10 Second Moment
Green_Arrow
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Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th Feb 2020Forum Posts: 78
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Anonymous
Hello Green_Arrow. Unfortunately the criteria states no pump n’ dump erotica. Please can you amend your entry. Thank you.
Green_Arrow
Forum Posts: 78
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th Feb 2020Forum Posts: 78
Sorry. I didn't notice. You're welcome to delete it if you want.
Green_Arrow
Forum Posts: 78
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th Feb 2020Forum Posts: 78
Got rid of the second entry... but I'm still glad that accepted the first.
gardenlover
Forum Posts: 625
Fire of Insight
23
Joined 19th Aug 2012 Forum Posts: 625
The first two verses are written as background to the 10 second action of the final verse. I have done some editing which I hope will make this clearer
MadameLavender
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Guardian of Shadows
90
Joined 17th Feb 2013Forum Posts: 5726
Riding Trains in NYC
Sidewalks and subways, stank
with piss and sweat
but your smile is burned
in my soul, forever.
I was alive, for once
that day
on the crowded train
in your arms, between
jostling humanity.
And the realization came, that
this is what it feels like
to be loved.
I let down my walls, invited
you in, blissfully clueless
that our time together
would be shortened
like a sucker punch
when your heart would give out
a year later.
We lived a lifetime, in
those seconds.
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Anonymous
Thank you for your entry, Madame. I’m so glad you’re here. Really. 👍🏻
Ljdynamic
Forum Posts: 374
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 18th Aug 2017Forum Posts: 374
I just removed an entry. I changed my mind for now. Just 1 entry.
Ljdynamic
Forum Posts: 374
Dangerous Mind
18
Joined 18th Aug 2017Forum Posts: 374
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Bluevelvete
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Tyrant of Words
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Joined 21st July 2020Forum Posts: 2349
removed entry
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Magdalena
Spartalena
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Spartalena
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 21st Apr 2012Forum Posts: 3000
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ClearmindedVillain
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Thought Provoker
1
Joined 29th Aug 2011Forum Posts: 69
First Glance Off The Plane In Florida
Couldn’t hardly sleep.
Anticipating the warm orange skies Florida has.
Left for you in the dark of night.
Only to appear in front of you just steps off the plane.
Palm trees blind my views.
No such regrets are going to exist.
Luggage burns and make our arms tired.
This is the type of pain I live and work for.
Standing eternity has passed me.
Never will I forget such a time.
Music soaks in the moments in this new place.
I’ll be there again.
Anticipating the warm orange skies Florida has.
Left for you in the dark of night.
Only to appear in front of you just steps off the plane.
Palm trees blind my views.
No such regrets are going to exist.
Luggage burns and make our arms tired.
This is the type of pain I live and work for.
Standing eternity has passed me.
Never will I forget such a time.
Music soaks in the moments in this new place.
I’ll be there again.
Written by ClearmindedVillain
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Green_Arrow
Forum Posts: 78
Dangerous Mind
2
Joined 25th Feb 2020Forum Posts: 78
With A Hungry Gaze Within Her Eyes
It happens to be on
this one late Sunday
morning in July that
Patrick got on an
elevator and pressed
the down button.
But that was before
a woman named
Zelma got into the
elevator just before
the doors closed.
And while she was
catching her breath,
Zelma looked at
Patrick with a hungry
gaze within her eyes.
That was before she
took off her top and
flashed her uncovered
chest only to have her
ask, "Is this your floor?"
That made Patrick snap
out of it and say to a
fully clothed Zelma, "Yes,
it is. Thanks.", before he
quickly got himself out
of the elevator and left
her wanting to let out a
small giggle as a result
of his embarrassment.
this one late Sunday
morning in July that
Patrick got on an
elevator and pressed
the down button.
But that was before
a woman named
Zelma got into the
elevator just before
the doors closed.
And while she was
catching her breath,
Zelma looked at
Patrick with a hungry
gaze within her eyes.
That was before she
took off her top and
flashed her uncovered
chest only to have her
ask, "Is this your floor?"
That made Patrick snap
out of it and say to a
fully clothed Zelma, "Yes,
it is. Thanks.", before he
quickly got himself out
of the elevator and left
her wanting to let out a
small giggle as a result
of his embarrassment.
Written by Green_Arrow
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