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Poetry competition CLOSED 30th April 2012 2:21pm
WINNER
beautiful_accident
beautiful_accident
Violent Erotica
Poetry Contest Description
A "fuck me like you hate me" poem in the vein of pure erotica.
RULES:
NO PORN! If reads like porn I won't read it.
NO RAPE FANTASY!
NO EXCESSIVE, OR POINTLESS VIOLENCE.
(IF THERE IS VIOLENCE IT HAS TO HAVE A POINT.)
NO THREESOMES, FOURSOMES, OR GANGS BANGS.
BONDAGE AND S&M ARE ALLOWED, AS IS VIVID DAYDREAMS, EXPRESSIONS OF SEXUAL FRUSTRATION, SEX WITH THE EX, BREAK UP SEX, ANGRY-AFTER-AN-ARGUMENT SEX, DRUNKEN ONE NIGHT STAND, CHEATING... ETC
I don't want to know who put what where. I want a story centering around the subject, not a recipe of how you get off. So no, "he shoved his cock in my pussy and pounded me so hard as I moaned in pleasure and pain."
No excessive swearing. I'll allow swearing, if it is in context, and kept to a minimum.
Non-rhyming poetry preferred. Limit of two entries.
An example (PLEASE READ)
Touch Me
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/45444-touch-me/
Touch me or I’ll scream
And imbed your skull in the headboard
Because I am aching just to feel
Your violence upon my skin
When your indifference
Leaves me cold and sore and wanting
Can’t you feel the heat of my desire?
Look me in the goddamn face!
And tell me you don’t want me
I still have the scars
From the last time we fucked
The way your nails felt
As you raked them down my back
Leaving bloody trails
That heightened my pleasure
And I breathed your name
In need for more.
And it’s been months
Since you told me you loved me
Your eyes wandering over
Other girls when we go out
And I’m sorry I’m not tall
And blonde and supermodel hot
Though you used to make me feel
Beautiful and wanted, like I was special
Unable to resist touching me
A finger curled around mine, a kiss
On the back of my neck
Hand sliding cheekily up my thigh
While we rode the bus
Just to tease me
While we sat, unseen by those
That would highly disapprove
As I’d pull my hat down over my face
To hide the flush that crept there
As I melded myself to your fingertips exploring
There way up under my skirt.
And I want you to fuck me
Like you hate me, with all
The pretense of love you can muster
Just one last time
Before I light your clothes on fire
Along with g-string I found
In your coat pocket
That I know doesn’t belong to me
And I’m staring at your indifference
Longing just to reach out and kiss you
Hard and deep and painful
Your hands tangling in my hair
As you pull my head back
To kiss down my neck as you push
Me back down on the bed
To explore me with your lips
Your tongue, gentle fingertips
And sharp nails, taking control
Owning my body and claiming it
As yours, just like the first time
When we made love, in your mother’s bed
While she was out on a date
And I came so hard, I almost passed out.
Instead I watch you watching the TV
Greasy fingers in a packet of Doritos
Oh, for fucks sake... just touch me!
I’m begging telepathically
For you to just fucking touch me
Because I am going to scream
And imbed your skull in the headboard
While I, instead, throw the lamp at the wall
And you call me a crazy bitch, as you get up
To turn out the light, and switch off the TV
Snoring beside me within minutes
And I breathe a sigh of sick relief
While I remove my panties
And get myself off to the thought
Of strangling you in your sleep
With your mistress’s underwear
When all I really wanted
Was for you to touch me one last time
And make me scream in all the right ways
...For you, just like you used to do.
© Indie Adams 2012
NO PORN! If reads like porn I won't read it.
NO RAPE FANTASY!
NO EXCESSIVE, OR POINTLESS VIOLENCE.
(IF THERE IS VIOLENCE IT HAS TO HAVE A POINT.)
NO THREESOMES, FOURSOMES, OR GANGS BANGS.
BONDAGE AND S&M ARE ALLOWED, AS IS VIVID DAYDREAMS, EXPRESSIONS OF SEXUAL FRUSTRATION, SEX WITH THE EX, BREAK UP SEX, ANGRY-AFTER-AN-ARGUMENT SEX, DRUNKEN ONE NIGHT STAND, CHEATING... ETC
I don't want to know who put what where. I want a story centering around the subject, not a recipe of how you get off. So no, "he shoved his cock in my pussy and pounded me so hard as I moaned in pleasure and pain."
No excessive swearing. I'll allow swearing, if it is in context, and kept to a minimum.
Non-rhyming poetry preferred. Limit of two entries.
An example (PLEASE READ)
Touch Me
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/45444-touch-me/
Touch me or I’ll scream
And imbed your skull in the headboard
Because I am aching just to feel
Your violence upon my skin
When your indifference
Leaves me cold and sore and wanting
Can’t you feel the heat of my desire?
Look me in the goddamn face!
And tell me you don’t want me
I still have the scars
From the last time we fucked
The way your nails felt
As you raked them down my back
Leaving bloody trails
That heightened my pleasure
And I breathed your name
In need for more.
And it’s been months
Since you told me you loved me
Your eyes wandering over
Other girls when we go out
And I’m sorry I’m not tall
And blonde and supermodel hot
Though you used to make me feel
Beautiful and wanted, like I was special
Unable to resist touching me
A finger curled around mine, a kiss
On the back of my neck
Hand sliding cheekily up my thigh
While we rode the bus
Just to tease me
While we sat, unseen by those
That would highly disapprove
As I’d pull my hat down over my face
To hide the flush that crept there
As I melded myself to your fingertips exploring
There way up under my skirt.
And I want you to fuck me
Like you hate me, with all
The pretense of love you can muster
Just one last time
Before I light your clothes on fire
Along with g-string I found
In your coat pocket
That I know doesn’t belong to me
And I’m staring at your indifference
Longing just to reach out and kiss you
Hard and deep and painful
Your hands tangling in my hair
As you pull my head back
To kiss down my neck as you push
Me back down on the bed
To explore me with your lips
Your tongue, gentle fingertips
And sharp nails, taking control
Owning my body and claiming it
As yours, just like the first time
When we made love, in your mother’s bed
While she was out on a date
And I came so hard, I almost passed out.
Instead I watch you watching the TV
Greasy fingers in a packet of Doritos
Oh, for fucks sake... just touch me!
I’m begging telepathically
For you to just fucking touch me
Because I am going to scream
And imbed your skull in the headboard
While I, instead, throw the lamp at the wall
And you call me a crazy bitch, as you get up
To turn out the light, and switch off the TV
Snoring beside me within minutes
And I breathe a sigh of sick relief
While I remove my panties
And get myself off to the thought
Of strangling you in your sleep
With your mistress’s underwear
When all I really wanted
Was for you to touch me one last time
And make me scream in all the right ways
...For you, just like you used to do.
© Indie Adams 2012
One moment
seconds dripping with need
Fingers hungry for flesh, reaching
breath held in hunger, want
I'll show you what she can't do
As I taste blood through my lip
My heartbeat pulsates through my body
Can you hear it?
Can you just taste it?
I'll wrap you in my body, in my words
in all the shameless acts I perform on you
all the fantasies you have of me
I want to tease you with my lips
Torture you with my fingers
Delight you in my soul
Confine you completely in the idea of me
Take you so far inside me you get lost there
I want to scratch her fingerprints off your skin
then brand you myself,
Claim you as incredibly, deliciously,
irrevocably mine,
Entwine love and fuck into a yarn
spin it around you so tight you can't see,
and once you are enraptured in the thought of me,
I will fuck your best friend
shoving this hurt right back into you,
then walk away and leave you for emotionally dead.
Dear.
seconds dripping with need
Fingers hungry for flesh, reaching
breath held in hunger, want
I'll show you what she can't do
As I taste blood through my lip
My heartbeat pulsates through my body
Can you hear it?
Can you just taste it?
I'll wrap you in my body, in my words
in all the shameless acts I perform on you
all the fantasies you have of me
I want to tease you with my lips
Torture you with my fingers
Delight you in my soul
Confine you completely in the idea of me
Take you so far inside me you get lost there
I want to scratch her fingerprints off your skin
then brand you myself,
Claim you as incredibly, deliciously,
irrevocably mine,
Entwine love and fuck into a yarn
spin it around you so tight you can't see,
and once you are enraptured in the thought of me,
I will fuck your best friend
shoving this hurt right back into you,
then walk away and leave you for emotionally dead.
Dear.
Anonymous
Execute.
The pain was in full motion.
Clavicles opened up below creases.
The blood flowed from the wounds,
a river through my abdominal core.
You licked the blade clean.
You pulled me close. Skin to skin.
Your lips crawled the length of my face,
and with silky voice
a bomb exploded.
Do you want me to kill you?
Say the word, Slave.
Silence. In amongst the violence.
Your eyes playing dischorded tunes
with the strings of my DNA.
Prickled skin as the blood pumped
through twin ventricles.
Your hand grasping my throat
as the blade pressed in to my skin.
Say the word, Slave.
The sharp needle of the metal point
stitching an answer in to my neck.
For a second i became child like.
Reminiscing daisies. Sunshine.
Forming shapes with the clouds.
I floated back to the present
on those windfall petals.
Say the word, Slave.
A solitary tear left my eye.
I would die for you Sir.
I would die for you.
As you released the pressure
of constricted breath,
I swore i saw Lucifer in your sight.
You smiled. Exhilarated.
The candles flickered as you left,
and i screamed and screamed
in to the unforgiving night.
The pain was in full motion.
Clavicles opened up below creases.
The blood flowed from the wounds,
a river through my abdominal core.
You licked the blade clean.
You pulled me close. Skin to skin.
Your lips crawled the length of my face,
and with silky voice
a bomb exploded.
Do you want me to kill you?
Say the word, Slave.
Silence. In amongst the violence.
Your eyes playing dischorded tunes
with the strings of my DNA.
Prickled skin as the blood pumped
through twin ventricles.
Your hand grasping my throat
as the blade pressed in to my skin.
Say the word, Slave.
The sharp needle of the metal point
stitching an answer in to my neck.
For a second i became child like.
Reminiscing daisies. Sunshine.
Forming shapes with the clouds.
I floated back to the present
on those windfall petals.
Say the word, Slave.
A solitary tear left my eye.
I would die for you Sir.
I would die for you.
As you released the pressure
of constricted breath,
I swore i saw Lucifer in your sight.
You smiled. Exhilarated.
The candles flickered as you left,
and i screamed and screamed
in to the unforgiving night.
Anonymous
Bound And Begging For More
Bound
to the bed
still agasp
in beads
of
sweat
You
have
left me
To
think about
the
dose of
ecstasy
we were
just
dealt
And
that
I did
The heavy
beats
from my
heart
I still felt
My legs
still quite
shaky
my body
on high
Our juices
still
dripping
from
between
my thighs
Upon
your return
I still see
the fire
in your eyes
And
you ask
What
it is
I want
from you
In response
I beg
Please...
tighten
this rope
that
binds me
to you
And do
whatever
you wish
to do
Take me...
take my body
at your will
Leave me
again
wet and trembling
I get off
on the thrill
Bound
to the bed
still agasp
in beads
of
sweat
You
have
left me
To
think about
the
dose of
ecstasy
we were
just
dealt
And
that
I did
The heavy
beats
from my
heart
I still felt
My legs
still quite
shaky
my body
on high
Our juices
still
dripping
from
between
my thighs
Upon
your return
I still see
the fire
in your eyes
And
you ask
What
it is
I want
from you
In response
I beg
Please...
tighten
this rope
that
binds me
to you
And do
whatever
you wish
to do
Take me...
take my body
at your will
Leave me
again
wet and trembling
I get off
on the thrill
Anonymous
SEEING YOU BLEED TURNS ME ON
I have done animal research
I have done surgery
Now I will do it to you
How much anesthesia will you need?
I measure out the Versed
I attach the butterfly catheter
Your normal saline is flowing
The scalpels are laid out
I have seen a rat opened
Seen a dog and some fish
Well everyone probably saw chickens
You are my zoology dish
I want to see your insides
But I will be kind
You will be in and out of anesthesia
I will just look around
I take the scalpel
Make a cut from your groin till your throat
Open you with care
Why a real heart beats under there
You are groaning
I give a shot of phenylethylamine
Makes you a little high
Look at you all strapped down
Your stomach looks just fine
Go lower and look at your colon
Small intestine all jumbled up
You seem like a healthy specimen
Must be all the exercise you do
Time to give you scopolamine
You will never remember a thing
The only reminder will be
The long scar I stitched with care
Thank you dear for letting me
Do this to you
I have had orgasm upon orgasm
While I was cutting you
I have done animal research
I have done surgery
Now I will do it to you
How much anesthesia will you need?
I measure out the Versed
I attach the butterfly catheter
Your normal saline is flowing
The scalpels are laid out
I have seen a rat opened
Seen a dog and some fish
Well everyone probably saw chickens
You are my zoology dish
I want to see your insides
But I will be kind
You will be in and out of anesthesia
I will just look around
I take the scalpel
Make a cut from your groin till your throat
Open you with care
Why a real heart beats under there
You are groaning
I give a shot of phenylethylamine
Makes you a little high
Look at you all strapped down
Your stomach looks just fine
Go lower and look at your colon
Small intestine all jumbled up
You seem like a healthy specimen
Must be all the exercise you do
Time to give you scopolamine
You will never remember a thing
The only reminder will be
The long scar I stitched with care
Thank you dear for letting me
Do this to you
I have had orgasm upon orgasm
While I was cutting you
::Sashay::
her nose turned up
with lips
on my cup
hours chasing what’s up
words again form
just to inform
a half cry asking why
“Sashay, Sashay, why you not give it to us…give us all you got?”
and it’s so hot
we taste the salt of her sweat
and her wetness
it is like oil, oil,
& more oil
burning
and it’s running everywhere
the slickness
tuned in
& turned onto our
sickness
we love this
the clicks of timeless ticks
the ones
within this
making sense for what’s tense
and it’s right
angled just right
there where the pain
where it starts & completes
where the first, then the second
the all on one
competes
the bites; indiscreet
where fear
on the edge of flight
it bears down
straight
through to the crevice
above us; then
to the other side of us
palm print on mattress
a slow fading
she-we live for the degrading
only to fall
then rise
again
the smack down
with the
gyro of her rotating
an active engaging; she’s baiting
it’s more of the same
bestowing of that same fear
getting smacked
around
only to be kissed
the lust of a tightened fist
our twist
the scream of
not enough
to see
in this light it can only be
the dim-lit
light of what we
want her to
be
Cum iNside me...
Tragically beautiful.
a beauty queen...
Pin up.
and poster me.
Tongue tied
and twisted..
Ass
backed
up
against it..
.
.
.
Mirrored angles
while you
tangle
and mangle me
Saturated...
i'm soaked
while you choke
on
.
.
Form fitting
and face down...
tied up
gagged and bound..
Crown me
elusive..
.
.
Sharp shooting..
Intruding..
Consuming..
i'm losing it...
touch me
tease me
kiss me
please me
Give it to me
Just
.
Like
.
That...
Then..
CuM iNside Me...
Tragically beautiful.
a beauty queen...
Pin up.
and poster me.
Tongue tied
and twisted..
Ass
backed
up
against it..
.
.
.
Mirrored angles
while you
tangle
and mangle me
Saturated...
i'm soaked
while you choke
on
.
.
Form fitting
and face down...
tied up
gagged and bound..
Crown me
elusive..
.
.
Sharp shooting..
Intruding..
Consuming..
i'm losing it...
touch me
tease me
kiss me
please me
Give it to me
Just
.
Like
.
That...
Then..
CuM iNside Me...
, though no, that song didn't inspire this comp, or my own poem. 
From Shakespear To Eminem
I remember so dear
the time when ,
you said I was shakespear
through to eminem ,
well let me make it clear
I'd whisper in your ear
your ass I'd rap no fear
to red of swell , oh yeah .
Heated skin
friction , moving ,
the mind does talk
when tongues do other things ,
we roll but never walk ,
the phone glows in the dark ,
your husky voice so sharp
as you tune up to my strings .
Comprehendable , delectable
connectable , perfectional
cerebal of obsessional ,
I am to be the he who's won .
I remember so dear
the time when ,
you said I was shakespear
through to eminem ,
well let me make it clear
I'd whisper in your ear
your ass I'd rap no fear
to red of swell , oh yeah .
Heated skin
friction , moving ,
the mind does talk
when tongues do other things ,
we roll but never walk ,
the phone glows in the dark ,
your husky voice so sharp
as you tune up to my strings .
Comprehendable , delectable
connectable , perfectional
cerebal of obsessional ,
I am to be the he who's won .
beautiful_accident said:One moment seconds dripping with need
Fingers hungry for flesh, reaching
breath held in hunger, want
I'll show you what she can't do
As I taste blood through my lip
My heartbeat pulsates through my body
Can you hear it?
Can you just taste it?
I'll wrap you in my body, in my words
in all the shameless acts I perform on you
all the fantasies you have of me
I want to tease you with my lips
Torture you with my fingers
Delight you in my soul
Confine you completely in the idea of me
Take you so far inside me you get lost there
I want to scratch her fingerprints off your skin
then brand you myself,
Claim you as incredibly, deliciously,
irrevocably mine,
Entwine love and fuck into a yarn
spin it around you so tight you can't see,
and once you are enraptured in the thought of me,
I will fuck your best friend
shoving this hurt right back into you,
then walk away and leave you for emotionally dead.
Dear.
[{ [ Joyce and Eamon two Married Lovers } ] ]} ]]
I'm walking to your room and heading away from a hot shower
Because now I want to fuck Joyce my Wife and lover for more than an hour
My cock enters her Mouth, Her Ass and Pussy
I will soon need a break from Joyce's wild and wet sexy rides
We have a cup of coffee to give more strength to once again
Than back into her hot body my spunk will again rain,
When I return to her bed her head is waiting over the edge of the bed for me It's my favorite position for Joyce to give me wicked head suck for free,
Sliding my throbbing 8 ½ inched Cock easily into her mouth and deep down her throat
As I'm fingering her pussy but then Joyce starts too choke!
She gags and she wretches' because I'm buried down so deeply
She can't wait for the blast of my cumm into her mouth that she will keep
Into her mouth I shoot a load then down deeply its swallowed into her belly,
She savor my 8½ inched cock like it was covered all over with sweet creamy sauce
I'm not done with you yet I told to young Joyce because your pussy is calling my name
Joyce starts shaking and quivering because soon she will cumm
That dripping hot pussy is ready and waiting and will away never run
You've been making it wet with your fast fingers masturbating Eamon she said,
Now I want you fucking inside me so please Eamon get into our bed?
I Enter into her wet pussy while my balls on her ass were slapping
Into her wonderful Juicy pussy where my tongue had been lapping
The tasty cocktail of her cum mixing inside her with mine
Our love making together is and always will be totally divine
With every thrust of my hips I let out some tiny little grunts
Plunging my 8 ½ inched cock deeply into her moist damp cunt
I know you're enjoying this pounding Joyce because you're taking it all
You're Cumming spraying her orgasm and this is not faking
With one final thrust Joyce lets out a high pitched scream
As I fill her wet pussy with my load's of my hot spunky cream!
You dig your nails deeply into the back of my neck
As I drive my cock deeper into her warm sweet honey crack cunt
Joyce is totally satisfied from our sweet sexy hot long love we're making
We sleep arm in arm till the morning sun starts wakening
Kissing her lips and her soft tender skin,
She says Eamon' is it time for us to begin all over again
Walking out your room and heading for the wee
Because I want to fuck Joyce my lover because we are both free
My 8 ½ inched cock will be riding her hard with her legs open wide
Eamon' she screams I'm Cumming again and again from this wild pussy ride
Sliding my 8 ½ inched throbbing cock easily and deeply inside
I cant wait she shouts for the great big blast of cumm inside me to keep
I'm starting to shake and my Sexy Wife lets out a shout! Oh Yes! Here it comes,
I'm filling up her belly with my hot sticky cumm,
But down the inside of her thighs it drips and it runs',
We kiss and hold hands while kissing with giggles,
Then my wife's belly I being to tickle her, as she lets out a cry,
Then I nibble her nipples, and she shouts I could die,
Eamon you’re the very best lover a woman could ever have,
And I'm married to you, and for that I'm ever so glad.
By
The Warrior Poet
Eamon John {a} Healy
Joyce's Husband & Lover
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