Poetry competition CLOSED 21st August 2013 6:43am
WINNER
Atakti
Atakti
RUNNER-UP:
Sterling7147
are you better than the person above you?
Poetry Contest Description
the so thr first poet to write something would basically ztary off the competition. The next person would have to write something back to that poet. who evers write is catchier wins the contest
I need to start doing this on my pc my typing is terrible with my phone.
What I ment to say was, basically the first person to write starts out the competition. The next person who would write would have to say something along the lines of what the person above them wrote and so on and so forth. The winner will be the poet with the most creative, thought threw,relevant come-back.
You can write twice and only twice ( unless you are the first writter than you go three times)
Has to relate and be towards the person who wrote above you
Have fun don't take anything personally
What I ment to say was, basically the first person to write starts out the competition. The next person who would write would have to say something along the lines of what the person above them wrote and so on and so forth. The winner will be the poet with the most creative, thought threw,relevant come-back.
You can write twice and only twice ( unless you are the first writter than you go three times)
Has to relate and be towards the person who wrote above you
Have fun don't take anything personally
Kisses
***********
EvanSarov,
you sweet little dove,
starting a fest of shit
that you aren't fit to handle.
Lay down that mantle of attempted machismo
and lets go.
Down and dirty,
you and me.
Wit is key, intelligence a must
and plus,
we have all that shit to cut through,
and here is a clue.
You can't make it happen bro,
starting the competition so low,
all penned up and no where to go.
Kisses and hugs sent to you,
because you are through...
***********
EvanSarov,
you sweet little dove,
starting a fest of shit
that you aren't fit to handle.
Lay down that mantle of attempted machismo
and lets go.
Down and dirty,
you and me.
Wit is key, intelligence a must
and plus,
we have all that shit to cut through,
and here is a clue.
You can't make it happen bro,
starting the competition so low,
all penned up and no where to go.
Kisses and hugs sent to you,
because you are through...
Glad to see you took a bite
into me, dig in deep.
Sterling, are you silver?
Perhaps a coat,your tongue could use?
See, that shit you shat
from your fingers
lacks the shine of your lips
and the locks of brunette.
Unleash your humanity
that burns through your eyes
It pierces me, the windows to your soul.
Now give me something
more worthy of that fire
that burns behind your eyes.
I'll take your kiss
siphon your warmth
and I'll see you off
you're already in my way
My dear, you're sterling silver.
A cheap counterfeit
to the luscious shine of silverware.
into me, dig in deep.
Sterling, are you silver?
Perhaps a coat,your tongue could use?
See, that shit you shat
from your fingers
lacks the shine of your lips
and the locks of brunette.
Unleash your humanity
that burns through your eyes
It pierces me, the windows to your soul.
Now give me something
more worthy of that fire
that burns behind your eyes.
I'll take your kiss
siphon your warmth
and I'll see you off
you're already in my way
My dear, you're sterling silver.
A cheap counterfeit
to the luscious shine of silverware.
Anonymous
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This was too much for me to read this only proves that all people do is overthink because the best things in life are simple
Heres a point to ponder its not a persons face which make them a monster its the decisions they make
Heres a point to ponder its not a persons face which make them a monster its the decisions they make
LobodeSanPedro said:[quote-219991-writtinginthedarck]Seriously alls it is, is a poetry vattle that everyone gets two posts on.
I say delete the last two post because they totally wrecked a great comp ... Great flow by Evan and Sterling [/quote]
I agree evan and sterling have the absolute rite idea, evan has three postings overall bc he kicked it off and sterling has two, so I am going to delete the last two posts. If yoi guys would like to re-enter the correct way I would be very delighted.
I say delete the last two post because they totally wrecked a great comp ... Great flow by Evan and Sterling [/quote]
I agree evan and sterling have the absolute rite idea, evan has three postings overall bc he kicked it off and sterling has two, so I am going to delete the last two posts. If yoi guys would like to re-enter the correct way I would be very delighted.
Can you delete your post please and re-enter correctly. This is basically a poetry battle, you have to relate to the person above you no one else.focus on the person above you, hense the comp. title "are you better than the person above you?" Lol
oh, whaddaya know I found it
Oh shit, the big guns are in the turret
Evan my man, what's the master plan this month
wouldn't you rather a wet cunt, 'stead of being a marine runt
that's some u-turn brother, another step towards the kill
the thrill of ending life ..that's nice, ..have you made a will?
But still, you got some balls and some dedication
shame you picked the wrong fkn nation,
.worse than Zion, an exaggeration? well I might be mistaken
but I reckon you're a massacre waiting to happen
what about the way of the monk, punk.
is peace and good-will gone defunct
if you have to die, can't you get some gas
and go out in style with a bit of class
like the others y'know
your yellow gowned bald head brothers
actually I like your spirit, its vodka right
have you already had your fill tonight
'cos then it wouldn't be proper,or bright, if we're tight
for me to continue scribing this shite
Oh shit, the big guns are in the turret
Evan my man, what's the master plan this month
wouldn't you rather a wet cunt, 'stead of being a marine runt
that's some u-turn brother, another step towards the kill
the thrill of ending life ..that's nice, ..have you made a will?
But still, you got some balls and some dedication
shame you picked the wrong fkn nation,
.worse than Zion, an exaggeration? well I might be mistaken
but I reckon you're a massacre waiting to happen
what about the way of the monk, punk.
is peace and good-will gone defunct
if you have to die, can't you get some gas
and go out in style with a bit of class
like the others y'know
your yellow gowned bald head brothers
actually I like your spirit, its vodka right
have you already had your fill tonight
'cos then it wouldn't be proper,or bright, if we're tight
for me to continue scribing this shite
For by Grace
(lepperochan)
To know him
may be to love him
in every way
Never have I raised a pint
In his presence
Never have I met his eyes
across the room
or share a number
on a tissue paper
in an Irish bar
with my mind's eye
I see him
through his written words
kindness
a calm
a little anger
thats all him
I am not better
nor worse
just perhaps equal
I hope.
(lepperochan)
To know him
may be to love him
in every way
Never have I raised a pint
In his presence
Never have I met his eyes
across the room
or share a number
on a tissue paper
in an Irish bar
with my mind's eye
I see him
through his written words
kindness
a calm
a little anger
thats all him
I am not better
nor worse
just perhaps equal
I hope.
Anonymous
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