Poetry competition CLOSED 26th May 2012 7:57pm
WINNER
Jestalessa
Jestalessa
HOW MUCH YOU THINK YOU KNOW A MAN.
Jestalessa said:It would be easy to let these words slip softly into the blood-swollen flesh folds of a man's most primary
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
] - Unknown
Ill give you a 3 to this poem. well done.
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
] - Unknown
Ill give you a 3 to this poem. well done.
PhilipWardlow said:
Know your Role
CriticalMass
(drogedarain
I give this one a 3.0 a little better than the last...but I dont want to be put on a pedestal like you seem to say..and I like rubbing my wifes feet after a long day..:) ....still missing what I need to fall in love with a woman,
i think about that too, phill, that last poem, of criticalmass, is good, but i dont really want to be so much like a king, but with all respect she really, probably know how to treat a man.
Know your Role
CriticalMass
(drogedarain
I give this one a 3.0 a little better than the last...but I dont want to be put on a pedestal like you seem to say..and I like rubbing my wifes feet after a long day..:) ....still missing what I need to fall in love with a woman,
i think about that too, phill, that last poem, of criticalmass, is good, but i dont really want to be so much like a king, but with all respect she really, probably know how to treat a man.
Don't let "this place" stop you from showing whachya got (and from me getting to read it). :)
Jestalessa said:It would be easy to let these words slip softly into the blood-swollen flesh folds of a man's most primary
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
- Unknown
A solid 4.5! Congrats.
drogedarain said:~Nothing Taboo~
A most simple creature is man,,,
Keep his mind turning in his fantasy land,,,
Nothing is taboo for me you see,,,
Cleanliness and proper hygiene is where I begin,,,
Late night jaunts through his window I’ll creep,
climbing the ladder he’s anxiously put in place,,,
Playing Juliet to his Romeo will indeed arouse
him every time,,,
Blowjobs and tossed salad are what’s on the menu,,,
with cherry Kool-Aid and beer to wash it all down,,,
Riding him rough and fast, or tender and slow always
makes for a facial expressions of ecstasy and moans that
make him never want to let go,,,
An earthquake of his senses is what I seek and he desires,,,
Mmmm, what a delight for his pleasure is indeed mine,,,
Open ears and a closed mouth when he speaks,,,
Mind you intellect is a must, being an air head won’t
get you past the first date,,,
Value all that he is, I adore his flaws and little quirks,
they’re a part of what makes him who he is,,,
Bubble baths to follow, bathing him from head to toe,,,
There’s simply nothing I wouldn’t do for the man I love,,,
Serve him dinner and under the table I go to give him
head as he enjoys the meal I've prepared, if he gets
choked I’m prepared to handle that to,,,
He deserves all I give and comes back wanting more,,,
Simply no time to contemplate leaving me for a
one night stand whore~!!!
Too pandering for my tastes. 2.5.
Gg78 said:Keep him on lock
What he likes I know
It's easy
Leave him alone when he doesn't want to talk
Try and enjoy the screen he loves to watch
Play fight naked with high heels on
Let him buy that damn truck
Or the car he wants to rock
Go fishing with him, or tan nude over by the rocks
Cook him what he likes
Keep a clean house, a man likes it nice
Stay well shaved, always dress to impress
Don't smother him with your bull shit of a day
Don't nag him when he wants to go out with his friends and play
Last but not least always always suck his cock!
That's how you keep a man on lock"
Sad you deleted this. I would say 3.5 and well done. A lot of it is spot on but I know you too well for this to be truth.
Grace said:To woo a man
I was in love
and so I thought
I would woo him
and make him love me
So I cooked his favourite meal
very good pasta with beef balls
but he declined to come
and dinner was spoiled
I was not one to give it up
and say I have had enough
I invited him once again
for a night in my apartment
I serve him beer
all he could drink
and all he did was fart
all night
and stunk up the kitchen
On my third date I made him cake
and serve it with tea
on a dainty tray
he turned his nose away
and watched football on TV
Desperate I tried
once again to please
and invited him for the fourth time
all hot and bothered
not having had good sex
for as long as can be
I put on a sexy nightie
and rode him till the wee hours
next day he asked to marry me
and so now I ride for free....!!
Sorry on this one but only a 2. You must have a lot of experience dating assholes.
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
- Unknown
A solid 4.5! Congrats.
drogedarain said:~Nothing Taboo~
A most simple creature is man,,,
Keep his mind turning in his fantasy land,,,
Nothing is taboo for me you see,,,
Cleanliness and proper hygiene is where I begin,,,
Late night jaunts through his window I’ll creep,
climbing the ladder he’s anxiously put in place,,,
Playing Juliet to his Romeo will indeed arouse
him every time,,,
Blowjobs and tossed salad are what’s on the menu,,,
with cherry Kool-Aid and beer to wash it all down,,,
Riding him rough and fast, or tender and slow always
makes for a facial expressions of ecstasy and moans that
make him never want to let go,,,
An earthquake of his senses is what I seek and he desires,,,
Mmmm, what a delight for his pleasure is indeed mine,,,
Open ears and a closed mouth when he speaks,,,
Mind you intellect is a must, being an air head won’t
get you past the first date,,,
Value all that he is, I adore his flaws and little quirks,
they’re a part of what makes him who he is,,,
Bubble baths to follow, bathing him from head to toe,,,
There’s simply nothing I wouldn’t do for the man I love,,,
Serve him dinner and under the table I go to give him
head as he enjoys the meal I've prepared, if he gets
choked I’m prepared to handle that to,,,
He deserves all I give and comes back wanting more,,,
Simply no time to contemplate leaving me for a
one night stand whore~!!!
Too pandering for my tastes. 2.5.
Gg78 said:Keep him on lock
What he likes I know
It's easy
Leave him alone when he doesn't want to talk
Try and enjoy the screen he loves to watch
Play fight naked with high heels on
Let him buy that damn truck
Or the car he wants to rock
Go fishing with him, or tan nude over by the rocks
Cook him what he likes
Keep a clean house, a man likes it nice
Stay well shaved, always dress to impress
Don't smother him with your bull shit of a day
Don't nag him when he wants to go out with his friends and play
Last but not least always always suck his cock!
That's how you keep a man on lock"
Sad you deleted this. I would say 3.5 and well done. A lot of it is spot on but I know you too well for this to be truth.
Grace said:To woo a man
I was in love
and so I thought
I would woo him
and make him love me
So I cooked his favourite meal
very good pasta with beef balls
but he declined to come
and dinner was spoiled
I was not one to give it up
and say I have had enough
I invited him once again
for a night in my apartment
I serve him beer
all he could drink
and all he did was fart
all night
and stunk up the kitchen
On my third date I made him cake
and serve it with tea
on a dainty tray
he turned his nose away
and watched football on TV
Desperate I tried
once again to please
and invited him for the fourth time
all hot and bothered
not having had good sex
for as long as can be
I put on a sexy nightie
and rode him till the wee hours
next day he asked to marry me
and so now I ride for free....!!
Sorry on this one but only a 2. You must have a lot of experience dating assholes.
Jestalessa said:i protest to all this talk of withdrawing and leaving. i can't have summed up the entire male populace. stay in the water, fishy! xx
Haha really I can not top that. You know me. I'll continue to throw in my little humors jokes or maybe dry to some. But you got this one all the way I love the poem it's great I wouldn't even want to try. It says it all. Missy you know I like to fishy. I just know my place and if you don't win I'll be upset lol. Xoxox
Haha really I can not top that. You know me. I'll continue to throw in my little humors jokes or maybe dry to some. But you got this one all the way I love the poem it's great I wouldn't even want to try. It says it all. Missy you know I like to fishy. I just know my place and if you don't win I'll be upset lol. Xoxox
Ah, Gigi, your inside information announcement makes it all so hopeless. How can this be a competition with a winner already decided and there are still three days to submit an entry? Is it a fixed competition? If so, what's the point in having it?
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
So perhaps could you. Not challenging or insulting you, Jesta, you know I love you!
Take her insane amount of talent as an automatic defeat, or take it as a challenge to rise above yourself.
Seriously though, is this fixed?
Jesta may be able to wrap her thoughts in words better than I, but I just may know men a little better than her.
So perhaps could you. Not challenging or insulting you, Jesta, you know I love you! Take her insane amount of talent as an automatic defeat, or take it as a challenge to rise above yourself.
Seriously though, is this fixed?
