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love and its ups andvdowns

8sophiarose8
Lynette
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Poetry Contest

love is confusing right?
Happy sad mad love is confusing right

poet Anonymous

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TO MY DARK LOVER


The full moon above

Shines on my love

Who stands so far

Away from me


The night is full of reddish rain

Some call it love that loved in vain

Wolves are howling

And the dark one stirs


It is no secret that I have a demon lover

Who, with me, have a brooding desire

That involves the man with

Black eyes, black hair, and....

Black light in his cruel eyes


How I hunger for my Lucan lover

How can that be?

For it is a dark light I see

Feasting on the flesh and blood

Of a lady fair

Her raven hair cascades down

Revealing white shoulders

From her mouth dribbles blood

He seems to be in ecstasy


All around, dark memories gather

Wounds me - increases my dread

Of his rejection

Takes a toll upon my heart

I must have him

No matter how


My  demon lover and I

Do what is meant to be

Steal him away

From those beautiful haunting eyes


No matter that he prefers her to me

He is no match

For I and my accomplice

We are his destiny

Soon he will be making love

To me - in company

As my demon lover

Likes to share me



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If this is not what you expected...I will substitute another poem

8sophiarose8
Lynette
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United States
Joined 7th July 2011
Forum Posts: 31

Wow good poem

poet Anonymous

8sophiarose8 said:Wow good poem

Thank you for your feedback.

becsta
Bec
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My Lady Is Broken

I don't recall ever feeling this defeated
Heart, mind and soul depleted
Soaked by the tides of my desperation
Her love absent without explanation


The space between us no longer measured in distance
My heart fights back with endless persistence
This chill in the air survives a thousand fires
Suddenly a stranger to all her desires


If she would only show me the colour that began this decline
I would paint over it white, bright and divine
Silence that brings a deafening sound
My heart pumping fear with every pound


Love shows it's cruelty, refusing to hide
Every minute I stay I die more inside
All I can hear now are the words she can't say
Maybe this is a dream and i will wake one day

My lady is broken.




becsta
Bec
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Same Sky

In the dead of night when you are cold and alone
The sun shines through the windows of our home

When the distance between us compels me to cry
My only comfort is knowing we're under the same sky

Your absence grows louder, now a deafening sound
I took you for granted when I had you around

I would do anything just to walk down your street
Knock on your door and fall at your feet

If I had a boat I would sail the seas
Arrive at your port and fall to my knees

With the wings of a bird I could reach your side
Soar through the skies until it's time to glide

Misery reaches the heart when you're torn from your fate
My desperation grows with every second I wait  

becsta
Bec
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One Perfect Day

Running for the bus as it's driving away  
You stopped the driver, began my perfect day  
 
Floored by a strangers face and inviting smile  
I came undone in less than a mile  
 
Our conversation flowed with beautiful ease  
My army defeated and down on their knees  
 
As we approach the station there is fear in my heart  
The end of the road is here, the moment we part  
 
We both step off the bus in perfect time  
I attempt to disguise my unraveling mind  
 
Every fibre of my being wants to ask you to stay  
I save my courage for another day  
 
As I walk away my heart threatens attack  
You reach out for my arm and gently pull me back  
 
Be mine for this day? forget these feelings are strange  
Tomorrow we return to our lives and nothing will change  
 
I think of that day as I am nearing my last  
More than the days of the thirty years passed
 
How can one day remain locked inside?  
Still longing for all the nights we denied  
 
The end lingers close and softly whispers I die tomorrow  
Nothing can take back the day you saved me from sorrow

AscensionES
Aptilneilrionaltion
Dangerous Mind
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8sophiarose8 said:[confused]

If only you could form a coherent paragraph, we could've had something of a writer out of you.

8sophiarose8
Lynette
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 7th July 2011
Forum Posts: 31

Srry didnt realize it was hard to read

8sophiarose8
Lynette
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 7th July 2011
Forum Posts: 31

Thanks for adding your poems

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Mad Girl
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Mad Love

I love you.

We are in perfect harmony.
Both of us.
Holding hands.
You gazing down at the promise ring.
Asking me to never take it off again.
I'm smiling at you saying that I won't.

But then. . .

"I hate you!"
I scream and shove you away.
Tears streaming down my face.
I don't know what happened.
Why this happened.
I love you so much.
And I don't want you or I to walk away.
I just want you to treat me like you did before.
Treat me like your girlfriend.
Not something you can love one minute.
And than yell at the next.
I rip off the ring and put it on the table.
"I'll put it back on when you treat me like your girlfriend!"
You use to talk to me.
Not at me.
You use to love being with me.
Now you're always threatening to leave.
You use to be understanding of my problems.
Now you just yell at me when I freak out.
What happened to us?
Why are you acting like this?
Don't bring up my problems.
My anger.
And the times I yell.
Since when do you use those things against me?
I thought we were in love?

I'm going mad. . .

I'm bleeding again.
From my arms.
By my own hand.
You pull my into you.
And say let's never fight again.
The ring has returned to my hand.
I cuddle our son while you hold me close.
I'm sorry I'm broken.
I wish you would just leave.
So you don't have deal with my madness.
And pretend that you really love me.
I am undeserving of your love.
I want to be with you.
And I want our son to have his parents together.
Because I know what it's like to have them apart.
I just wish we would stop the fighting.
Stop my insanity.
Stop hating each other randomly.
Stop hurting each other.
Stop the screaming.
Just stop this madness.
Because. . .

I love you.

poet Anonymous

ConsumedI loved you  
Mine heart I did give thee  
Betrayer!  
You had no love for me!  

Blasphemies  
You spake with those lips  
Those tender roses  
I so longed to kiss  

You reached into my soul  
And stole my essence from me  
The innocent I once had been  
You corrupted with your disease  

I weep for what you have taken from me  
That which I can never have back  
I've cursed your name a thousand times  
Though I'd love you again if only you'd ask  

But the fire rages!  
You stoke the flame!  
As I turn the pages  
I erase your name  

Be gone from my mind!  
As you are gone from my life!  
Leave me be...  
You were never mine  

Release my heart  
So I can release you  
And die alone, in peace  
In this winter of my broken heart, consumed

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