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I_love_this_poem
Anada
Joined 14th May 2012
Forum Posts: 4
Anada
Strange Creature
Forum Posts: 4
Poetry Contest Description
Write a poem about writing poems.
I want to read poems that show the struggles or enjoyment of writing poetry. We write poems a lot of times about our life experiences but it would be nice to read how poem changes us.
I wrote this example just now,
"I want to write a poem,
With magical meaning and purpose,
For all to hear my words,
With comments of praise and glory.
Even if it be,
A poem just about me,
Or maybe its about trees,
Could be about being free.
I know i must work hard,
But it would nice to be easy,
Cause i want to write a poem,
Or maybe this isn't me."
You can post as many as you want, with any size. Thanks.
I wrote this example just now,
"I want to write a poem,
With magical meaning and purpose,
For all to hear my words,
With comments of praise and glory.
Even if it be,
A poem just about me,
Or maybe its about trees,
Could be about being free.
I know i must work hard,
But it would nice to be easy,
Cause i want to write a poem,
Or maybe this isn't me."
You can post as many as you want, with any size. Thanks.
firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Forum Posts: 808
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
17
Joined 14th Feb 2012 Forum Posts: 808
Struggled words..
Plopped on this page..
I can't get it out
And It fills me with rage
I want to put my feelings
In a work of art..
But I don't even know
Where to begin to start
It's pitiful I know..
To fight such a battle..
But the monsters will live
And their cages will rattle..
So i'll put that down as an idea..
A monster trapped inside..
Begging to get out,
No longer wanting to hide
Plopped on this page..
I can't get it out
And It fills me with rage
I want to put my feelings
In a work of art..
But I don't even know
Where to begin to start
It's pitiful I know..
To fight such a battle..
But the monsters will live
And their cages will rattle..
So i'll put that down as an idea..
A monster trapped inside..
Begging to get out,
No longer wanting to hide
chezz
Forum Posts: 36
Lost Thinker
2
Joined 7th Jan 2012 Forum Posts: 36
firedaughter said:Struggled words..
Plopped on this page..
I can't get it out
And It fills me with rage
I want to put my feelings
In a work of art..
But I don't even know
Where to begin to start
It's pitiful I know..
To fight such a battle..
But the monsters will live
And their cages will rattle..
So i'll put that down as an idea..
A monster trapped inside..
Begging to get out,
No longer wanting to hide wow WOW WOW u got that one down straighT ill give it a try
Plopped on this page..
I can't get it out
And It fills me with rage
I want to put my feelings
In a work of art..
But I don't even know
Where to begin to start
It's pitiful I know..
To fight such a battle..
But the monsters will live
And their cages will rattle..
So i'll put that down as an idea..
A monster trapped inside..
Begging to get out,
No longer wanting to hide wow WOW WOW u got that one down straighT ill give it a try
jolais
Forum Posts: 285
Thought Provoker
3
Joined 4th Jan 2011Forum Posts: 285
Decisions of a housetrained poet
They should take their places, thrash us with their rapier pens
those cudgels
that render, with surprising accuracy
the slices
that have power to rearrange us
We could use a good 'what for'
for inanity
and our relentless
barrages
of some chaotic flutter effect
where we become obtrusions on the serenity
of honesty
free breathing and burn-writing
and clear vision;
which is almost as irritating
as your golden voice having to trip over weird structure
and spo.radi.c
punctuation -
Or should our beloved bards have positions more key
than tootling only
along the edges of their passions
writing tunes
that would define generations
for poetry groups
when their words could be riding ripples from the calendar pages
shaking dates
tunneling minds that think they know light
repairing the nexts
and so many versions of the past
They take their places, herd us with their quick pens
like bare-minimum mothers in overloaded hatcheries
where half the younglings die anyway
as the world continues to
wonder
Where are the poets?
They should take their places, thrash us with their rapier pens
those cudgels
that render, with surprising accuracy
the slices
that have power to rearrange us
We could use a good 'what for'
for inanity
and our relentless
barrages
of some chaotic flutter effect
where we become obtrusions on the serenity
of honesty
free breathing and burn-writing
and clear vision;
which is almost as irritating
as your golden voice having to trip over weird structure
and spo.radi.c
punctuation -
Or should our beloved bards have positions more key
than tootling only
along the edges of their passions
writing tunes
that would define generations
for poetry groups
when their words could be riding ripples from the calendar pages
shaking dates
tunneling minds that think they know light
repairing the nexts
and so many versions of the past
They take their places, herd us with their quick pens
like bare-minimum mothers in overloaded hatcheries
where half the younglings die anyway
as the world continues to
wonder
Where are the poets?
chezz
Forum Posts: 36
Lost Thinker
2
Joined 7th Jan 2012 Forum Posts: 36
Crumpled bits of paper all about
Jumbled words ,unwillingly I shout
Thoughts replaced by thought
No!no!phrase place is not yet bought
Emotion please lie still
Its from my pen u should spill
Word upon word u line up
Coffee long grown cold in my cup
Pen flowing beautiful ink
I've finally found that missing link
In a moment an eternity
This page once blank
Has transformed into poetry
mjs211
MikeTheEngineer
Forum Posts: 1572
MikeTheEngineer
Dangerous Mind
20
Joined 22nd Aug 2010Forum Posts: 1572
Wandering Quixotic
Having reached that point
in a young poet's career
where I no longer wrote of torn hearts,
moved past cheap cutter portraits
and pounded the lid
back on that abused black paint,
I discovered the existential crisis:
If I am to better myself,
What, then should I write?
My first thoughts
were rather slow;
mistaking spinning wheels
for distance, I decided
I should write of my own life.
But the more I lived my life,
the less I desired it chronicled.
Besides that it's very boring
(unless you care for Navier-Stokes),
and if I really wanted it truthfully writ
I'd still be writing about Julie.
One plan shot down.
So I jotted down another sad one
about a guy who breaks a girl,
(for you don't give up your day job
'til you've found yourself another)
and set out hard for new ground.
Well then, I shall hoist
Uncle Sam's flag up my pen
and exhort in red, white and blue!
Give 'em hellfire and preach up a storm
and my rhetoric shall take no prisoners!
I'll map out for all those smarmy suits
the path to a Golden Age.
We'll change the world, you and I.
But then I realized
that it wouldn't surprise me
if I learned that the latest batch
of silver-spoon politicos
never bothered to learn to read.
God, it's tough to get excited about.
So I was stuck with the inexorable itch
to find myself a use
and a valiant cause,
that transcendent drive
preoccupying so many empty wanderers—
And as I stoked the fire, it consumed me.
I missed the forest for the trees,
or at least the blaze for the flames.
Engrossed in this epic task,
I forgot I was looking to be engrossed...
Finally it hit me.
Having reached that point
in a young poet's career
where I no longer wrote of torn hearts,
moved past cheap cutter portraits
and pounded the lid
back on that abused black paint,
I discovered the existential crisis:
If I am to better myself,
What, then should I write?
My first thoughts
were rather slow;
mistaking spinning wheels
for distance, I decided
I should write of my own life.
But the more I lived my life,
the less I desired it chronicled.
Besides that it's very boring
(unless you care for Navier-Stokes),
and if I really wanted it truthfully writ
I'd still be writing about Julie.
One plan shot down.
So I jotted down another sad one
about a guy who breaks a girl,
(for you don't give up your day job
'til you've found yourself another)
and set out hard for new ground.
Well then, I shall hoist
Uncle Sam's flag up my pen
and exhort in red, white and blue!
Give 'em hellfire and preach up a storm
and my rhetoric shall take no prisoners!
I'll map out for all those smarmy suits
the path to a Golden Age.
We'll change the world, you and I.
But then I realized
that it wouldn't surprise me
if I learned that the latest batch
of silver-spoon politicos
never bothered to learn to read.
God, it's tough to get excited about.
So I was stuck with the inexorable itch
to find myself a use
and a valiant cause,
that transcendent drive
preoccupying so many empty wanderers—
And as I stoked the fire, it consumed me.
I missed the forest for the trees,
or at least the blaze for the flames.
Engrossed in this epic task,
I forgot I was looking to be engrossed...
Finally it hit me.
Starlight_angel
Forum Posts: 1240
Fire of Insight
4
Joined 25th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 1240
Passion Stroke
Rhyming words.
Simple,
Yet full of passion.
Stories unfold
Melodically in my mind.
Words jumbled together
So carefully
Paint pictures,
Create images
Never before concieved.
I'm filled with wonder and awe
As I see before me
The worlds you've created.
You spark imagination,
Open minds,
Bring to pass visions
Few may believe.
You touch hearts,
Summon tears,
Battle unnatural foes,
Color fears,
All with the simple
Stroke of a pen.
Rhyming words.
Simple,
Yet full of passion.
Stories unfold
Melodically in my mind.
Words jumbled together
So carefully
Paint pictures,
Create images
Never before concieved.
I'm filled with wonder and awe
As I see before me
The worlds you've created.
You spark imagination,
Open minds,
Bring to pass visions
Few may believe.
You touch hearts,
Summon tears,
Battle unnatural foes,
Color fears,
All with the simple
Stroke of a pen.
firedaughter
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Forum Posts: 808
StayAwayFromTheNutcase
Fire of Insight
17
Joined 14th Feb 2012 Forum Posts: 808
chezz said:
Crumpled bits of paper all about
Jumbled words ,unwillingly I shout
Thoughts replaced by thought
No!no!phrase place is not yet bought
Emotion please lie still
Its from my pen u should spill
Word upon word u line up
Coffee long grown cold in my cup
Pen flowing beautiful ink
I've finally found that missing link
In a moment an eternity
This page once blank
Has transformed into poetry
Very nice! I like this one!
Crumpled bits of paper all about
Jumbled words ,unwillingly I shout
Thoughts replaced by thought
No!no!phrase place is not yet bought
Emotion please lie still
Its from my pen u should spill
Word upon word u line up
Coffee long grown cold in my cup
Pen flowing beautiful ink
I've finally found that missing link
In a moment an eternity
This page once blank
Has transformed into poetry
Very nice! I like this one!
BleedingInferno219
Kristyn Ashley.
Forum Posts: 717
Kristyn Ashley.
Fire of Insight
12
Joined 3rd Apr 2011Forum Posts: 717
Writing to Write.
I guess I felt like writing,
to maybe think up rhyming words?
But it leaves me so inferior,
Because there's always more to learn.
The stanzas are pain,
and the prose so confusing.
Writing puts me to shame,
with the feeling like losing.
I can't make a rhyme,
I can't make it sound sweet.
Swear it won't sound like the kind
People write through their weeps.
Jagged red lines beneath my name,
and the score.
Backspace, Thesaurus, I can't
take anymore.
I guess I felt like writing,
to maybe think up rhyming words?
But it leaves me so inferior,
Because there's always more to learn.
The stanzas are pain,
and the prose so confusing.
Writing puts me to shame,
with the feeling like losing.
I can't make a rhyme,
I can't make it sound sweet.
Swear it won't sound like the kind
People write through their weeps.
Jagged red lines beneath my name,
and the score.
Backspace, Thesaurus, I can't
take anymore.
Page_Writer
Mad Girl
Forum Posts: 183
Mad Girl
Thought Provoker
19
Joined 25th Nov 2011Forum Posts: 183
Word Maze
Touching pen to paper,
worlds detach
and come undone.
I was and
now I am.
I can be,
and so I shall.
I am her,
I am him,
I am you,
I am them--
Poetry--
This expression,
this life,
this meaning,
this world,
these thoughts.
It's all I have,
it's one of the many things.
That keeps me alive
today,
tomorrow,
yesterday--
Here.
There-
Now-
Then.
This is the reason,
the reason I write,
stories--
poems--
prose--
& my life.
This is the tale
of a girl
like you,
like me,
like everyone
and like no one--
It's all the same.
My story
is somewhere,
lost inside the pages,
inside of a word maze.
Touching pen to paper,
worlds detach
and come undone.
I was and
now I am.
I can be,
and so I shall.
I am her,
I am him,
I am you,
I am them--
Poetry--
This expression,
this life,
this meaning,
this world,
these thoughts.
It's all I have,
it's one of the many things.
That keeps me alive
today,
tomorrow,
yesterday--
Here.
There-
Now-
Then.
This is the reason,
the reason I write,
stories--
poems--
prose--
& my life.
This is the tale
of a girl
like you,
like me,
like everyone
and like no one--
It's all the same.
My story
is somewhere,
lost inside the pages,
inside of a word maze.
braggman
Steve Bragg
Forum Posts: 1850
Steve Bragg
Dangerous Mind
14
Joined 27th Dec 2011Forum Posts: 1850
Blemish
Often a poem comes on like a pimple.
Something gets under your skin
something that doesn’t sit well with the system
that you need to get out, but can’t
until it festers a bit.
The deeper the trouble lies
the longer this will take.
Sometimes it must get ugly before
it leaves you be.
All your cover-up and embellishment
can't hide the fact
that you have a problem to face.
What's your intention, to make it pretty
or just pretend there’s nothing there?
It’s red for a reason.
At times it even seems all creation
is welled up inside you
aching to burst out,
but try to push it out too soon
while the root of its rebellion still remains
and it will just return, demanding consideration.
There's still a seed to this dilemma
you've not discovered
or else it would be out by now.
Stare straight on into the ugliness.
Averting your eyes won't hide it
or help you in your task.
Ignoring it won’t abolish it.
If you're going to get this out
you have to do it right.
Pay full attention to this task.
Just picking at it makes it worse.
Only when your conscience is cleared
Only when it's all expelled, expunged
can you rest right
can your soul lay smooth, unblemished
like a bed stretched tight with clean linen.
Only then can you say,
unsightly though it is:
“This came from me
this shining pearl of my wretched oyster.”
When you are finally serious, set aside some time.
Sharpen a pencil to a pin-prick point
take a good hard look at yourself
and let that wicked little poem
spew upon the paper.
Often a poem comes on like a pimple.
Something gets under your skin
something that doesn’t sit well with the system
that you need to get out, but can’t
until it festers a bit.
The deeper the trouble lies
the longer this will take.
Sometimes it must get ugly before
it leaves you be.
All your cover-up and embellishment
can't hide the fact
that you have a problem to face.
What's your intention, to make it pretty
or just pretend there’s nothing there?
It’s red for a reason.
At times it even seems all creation
is welled up inside you
aching to burst out,
but try to push it out too soon
while the root of its rebellion still remains
and it will just return, demanding consideration.
There's still a seed to this dilemma
you've not discovered
or else it would be out by now.
Stare straight on into the ugliness.
Averting your eyes won't hide it
or help you in your task.
Ignoring it won’t abolish it.
If you're going to get this out
you have to do it right.
Pay full attention to this task.
Just picking at it makes it worse.
Only when your conscience is cleared
Only when it's all expelled, expunged
can you rest right
can your soul lay smooth, unblemished
like a bed stretched tight with clean linen.
Only then can you say,
unsightly though it is:
“This came from me
this shining pearl of my wretched oyster.”
When you are finally serious, set aside some time.
Sharpen a pencil to a pin-prick point
take a good hard look at yourself
and let that wicked little poem
spew upon the paper.
Karrabear
Question
Forum Posts: 416
Question
Fire of Insight
7
Joined 29th Aug 2009Forum Posts: 416
The words must rush,
as shattered as my breath-
Ragged fast and sloppy mess.
Sit in silence in a neat square of white,
Sillently alone, as I fade from sight.
Bursting colors calm and sweet,
As I stare into the sun filled world-
Turned gory black and dead,
As the clouds fordge ahead.
All the same the words contain,
The whole, the part, the soul of me-
Everything that's ever come,
Ever was, or ever will-
As I hope the world has seen,
This is all I can be...
Words on a page.
as shattered as my breath-
Ragged fast and sloppy mess.
Sit in silence in a neat square of white,
Sillently alone, as I fade from sight.
Bursting colors calm and sweet,
As I stare into the sun filled world-
Turned gory black and dead,
As the clouds fordge ahead.
All the same the words contain,
The whole, the part, the soul of me-
Everything that's ever come,
Ever was, or ever will-
As I hope the world has seen,
This is all I can be...
Words on a page.
IMAGO
Viwe Lugongolo
Forum Posts: 251
Viwe Lugongolo
Thought Provoker
1
Joined 24th Nov 2010 Forum Posts: 251
I Am Not A Poet
I live in a world where words speak people
There are no poets
Words have outlived us all
I live in a world where words speak people
There are no poets
Words have outlived us all
diddi
StephenPaul Summerscales
Forum Posts: 1704
StephenPaul Summerscales
Dangerous Mind
42
Joined 18th Dec 2009Forum Posts: 1704
Drawing Inspiration
Get a pencil my friend
sketch my words
read them as they curve
they're yours to lend
into mental swirls ,
do they strike a nerve
all short words can bend
if you draw them observe ,
how they apprehend
a mind can , stray to swerve
between depicted pen
two meanings you learn
in one line that's only read ,
a single verse
an implosion through the head
if you get the burst
all paper should be fed ,
with the letters that nurse
the pen who has just bled .
Drawing inspiration
a law in all creation ,
artistic imagery
articulation , swinging free
words draw lines , trigonometry
we translate the signs
to what we read ,
this fills the mind
eyes do receive
pictoral lines
in poetry .
Get a pencil my friend
sketch my words
read them as they curve
they're yours to lend
into mental swirls ,
do they strike a nerve
all short words can bend
if you draw them observe ,
how they apprehend
a mind can , stray to swerve
between depicted pen
two meanings you learn
in one line that's only read ,
a single verse
an implosion through the head
if you get the burst
all paper should be fed ,
with the letters that nurse
the pen who has just bled .
Drawing inspiration
a law in all creation ,
artistic imagery
articulation , swinging free
words draw lines , trigonometry
we translate the signs
to what we read ,
this fills the mind
eyes do receive
pictoral lines
in poetry .
Vixenwings
Butterfly
Forum Posts: 47
Butterfly
Twisted Dreamer
3
Joined 29th Apr 2012Forum Posts: 47
This was supposed to be a poem
And a good one, at that.
But somewhere in my jumbled mind
The idea just fell flat.
The poem was amazing,
Sad, funny and sweet.
Thoughtful and intensified,
Really quite the treat.
But now I will just sit here,
This pen in here my hand.
Everything I write,
Is really kinda bland.
My brain thought it was funny.
Making me forget.
It does this all the time,
And I almost always fret.
This was supposed to be a poem.
But now it's plain to see.
That what you have just read
Has done nothing but kill trees.
And a good one, at that.
But somewhere in my jumbled mind
The idea just fell flat.
The poem was amazing,
Sad, funny and sweet.
Thoughtful and intensified,
Really quite the treat.
But now I will just sit here,
This pen in here my hand.
Everything I write,
Is really kinda bland.
My brain thought it was funny.
Making me forget.
It does this all the time,
And I almost always fret.
This was supposed to be a poem.
But now it's plain to see.
That what you have just read
Has done nothing but kill trees.