Poetry competition CLOSED 26th May 2012 7:57pm
WINNER
Jestalessa
Jestalessa
HOW MUCH YOU THINK YOU KNOW A MAN.
drogedarain said:~Know Your Role~
A man is like fine art,,,
He has many desires, wishes and needs
some are hidden and some prominently displayed,,,
He's looking for his best friend,,,
The stroking of his ego no matter what it requires,
should be a mastered thought in your mind so much so
that it’s second nature to you,,,
You should be content seeing the pleasure it brings
to his face,,,
He aims to care for you in all areas of life, so In
return you must be able to do the same without
drama or strife,,,
He enjoys seeing you cook for him and serve him as well,,,
he enjoys little surprises even the smallest of gestures
will prevail,,,
Constant stimulation you should give unless you
want him bored and looking elsewhere,,,
Your man is your man and you always want him
wanting more of you,,,
The roles in life have gotten screwed up,
A woman should know her place and do it without a fuss,,,
Rub his feet after a long day, a simple caress
can make all his stress simply melt away,,,
Giving him his hearts desire should be your master plan,
he is after all supposedly your man,,,
The man you did all the right things to, to make
him love you,,,
Do these things and he will never put another above you,,,
THANK AGAIN I GIVE A 3.5 IN THIS ONE.
A man is like fine art,,,
He has many desires, wishes and needs
some are hidden and some prominently displayed,,,
He's looking for his best friend,,,
The stroking of his ego no matter what it requires,
should be a mastered thought in your mind so much so
that it’s second nature to you,,,
You should be content seeing the pleasure it brings
to his face,,,
He aims to care for you in all areas of life, so In
return you must be able to do the same without
drama or strife,,,
He enjoys seeing you cook for him and serve him as well,,,
he enjoys little surprises even the smallest of gestures
will prevail,,,
Constant stimulation you should give unless you
want him bored and looking elsewhere,,,
Your man is your man and you always want him
wanting more of you,,,
The roles in life have gotten screwed up,
A woman should know her place and do it without a fuss,,,
Rub his feet after a long day, a simple caress
can make all his stress simply melt away,,,
Giving him his hearts desire should be your master plan,
he is after all supposedly your man,,,
The man you did all the right things to, to make
him love you,,,
Do these things and he will never put another above you,,,
THANK AGAIN I GIVE A 3.5 IN THIS ONE.
It would be easy to let these words slip softly into the blood-swollen flesh folds of a man's most primary
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
- Unknown
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
- Unknown
Anonymous
that. is. stunning.
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Know your Role
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(drogedarain
I give this one a 3.0 a little better than the last...but I dont want to be put on a pedestal like you seem to say..and I like rubbing my wifes feet after a long day..:) ....still missing what I need to fall in love with a woman
Jestalessa
It would be easy to let these words slip softly into the blood-swollen flesh folds of a man's most primary
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Definitely a 5+++points...Now that's what I have been talking about
....If I could give you more points I would..You hit the Nail on the head baby..no pun intended
It would be easy to let these words slip softly into the blood-swollen flesh folds of a man's most primary
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Definitely a 5+++points...Now that's what I have been talking about
....If I could give you more points I would..You hit the Nail on the head baby..no pun intended Jestalessa said:It would be easy to let these words slip softly into the blood-swollen flesh folds of a man's most primary
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
- Unknown
I take my comment back I'm not even going to repost . You rocked it momma go fishy xoxo
primitive psychology. To hungrily spit-stroke the length of his ego with naughtily submissive little upward glances
through doe-length eyelashes, weighted with pop-culture-magazine measures of mascara.
Sure, theoretically I'd have his cock covered: locked down by giving the most comparable, ample leash length;
I could be a fertile overflow -- a treasure of a mistress.
But a formula is useless when speaking natural disasters. You only reach him deep by embodying your force.
Games are for the playful nature, keeping up a romance, hooking harder, making an adventure; but love -
he falls in love
when your polar insides
wrap around all his 9 lives
wherever you are on the timeline
not overthought
nothing under-felt
when he sees you as an equal
[pedestal infatuation is fragile as a flower stem]
when nails traveling bodies
isn't only
about grand finales
and fidelity isn't for property
there's mutual respect
when laughing is important
when fighting means
you each have minds
when a kiss can have
a thousand moods
when you
are
and he
is
and you
fit.
Yeah, you can make a man fall in love. But when faced, what fool would conquer a papier mache mound
when the volcano offers her glory?
P.S. "A watched kettle never boils"
- Unknown
I take my comment back I'm not even going to repost . You rocked it momma go fishy xoxo
