Poetry competition CLOSED 28th February 2013 3:50pm
WINNER
jaspersilence
jaspersilence
RUNNER-UP:
scopow77
COMPETITION FOR PEOPLE WITH NO TROPHYS
Burn in Hell
I wanted it to work.
Apparently you didn't.
Now I'm hurt,
Probably more than I've ever been.
I miss holding you in my arms.
I miss you telling how my heart was beating.
You always knew how to warm
Me up, but now because of you I'm bleeding
And it won't stop.
I miss you always making me happy.
You never thought
Twice about telling you loved me.
I still love you.
I still want you as mine.
But it's too
Fucking late now as I'm flying to the sky.
Now I'm dead
And it's all your fault.
You fucked with my head
When you could've prevented it.
To you I say burn in Hell.
Along with me as i gave my life
Because you bailed
When I wanted you to be my wife.
I wanted it to work.
Apparently you didn't.
Now I'm hurt,
Probably more than I've ever been.
I miss holding you in my arms.
I miss you telling how my heart was beating.
You always knew how to warm
Me up, but now because of you I'm bleeding
And it won't stop.
I miss you always making me happy.
You never thought
Twice about telling you loved me.
I still love you.
I still want you as mine.
But it's too
Fucking late now as I'm flying to the sky.
Now I'm dead
And it's all your fault.
You fucked with my head
When you could've prevented it.
To you I say burn in Hell.
Along with me as i gave my life
Because you bailed
When I wanted you to be my wife.
Anonymous
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Anonymous
Hello Twisted,
So nice to meet you here! If you wish to post an entry to this comp, just post it the same way youve posted your reply.
Go to the white box that you find under the page, type in poem and press...."submit reply"
Hope thats enough explanation
Good luck
So nice to meet you here! If you wish to post an entry to this comp, just post it the same way youve posted your reply.
Go to the white box that you find under the page, type in poem and press...."submit reply"
Hope thats enough explanation
Good luck
Well Here is mine I thought it was fitting also my favourite out of my writing
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Anonymous
APERSON said:Well Here is mine I thought it was fitting also my favourite out of my writing
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this
Mourganna said:[quote-171016-APERSON]Well Here is mine I thought it was fitting also my favourite out of my writing
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this[/quote]
it's okay, we really don't know whats up with him just have to deal with the way he is which is why I thought it was fitting.
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this
[/quote] it's okay, we really don't know whats up with him just have to deal with the way he is which is why I thought it was fitting.
Anonymous
APERSON said:[quote-171372-Mourganna][quote-171016-APERSON]Well Here is mine I thought it was fitting also my favourite out of my writing
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this[/quote]
it's okay, we really don't know whats up with him just have to deal with the way he is which is why I thought it was fitting. [/quote]
Ok, youre right, he is the way he is.....
Sure, your poem is a good poem, you should write more!!!
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this
[/quote] it's okay, we really don't know whats up with him just have to deal with the way he is which is why I thought it was fitting. [/quote]
Ok, youre right, he is the way he is.....
Sure, your poem is a good poem, you should write more!!!
Anguished Love
Heart as dark as night and cold as stone
forever to dwell alone in the pits of hell
she has lost grip on reality alone in blackness
soul dead, her head feels like it could explode
not another thought can she bear to think
I was falling hard without you here
then you came to me as if out of my dreams
and saved me, I hear you say in your sultry sloemn voice
"I'll be here for you in your time of sorrow
when your blue and out of sorts and looking for answers"
Search your pain look deep within your heart and mind
Always knowing
Always wanting
Aways waiting
Brings such pain
Empty lonesome pearl
Spoiled for the wanting
Holding my breath for your whispers
Knowing it is time
I don't want to be careful
logical
boring
or sane
No taking it slow and easy
Temporary loss of sanity
Let's let love rescue us
and discover who we are
In the darkness of night
with only the light of the silvery
moon to guide our way as we search each others soul
Heart as dark as night and cold as stone
forever to dwell alone in the pits of hell
she has lost grip on reality alone in blackness
soul dead, her head feels like it could explode
not another thought can she bear to think
I was falling hard without you here
then you came to me as if out of my dreams
and saved me, I hear you say in your sultry sloemn voice
"I'll be here for you in your time of sorrow
when your blue and out of sorts and looking for answers"
Search your pain look deep within your heart and mind
Always knowing
Always wanting
Aways waiting
Brings such pain
Empty lonesome pearl
Spoiled for the wanting
Holding my breath for your whispers
Knowing it is time
I don't want to be careful
logical
boring
or sane
No taking it slow and easy
Temporary loss of sanity
Let's let love rescue us
and discover who we are
In the darkness of night
with only the light of the silvery
moon to guide our way as we search each others soul
Anguished Love
Heart as dark as night and cold as stone
forever to dwell alone in the pits of hell
she has lost grip on reality alone in blackness
soul dead, her head feels like it could explode
not another thought can she bear to think
I was falling hard without you here
then you came to me as if out of my dreams
and saved me, I hear you say in your sultry sloemn voice
"I'll be here for you in your time of sorrow
when your blue and out of sorts and looking for answers"
Search your pain look deep within your heart and mind
Always knowing
Always wanting
Aways waiting
Brings such pain
Empty lonesome pearl
Spoiled for the wanting
Holding my breath for your whispers
Knowing it is time
I don't want to be careful
logical
boring
or sane
No taking it slow and easy
Temporary loss of sanity
Let's let love rescue us
and discover who we are
In the darkness of night
with only the light of the silvery
moon to guide our way as we search each others soul
Heart as dark as night and cold as stone
forever to dwell alone in the pits of hell
she has lost grip on reality alone in blackness
soul dead, her head feels like it could explode
not another thought can she bear to think
I was falling hard without you here
then you came to me as if out of my dreams
and saved me, I hear you say in your sultry sloemn voice
"I'll be here for you in your time of sorrow
when your blue and out of sorts and looking for answers"
Search your pain look deep within your heart and mind
Always knowing
Always wanting
Aways waiting
Brings such pain
Empty lonesome pearl
Spoiled for the wanting
Holding my breath for your whispers
Knowing it is time
I don't want to be careful
logical
boring
or sane
No taking it slow and easy
Temporary loss of sanity
Let's let love rescue us
and discover who we are
In the darkness of night
with only the light of the silvery
moon to guide our way as we search each others soul
Mourganna said:[quote-171382-APERSON][quote-171372-Mourganna][quote-171016-APERSON]Well Here is mine I thought it was fitting also my favourite out of my writing
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this[/quote]
it's okay, we really don't know whats up with him just have to deal with the way he is which is why I thought it was fitting. [/quote]
Ok, youre right, he is the way he is.....
Sure, your poem is a good poem, you should write more!!!
[/quote]
I have better poems this is just one of the more "emotional" ones I have which is why it is not very great. I tend to go a bit simple when trying to explain my emtions.
If old poems are not allowed you have permission to crusify me...
little brother
hear you cry
out...
scream.
wonder what goes on in your mind
when your tears flow...
when you just scream...
scream
you scream everyday...
wonder what you are really feeling
as you rock back and forth
you cry
Am I really that disgusting?
the way you flinch
when I raise my hand
Am I really that disgusting?
can't you trust?
we are of the same blood
but still,
tears flow
out of your eyes
you are screaming...
rocking back and forth.
Back and forth.
can't help but to think.
What is going on in your mind?
what do you feel?
Your just a child
screaming.
Am I that disgusting?
Do you really hate me as you say?
Thanks for your entry, Aperson...
I was just wondering, after reading this poem if theres anything wrong with your brother since you mention hes screaming and rocking back and forth? Children with autism do this often...Just a question, Im just being curious, sorry if you mind this
[/quote] it's okay, we really don't know whats up with him just have to deal with the way he is which is why I thought it was fitting. [/quote]
Ok, youre right, he is the way he is.....
Sure, your poem is a good poem, you should write more!!!
[/quote]
I have better poems this is just one of the more "emotional" ones I have which is why it is not very great. I tend to go a bit simple when trying to explain my emtions.
