trapped in hell

you are finally dead
but insted of heaven
you went to hell
describe the momemt you die
then to to the gates of judgement
then right to hell

good luck

I took a few too many.
It was an accident, maybe.
In one day, you should take only four.
I only took five more.
I go to bed, drowsy from the Vicodin.
Whoops! Knocked down the lamp again!
Everything went dark, but only for a minute.
I am dead, I'm sure of it.
Suddenly, there I am.
At the golden gates, when BAM!
God all mighty, standing right there.
Only thing He said was "you don't belong here."
Suicide is a major sin.
So Heavens guards won't let me in.
Down I fall, right through the ground!
The first thing I saw, a demon hound.
Holding his leash, standing tall
Was the devil, horns and all!
Well, guess I'm in hell.
That explains why I fell.
Never thought it'd end like this.
Left to burn in a fiery abyss.
Stuck in hell, and to cause me pain,
They make me watch my funeral again and again.
I see my father mourn, my mother cry.
Never thought they'd care if I died.
My sisters, so beautiful in black.
Laying roses, filling every crack.
I never thought it would be this bad.
But sitting in hell, I can't help but feel sad.
What's worse is knowing that my last words,
My goodbye would never be heard.

verry good start

Hell
Is this hell
I can't think of any place worse than this
I am lying here alone, truly alone
No hope, no wanting for hope, no begging of pleading for a second chance
Acceptance of my failures and no remorse for the people I have hurt
A fire burns inside my soul that does not put off light
Instead it puts off darkness
All the people who have put me down, all the losses and bad memories lie Underneath the fire that is fueling my depression
Hell is not a war, cancer, a terrorist attack
No there is hope in all of those
Hell is when you give up and let the darkness take over you
When you  let evil win and let its black poison rush through your veins
And kill your soul but let's your body live
You will truly understand what hell is  

Hell is when you give up and let the darkness take over you

Damn bad ASS!

The Rite of Hell
I have had enough of this life
Constantly beating me down
I have always tried to be the good man
Always there for others
Keeping ears and mind open
I was there no matter what

Never had sex
Never done drugs
Never had one I would consider to be an actual girlfriend
Never seriously considered suicide

Being someone who listens to everyone's problems
You figure out who has the drugs
I didn't want this to be messy
I do care about who would find me after all

Walking home after I got the pills
I hear glass breaking
Screams and yelling
I run toward these sounds

I find a woman trapped against a wall crying
Dress yanked up
A punk kid pulling down his pants
As his partner in crime watches

I look around quickly and find a pipe
I pick up the roughly seven pound object and run to the woman

The lookout was the first to hear me
He intercepted me from getting to the woman
And so I swung the pipe with everything I had
I hear a loud crack as the pipe makes contact with the look out's jaw
He falls to the asphalt
Unconscious

I continue towards the woman when the punk kid pulls out his knife
"Well?Come get some nigga!"
He yells at me
I keep walking toward them
Once I think I have the right distance I swing the pipe
The kid duck and charges me
Stabbing his knife into my stomach three times before I could grab his hand
The knife is still in my gut as I hold him

I had dropped the pipe in order to stop his assault on me
And now with my blood draining away
So was my strength
The kid smiles at my futile fighting
He leans to me and whispers in my ear
"Once I am done with you
I am going to finish myself with that little whore over there"

My stomach suddenly filled with fire
Strength and adrenaline surge through my veins
I tighten my hold on his wrist
And growl to him
"You will touch her only as a ghost"
And at that point I twisted my body
While still holding on to his wrist
I hear a crack then a snap as his wrist is broken

He falls back and hits the asphalt crying like a bitch
I fall to all fours
Lift one hand to my stomach
And yank out the blade, causing more blood to be split
I crawl over to the punk kid with the knife in one hand
I kneel on both knees next to him
Put the blade next to his neck
And speak in a low voice
"Have fun in hell"
I then proceed rip his throat out with his own knife

I then fall back and allow the blackness that has always surrounded me
To have possession of me

.....

I feel like I am floating through space
No air
No sounds
No lights
All my memories are intact
It is like my own personal torture on my soul

Suddenly I am ripped from space thrust upon a black sand beach
Coughing and wheezing

I see a line leading from the beach to a tower in the distance
I stand up wobbling as I do so
And begin to follow the line
To wear, I do not know

.....

Finally I come upon the tower
From the base it seems to reach up into the darkness forever

I am now in front of three... Things
I cannot tell what they are
They begin communicating
And I figure out quickly that these are the judges
They shall decide whether I should go to "heaven" or "hell"

They bring up the fact to each other all the good that I have done
Volunteering, helping others
But then one brings up the fact of the last night of my life
They went through my mind and say I was planning suicide
And then they began deliberating on how they should handle me
Considering I had killed a kid and had been planning to kill myself

"He killed a child" hissed the being on the left
"To save a young woman" growled the middle one
"But he was also going to kill himself" pointed out the third
They all turned to me and in unison said
"You shalt be sentenced to the fields with your full memory
With no chance of escape from them"

The ground below me gave way and cast me into the abyss
It was much like right after I had died
But now
It was as if every bad thing I had done in my life
Was being highlighted and played through my head over and over again
A torture with no escape in sight

This "hell" is not how the Christians has envisioned
It is only your own memories that torture you
Not demons
There is no senses
Only darkness and memories

Memories...
Nothing but memories...

"After Da Fall"

I tried
I really did
I guess God saw it differently

oh well
what the hell
life was never easy
so why would death be any different?

the gates open to screams
it's every soul for itself
a demon free-for-all
the party of a lifetime
all the big wigs are in attendance

Lust
Gluttony
Greed
Sloth
Wrath
Envy
Pride

I must be a popular man
all this pain for me?
an eternity replaying the night in question

it was self defense
so i tell myself
the truth is the bitch had it coming

crazy monkey
unstable man
trembling hands

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stabbing until the end of time
trapped in a loop
dangling from this noose...

Why are all of these so depressing?  Lets lighten up the mood:

Hell? Puny, little Hell?
Haven't I been here before?
As the ball and chain drag down my movements, the guard pushes me forward.
Hmm, cute little devil horns.
I wonder why I'm here,
I'm just an Atheist.
Funny little dream, I suspect.
They push me up to this large, rusting iron gate.
The wall around me looks like the Great Wall of china.
But that makes sense,
I say to myself.
This whole place is red enough to be Communist.
A booming voice seems to be coming put of some sort of loud speaker, but I cannot understand.
Too bad I don't have my Babel fish in my ear.
Hey, why is there blood dripping from the middle of my chest?
Ahh, there's a big spike through it.
Hey, this was a pretty nice dream, but now I must go!

Wait, why am I not awake yet?
I am killed, am I not?
I've lost almost all of my blood;
I'm practically swimming in it.
I hear the loud speaker again, but this time I understand it.
JACOB DILLON
YOU HAVE COMMITTED TOO MANY SINS.
YOU HAVE BEEN SENTENCED TO ETERNITY IN HELL.
HAVE A GOOD DAY.
Have a good day?
THANK YOU,
I yell, hoping the devil (isn't Satin his name or something?) can hear me.

keep it up
six days left

...

Here is Hell

Prayers chanted
Hopes and wishes
All gone and faded
This husk is within
Six feet of soil
I stand alone
Among the sinners
Looking at hell
Doomed I felt
For here judgement comes
I am to live with this fool
forever and eternal
My ex on Earth…
Shit, what did I do
To deserve this.

I'll be back

unleash your inner demons
fight against the deviil

"Snap" just posted one in the dark poems and so posted it here to.

Hell has fallen

Is this the beginning of the end
Or the end of the beginning
How can u tell
Is heaven really hell?
Rewind the future to the present
Forward the past and pause for a moment
Will I pass the gates of hell
Or be judged at the pearly gates
Am I rite
Did I do wrong
The path to hell
A pull so strong
I love to hate yet hate to love
A high life with many lows
Wings of a white dove or that of a black crow
I surrender
Take me to the gallows
In the eyes of death
I will stare
Dismember him without a care
Downwards I march
The abyss is near
The flames grow higher
My vengeance on fire
There he sits all dark and gloom
Pitched fork in hand
Lord of doom
I care not for his title
Or years of reign
As I severe his head
And resume his throne of pain
Upon his throne I now stand
And all you sinners can now take my hand

The day I walked into hell the devil himself bowed to kiss my feet,
God saw the changing of the guard from that ivory tower called heaven,
As I looked around the devil wept that he kept the throne warm
but just as Johnny did with his fiddle, I took my knife and carved the devil a new one.
Old Man Adeus he cried as I knife raped his 5 point Arse hole,
And when I was done with that pitiful lord even heaven forgave his soul,
And lifted him out of harms way
up into the light and out of sight
I placed a note between his finger and thumb
To let the cunt in heaven know
THE FUN HAS JUST BEGUN