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Whitewand6
Dangerous Mind
India 16awards
Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 2251

c o n s u m m a t i on


   
     
     
after the    
last rite    
tonight        
now its  
time to  
lie down  
quietly
on the  
aqueous bed  
of molten stars  
       
you will sparkle    
spikes of ether        
from underneath    
the thin veil        
of fragile    
coyness        

standing    
beneath    
i will    
beam        
in    
cease    
less    
wonder    
ment    

as    
the    
earth    
does
 
looking      
at the    
azure sky    
from the      
womb of    
the ocean        
     

Whitewand6
Dangerous Mind
India 16awards
Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 2251

a m b e r

amber

glides giggles gyrates

a soul born from the womb of  
wanton delirium
her joy is electric
contagious

bakes wedding cakes
frosts them afterwards

stares at the miniature couples
in black and white
frozen or rather stuck
in the middle  
hand in hand  

smiles her wry smile
wishing she could paint  
a riot of chroma  

cheers and woots as  
giant pituitary cases hurtle
like deaf space debris  
fighting over a ball

worships nature  
meditates
sculpts poems

she is hundred feet tall
growing glowing
a white dwarf

wraps herself around like a boa  
buzzes like an overload

tames takes teases
then growls like
a lone grizzly in throes

her breasts remind me of alphonso
a little tongue  
they melt and moo

her mons seems to be alive  
most of the times
a little inside and  
i am crushed  
emptied of myself

has her own baggage yet  
drags with ease
just the past
the rest flows like  
merce cunningham

makes me cry when she climaxes
believes i see divinity
i do  

but its the pain of leaving
my body ten feet under
while watching myself  
rant and pant

she loves me
her tongue is my proof

she is a broken doll  
dancing on her own
a class apart
my adagio
my blueberry

insatiable amber


she nibbles me often

like right now

sigh.

Whitewand6
Dangerous Mind
India 16awards
Joined 1st Nov 2011
Forum Posts: 2251


  p u d d l e
 

 
 

 
tonight before leaving me alone  
funny thing she called    
herself  
 
puddle  
 
like    
 
a velvet petticoat  
falling in a fluid shimmer  
 
a dervish swirling crashing  
euphoric entranced  
 
or little children filling    
tiny plastic cups with fresh mud  
on the lone road  
 
puddle  
 
or random smiles  
bursting in strange places  
telling teasing exciting  
spikes of all things  
associated with  
 
youth attraction  
romance love  
 
puddle  
 
like a virgin boy    
discovering sex    
over the phone by    
asking his girl to
describe her body
only to find    
in the morning  

a tiny lake  
of loss and gain

clear  
oceanic  
dead  
 
puddle  
 
or that time  
her water broke  
viscous warm  
gushing  
 
puddle  
 
tonight she is one  
 
flesh blood electricity    
smile blush half thoughts  
absentmindedness  
thoughts dreams  
silence fear  
questions  
answers  
 
puddle  
   

MrAlptraum
Mr A
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 17awards
Joined 24th Dec 2011
Forum Posts: 1878

Sumeet, you must get writing. You're running low here. :)

freddwzz
Naked Satirist
Fire of Insight
Singapore 6awards
Joined 5th May 2012
Forum Posts: 496

Should've made this an endless thread, fuck me cheese.

poet Anonymous

Limburger

My love for you is my obituary
for to act upon these wants
these needs
would surely be my death

Let your beauty take away my breath
blind my eyes
destroy my senses
still my beating heart

Dig my grave with your kiss
seal my coffin with your promise
cover me over with your warm embrace
let your warm smile be my spray

Let my longing for you
outlast this cold earth
and my tombstone show my desire              
to love you for all eternity

Danii
Tyrant of Words
United States 5awards
Joined 27th Oct 2011
Forum Posts: 5152

I REALLY like you
Sometimes at night I can't stop thinking about  you
I stand outside your door, listening as you're with HER
If she's bothering you, I could eliminate the PROBLEM
She doesn't moan much
And she leaves right after
If I get rid of her
We Will be TOGETHER FOREVER
I LOVE you
So lets kill the bitch
I'll please you any way
I'll even sniff your shoes too

leonardo
Twisted Dreamer
United Kingdom
Joined 6th June 2012
Forum Posts: 95

If you and I stood face to face,
with nothing between us but flimsy lace;
I would, would you?

theemptyechoes
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 6th July 2012
Forum Posts: 7

As we gaze up at the stars
pretending we are astronomers,
hand me a Valentine's card
covered with hearts
and cutesy sayings!
If I laugh,
it isn't at you,
it's at my love for it all.
As a shooting star flies over head,
bend down slowly and kiss me,
make me feel beautiful
and worthy of such a night,
with everything you can think of!



siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

I have for you
a box of candy, shaped as a heart
with roses and a note
I love you like the stars

I kiss the ground
that you walk
Savor every word
that you talk

I gaze on you
like a admirer
Like an kitten would
a buyer

You set my heart
into so many flames
Without you
would I breathe again?

I want to give you
so many flowers
to show my feelings
that you over power

runningturtle87
Tyrant of Words
14awards
Joined 20th June 2012
Forum Posts: 518

Hot Plate Haiku

Melted cheese sandwich
gives new meaning to breakfast--
closed bread bites and burns.

runningturtle87

freddwzz
Naked Satirist
Fire of Insight
Singapore 6awards
Joined 5th May 2012
Forum Posts: 496

Having a hard time judging this, these are all great cheese. Ray's You Doom My Heart edge out for me with its rhyme scheme and classic cheesiness, Summit's avant garde cheese overflows are tasty- Love: Indefinite is smashing with visual, I would call it a "wine" piece instead, Grace's My Love i could smell it half a mile away, seducing.

MrAlptraum's Beginning , Forbidden Love's If I could... I would..., tornado's Limburger, theemptyechoes's cheese, all these cheeses I could eat over and over.

Well, fuck me cheese.

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