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It was written in Blood

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

Poetry Contest

Write about pain(the deepest, darkest, worst kind of pain you can imagine)
Same rules as Fight Club
..oops

Karrabear
Question
Fire of Insight
United States 7awards
Joined 29th Aug 2009
Forum Posts: 416

The worst type of pain,
The most saddisttic-
Masochistic...
Self deppresion and hate.
It does not bleed like mortal wounds,
But forever draws a knife,
Down, down, into the heart.
But it wont leave,
For all the pain and greif,
The body and the mind toil through,
When the blade begins to dull-
Its sharpened and renewed.
For self mutalistic pain.
Masochistic pleasure,
That the human being lives,
Forever bleeding alone.
Hidden so deep is the knife.

firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
United States 17awards
Joined 14th Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 808

interjection to Fight Cub.. that was funny bro!

anywhom...

It was written in blood..
Dear your fate with me..
We took a broken mirror
And made it so we bleed

We combined our genes together
And bonded like sisters
I did it so I would never have
To miss her

The pain I used to inflict upon her
Without me even knowing it..
God.. I hadn't a clue..
Until I seen the slits..

Of course she forgave me..
And she will every time
But I don't deserve her as my sister..
I don't deserve her as mine

But together
We'll live soon
And create a better home
For our beautiful moon..

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

Great reads so far

TheFallenAngelist
Twisted Dreamer
Bosnia and Herzegovina
Joined 15th June 2011
Forum Posts: 3

Ashes to ashes,
dust to dust
My body lifeless,
no movement ,
just lying in a coffin
which is slowly
being burried in wet dirt,
wet from childrens blood.
 
The day I met you,
I thought there
was something
wrong with the way
your demonic eyes
stared at me.
Your look was empty,
but yet filled with  
with some sort of scheme for me.
 
You took advantage of
my sorrow and grief.
You locked me up in a  
bassement for your personal
pleasure and greed.
 
I prayed to God,
to let me die,
and after twelve
months of torture,
 
My week and fragile heart
stopped beating and
a blood red tear
went down my face and
that is the moment when
my soul left my body covered in blood.
 
No more pain,
no more grief,
no more sorrow
for my tortured soul.
My prayers were
finally heared.
 
Now, my body is lying
in a black coffin,
with blood red rose
in my hands.
 
Now, my soul turned into an angel,
Angel of Grief...
 
Ashes to ashes,
dust to dust,
no more life,
now the DEAD walk on the Earth and the living are burried under ground.  
Screaming to be let out

emusaremylife
Strange Creature
Joined 13th May 2012
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ILYDCP
Tyler Smith
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 13th May 2012
Forum Posts: 39

I want to feel you. To feel your pain. I can get off on it. It makes me laugh. To hear you scream. To watch you die. But I can't it would hurt her. She favors your company over mine. I love her. You don't even see the way she feels about you. I can count a hundred times a day she says your name. She says it in her sleep. Every poem is about you. Every lie is to protect you. She blushes a deep red when I ask her about you. She cries at the thought of your pain. I would never kill you. Unless she wanted me to. I just want her to be happy. And if she is happy with you. I would be happy too. But you choose to ignore her. So its my shoulder she cries on. And now I want to cry.

Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 25th Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 17080

Pain

A mother’s sigh as she exhale
Pain so exquisite
It tears her womb
To shredded pieces in her mind
The baby screams
As mommy smiles

A scream of pain
In the dark of night
A spirit goes forth
Into the endless dark
The cancer patient
Dies

A wailing weeping
Lonely woman
Standing at the moonlit shore
Looking towards the blue yonder
Where her husband sailed the day before
She mourns.

BleedingInferno219
Kristyn Ashley.
Fire of Insight
United States 12awards
Joined 3rd Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 717

I took my blade,
and I pressed it in.
I stained your name,
onto my skin.

But you won't know,
your eyes are blind.
You just see her,
I'm left behind.

I'll keep myself,
behind lock and key.
That way, the world
won't have to deal with me.

'Cause I'm worthless,
'cause I'm trash.
I don't just wanna be
a scrap of your past.

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

Wow...amazing.....gonna be hard to judge already

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
United States 14awards
Joined 6th Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 2026

Wow...amazing.....gonna be hard to judge already

chezz
Lost Thinker
South Africa 2awards
Joined 7th Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 36


My belly is filled with crimson shame
Bloodlines entangled ,
Oh god! he gave me my name
I am child of his and you are the same

It started when mother left
Him making me sleep on his chest
The agony, the demon
Who spilled my innocence
And filled me with semen
Mere child I did not stand a chance

My fame grew light
As my tummy filled out
I could not hide it from sight,

As I went to school and about

My teacher drew me aside one day
In a hushed whisper I had to convey
It was written in blood or so u could say
I was as wife to my father and he has made this way

Cannaballester
Thought Provoker
United States 1awards
Joined 3rd Jan 2012
Forum Posts: 112

It Was Written In Blood,,,
It Was Carved In Stone,,,
It Was Cast In Bronze,,,
It Was Etched On Bones,,,
It Was Painted Upon Cave Walls,,,

It Was Written In Blood,,,
It Was Carved In Stone,,,
And On A Plateau Down In Peru,,,
It's On A Neon Sign,,,
On The Darkside Of The Moon,,,
For All Who Are Coming To Earth To See,,,
And On The Rings Of Saturn,,, Too,,,

It Was Written In Blood,,,
It Was Carved In Stone,,,
Someone Carved It Outside On A Tree,,,
And Since The Beginning Of Time,,,
They Put It Out There,,,For All To See,,,
It's Nothing Really Important,,,
It's Just Graffiti,,,,

thedragonpoet
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 21st May 2012
Forum Posts: 1

blood dripping down my face
i stare eyes open wide in fear
this man i do not know
pinned again my hear begins to race
love filled eyes now only anger shows

pain fills me my heart shatters
tears flow from my eyes
I know however that no one
can hear my cries

screaming again as the blood flows
pain fills me but all is silent now
eyes are closed i still hear the whispered lies
this man i do not know
daddy where did you go

now the tears are dried
the blood is cleaned
but the wound left will never heal
i stand here empty this day still
all i want to know
daddy where did you go

BlackVelvetRose
Ragdoll Raven
Thought Provoker
United States 6awards
Joined 26th Apr 2012
Forum Posts: 86

A Love Removed


A part of me given
To you in years past
Buried now
In this ashen tomb....

Now blood rains down
On this sand blown landscape
A desolate land
Of love long dead....

I saw your flaws
And embraced them
A light hint of beauty
In your gray stone heart....

A crack of sorts
In the hardened stone
A glimpse of red
Rare flowers in bloom....

A grave decorates
Your hardened heart
In perpetual dismay
Of echoing solitude....

Of love long removed....

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