Poetry competition CLOSED 5th June 2012 4:30am
WINNER
Atropabelladonna (Atro)
Atropabelladonna (Atro)
A Poem That Heal your wounds
mikimoondancer said:
Thank's and Peace Rsena-cool competition
Symbolism by Mikimoondancer
A last chance flower
for my only true love
A reflective invitation
Now gathers and turns to dust
Petals fall to sand
Time gathers thorns
then lands
Turn away
Just close your eyes
Sandbars hide
No last demand
It's pulled away
forget me not
Symbolic dreams
as petals fall
No roots on stems
Only gardens hide
In a vase of death
they melt in light
MORE THAN WELCOM, JUST SORRY, YOU COULD OF BEEN A NICE JUDGE.
GOOD LUCK.
SENA
Thank's and Peace Rsena-cool competition
Symbolism by Mikimoondancer
A last chance flower
for my only true love
A reflective invitation
Now gathers and turns to dust
Petals fall to sand
Time gathers thorns
then lands
Turn away
Just close your eyes
Sandbars hide
No last demand
It's pulled away
forget me not
Symbolic dreams
as petals fall
No roots on stems
Only gardens hide
In a vase of death
they melt in light
MORE THAN WELCOM, JUST SORRY, YOU COULD OF BEEN A NICE JUDGE.
GOOD LUCK.
SENA
pretty_normal said:You were always so quiet.
That's why I
never really
shouted at you much-
I think it must be?
I only ever got annoyed
and such
when you were happy
as you seemed happier
with her more.
Oh please don't take this wrong
I still need you
the same
as before.
That cemented drive outside our flat,
wasn't paved over simply-
not like that.
I can't be you although that'd be nice
face of lust and fist of ice
eyes of periwinkle bloodied blue
lips of man I never knew.
VERY NICE.
That's why I
never really
shouted at you much-
I think it must be?
I only ever got annoyed
and such
when you were happy
as you seemed happier
with her more.
Oh please don't take this wrong
I still need you
the same
as before.
That cemented drive outside our flat,
wasn't paved over simply-
not like that.
I can't be you although that'd be nice
face of lust and fist of ice
eyes of periwinkle bloodied blue
lips of man I never knew.
VERY NICE.
MY SCORE
FISHCAKE 4
FIREBYRD 3.8
MISSY 4
CINNY 3.8
ATROPABELLADONNA 4
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.2
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3.5
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.9
PAOLAJANE16 4.5
SUPHOMEBOI 4.6
KRITICOOL 4.5
REDCRYSTAL 4
PAOLAJANE16 4.3
CARMELITALUVET 4.5
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.4
GOOD WORK TO EVERY ONE, YOU ALL DID GREAT, HOPE EVERYBODY FEEL OK, WITH THEIR SCORE. IDID IT FIRST, NOW, LETS WAIT FOR THE OTHER ONES. ALL I NEED IS TEN MORE ELEVEN MORE PEOPLE.
SENA
FISHCAKE 4
FIREBYRD 3.8
MISSY 4
CINNY 3.8
ATROPABELLADONNA 4
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.2
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3.5
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.9
PAOLAJANE16 4.5
SUPHOMEBOI 4.6
KRITICOOL 4.5
REDCRYSTAL 4
PAOLAJANE16 4.3
CARMELITALUVET 4.5
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.4
GOOD WORK TO EVERY ONE, YOU ALL DID GREAT, HOPE EVERYBODY FEEL OK, WITH THEIR SCORE. IDID IT FIRST, NOW, LETS WAIT FOR THE OTHER ONES. ALL I NEED IS TEN MORE ELEVEN MORE PEOPLE.
SENA
Fishcake .. Ouch that must have stung. 3.0
Fyrbird,. What an ass. 3.0
Miss sub . Pretty 3.5
Cinny . My style of poetry 4,0
Atropelladonna deep 3.0
Bleeding inferno different but good 3.1
Parker sweet 3.0
Pretty normal.. Odd 2.5
Forbidden love. Repetitious 2.5
Sup homeboi. It's good but it's a story told so many times 2.5
Kriticool awesome 4.5
Red crystal different 2.5
Forbidden love. Poem two nice 3.0
Milkimoondancer nice 2.5
I'm sorry if I'm being harsh. But I just couldn't vibe with many of the poems. That doesn't make them bad at all.
Fyrbird,. What an ass. 3.0
Miss sub . Pretty
3.5 Cinny . My style of poetry 4,0
Atropelladonna deep 3.0
Bleeding inferno different but good 3.1
Parker sweet 3.0
Pretty normal.. Odd 2.5
Forbidden love. Repetitious 2.5
Sup homeboi. It's good but it's a story told so many times 2.5
Kriticool awesome 4.5
Red crystal different 2.5
Forbidden love. Poem two nice 3.0
Milkimoondancer nice 2.5
I'm sorry if I'm being harsh. But I just couldn't vibe with many of the poems. That doesn't make them bad at all.
FISHCAKE 3.4 - good, have a little more originality next time.
FIREBYRD 4.2 - I like the sassy ending
MISSY 4.3 - classic & cool
CINNY 4.5 - intricate last stanza!
ATROPABELLADONNA 4 - very sad, must be sadder for a parent
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.3 - sounds painful; good word choice
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 2.9 - you have the emotion down, just work on your creativity next time.
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.9 - interesting
PAOLAJANE16 3.8 - I like it, just add a little more flare next time. Reads kinda like song lyrics!
SUPHOMEBOI 3.4 - relatable, but very typical in terms of love poems.
KRITICOOL 4.2 - sad. I like the part about the blood.
REDCRYSTAL 4 - nice metaphor, good writing.
PAOLAJANE16 4.2 - very nice. I like how you added in the seasons.
CARMELITALUVET 3.8 - good, but make it a little more fiery (I can't really find a good word for it, sorry!) next time.
MIKIMOONDANCER 4 - pretty and relaxing. I like the imagery.
I too am sorry if these seem harsh. I saw potential in each and every poem, and they were all at least decent. I just want to see some of you stretch your limits
If any of you have a question and/or want to chew me out for the score I gave you, you're more than welcome, just message me. Great job, everyone!
FIREBYRD 4.2 - I like the sassy ending
MISSY 4.3 - classic & cool
CINNY 4.5 - intricate last stanza!
ATROPABELLADONNA 4 - very sad, must be sadder for a parent
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.3 - sounds painful; good word choice
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 2.9 - you have the emotion down, just work on your creativity next time.
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.9 - interesting
PAOLAJANE16 3.8 - I like it, just add a little more flare next time. Reads kinda like song lyrics!
SUPHOMEBOI 3.4 - relatable, but very typical in terms of love poems.
KRITICOOL 4.2 - sad. I like the part about the blood.
REDCRYSTAL 4 - nice metaphor, good writing.
PAOLAJANE16 4.2 - very nice. I like how you added in the seasons.
CARMELITALUVET 3.8 - good, but make it a little more fiery (I can't really find a good word for it, sorry!) next time.
MIKIMOONDANCER 4 - pretty and relaxing. I like the imagery.
I too am sorry if these seem harsh. I saw potential in each and every poem, and they were all at least decent. I just want to see some of you stretch your limits
If any of you have a question and/or want to chew me out for the score I gave you, you're more than welcome, just message me. Great job, everyone!
Sublime said:FISHCAKE 3.4 - good, have a little more originality next time.
FIREBYRD 4.2 - I like the sassy ending
MISSY 4.3 - classic & cool
CINNY 4.5 - intricate last stanza!
ATROPABELLADONNA 4 - very sad, must be sadder for a parent
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.3 - sounds painful; good word choice
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 2.9 - you have the emotion down, just work on your creativity next time.
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.9 - interesting
PAOLAJANE16 3.8 - I like it, just add a little more flare next time. Reads kinda like song lyrics!
SUPHOMEBOI 3.4 - relatable, but very typical in terms of love poems.
KRITICOOL 4.2 - sad. I like the part about the blood.
REDCRYSTAL 4 - nice metaphor, good writing.
PAOLAJANE16 4.2 - very nice. I like how you added in the seasons.
CARMELITALUVET 3.8 - good, but make it a little more fiery (I can't really find a good word for it, sorry!) next time.
MIKIMOONDANCER 4 - pretty and relaxing. I like the imagery.
I too am sorry if these seem harsh. I saw potential in each and every poem, and they were all at least decent. I just want to see some of you stretch your limits
If any of you have a question and/or want to chew me out for the score I gave you, you're more than welcome, just message me. Great job, everyone!
VERY GOOD, JUDGEMENT. VERY GOOD. IT WAS NICE THE COMENT ABOUT FIREBYRD, I AGREE, SHE A VERY SASSY ENDING I LIKED A LOT TOO.
SENA
FIREBYRD 4.2 - I like the sassy ending
MISSY 4.3 - classic & cool
CINNY 4.5 - intricate last stanza!
ATROPABELLADONNA 4 - very sad, must be sadder for a parent
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.3 - sounds painful; good word choice
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 2.9 - you have the emotion down, just work on your creativity next time.
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.9 - interesting
PAOLAJANE16 3.8 - I like it, just add a little more flare next time. Reads kinda like song lyrics!
SUPHOMEBOI 3.4 - relatable, but very typical in terms of love poems.
KRITICOOL 4.2 - sad. I like the part about the blood.
REDCRYSTAL 4 - nice metaphor, good writing.
PAOLAJANE16 4.2 - very nice. I like how you added in the seasons.
CARMELITALUVET 3.8 - good, but make it a little more fiery (I can't really find a good word for it, sorry!) next time.
MIKIMOONDANCER 4 - pretty and relaxing. I like the imagery.
I too am sorry if these seem harsh. I saw potential in each and every poem, and they were all at least decent. I just want to see some of you stretch your limits
If any of you have a question and/or want to chew me out for the score I gave you, you're more than welcome, just message me. Great job, everyone!
VERY GOOD, JUDGEMENT. VERY GOOD. IT WAS NICE THE COMENT ABOUT FIREBYRD, I AGREE, SHE A VERY SASSY ENDING I LIKED A LOT TOO.
SENA
FISHCAKE 3.2
FIREBYRD 3.3
MISSY 3.5
CINNY 3.5
ATROPABELLADONNA 3.5
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.5
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3.3
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.0
PAOLAJANE16 3.0
SUPHOMEBOI 4.o
KRITICOOL 4.8
REDCRYSTAL3.5
PAOLAJANE16 4.5
CARMELITALUVET 3.8
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.0
No critique tonight~!!! Didn't realize
I was chosen to judge until a little
while ago while on my way to bed...
I enjoyed reading them all and
good luck~!!!
FIREBYRD 3.3
MISSY 3.5
CINNY 3.5
ATROPABELLADONNA 3.5
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.5
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3.3
PRETTY_NORMAL 3.0
PAOLAJANE16 3.0
SUPHOMEBOI 4.o
KRITICOOL 4.8
REDCRYSTAL3.5
PAOLAJANE16 4.5
CARMELITALUVET 3.8
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.0
No critique tonight~!!! Didn't realize
I was chosen to judge until a little
while ago while on my way to bed...
I enjoyed reading them all and
good luck~!!!
FISHCAKE 3.2
FIREBYRD 3.5
MISSY 4.5
CINNY 4
ATROPABELLADONNA 3.8
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.3
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3.5
PRETTY_NORMAL 3
PAOLAJANE16 3
SUPHOMEBOI 4.2
KRITICOOL 4
REDCRYSTAL 3.5
PAOLAJANE16 3.2
CARMELITALUVET 3.3
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.5
FIREBYRD 3.5
MISSY 4.5
CINNY 4
ATROPABELLADONNA 3.8
BLEEDINGLNFERNO219 4.3
KAHAKUTLIGPARKER 3.5
PRETTY_NORMAL 3
PAOLAJANE16 3
SUPHOMEBOI 4.2
KRITICOOL 4
REDCRYSTAL 3.5
PAOLAJANE16 3.2
CARMELITALUVET 3.3
MIKIMOONDANCER 4.5
