Poetry competition CLOSED 24th May 2012 4:16am
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lepperochan (CraicDealer)
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Do you have the skill???

Magdalena
Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
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I had to check out Palindrome poetry to understand it, so now I know there are three ways to write it.

I have a long poem that can be read forward and backward and still make sense, so I shall put some of it here.  I hope it is right lol.



Hope has lost its way
Sinking through this dark abyss
Trying to hold on
In desperation of all I miss

Pain is with me now
Burning through my soul
Lost in so much time
Unknowing digs its hole

Swept into spiraling winds
In limbo left alone
Reaching out to no avail
In this darkness that I roam




In this darkness that I roam
Reaching out to no avail
In limbo left alone
Swept into spiralling winds

Unknowing digs its hole
Lost in so much time
Burning through my soul
Pain is with me now

In desperation of all I miss
Trying to hold on
Sinking through this dark abyss
Hope has lost its way




raorrick
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
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These are all fantastic! I want to see more! Just 4 more days!

djgallese
DebGallese
Strange Creature
United States
Joined 18th May 2012
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Cast

Cast
are fears
Moon dark
Monsoon is dry
Mast denied, cried I
Divided are seas
shore battles identity
swells of rejection, blowing
waves reflections are glowing
Reflections
Glowing are reflections, waves
blowing, rejection of swells
Identity battles shore
Seas are divided
I cried, denied mast
Dry is monsoon
Dark moon
Fears are
Cast

siphondarkness
Levi
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 6th Apr 2011
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The Phoenix

Fire,
birth to,
golden life that,
dies fast, are flames,
the ashes remain
---time--------
Remain ashes, the
flames are fast, dies
that life, golden,
to birth,
fire

raorrick
Rachel O.
Dangerous Mind
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Eamon[n] and LeesAngel, I love how you both changed the format of your mirrored words. It takes mad skill to do that.

Miss Indie...I love what you had to say, and the length, wow...also takes mad skill.

Good job you three!!!

Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
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Congrats to Eamon and Lees Angel. Thanks Rachel. Great comp :)

lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Yemen 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
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Wow well this is a great honor, the entries here were fantastic.

thank's a lot Rachel great idea for a comp btw.

Indie, Leesangel nice one well done.



PS, Rachel I'll send that money over post haste. It's not easy fixing a comp I know but sure we are the elite and can pretty much do what we like right?


the above was sarcasm  :D

raorrick
Rachel O.
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UGH!

I told you not to use sarcasm as our cover...they are smarter than that!

Small bills only please.

LeesAngel
Fire of Insight
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Congratulations eamon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Gg78
Tyrant of Words
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Congrats you three this was a fun write

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