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Animals of the Deep

summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
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Poetry Contest

write a poetic scribe .. woven centric with the sea creatures.. mythical or the mystical or the real or the extinct

Dear Inspiring & Talented DUzz

Am here again with another comp. this time a different one for anyone to imagine I hope:)

Yes it’s about the Animals of the Deep - the Waters - may it be the sea or oceans or any water bodies ..

It’s kinda tribute for the love of our such beings.. that are mostly not known or ignored or killed indifferently ..or considered as either terrifyingly monstrous or funnily tiny enough too:) may it from the tiny planktons to the mermaids to the octopuses to the whatnots.. i leave it to you to enlighten me dearzzz xx

Simple rules are:

*Any poetic form- but theme needs to be sea creatures- centric with your imagination or content or characters or extension woven to it

* max. 2 entries per poet - no AI generated content

* minimum of 100 words to a max of 200 words only (remember, not lesser than 100 words)

* scores based on your poetic feel ., novelty if content, emotional depths, x- factoring zings you can splash in them

*kindly no erotic or extreme content of any kind

*winner go be decided by myself after the said timeline

* any other asks.. kindly inbox pls


Best for the comp dearzzz❤️✍️🙏👍



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Grace
IDryad
Tyrant of Words
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The deep

Deep darksong of the ocean  
calls the mind to murky abyss  
unknown as yet uncharted  
by human those that stand  
on solid ground  
should the deep be explored  
fully charted by human hands  
should the ocean floor be found  
could it maybe disappoint?  
 
murky depth and dark greyness  
a world of nothingness  
or maybe it would be wondrous  
with bubbly mermaids in a row  
with charming mermen  
out a-courting  
with sea-flowers on their hands  
thrones that shine like coral stones  
 
pearly floors and mother of pearls  
of kings and queens  
and enchanted kingdoms  
the ocean….
yet fantasy calls to mind
the dreams of then
the visions in sleep
where creatures of the sea
 
play with joy so carefree
can we be as them
you and me..?
Written by Grace (IDryad)
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Anne-Ri999
Fire of Insight
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Joined 16th Aug 2023
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Once sea swept

birthing chaos    
procrastinating  
sounds solely wept  
fossilized curtains    
   
rain refrains    
journeys through all skies  
sunken asunder    
volcanic ashen song    
whispers not a name  
   
each nautical act an art  
of letting go  
   
water spewing  
cyclopes  
cleanse my molecules  
I am one eyed    
monocle    
   
humanize me  
let dark red roses bloom  
from opaque  
   
hold these hands  
they are too empty  
to touch transparency  
   
her predictions  
spat out one eyed  
saints sailors  
merfolk finned folk  
   
paved these surfaces  
digging up ideologies  
where god lay    
in his cemented center  
   
amoeba cells  
altered each shape  
octopus oceanic  
ballet beckons  
   
melancholic  
mantic    
lucidity    
   
returns  
refrained  
   
sea lies adrift  
among deathbeds  
   
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Ahavati
Tams
Tyrant of Words
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The Torchbearer

Deep        
  within the ocean's heart        
light is scarce        
  yet sometimes rare        
—a little angler fish’s torch        
illuminates        
the darkness there        
       
A fishing lure        
  it softly sways        
temptation        
  in an endless haze        
so seldom seen        
amid the dark        
  a false beacon        
  of appetite        
          
Her humpbacked nature        
  in eerie depths        
where silence holds        
  its secrets tight        
this strange visage        
both fierce and shy        
  a fish of fables        
  with haunting rites        
       
Its world        
a place of liquid ink        
where ancient currents run        
beneath     
a ghostly melody         
no human ear    
  will ever know    
  nor voice ever sing       
       
This creature of nature        
—not lost but true        
a marvel hidden        
   from our view        
revealed herself        
   within our sight        
lured to death        
by a brighter light        
       
Choosing to die        
as she had lived        
  to free herself        
  from karmic debt
Written by Ahavati (Tams)
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summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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Aww that’s a mind-blowingly wondrous start to this comp. by all the  wise adored poets in here! Couldn’t have asked more…

Thanks dear Grace, Rianne & Ahavati .. fir rising the bar high..  & for really truly lighting the deepest of the deep .. the connect we have with them, the love, the jubilance, adorations & more unsaid magic... are in such feltness!!

though this now holds all .. though would  love to get the presently crafted poetics ever for a comp. .. since I forgot to mention that in rules.. will accept  both old or new writes

Keep them coming more my lovable poets..  🧜‍♀️🐙f🦈🐬🐳 ✍️🙏♥️👍

Vision_of_insanity
Tyrant of Words
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Iku-Turso

My sleep was awoken by the noise of a Lion, a Cricket and a Raccoon . It was weird. I looked outside and there was a red brick road that led to my garage. I walked into the garage and their were the three having tea with cookies. They all stopped whispering and looked at me in disgust. They asked me to please leave and follow the blue brick road for wisdom and the truth. I asked if I could have one cookie. The cricket stood up and said, "if you don't leave were going to chew on your body."      
     
I left. I decided to follow the blue brick road. As I did, I noticed the sky & atmosphere was becoming very thick and dense. The smell of the salt air was heavy. I really couldn't see much in front of me. Also, in the distance I heard this loud shrieking noise. I couldn't make sense of it, cause I couldn't see too well. Within a few yards, I saw men with torches. They were standing on the shoreline fighting off this large ass sea creature. The creature and I made eye contact. It stopped it's torment and terror with the men on the shoreline. He leaned towards me, since he was like 200 feet tall and said politely, "Today is hump day. Cheer Fia up, cause she don't like Wednesdays." I said will do. I left and went back home.
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summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 3rd Feb 2012
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~selkie:: in the sempiternal inner calling

 
 
 

“The one thing which we seek with insatiable desire is to forget ourselves, … to lose our sempiternal memory, and to do something without knowing how or why….” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
she  
 
has appeared  
 
for me ..  
 
watching me  
following me ..  
 
 
an intervention  
decodes me this  
 
now…  
 
will i be able to  
sense her presence ..
 
 
 
she had risen for me  
from the deep seas  
.. in her enchanted seal  
form .. her dense shiny skin  
 
still intact, her ancient  
 
aquatic spirit  
calls & hums  
 
my name.. in an  
 
ultrasonic undercurrent..
 
could feel those whispering  
vibrations.. in a goosepimpilicious  
uprising .. a sudden chilly piercing  
a shivering wave .. that dies
down swiftly .. only to be in  
a fluctuating~ alternating wave  
of a series of impinging  
arousals..  
 
 
she sheds her hefty seal skin  
to a rapid peeling off  human.. as
a captivating woman.. walking  
the shores along me.. as me .. in  
search of her longing desires.. to  
the deeply spiralling inner dreams..
 
 
she makes me feel them in her touch  
of my third eye .. makes me dare go..  
beyond the reddening horizons .. unto  
the forbidden yet the primally~ needfully  
quenching realms of love.. giving in &  
fusing in.. with the musky pheromonal  
stenches of a  magnetic masculine form..  
that’s wildly yet delicately pulling me in..
 
 
the playful ebbs & tides goes on in.. in  
a full firming yet a formless form.. until  
the peaking tsunamic tectonic shifts.. hits  
to tear & bleed inner me in a rioting chaos..  
a pleasure kill.. gushing & channeling in  
the vast seven oceans inner me.. thats  
cleanses in a spiritual calling connect..  
back to the deep seas in calling..  
 
 
seeking self in the selkie .. sweetly lost in  
the dreams n desires of the depths in tge  
beautiful resurfacing.. becoming one with  
the symbolic selkie .. or even better in  
the rapidly catalytic.. a bittersweetly made  
transition of an ‘unbecoming’.. as a  
 
sempiteternal sentience.. of merely a naked  
nomadic soul in variform shells of a human  
or an inborne selkie.. i swim now to the deep  
oceans.. the purely conversing calling home  
 
of all homes.. i return in the infinite
turns.. in  these ageless births as
forms of craving aloud organisms..
to the formlessly fusing atomic
cosmic stardusts .. in saintly
salience.. a liberating silence
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
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summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1408

~selkie:: in the sempiternal inner calling

 
 
 

“The one thing which we seek with insatiable desire is to forget ourselves, … to lose our sempiternal memory, and to do something without knowing how or why….” ~ Ralph Waldo Emerson

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
she  
 
has appeared  
 
for me ..  
 
watching me  
following me ..  
 
 
an intervention  
decodes me this  
 
now…  
 
will i be able to  
sense her presence ..
 
 
 
she had risen for me  
from the deep seas  
.. in her enchanted seal  
form .. her dense shiny skin  
 
still intact, her ancient  
 
aquatic spirit  
calls & hums  
 
my name.. in an  
 
ultrasonic undercurrent..
 
could feel those whispering  
vibrations.. in a goosepimpilicious  
uprising .. a sudden chilly piercing  
a shivering wave .. that dies
down swiftly .. only to be in  
a fluctuating~ alternating wave  
of a series of impinging  
arousals..  
 
 
she sheds her hefty seal skin  
to a rapid peeling off  human.. as
a captivating woman.. walking  
the shores along me.. as me .. in  
search of her longing desires.. to  
the deeply spiralling inner dreams..
 
 
she makes me feel them in her touch  
of my third eye .. makes me dare go..  
beyond the reddening horizons .. unto  
the forbidden yet the primally~ needfully  
quenching realms of love.. giving in &  
fusing in.. with the musky pheromonal  
stenches of a  magnetic masculine form..  
that’s wildly yet delicately pulling me in..
 
 
the playful ebbs & tides goes on in.. in  
a full firming yet a formless form.. until  
the peaking tsunamic tectonic shifts.. hits  
to tear & bleed inner me in a rioting chaos..  
a pleasure kill.. gushing & channeling in  
the vast seven oceans inner me.. thats  
cleanses in a spiritual calling connect..  
back to the deep seas in calling..  
 
 
seeking self in the selkie .. sweetly lost in  
the dreams n desires of the depths in tge  
beautiful resurfacing.. becoming one with  
the symbolic selkie .. or even better in  
the rapidly catalytic.. a bittersweetly made  
transition of an ‘unbecoming’.. as a  
 
sempiteternal sentience.. of merely a naked  
nomadic soul in variform shells of a human  
or an inborne selkie.. i swim now to the deep  
oceans.. the purely conversing calling home  
 
of all homes.. i return in the infinite
turns.. in  these ageless births as
forms of craving aloud organisms..
to the formlessly fusing atomic
cosmic stardusts .. in saintly
salience.. a liberating silence
 
 
 
 

 
 
 
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summultima said:

Non-entry:)


summultima
uma
Dangerous Mind
India 34awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2012
Forum Posts: 1408

Bumping this thread.:)  hello great afored poeyic friends.. come on in .. dive in the deep waters.. & enlighten me with your animals of thd deep..!:)

Thanks Keith for an amazing n monstrously hilarious entry in there above!:) Best for you & all those who planning to enter:) 👍❤️✍️🙏

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