Love...
JohnnyDepth
Joined 6th Aug 2012
Forum Posts: 103
Twisted Dreamer
Forum Posts: 103
NimmieAmee said:
Wandering, with no path in sight
When I see you, my heart skips a beat,
but when I don't, it stops altogether,
suspended in the syrupy weight of your absence
and waiting for a reason to resume it's rhythm.
These feelings, wholly unbidden, unwanted,
occupy my every waking breath;
your name always on my lips,
in exultant joy when you are near,
or unbearable longing when you are not.
You have claimed me so completely
that I hang on your every syllable,
each one prized as a precious gift,
and I am always left yearning for more.
I find that have lost myself in you,
yet, if honesty is to be had,
I would have it no other way;
for what better a place to be lost, than in paradise?
fine writing, loved it
Wandering, with no path in sight
When I see you, my heart skips a beat,
but when I don't, it stops altogether,
suspended in the syrupy weight of your absence
and waiting for a reason to resume it's rhythm.
These feelings, wholly unbidden, unwanted,
occupy my every waking breath;
your name always on my lips,
in exultant joy when you are near,
or unbearable longing when you are not.
You have claimed me so completely
that I hang on your every syllable,
each one prized as a precious gift,
and I am always left yearning for more.
I find that have lost myself in you,
yet, if honesty is to be had,
I would have it no other way;
for what better a place to be lost, than in paradise?
fine writing, loved it
QuantumUnion
Anon 456
Forum Posts: 22
Anon 456
Fire of Insight
3
Joined 24th Nov 2012Forum Posts: 22
Adivarg
Don’t make me desire you too much
When all I want is the touch
Of your sweet lips on mine
For you to kiss my tips
And hold you tight
All thro’ the night
And feel your breast
Pressed to mine
To wake at dawn
And not yawn
But instead play
Don’t make me
Desire you too much!
When all I want is the touch
Of your soul on mine
To feel your Heart
Beating so close
To my own it feels
As if we are one
And don’t make
Me desire you
too much when
all I need is the
touch of your
body moving all
day in mine.
Don’t make me desire you too much
When all I want is the touch
Of your sweet lips on mine
For you to kiss my tips
And hold you tight
All thro’ the night
And feel your breast
Pressed to mine
To wake at dawn
And not yawn
But instead play
Don’t make me
Desire you too much!
When all I want is the touch
Of your soul on mine
To feel your Heart
Beating so close
To my own it feels
As if we are one
And don’t make
Me desire you
too much when
all I need is the
touch of your
body moving all
day in mine.
epicRawrz
Party Poison
Forum Posts: 226
Party Poison
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 30th July 2012Forum Posts: 226
Thank You
I love you
More than you know
More than you'll ever know
When you leave
And I watch you go
Every minute passes like an hour
Very slowly
When you return
I'm overjoyed
We hug
we kiss
But all that matters
Is your presence
Right there next to me
That loving atmosphere
That you only have around me
Shows me
I'm different
Different than everyone
Thank you
For choosing me
Thank you for loving me
And giving me
All those memories
To love and cherish
I love you
More than you know
More than you'll ever know
When you leave
And I watch you go
Every minute passes like an hour
Very slowly
When you return
I'm overjoyed
We hug
we kiss
But all that matters
Is your presence
Right there next to me
That loving atmosphere
That you only have around me
Shows me
I'm different
Different than everyone
Thank you
For choosing me
Thank you for loving me
And giving me
All those memories
To love and cherish
NimmieAmee
Forum Posts: 204
Thought Provoker
10
Joined 3rd Sep 2012Forum Posts: 204
(Thank you JD! :D)
Anonymous
"Lying about Forever"
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/poemimages/84202.jpg
We’ve learned to measure the stars, but
cannot tame restless hearts on fire.
I remember the rest stop,
the watering hole on three nineteen.
It was a magical ritual we performed,
I found love in your eyes,
they sparkled
reflecting the twinkles above.
You held me close,
I could feel the beating
in your heaving bosom,
smelled your sweet lady musk,
I thought it was my last stand.
Guess, I was wrong.
Now alone,
I'm pained
knowing we
lied about forever.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/images/uploads/poemimages/84202.jpg
We’ve learned to measure the stars, but
cannot tame restless hearts on fire.
I remember the rest stop,
the watering hole on three nineteen.
It was a magical ritual we performed,
I found love in your eyes,
they sparkled
reflecting the twinkles above.
You held me close,
I could feel the beating
in your heaving bosom,
smelled your sweet lady musk,
I thought it was my last stand.
Guess, I was wrong.
Now alone,
I'm pained
knowing we
lied about forever.
QuantumUnion
Anon 456
Forum Posts: 22
Anon 456
Fire of Insight
3
Joined 24th Nov 2012Forum Posts: 22
Touch Me Tender
I always, always treasure your touches
Your touch makes me delirious with joy
Kissing immeasurable depths of my soul
First the touch of your eyes on mine
Meeting after a tortuously long time
My legs go weak, I can hardly speak
The touch of your essence next I inhale
I close my eyes and breathe in deeply
Satinesque smooth feelings fill my head
Your small sweet soft hand touches cheek
I am overwhelmed, my dreams are reality
Next your soft nectar giving lips touching
My lips feel aflame and eyes close tight
Your essence and very soul unite with me
All, of all things rapturous, touch me now
Then you hug me pushing breasts to chest
Their firm warmth’s touch makes me gasp
Flocks of Angels rise, fly inside my head
I am so in love with you, just touch, I fly
I butterfly kiss your cheeks and eyes open
Caressing me they silently touch, say play?
I always, always treasure your touches
Your touch makes me delirious with joy
Kissing immeasurable depths of my soul
First the touch of your eyes on mine
Meeting after a tortuously long time
My legs go weak, I can hardly speak
The touch of your essence next I inhale
I close my eyes and breathe in deeply
Satinesque smooth feelings fill my head
Your small sweet soft hand touches cheek
I am overwhelmed, my dreams are reality
Next your soft nectar giving lips touching
My lips feel aflame and eyes close tight
Your essence and very soul unite with me
All, of all things rapturous, touch me now
Then you hug me pushing breasts to chest
Their firm warmth’s touch makes me gasp
Flocks of Angels rise, fly inside my head
I am so in love with you, just touch, I fly
I butterfly kiss your cheeks and eyes open
Caressing me they silently touch, say play?
Anonymous
Love
Red like the rose
I planted on the day
You took an overdose
zinger
Joined 30th Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 170
Fire of Insight
Forum Posts: 170
standin out on the back porch
lookin up at the stars
smilin
all because some pretty little girl won my heart
how could it happen to me
how did she make me believe
lord she's everything i could ever need
oh
she's my angel
my saving grace
all it takes is her beautiful face
and nothing else matters
no worries
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
its the simple things
like the way she says my name
its all something i might never be able to explain
but the moon shines brighter
when i'm rockin beside her
she's taken over my soul
oh that girl's got all control
she's my angel
my saving grace
all it takes is her beautiful face
and nothing else matters
no worries
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
this is a feeling i dont ever want to lose
cuz i dont know what i'd do
just the thought of her sweet lips
oh and that kiss
yeah
she's my angel
my saving grace
all it takes is her beautiful face
and nothing else matters
no worries
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
lookin up at the stars
smilin
all because some pretty little girl won my heart
how could it happen to me
how did she make me believe
lord she's everything i could ever need
oh
she's my angel
my saving grace
all it takes is her beautiful face
and nothing else matters
no worries
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
its the simple things
like the way she says my name
its all something i might never be able to explain
but the moon shines brighter
when i'm rockin beside her
she's taken over my soul
oh that girl's got all control
she's my angel
my saving grace
all it takes is her beautiful face
and nothing else matters
no worries
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
this is a feeling i dont ever want to lose
cuz i dont know what i'd do
just the thought of her sweet lips
oh and that kiss
yeah
she's my angel
my saving grace
all it takes is her beautiful face
and nothing else matters
no worries
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
no cares
just runnin my fingers through her hair
i get lost in those blue eyes
lose all track of time
but i dont mind
cuz every second with her
and i learn
why i was put on this earth
its pretty easy to see
lovin that girl
is why god made me
Anonymous
I remain
Two years gone
memories still remain.
The life of those moments
still aflame.
Nothing much has changed
Besides the settings
But no matter where I go
Feelings remain
and emotions old still burn.
What could I possibily do
to bring it back to the start?
I'd trade all the anger and spite
To see what could've been
Not that it matters..
but i'd still like to make my feelings clear
Words may mean nothing, but emotions don't.
Not if you feel what you say
Take a look around
and see what you have lost?
This isn't a movie.. your life insignificant
much like mine.
Yet you continue on with this fucking script
So treasured to you
I've said words with feeling
And a heart behind them to hurt
Only to have it turned against me
For a wheel that never turned
Yeah, it's over.
Two years gone
memories still remain.
The life of those moments
still aflame.
Nothing much has changed
Besides the settings
But no matter where I go
Feelings remain
and emotions old still burn.
What could I possibily do
to bring it back to the start?
I'd trade all the anger and spite
To see what could've been
Not that it matters..
but i'd still like to make my feelings clear
Words may mean nothing, but emotions don't.
Not if you feel what you say
Take a look around
and see what you have lost?
This isn't a movie.. your life insignificant
much like mine.
Yet you continue on with this fucking script
So treasured to you
I've said words with feeling
And a heart behind them to hurt
Only to have it turned against me
For a wheel that never turned
Yeah, it's over.
JackyIdkk
J. Payan
Forum Posts: 69
J. Payan
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 11th Mar 2011Forum Posts: 69
~ Unanswered Questions ~
Times like this, when my eyes drown out the light, and when your responses become short, I lay awake at night,thinking about us, & why you won't let her go...
Questions running through my head, all unanswered, all not said...
Do you still think about her?
During your day, or late at night?
Does she haunt your dreams and all your memories?
Does your heart still have a piece that only beats for her?
Why is she so unforgettable?
Why has her impression leftyou so amazed,that you can't leave her alone?
Why do you continue to fight for her, and say you just want to be friends?
Why do you get mad if I tell you not to talk to her?
Why don't you leave her alone?
Is she better than me?
Is she a better person,kisser,lover?
Do you not you see she wants you back?
Do you Want her back?
Do You miss her presence, her kissses, her face?
Do wish I was her instead?
Do you want me to leave, to let you be free and happy with her?
Will you leave me for her someday ?
I try so hard, all for love. I've given my heart to you, and I don't want to let you go. Fill my body with kisses, fill my heart with love, not doubts in my thoughts and lies in my heart.
Maybe I'm over-thinking,maybe I'm stupid. But that's what I feel, so insecure and small compared to her. Especially when you get angry at me when I tell you to let her go. Makes me feel, you want her more than me...
I lay wide awake tonight again, with Watery eyes, and a handful of short responses, hoping you'll hear my pleading voice, to really let her go, if you truly want me....
Times like this, when my eyes drown out the light, and when your responses become short, I lay awake at night,thinking about us, & why you won't let her go...
Questions running through my head, all unanswered, all not said...
Do you still think about her?
During your day, or late at night?
Does she haunt your dreams and all your memories?
Does your heart still have a piece that only beats for her?
Why is she so unforgettable?
Why has her impression leftyou so amazed,that you can't leave her alone?
Why do you continue to fight for her, and say you just want to be friends?
Why do you get mad if I tell you not to talk to her?
Why don't you leave her alone?
Is she better than me?
Is she a better person,kisser,lover?
Do you not you see she wants you back?
Do you Want her back?
Do You miss her presence, her kissses, her face?
Do wish I was her instead?
Do you want me to leave, to let you be free and happy with her?
Will you leave me for her someday ?
I try so hard, all for love. I've given my heart to you, and I don't want to let you go. Fill my body with kisses, fill my heart with love, not doubts in my thoughts and lies in my heart.
Maybe I'm over-thinking,maybe I'm stupid. But that's what I feel, so insecure and small compared to her. Especially when you get angry at me when I tell you to let her go. Makes me feel, you want her more than me...
I lay wide awake tonight again, with Watery eyes, and a handful of short responses, hoping you'll hear my pleading voice, to really let her go, if you truly want me....
DystopianMelody
Forum Posts: 1391
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 9th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 1391
I miss you
Not in some abstract 'like the desert misses the rain' type of thing
But its not a memory of a lust fuelled type of fling.
I'm not gonna be moist and say that I was complete when I was with you
But girl, even after everything that's been said and done i still miss you
You were the comfy sofa I lay my heart on when I came home, you were the warm fire I huddled closer to when the world turned cold. You were the one i would alway want to hold
With you behind me i could afford to suddenly be bold. The world seemed a world seemed a wonderful place, laid out before me, all the grimy edges disguised with flowery lace
But slowly that lace unravelled, and so did we. It left me thinking about all the roads we left un-travelled. Now I'm left thinking of what we thought we would be
How we used to make own world that we'd pretend that no one could see. Who betrayed who is simply a point of perspective, the ins and outs of it, like anything, are objective
But like the fire I compared your love to, it started of blazing, but died down low. We thought our love was eternal, but what the hell do we know?
I let my thoughts of you drift away in the hazy smoke I blew, and tried to let go of my longing for the feelings I knew. I tried my hardest not to turn cold and bitter, but it's like I left my heart home alone without a baby sitter
When I came back, it was sitting in the wreckage screaming 'treat em mean, keep em keen! And stop cutting them some slack' and I honestly tried. But whenever it was time to play my heart would run and go hide. And I tried to seek, but it's convinced it's future will be bleak
Even though your a bitch I still miss you. And when I put my life back together you were still the glue
Not in some abstract 'like the desert misses the rain' type of thing
But its not a memory of a lust fuelled type of fling.
I'm not gonna be moist and say that I was complete when I was with you
But girl, even after everything that's been said and done i still miss you
You were the comfy sofa I lay my heart on when I came home, you were the warm fire I huddled closer to when the world turned cold. You were the one i would alway want to hold
With you behind me i could afford to suddenly be bold. The world seemed a world seemed a wonderful place, laid out before me, all the grimy edges disguised with flowery lace
But slowly that lace unravelled, and so did we. It left me thinking about all the roads we left un-travelled. Now I'm left thinking of what we thought we would be
How we used to make own world that we'd pretend that no one could see. Who betrayed who is simply a point of perspective, the ins and outs of it, like anything, are objective
But like the fire I compared your love to, it started of blazing, but died down low. We thought our love was eternal, but what the hell do we know?
I let my thoughts of you drift away in the hazy smoke I blew, and tried to let go of my longing for the feelings I knew. I tried my hardest not to turn cold and bitter, but it's like I left my heart home alone without a baby sitter
When I came back, it was sitting in the wreckage screaming 'treat em mean, keep em keen! And stop cutting them some slack' and I honestly tried. But whenever it was time to play my heart would run and go hide. And I tried to seek, but it's convinced it's future will be bleak
Even though your a bitch I still miss you. And when I put my life back together you were still the glue
DystopianMelody
Forum Posts: 1391
Dangerous Mind
9
Joined 9th Dec 2012Forum Posts: 1391
That's a really old one, not my best but thought I might as well post it....
DylanThomasPirateM
Joined 31st Dec 2012
Forum Posts: 15
Twisted Dreamer
Forum Posts: 15
Did you know?
When the rains fall and the winds blow,
When the skies cascade and the leaves swirl
Echos slow
And soft, but true
Water colors green and blue,
A story of both past and new,
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
The air and sea were one.
All was dark and frightful.
The clouds crackled golden vulcan and icy mist was every breath and a constant Creaking from bow to stern bespoke of a sailor's death and Neptune's final nightfall.
How he wished to be home again,
A cigar, some gin, a favorite friend,
He'd give all to be home again,
A smoke and drink in the sun.
Then a flash
Now orange and reds
And fire on the sea
Lightning's struck and split the mast
And all the mates, whom he now loved
Forever to the sea
But,
For he,
a sweeter fate,
That of a mermaid's mercy...
♥ "How many young faces had I seen drift by on the oceans wave?
Too many to count.
A welcome sight most always.
How curious?
Bronzed by ages,
Scurrying up and down the lines as mice,
Singing joy,
Straining muscle and sinew.
Sinking in a storm,
I'd called a few,
But no sailor did I save.
But never had I seen a sight like the flame I saw that night,
never had I seen a light quite like the glean that filled the green eyes of this boy."
And from that day...
The air and sun were one.
All was warm and blissful.
Rocky tides were yesterday
Todays and 'morrows that of play
And nights of kisses, thoughtful.
Still,
When the clouds fall down and all the leaves aswirl,
If thunder cracks and lightning sparks
And icy wind is all the air,
Lend an ear to the winter's breeze,
There drifts an ageless love affair
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
DyMc
When the rains fall and the winds blow,
When the skies cascade and the leaves swirl
Echos slow
And soft, but true
Water colors green and blue,
A story of both past and new,
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
The air and sea were one.
All was dark and frightful.
The clouds crackled golden vulcan and icy mist was every breath and a constant Creaking from bow to stern bespoke of a sailor's death and Neptune's final nightfall.
How he wished to be home again,
A cigar, some gin, a favorite friend,
He'd give all to be home again,
A smoke and drink in the sun.
Then a flash
Now orange and reds
And fire on the sea
Lightning's struck and split the mast
And all the mates, whom he now loved
Forever to the sea
But,
For he,
a sweeter fate,
That of a mermaid's mercy...
♥ "How many young faces had I seen drift by on the oceans wave?
Too many to count.
A welcome sight most always.
How curious?
Bronzed by ages,
Scurrying up and down the lines as mice,
Singing joy,
Straining muscle and sinew.
Sinking in a storm,
I'd called a few,
But no sailor did I save.
But never had I seen a sight like the flame I saw that night,
never had I seen a light quite like the glean that filled the green eyes of this boy."
And from that day...
The air and sun were one.
All was warm and blissful.
Rocky tides were yesterday
Todays and 'morrows that of play
And nights of kisses, thoughtful.
Still,
When the clouds fall down and all the leaves aswirl,
If thunder cracks and lightning sparks
And icy wind is all the air,
Lend an ear to the winter's breeze,
There drifts an ageless love affair
'Tween a pirate boy and a siren girl.
DyMc
KahakuHiga-Parker
Forum Posts: 161
Twisted Dreamer
1
Joined 15th May 2012Forum Posts: 161
I love you
I lied but I didn't because I do
I love you
I love her to
difference is
I shouldn't have fallen for her
like I did
Like I am
When I get my thoughts together
I'll finish this
I lied but I didn't because I do
I love you
I love her to
difference is
I shouldn't have fallen for her
like I did
Like I am
When I get my thoughts together
I'll finish this
amandrin
Forum Posts: 32
Lost Thinker
1
Joined 22nd Sep 2012Forum Posts: 32
Missing Pieces
Forgetting you is a funny kind of thing.
I think, it is because I don't know how.
I am a loaded rifle: locked and ready. I am still waiting for the right moment to shoot.
I am the heart of a lightbulb symphony, full of endless potential.
I am still searching for some kind of electricity
Waiting still for some connection.
But you, you are missed chances, you are unwrapped presents
You are empty voicemails, you are unanswered calls
You are untold secrets, you are all my missing pieces
You are secondhand smoke: I know you will never be good for me, but I can't help but breathe you in.
Because you are first date flowers
You are Christmas miracles
You are holding hands in the ice rink
I have never wanted to let you go!
And I find it harder to do so each day
Because you smell like hot chocolate
You sound like my favorite rock band
You look like promise
And you feel like home.
You feel like home.
Kyle, my heart is heavy with your promises.
My mind is heavy with your words, I cannot forget them, I promise, I have been trying.
But my composure is running thin.
My lightbulb symphony always seems so ready to leave me.
My eyes are tired of looking at the bright side.
My lungs are dying from their secondhand smoke addiction.
Please show me how to stop this!
Forgiving you is easy. I do it all the time.
It's the forgetting, that I find hard.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/84609-missing-pieces/
Forgetting you is a funny kind of thing.
I think, it is because I don't know how.
I am a loaded rifle: locked and ready. I am still waiting for the right moment to shoot.
I am the heart of a lightbulb symphony, full of endless potential.
I am still searching for some kind of electricity
Waiting still for some connection.
But you, you are missed chances, you are unwrapped presents
You are empty voicemails, you are unanswered calls
You are untold secrets, you are all my missing pieces
You are secondhand smoke: I know you will never be good for me, but I can't help but breathe you in.
Because you are first date flowers
You are Christmas miracles
You are holding hands in the ice rink
I have never wanted to let you go!
And I find it harder to do so each day
Because you smell like hot chocolate
You sound like my favorite rock band
You look like promise
And you feel like home.
You feel like home.
Kyle, my heart is heavy with your promises.
My mind is heavy with your words, I cannot forget them, I promise, I have been trying.
But my composure is running thin.
My lightbulb symphony always seems so ready to leave me.
My eyes are tired of looking at the bright side.
My lungs are dying from their secondhand smoke addiction.
Please show me how to stop this!
Forgiving you is easy. I do it all the time.
It's the forgetting, that I find hard.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/84609-missing-pieces/