Poetry competition CLOSED 30th December 2012 1:15am
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violet (Vi)
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Love and other drugs

Elenat
Elenushka Toledo
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Poetry Contest

love
Write a poem with both "love and health" Write about your love affairs and about your life present health status♥ If you have any illness that can interrupt with your relationship.

violet
Vi
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A little vague there, Disco pirate.

Edit: I see you've given more info now. Thanks !
Do you have some rules or does any old thing suit?


Elenat
Elenushka Toledo
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The rule is to just write a POEM about any type of situation involving love and health. ♥

violet
Vi
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Oooh. Ok.

I've to write a POEM. Not a poem.
Got it.

Hmm, well I suppose a POEM would be much better..
Who invented 'poem' anyways?  I mean..Who does it think it is?!

POEM all the way.. With ya.  

Elenat
Elenushka Toledo
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Funny girl

Elenat
Elenushka Toledo
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She thinks she's a walking mouth!!

violet
Vi
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Elenat said:She thinks she's a walking mouth!!
Definitely

The comp: it can be any length or form?
New or old submissions?




Elenat
Elenushka Toledo
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Free, any submission is fine.

violet
Vi
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Thank you M'Lady!

Wait..

It is unstoppable  
       
A natural force grips my wrists  
and pulls me forward      
imposing a reality i do not want        
       
No amount of heel-digging        
or defiance        
or kicking and screaming can stop it        
       
I wish to stay where i am        
Right here, with these mournful feelings      
suffusing, rippling every nerve    
       
I will fight    
Till my arms are  
ripped from my torso      
     
Because with each damn day  
that I am dragged through    
I feel you a little less    

Elenat
Elenushka Toledo
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Wow!! just amazing! You wrote this in this little time? Great!!  penned the way I enjoy reading!

twistedgirl
No Thanks
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i love you so much
i yearn for the touch
of your lips upon mine
i hate time
it marks how far we're apart
and it hurts my heart.

even if we were close
what we both
know our years differ
by eight years. sure
its the truth that i
can't tell a lie
so i cannot say we
can never be
i know we can
dear gentleman

i'd give anything for us
but i won't give up
because its one chance
our only dance
that i understand
so hold my hands.

how can they take our rights
to love in open lights?
our beautiful love
a broken-winged dove
left to grow anew hidden
instead of what it could've been


JackyIdkk
J. Payan
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Met to Be


Kiss my lips, so gently
Then a little violently  

Hold me close to you
And tell me this world is beautiful  

Place your hand in mine
And let us get lost in time

Look into my eyes  
And promise me everything will be alright

Make me breathe your breath
To become one till death

Because in your hands lies the round enclosure,
We have a strong and true love emotion  

We were Perfectly made for each other
Met to be, forever lovers

violet
Vi
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Elenat said:Wow!! just amazing! You wrote this in this little time? Great!!  penned the way I enjoy reading!

It's an oldie!

PleasuresOfPain
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Whitewand6
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love and drugs. love and health. illness that can be 'interrupted' with relationship.

jaysus c. hats off to the people above. really.

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