reset,
Brain matter makes a lovely vignette,
No one wept when they read it in the gazette,
because no one respects your attempt to connect,
(PLEASE DON'T KILL YOURSELF. I RESPECT YOU SIR. THIS IS JUST A GAME.)
dude that was a sweet comeback thumbs up!
i hope you haven't bred yet,
your genes shouldn't spread they are a threat to humanity's success,
instead I abet you drop dead,
outdated like cassettes and pencil lead,
I tend to say what upsets,
you got cold sweats over what i said,
present you with a 9 for Russian roulette,
i bet you forget there is no reset,
Brain matter makes a lovely vignette,
No one wept when they read it in the gazette,
because no one respects your attempt to connect,
(PLEASE DON'T KILL YOURSELF. I RESPECT YOU SIR. THIS IS JUST A GAME.)
dude that was a sweet comeback thumbs up!
mikimoondancer said:
Most of those verses read like text book entries
intro to Psychology terminology and the glossary
with a snippet or two from Biology 101
forced rhymes that make no sense and mixing up
clever rap skill with plain old offensive
we would've had more humor if there'd been more intelligence
what i'm saying is irrelevant
and there's nothing more offensive to me
than what I write and publish on myself
I sometimes wish I could be someone else
I'm sick of having to decipher they're from their
and there and a hundred other things like it
I think that words and language should matter to writers
or maybe the reader should matter more and that's what
spell-check was invented for
ninety-eight percent of whats typed on here
shouldn't be
hard to believe so many think they have talent
makes me wonder
so I don't say that much anymore
calm down we don't think we got talent
that's why we here
now settle down have an ice cold beer
we just plain a game at the end there's a winner
we'll share a laugh then eat dinner
if I thought I could rap id be hittin the big stage
not just plain a game with people I don't even know
we know where playin
and i'm just sayin
now grammer is good and spelling write is too
but we misspell words all the few
cause it helps with the rhyme
ever listen to rap?
maybe yo never heard of that crap
but play along or set back down
we just havin some fun
you don't have to frown
Most of those verses read like text book entries
intro to Psychology terminology and the glossary
with a snippet or two from Biology 101
forced rhymes that make no sense and mixing up
clever rap skill with plain old offensive
we would've had more humor if there'd been more intelligence
what i'm saying is irrelevant
and there's nothing more offensive to me
than what I write and publish on myself
I sometimes wish I could be someone else
I'm sick of having to decipher they're from their
and there and a hundred other things like it
I think that words and language should matter to writers
or maybe the reader should matter more and that's what
spell-check was invented for
ninety-eight percent of whats typed on here
shouldn't be
hard to believe so many think they have talent
makes me wonder
so I don't say that much anymore
calm down we don't think we got talent
that's why we here
now settle down have an ice cold beer
we just plain a game at the end there's a winner
we'll share a laugh then eat dinner
if I thought I could rap id be hittin the big stage
not just plain a game with people I don't even know
we know where playin
and i'm just sayin
now grammer is good and spelling write is too
but we misspell words all the few
cause it helps with the rhyme
ever listen to rap?
maybe yo never heard of that crap
but play along or set back down
we just havin some fun
you don't have to frown
Madintellect said:Are u trying to say none of us have talent? I was just playing around I dont actually think im better than anyone here. I think I hate rap battles. It just promotes arrogance and ego.. Which is the problem people. I dont even know why I entered this. Now that I read i feel like a tool. And sorry I dont have spell check in case you didnt notice.
Anyway, the winner is..... Mica the moon dancer!!! If 3crows is ok with that lol. No hard feeling to anybody btw. your name is a good one three crows, was just fucking with. And satyr? Sorry to hear u have scitzophenia man thats a tuff go. Keep your head up bud, your a talented rhymer 100%
Peace!
dude were just playin we don't take this to heart. its all for fun. I personally thought you were the leader as far as a winner. guess its true about Canadians being soft. just kidding with ya on that last part
Anyway, the winner is..... Mica the moon dancer!!! If 3crows is ok with that lol. No hard feeling to anybody btw. your name is a good one three crows, was just fucking with. And satyr? Sorry to hear u have scitzophenia man thats a tuff go. Keep your head up bud, your a talented rhymer 100%
Peace!
dude were just playin we don't take this to heart. its all for fun. I personally thought you were the leader as far as a winner. guess its true about Canadians being soft. just kidding with ya on that last part
well I see all yall don't know how its done
now let me have some fun
get out the black board and the chalk
I think its time we had a talk
in truth this is just a game
to see how good we are passing blame
were gonna have a winner
and I'll chose who
it can't be me so it'll be one of you
i'm just playin along because I can
(if anyone takes any of this to heart you shouldn't were all playing and none of it has anymeaning behind it I think your all pretty talented much more than I which is why Im chosing a winner not trying to win)
now let me have some fun
get out the black board and the chalk
I think its time we had a talk
in truth this is just a game
to see how good we are passing blame
were gonna have a winner
and I'll chose who
it can't be me so it'll be one of you
i'm just playin along because I can
(if anyone takes any of this to heart you shouldn't were all playing and none of it has anymeaning behind it I think your all pretty talented much more than I which is why Im chosing a winner not trying to win)
