Deep Love
RevolutionAL
Alistair Plint
Forum Posts: 1257
Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
29
Joined 24th July 2012Forum Posts: 1257
untitled poet .
if there was one last dance sweet-wild-child, it would be with you my love. breaking the line till my feet bled while the music broke the rhythm in my head. if one last poem was written, i'd write it for you love. search the metaphors, similes and alliteration from the depths of the heart, till blood no longer circulated. type each word with so much care that my fingers would cramp filling it with so many words it would challenge the dictionary. if there was one last breath beautiful woman i'd use it to lock lips with you. gasp it and hold it, left with the taste of you swirling in my being and sucking you in to feed me for eternity.
if i fall again, i want to fall into you babe from the top floor of the empire estate, a free fall because i love you. if there is one last prayer woman i pray i never again would have to lock you away and that we could live together love inked in each others lives, even if only for my very last day, my lovely.
-x-
Anonymous
I can't Say I Love You
Loving you
well, love sounds cliche'
I'd rather call it
Colliding
A collision of souls
combustion on impact
reforming the structure
and the lines
that existed
then, that sounds like Science
I'd rather use English
spell it out clear
that way you won't miss it
I don't need you to breathe
let's face it
I won't claim I'll fade away
if we don't make it
but, what I can say
Is my existence means more
with you in it
My skin simply aches for your kisses
My dreams are comprised of your presence
but nothing really fits by definition
No word truly fits my condition
although I can't say I love you
I hope I've conveyed that
I do
Loving you
well, love sounds cliche'
I'd rather call it
Colliding
A collision of souls
combustion on impact
reforming the structure
and the lines
that existed
then, that sounds like Science
I'd rather use English
spell it out clear
that way you won't miss it
I don't need you to breathe
let's face it
I won't claim I'll fade away
if we don't make it
but, what I can say
Is my existence means more
with you in it
My skin simply aches for your kisses
My dreams are comprised of your presence
but nothing really fits by definition
No word truly fits my condition
although I can't say I love you
I hope I've conveyed that
I do
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Forum Posts: 1704
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1704
I hear Your Tribal Beats
It's comprehension
of the picture
being the one , that's so much bigger ,
without being conned
by the wrong , the gold diggers ,
dropping bombs
and always on , false missions ,
then you come , to your sun
who's missed you ,
of the land where he's from
but in limbo ,
it's time to rule
and float beyond , past issues ,
from the inside
of what's gone
I hear you ,
beat the tribal
sound of gong
I love you ,
tides rise up and over long
of latitudes ,
new words walk into
old of song
now re-tuned ,
birds encircle , under sol
and lunar ,
the music penned
by either one ,
is booming ,
I for thee , is always young
and blooming ,
I just can't wait for the fun
to get zooming ,
we both sat here , are upon
such new things ,
let us dance and skate along
Saturn's hue rings ,
we know , we both , so do belong
in each others arms ,
we sing and fling , versed poem , song
into all of this ,
that's where all the dead , in you , come from
eternal bliss
you fight , your point , so valid , strong
my minxterness .
It's comprehension
of the picture
being the one , that's so much bigger ,
without being conned
by the wrong , the gold diggers ,
dropping bombs
and always on , false missions ,
then you come , to your sun
who's missed you ,
of the land where he's from
but in limbo ,
it's time to rule
and float beyond , past issues ,
from the inside
of what's gone
I hear you ,
beat the tribal
sound of gong
I love you ,
tides rise up and over long
of latitudes ,
new words walk into
old of song
now re-tuned ,
birds encircle , under sol
and lunar ,
the music penned
by either one ,
is booming ,
I for thee , is always young
and blooming ,
I just can't wait for the fun
to get zooming ,
we both sat here , are upon
such new things ,
let us dance and skate along
Saturn's hue rings ,
we know , we both , so do belong
in each others arms ,
we sing and fling , versed poem , song
into all of this ,
that's where all the dead , in you , come from
eternal bliss
you fight , your point , so valid , strong
my minxterness .
boywondersz
Joined 1st Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 10
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 10
Your love it gave me
Wings let me see Your an exquisite taste
To the alpha males appitite
Looks of disturction that
Only leaves when your
Outta sight but never
Out of mind your the rarest of beautie one
Of a kind
Its the way that
You move me
Like my heart was tied to
A line I cant find a deffenition that can discribe this devine inspiration you have an occupation to distract my coincentration
Infact Its the remedy
That makes me write these crazy words lol sorry hope you like it and its just to raise a smile xx Your an exquisite taste
To the alpha males appitite
Looks of disturction that
Only leaves when your
Outta sight but never
Out of mind your the rarest of beautie one
Of a kind
Its the way that
You move me
Like my heart was tied to
A line I cant find a deffenition that can discribe this devine inspiration you have an occupation to distract my coincentration
Infact Its the remedy
That makes me write these crazy words lol sorry hope you like it and its just to raise a smile xx
Them unbelievable
things deep inside I felt
feelings like never before
As I wasnt quiet sure if
I was dreaming because
It didnt seam real
Touching a vision
But theres nothing to
Feel just free falling to
the floor
Reality hits me
Once more
And I open the
Door to faith and see
What she has in store
For better days ...
Wings let me see Your an exquisite taste
To the alpha males appitite
Looks of disturction that
Only leaves when your
Outta sight but never
Out of mind your the rarest of beautie one
Of a kind
Its the way that
You move me
Like my heart was tied to
A line I cant find a deffenition that can discribe this devine inspiration you have an occupation to distract my coincentration
Infact Its the remedy
That makes me write these crazy words lol sorry hope you like it and its just to raise a smile xx Your an exquisite taste
To the alpha males appitite
Looks of disturction that
Only leaves when your
Outta sight but never
Out of mind your the rarest of beautie one
Of a kind
Its the way that
You move me
Like my heart was tied to
A line I cant find a deffenition that can discribe this devine inspiration you have an occupation to distract my coincentration
Infact Its the remedy
That makes me write these crazy words lol sorry hope you like it and its just to raise a smile xx
Them unbelievable
things deep inside I felt
feelings like never before
As I wasnt quiet sure if
I was dreaming because
It didnt seam real
Touching a vision
But theres nothing to
Feel just free falling to
the floor
Reality hits me
Once more
And I open the
Door to faith and see
What she has in store
For better days ...
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Forum Posts: 2483
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
40
Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
I set fire through the pouring rain
and threw us into the dancing flame
Our young hearts exploded in ecstasy
Nobody else can feel and see.
No one knew our love will be forever
even our minds sharp as ever
But fate has guided us together
to love each other more than ever.
That frolicking night we shared
together we had treasured
The bittersweet memories lingered in your brain
and through the years you thought I had forgotten
Your prayers and endless search, were not in vain.
Now we knew why we love each other so
You needed me as much as I needed you
All you need is my love,
which comforts your lonely soul;
and all I need is you, nobody else but you.
It's time to rekindle our old, yet foolish hearts
to see and brighten up that southern skies
Let these undying love and fervent desires
take us back home and forever shine
The vision that we share together
keeps us closer more than ever
My forever love, my love forever…
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Forum Posts: 2483
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
40
Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
Am I crazy to fall madly in love with you
and to yearn for your caress, and your elusive kiss
Our nightly tryst of passionate whispers
fill our hearts with desires so intense
As our passion-filled bodies yearn for more,
join me in my dreams and share my crazy love.
My dreams of you were obscured by my selfish desires
for I was lured by the grandeur of a carefree city life
Then one day you showed up in the flesh
our bodies were fusioned by our tight embrace
As we felt the burning sensations thru our lips
your silent quest to find me, has come to an end.
Here I am my love, hearken to my plea
I love you then and now, but your heart can’t see.
My childhood glances as I caught your sweet smile,
revealed more than what my young heart could say.
Every time I smiled you knew, there was something more.
Am I crazy for loving you my Adelaide
You are smart and lovely, elegant and compassionate
you were the girl of my dreams, and never been forgotten
I beseech you to look at the bright side
and never to forget why we love each other so.
Watch the birds flying freely across the sun drenched sky
You will find me in their midst as I join their flight
Come fly with me our souls entwined,
and retrace our paths where it all began
Feel our crazy love, once innocent and pure.
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faithmairee
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Forum Posts: 212
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Tyrant of Words
12
Joined 29th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 212
i can not love you more
i can not love you more
than i have loved you
for i have loved you long
and held your love so dearly
in my heart of hearts but now
my eyes have opened
to find my heart in mourning
and when the first bird
sings outside my bedroom window
he sings a sorrowful song
for you have found me lacking
though i can not understand
the how and why of it
and yet my love for you
was gentle and long suffering
i can not love you more
than i have loved you
for i have loved you long
and held your love so dearly
in my heart of hearts but now
my eyes have opened
to find my heart in mourning
and when the first bird
sings outside my bedroom window
he sings a sorrowful song
for you have found me lacking
though i can not understand
the how and why of it
and yet my love for you
was gentle and long suffering
EngrVV
D_Poetic Engineer
Forum Posts: 2483
D_Poetic Engineer
Dangerous Mind
40
Joined 11th Sep 2012 Forum Posts: 2483
What could be stonger than the call of the wild,
stronger than the mystery of the unknown
I don't understand why my mind has flown
Back to our beloved island paradise
Where lovebirds are known
To sing from dusk till morn -
Where our young love has been forlorn
We used to swim and play in its crystal blue waters,
As our parents combed and tamed the rough seas
Often wondering what lies underneath
Among the sponges and beyond the coral reefs
As our backs were caressed by the frothy waves
Lying down half-naked on its white sandy shores
Now I know why I was always drawn to the waters
For those bittersweet memories still linger in my brain
We separated without saying words of love and good-byes,
Nothing to hold on to, but those sweet innocent kisses
Until now... as our prayers are answered and not in vain
What could be deeper than love, but love itself,
For after so many hundred moonless nights,
never in my wildest dream did I
imagine...will ever see you once again!
We vowed to love each other
with a love that is deep -
deeper than any ocean,
deeper than what our bright minds could fathom,
from here to eternity
now-- and forever...
faithmairee
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Forum Posts: 212
Faith Elizabeth Brigham
Tyrant of Words
12
Joined 29th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 212
forever love
a love like ours
can not compare
with any love
i have ever dared
to even dream
that could be shared
between two lovers
so entranced
we compliment
and are enhanced
i dare not say it
was by chance
we bonded from
the very start
to you i gave
all of my heart
i was as enchanted
by your sweet remarks
a love like ours
can not compare
with any love
i have ever dared
to even dream
that could be shared
between two lovers
so entranced
we compliment
and are enhanced
i dare not say it
was by chance
we bonded from
the very start
to you i gave
all of my heart
i was as enchanted
by your sweet remarks
erobles
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 4
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 4
To think that a true love requires begging to be acknowledged makes me wonder where God is. True love, in MY universe is the ultimate and that 'ain't' no lip service. Well, some religions say the same but their god just doesn't measure up to that promise.
I say it again, true love is ultimate. Everything else falls extremely short. EVERYTHING.
I say it again, true love is ultimate. Everything else falls extremely short. EVERYTHING.
becsta
Bec
Forum Posts: 186
Bec
Thought Provoker
9
Joined 4th Jan 2013Forum Posts: 186
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My Lady Is Broken
I don't recall ever feeling this defeated
Heart, mind and soul depleted
Soaked by the tides of my desperation
Her love absent without explanation
The space between us no longer measured in distance
My heart fights back with endless persistence
This chill in the air survives a thousand fires
Suddenly a stranger to all her desires
If she would only show me the colour that began this decline
I would paint over it white, bright and divine
Silence that brings a deafening sound
My heart pumping fear with every pound
Love shows it's cruelty, refusing to hide
Every minute I stay I die more inside
All I can hear now are the words she can't say
Maybe this is a dream and i will wake one day
My lady is broken.
My Lady Is Broken
I don't recall ever feeling this defeated
Heart, mind and soul depleted
Soaked by the tides of my desperation
Her love absent without explanation
The space between us no longer measured in distance
My heart fights back with endless persistence
This chill in the air survives a thousand fires
Suddenly a stranger to all her desires
If she would only show me the colour that began this decline
I would paint over it white, bright and divine
Silence that brings a deafening sound
My heart pumping fear with every pound
Love shows it's cruelty, refusing to hide
Every minute I stay I die more inside
All I can hear now are the words she can't say
Maybe this is a dream and i will wake one day
My lady is broken.
Intricate_B
Forum Posts: 823
Fire of Insight
3
Joined 7th Mar 2013Forum Posts: 823
Random acts of unconditional love..
It's all in the hips.
The curves.
My queen's physique.
They speak for themselves. From afar, they scream, "TAKE NOTICE!!"
Sleek and sensual, the smooth ups and downs, the joy ride of hips and thigh.
The symphony springs forth with all that is woman.
She has the perfect hour glass figure, the classic Eve body.
I long for her, I yearn to have her curvy luscious body;
Stripped and bare, and pressed firm against my soul and body.
My hands make their way to her curvaceous hips, and draw her close.
Against my body, I feel her warmth.
Against my skin, I feel her ever soft, radiance and flesh.
Oh, hand, do your dance, as my fingers waltz across her belly, light enough to feel a slight shiver from the sensation.
Hand, make your way back, over hip, and down slightly and there.
Her plumpness, personified by her cute, perfect little butt.
My love lets a lone breath escape, warmth across the nape of my neck, and with a gentle squeeze, a soft moan departs from her lips to meet with my ear drums.
Fingers tracing that which makes my queen, 100% woman, leaving behind a sensation which releases those much sought after pheromones and endorphins and chemicals which so dearly I crave.
The essence of my queen.
Scent de love.
Chemicals released, my thoughts race for clarity as my body does that which is natural.
What was once limp, is filled and firm.
Hand on cheek, I draw her in.
Breath on breath.
Hearts beat in unison.
The, "I need you and you need me" perfection.
Her eyes shut in the passion of the moment.
Her lips, two beautiful blushing saints which I hold so dearly, connect with my -thirsty for your love- lips.
The majestic power of desire.
And love.
And perfection.
And the, "Blind to the world, besides the woman before me".
My woman.
My love.
Soul mates.
Lips connect, and silence.
My thoughts cease, and silence.
Eyes closed, I recognize within my mind, that in my hands, I hold my reason.
My very essence for being, my purpose to draw the next breath.
Lips pressed and tongues do their lover's dance, I let slide what I've held ever so patiently back, into her perfection.
Fireworks.
A lover's passion erupts in my heart and srtrikes me to my soul, and very core of what makes me, and I am overcome with emotion as I realize I have it.
She and I have it.
The thing that drives a man.
The thing that everyone wants.
Craves.
Needs.
Looks for.
Man woman and child alike.
True, 100% pure, unadulterated, unconditional love.
Her nails dig deep into my back as my manhood is swallowed, engulfed by her womanhood.
The perfection of life.
The sacred feminine.
Life producer, and sustainer extraordinaire.
Muscles tense and throb and in, and in, and in.
Tongues locked in passion, breath heavy and deep, hearts do the flutter known only by lovers, as they beat in unison for one another.
Locked in the depths and heat of passion, soul mates eternal do their slow dance.
The dance of two becoming one.
Two souls, fused as one.
She.
And I.
And then the moment.
Bodies pressed firm.
Deep inside that which I hold with absolute reverence, our eyes open and meet.
Her eyes, the most beautiful hues of brown, the spark of passion resides.
The light of love, is ever present.
The mating of two souls branded as one, a love lasting longer than forever is set in stone, cast in platinum and solidified to stand as a testament to those seeking love.
Erected as a shrine to house the absolute truth to those seekers of love, of the eternal brand.
Our love, a testimony of purity in it's most righteous of forms, stands tall as a beacon for others.
The perfect example.
Of love in it's purest of forms.
As we reach passion, together as one, our eyes lock and then.
Nothing else matters.
Nothing else exists.
The she.
And the I.
Just us.
The climax to rival the tallest of structures or mountains.
Such an immense burst of passion, the angels cry.
As my soul pours into her, it's she, and I.
Then calm.
And peace.
The gentle throb of all that is woman.
The light pulse of what was once limp.
The lovers rest.
Bodies pressed firm.
A slumber much earned.
The release of such an immense radiant power generated only, by the fusing of two souls.
A rest much earned.
Two, fused as one, sleep.
Dreams.
Peace.
Rest...
It's all in the hips.
The curves.
My queen's physique.
They speak for themselves. From afar, they scream, "TAKE NOTICE!!"
Sleek and sensual, the smooth ups and downs, the joy ride of hips and thigh.
The symphony springs forth with all that is woman.
She has the perfect hour glass figure, the classic Eve body.
I long for her, I yearn to have her curvy luscious body;
Stripped and bare, and pressed firm against my soul and body.
My hands make their way to her curvaceous hips, and draw her close.
Against my body, I feel her warmth.
Against my skin, I feel her ever soft, radiance and flesh.
Oh, hand, do your dance, as my fingers waltz across her belly, light enough to feel a slight shiver from the sensation.
Hand, make your way back, over hip, and down slightly and there.
Her plumpness, personified by her cute, perfect little butt.
My love lets a lone breath escape, warmth across the nape of my neck, and with a gentle squeeze, a soft moan departs from her lips to meet with my ear drums.
Fingers tracing that which makes my queen, 100% woman, leaving behind a sensation which releases those much sought after pheromones and endorphins and chemicals which so dearly I crave.
The essence of my queen.
Scent de love.
Chemicals released, my thoughts race for clarity as my body does that which is natural.
What was once limp, is filled and firm.
Hand on cheek, I draw her in.
Breath on breath.
Hearts beat in unison.
The, "I need you and you need me" perfection.
Her eyes shut in the passion of the moment.
Her lips, two beautiful blushing saints which I hold so dearly, connect with my -thirsty for your love- lips.
The majestic power of desire.
And love.
And perfection.
And the, "Blind to the world, besides the woman before me".
My woman.
My love.
Soul mates.
Lips connect, and silence.
My thoughts cease, and silence.
Eyes closed, I recognize within my mind, that in my hands, I hold my reason.
My very essence for being, my purpose to draw the next breath.
Lips pressed and tongues do their lover's dance, I let slide what I've held ever so patiently back, into her perfection.
Fireworks.
A lover's passion erupts in my heart and srtrikes me to my soul, and very core of what makes me, and I am overcome with emotion as I realize I have it.
She and I have it.
The thing that drives a man.
The thing that everyone wants.
Craves.
Needs.
Looks for.
Man woman and child alike.
True, 100% pure, unadulterated, unconditional love.
Her nails dig deep into my back as my manhood is swallowed, engulfed by her womanhood.
The perfection of life.
The sacred feminine.
Life producer, and sustainer extraordinaire.
Muscles tense and throb and in, and in, and in.
Tongues locked in passion, breath heavy and deep, hearts do the flutter known only by lovers, as they beat in unison for one another.
Locked in the depths and heat of passion, soul mates eternal do their slow dance.
The dance of two becoming one.
Two souls, fused as one.
She.
And I.
And then the moment.
Bodies pressed firm.
Deep inside that which I hold with absolute reverence, our eyes open and meet.
Her eyes, the most beautiful hues of brown, the spark of passion resides.
The light of love, is ever present.
The mating of two souls branded as one, a love lasting longer than forever is set in stone, cast in platinum and solidified to stand as a testament to those seeking love.
Erected as a shrine to house the absolute truth to those seekers of love, of the eternal brand.
Our love, a testimony of purity in it's most righteous of forms, stands tall as a beacon for others.
The perfect example.
Of love in it's purest of forms.
As we reach passion, together as one, our eyes lock and then.
Nothing else matters.
Nothing else exists.
The she.
And the I.
Just us.
The climax to rival the tallest of structures or mountains.
Such an immense burst of passion, the angels cry.
As my soul pours into her, it's she, and I.
Then calm.
And peace.
The gentle throb of all that is woman.
The light pulse of what was once limp.
The lovers rest.
Bodies pressed firm.
A slumber much earned.
The release of such an immense radiant power generated only, by the fusing of two souls.
A rest much earned.
Two, fused as one, sleep.
Dreams.
Peace.
Rest...
FishCake
Forum Posts: 344
Thought Provoker
8
Joined 10th May 2012Forum Posts: 344
"Together"
My seams are splitting
Stuffing is pouring out
My pieces are falling
Too many to carry
My arms are getting full
With the mangled shards
Of what was once my heart
That I locked away
Now it is in its cage again
For I fear of it breaking
Another crushing time
And not being able
To sew the seams back together
echoT
Joined 9th Apr 2013
Forum Posts: 5
Lost Thinker
Forum Posts: 5
Our love
I don't always know what to say
I always give reasons to make you wanna say go away
I don't always tell you I love you and I don't tell you to stay
And most times when you start a conversation I just say ok
I know you love me cause you say it everyday
I never wanna miss you when it's to late
I always want you beside me when I wake
Up
I know our love is strong and not fake
And I know I always make mistakes
But for you I try make things great
It makes my day seeing you smile
Just to make you happy I'd run a thousand miles
love with you, no man can wait a while
But they can wait cause you're all mine
Your not beautiful, you're beyond it.
you're wonderful, you're the one.
You're not perfect, you're who I love.
you're infect a tattoo in my heart,
you're my biggest scar, will never be apart
You're my shooting star, you are what I want
You're not from my dream, you're real
I don't always know what to say
I always give reasons to make you wanna say go away
I don't always tell you I love you and I don't tell you to stay
And most times when you start a conversation I just say ok
I know you love me cause you say it everyday
I never wanna miss you when it's to late
I always want you beside me when I wake
Up
I know our love is strong and not fake
And I know I always make mistakes
But for you I try make things great
It makes my day seeing you smile
Just to make you happy I'd run a thousand miles
love with you, no man can wait a while
But they can wait cause you're all mine
Your not beautiful, you're beyond it.
you're wonderful, you're the one.
You're not perfect, you're who I love.
you're infect a tattoo in my heart,
you're my biggest scar, will never be apart
You're my shooting star, you are what I want
You're not from my dream, you're real
FishCake
Forum Posts: 344
Thought Provoker
8
Joined 10th May 2012Forum Posts: 344
-Always Know-
I don't care how far we go
All I care is that you know
That I will always love you
Don't count the miles
Count the "I love yous"