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With A Hungry Gaze Within Her Eyes
It happens to be on
this one late Sunday
morning in July that
Patrick got on an
elevator and pressed
the down button.
But that was before
a woman named
Zelma got into the
elevator just before
the doors closed.
And while she was
catching her breath,
Zelma looked at
Patrick with a hungry
gaze within her eyes.
That was before she
took off her top and
flashed her uncovered
chest only to have her
ask, "Is this your floor?"
That made Patrick snap
out of it and say to a
fully clothed Zelma, "Yes,
it is. Thanks.", before he
quickly got himself out
of the elevator and left
her wanting to let out a
small giggle as a result
of his embarrassment.
this one late Sunday
morning in July that
Patrick got on an
elevator and pressed
the down button.
But that was before
a woman named
Zelma got into the
elevator just before
the doors closed.
And while she was
catching her breath,
Zelma looked at
Patrick with a hungry
gaze within her eyes.
That was before she
took off her top and
flashed her uncovered
chest only to have her
ask, "Is this your floor?"
That made Patrick snap
out of it and say to a
fully clothed Zelma, "Yes,
it is. Thanks.", before he
quickly got himself out
of the elevator and left
her wanting to let out a
small giggle as a result
of his embarrassment.
Published 31st Jan 2021
Author's Note
This free verse poem is about what it is that a man thought he has seen while in an elevator with a woman.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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