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kriticool
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Freedom calls!

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IDryad
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Poetry Contest

Interpret the above words according to your understanding.
Interpret the above words according to your understanding. Flesh it out in a story form and tell it in a poem.

Rule 1: Write a poem according to above requirement in not more than 200 words.
Rule 2: Two entries per participant.
Rule 3: Apply your talent in story telling in your poem and submit it.

Inviting all DUP friends and family to participate in the competition.

kriticool
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.:in fright - flight out:.

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this drop; up for life
a toast to life...eternal; so essential
the first will go first...then the next
let’s flex; this is the pre flight text
filtered and...sifted
time...at sometime; destined
to go and get gone...lifted
so do what you’re gifted; don’t
go against it
no fall; so here’s the call
stand down your doubt
just do whatever or...do without
stare down your fear
can it be any more clear?
the runways are visible;
with some ways permissible
remember atonement is principle
better to take on the take off
permitting the negative to drop off
the get up and gone is for sure
fly into The Light.
does one need more?









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photo: reza vaezpour



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IDryad
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Thank you so much, kriticool, for participating in this competition.

poet Anonymous


In death, yes.

It must be let out
but I have no Eject
It should be made right
You don't hear me cry
For this still..

Inside, in Bondage
denied-my Freedom
Still hides, In your lies
My eyes won't dry
I must heal,
my existence-Stolen
In that moment..

How did it feel..
Seeing me unravel
Begging answers that
You just don't have...

I barely glanced and yet,
It sits searing, begging me to question
My own needs..
You remember me saying..
There was freedom in death
I was hiding from you
and I am hiding still yet.

Won't come out-
I circle my own words ,
Like a magical dance-
But no romance exists in how
you wrecked me inside.

I feel stuck, entombed in
all that you did-
Unable now to unseal the lid
The dark you cast on a
beautiful heart-

Maybe one day-
release will exist-
someone will see it and
help me unseal it.
reveal it, but
still, It hurts me.

When I found you out-
creating more doubt
than leaving me without-
I wonder-When they carried me out-
Where you moved?

Seeing my groove, fading-
all the while saying-
I could overcome-
And have me burned-
eternally ruined
with visions of your crimes-
Your psychosis-
Yet i'm doing time.




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IDryad
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Thank you Miki for your participation.


poet Anonymous

than you , i did enjoy it- I am often writing from many different places and times -Thsi topic helped me, I do thank you. Peace x

poet Anonymous


FREEDOM CALLS

I declare that freedom will reign

In my country once again

When we have overthrown the politicians

The religious zealots, the fiery bigots

Slavery shall cease, it is still here

In the twenty-first century

Nothing has changed

We shall solve our conflicts without murder

We shall realize that we are one

Our DNA is so close together

Only a chimpanzee is far away

Skin colour, ethnic origin has no say

In predicting character or intelligence

Blame and finger pointing have got to go away

In a world where we are all brothers and sisters

So many martyrs have died for the words above

We now know that freedom is love

poet Anonymous

A message
Alas, yes we both have known
Since dawns times-
Time has Dawned
Planets Aligned
Awakened The stars
As Moon and Sun
Found who they are.
Now see -you hear
The voices in
Your air, there
As we assemble
A pre-amble
And on viking ed
Wings-and magik
The hunt it go.
That place in the night
For us to hang
You with I, again
Reunited-in paths
I have sought you
Yet you found me-
As it should be!
We dance in rhyme and you shook-
Overtook me!
I went away to seek in my sitars
The answers of Lost, and see
Were you found?
Oh! The glee-
As she returned with this news for me-
That alas their Goddess is freed-
And may reign indeed-
Now planets hesitate
On The morrow-
On wings-
That you can follow-
Sit and see-
I yet know not
As I wait
A land, long over thought.
Now (((feel)) me-In all these
The poetic words
My odes of praise-
Let it be
And I , with thee
Am free.

Written by mikimoondancer    

diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
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mikimoondancer said:A message
Alas, yes we both have known
Since dawns times-
Time has Dawned
Planets Aligned
Awakened The stars
As Moon and Sun
Found who they are.
Now see -you hear
The voices in
Your air, there
As we assemble
A pre-amble
And on viking ed
Wings-and magik
The hunt it go.
That place in the night
For us to hang
You with I, again
Reunited-in paths
I have sought you
Yet you found me-
As it should be!
We dance in rhyme and you shook-
Overtook me!
I went away to seek in my sitars
The answers of Lost, and see
Were you found?
Oh! The glee-
As she returned with this news for me-
That alas their Goddess is freed-
And may reign indeed-
Now planets hesitate
On The morrow-
On wings-
That you can follow-
Sit and see-
I yet know not
As I wait
A land, long over thought.
Now (((feel)) me-In all these
The poetic words
My odes of praise-
Let it be
And I , with thee
Am free.

Written by mikimoondancer    



awww miki that's great

flowergirl
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Price Of Freedom

when I see old glory fly
a tear never fails to appear
the red, white and blue
forever may it stand thru the night
it is a reminder to some of us
the price of freedom that has been paid
we all know what that price is
that's right it is a life
a person like you and me
there is a saying that is true
"Some gave some, some gave all".
when freedom calls, they all answer
GOD BLESS THE MILITARY


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IDryad
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Wow, flowergirl, thank you for participating in this competition.

flowergirl
Tyrant of Words
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I am exmilitary so this means a lot to me :)

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IDryad
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They fly
along thoroughfares
of the sky...!!
Freedom calls!


Dear friends and family in DUP, you are invited to participate in this competition!!

skinnyjean
Llamaliscious
Thought Provoker
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Walk of shame vs. redemption

Tears of relief to see the bars slide out
And wife fall to his feet
Released after several long years
Name cleared
Time stolen
Yet a life still left to live
A family still loving
Two fists full of justice
Finally freedom calls for him to take his walk
Back to where he reigns

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IDryad
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Llamaliscious, thanks ever so for participating in this competition.

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