Poetry competition CLOSED 10th December 2019 1:24am
WINNER
Bluelulu
Bluelulu
RUNNERS-UP:
wallyroo92
and Jade-Pandora
Four-Letter Word Poem
Anonymous
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Anonymous
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Four Letter Words
This poem will open your mind
Look into your soul, open void will thou find?
What thou seek, soon will show
Love, hate?
Only thou will know
This land will soon rust
Time will turn your body into dust
Look into your soul, open void will thou find?
What thou seek, soon will show
Love, hate?
Only thou will know
This land will soon rust
Time will turn your body into dust
Written by Adzy
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Anonymous
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Four Letter Words
This poem will open your mind
Look into your soul, open void will thou find?
What thou seek, soon will show
Love, hate?
Only thou will know
This land will soon rust
Time will turn your body into dust
Look into your soul, open void will thou find?
What thou seek, soon will show
Love, hate?
Only thou will know
This land will soon rust
Time will turn your body into dust
Written by Adzy
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Adzy said:
Hey, Adzy
Thanks for your entry. The principal elements qualify you for this competition. I hope you will do well.
Sincerely
Hey, Adzy
Thanks for your entry. The principal elements qualify you for this competition. I hope you will do well.
Sincerely
When Birds Fall From Blue Skies
Make love your home;
base life with acts
that will keep whom
we’ll meet from harm,
that dark runs amok;
just wait, don’t make
this rule your fate.
That life will live
four ways, five days
each spell will wage;
with hawk reap
came wolf howl,
then wind blew.
Cold rain, then snow
goes blue when bird,
this pawn, thus flew,
knew such pain from
ages long gone.
Turn page, with sage
word that sets fire,
alas, ally amid, runs
like ants gone home.
This can’t help; that said,
fury fills mind, hard fist.
Beat your self upon
cold dead prey.
What else will they hunt?
What does that
earn this your life?
Turn away,
walk away calm,
look anon:
what isn’t ours
this time when they fall.
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
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WTF (Written to Fours)
This show will sure take much keen wits,
Thus slow pace will make such mean hits,
Find fine kind inks that this mind maps,
Like long line idle talk poem raps,
Seek hope that will come thru with four,
Hard bold text must flow calm then soar.
Hear them slur then play with good word,
Can’t cuss? Well then just flip this bird,
This form will feel like real hawk ward,
Let’s face this mess then pull such cord,
Here this poem will come unto good ends,
Like some chop test puts down your pens.
Thus slow pace will make such mean hits,
Find fine kind inks that this mind maps,
Like long line idle talk poem raps,
Seek hope that will come thru with four,
Hard bold text must flow calm then soar.
Hear them slur then play with good word,
Can’t cuss? Well then just flip this bird,
This form will feel like real hawk ward,
Let’s face this mess then pull such cord,
Here this poem will come unto good ends,
Like some chop test puts down your pens.
Written by wallyroo92
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Wow, wallyroo92
I'd swear you were swearing in a titular manner but that hasty confusion has a tasty conclusion!
Your crafty manipulation of four-letter words definitely qualifies for this competition.
Thanks for participating.
Sincerely
I'd swear you were swearing in a titular manner but that hasty confusion has a tasty conclusion!
Your crafty manipulation of four-letter words definitely qualifies for this competition.
Thanks for participating.
Sincerely
Anonymous said:<< post removed >>
Let me rectify an oversight in my initial response to your submission, AMElia:
"Thanks for your entry, AEMelia.
Including the title would qualify it by minimum word count as much as upgrading any word that falls short of its letter count would more fully align it with the stated criteria.
Best regards.
Yours sincerely
Let me rectify an oversight in my initial response to your submission, AMElia:
"Thanks for your entry, AEMelia.
Including the title would qualify it by minimum word count as much as upgrading any word that falls short of its letter count would more fully align it with the stated criteria.
Best regards.
Yours sincerely
When Birds Fall From Blue Skies
Make love your home;
base life with acts
that will keep whom
we’ll meet from harm,
that dark runs amok;
just wait, don’t make
this rule your fate.
That life will live
four ways, five days
each spell will wage;
with hawk reap
came wolf howl,
then wind blew.
Cold rain, then snow
goes blue when bird,
this pawn, thus flew,
knew such pain from
ages long gone.
Turn page, with sage
word that sets fire,
alas, ally amid, runs
like ants gone home.
This can’t help; that said,
fury fills mind, hard fist.
Beat your self upon
cold dead prey.
What else will they hunt?
What does that
earn this your life?
Turn away,
walk away calm,
look anon:
what isn’t ours
this time when they fall.
Written by Jade-Pandora
(jade tiger)
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Jade-Pandora said:
Hi, J-P
I acknowledge your resubmission. It's not a clean slate but your slate is clean -- of all errors.
Thanks for your graciousness. In a world void of perfection, it is our efforts and sacrifices toward rectifying ourselves that count for excellence.
Yours sincerely
Hi, J-P
I acknowledge your resubmission. It's not a clean slate but your slate is clean -- of all errors.
Thanks for your graciousness. In a world void of perfection, it is our efforts and sacrifices toward rectifying ourselves that count for excellence.
Yours sincerely
The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
AspergerPoet56, Sky_dancer, Poetic_Strength, Layla, inechoingsilence, Josh, Ahavati, snugglebuck, Kinkpoet, Indie, PoetsRevenge, Jollylush, Ely, Stoney223, Bluelulu, Heaven_sent_Kathy, Hepcat61, Andiew, Unredeemed, SweetKittyCat5
Thank you to the following members for voting:
AspergerPoet56, Sky_dancer, Poetic_Strength, Layla, inechoingsilence, Josh, Ahavati, snugglebuck, Kinkpoet, Indie, PoetsRevenge, Jollylush, Ely, Stoney223, Bluelulu, Heaven_sent_Kathy, Hepcat61, Andiew, Unredeemed, SweetKittyCat5
admin said:The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
AspergerPoet56,
Sky_dancer,
Poetic_Strength,
Layla,
inechoingsilence,
Josh,
Ahavati,
snugglebuck,
Kinkpoet,
Indie,
PoetsRevenge,
Jollylush,
Ely,
Stoney223,
Bluelulu,
Heaven_sent_Kathy,
Hepcat61,
Andiew,
Unredeemed,
SweetKittyCat5
Congratulations, Bluelulu for an excellent example of a four-letter word fun poem! We had many such, not least of all those submitted by RUNNERS-UP you, wallyroo92 and you, Jade-Pandora.
Thanks to you for taking this to such a high. To all the bubblers -- everyone else who entered -- who could not be accommodated on such a small podium, thanks for subscribing and participating. Without the challenge you brought, there would have been no hurdle to the trophy.
Thanks, Admin, and all who tested the entries by that critical vote.
Why doesn't everyone now go and try out for my Christmas Tricube Thriller? - https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11160/
Sincerely
Thank you to the following members for voting:
AspergerPoet56,
Sky_dancer,
Poetic_Strength,
Layla,
inechoingsilence,
Josh,
Ahavati,
snugglebuck,
Kinkpoet,
Indie,
PoetsRevenge,
Jollylush,
Ely,
Stoney223,
Bluelulu,
Heaven_sent_Kathy,
Hepcat61,
Andiew,
Unredeemed,
SweetKittyCat5
Congratulations, Bluelulu for an excellent example of a four-letter word fun poem! We had many such, not least of all those submitted by RUNNERS-UP you, wallyroo92 and you, Jade-Pandora.
Thanks to you for taking this to such a high. To all the bubblers -- everyone else who entered -- who could not be accommodated on such a small podium, thanks for subscribing and participating. Without the challenge you brought, there would have been no hurdle to the trophy.
Thanks, Admin, and all who tested the entries by that critical vote.
Why doesn't everyone now go and try out for my Christmas Tricube Thriller? - https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/forum/competitions/read/11160/
Sincerely
