2024 Official DUP NaPoWriMo Discussion Thread
One of the rules for our NaPoWriMo competition is that each poem must contain at least 50 unique words. Here are two websites to help you keep track of that. In both, you just have to copy your poem into the provided space and it will analyze it for you. Hope that helps!
https://planetcalc.com/3205/
https://charactercounter.com/unique-word-counter
Black Mist
INSIDE ROARE (new)
Black Mist (Solitude)
In the labyrinth of everyday life
where everything turns monotonously.
Like a scratched record on an old gramophone.
Come with an apology when it's not enough
when he leaves iiii aaa للل
Helplessness stares at you from four gray walls,
dusk is quietly falling outside the window.
That's how dark your soul is. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
You replay everything in the maze of your own thoughts
and you don't know where it starts and ends.
It looks like a silent movie to you
so twisted, like life, like a lie to the face. iiii aaa للل
None of the four old keys fit the door,
when she slammed the door, I can't get out.
There is only black fog. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
Black Mist (Solitude)
In the labyrinth of everyday life
where everything turns monotonously.
Like a scratched record on an old gramophone.
Come with an apology when it's not enough
when he leaves iiii aaa للل
Helplessness stares at you from four gray walls,
dusk is quietly falling outside the window.
That's how dark your soul is. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
You replay everything in the maze of your own thoughts
and you don't know where it starts and ends.
It looks like a silent movie to you
so twisted, like life, like a lie to the face. iiii aaa للل
None of the four old keys fit the door,
when she slammed the door, I can't get out.
There is only black fog. aaaaaaa
/:So alone......so alone.: /
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
only a black fog goes through your head. ahhh
So alone (alone, alone, alone,)
everything ends there behind the door. ahhh
Alone (alone, alone, alone,)
like a bird that forgot to fly.
Written by Inside_Roare
(Ivo)
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WHITE
WHITE
The first night you slept on my chest
the first night i can't leave
Like a garden gate open,
the first time I entered, I don't know how.
You are the first, maybe not the last
You are white, probably from my walls.
You're white, unchained
Only white, you can go out.
With white chalk, I draw your outline,
white, you were and always will be.
White, the memory fades,
I remember the only white swan.
You are the first, maybe not the last
You are white, probably from my walls.
You're white, unchained
Only white, you can go out.
The first night you slept on my chest
the first night i can't leave
Like a garden gate open,
the first time I entered, I don't know how.
You are the first, maybe not the last
You are white, probably from my walls.
You're white, unchained
Only white, you can go out.
With white chalk, I draw your outline,
white, you were and always will be.
White, the memory fades,
I remember the only white swan.
You are the first, maybe not the last
You are white, probably from my walls.
You're white, unchained
Only white, you can go out.
Written by Inside_Roare
(Ivo)
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WITHOUT A NAME
INSIDE ROARE
WITHOUT A NAME (deaf girl)
He says he has no name
yet he walks insolently through my dream every day.
He says he has no name
the girl who searches for him in vain
and wanders in vain in my dreams.
aaaaah
Stop the clock and stand here with you
he is relentless
time...time...time...time...time.
I am looking for a name that is unique in that it does not have one.
I am looking for a name who has a pure soul. aaaah
I search for a name, her eyes speak, her mouth is mute.
Why doesn't he have a name who deserves it,
I am here for her to live.
inexorable
time...time...time...time...time.
I'll give her a name, vanilla with the smell of caramel on her lips.
I want to give her a name that smells like a garden and attracts bees.
He must have a name that rings in churches.
that name sounds in my dreams.
The
time...time...time...time...time.
I am looking for a name that is unique in that it does not have one.
I am looking for a name who has a pure soul. aaaah
I search for a name, her eyes speak, her mouth is mute.
Why doesn't he have a name who deserves it,
I am here for her to live.
WITHOUT A NAME (deaf girl)
He says he has no name
yet he walks insolently through my dream every day.
He says he has no name
the girl who searches for him in vain
and wanders in vain in my dreams.
aaaaah
Stop the clock and stand here with you
he is relentless
time...time...time...time...time.
I am looking for a name that is unique in that it does not have one.
I am looking for a name who has a pure soul. aaaah
I search for a name, her eyes speak, her mouth is mute.
Why doesn't he have a name who deserves it,
I am here for her to live.
inexorable
time...time...time...time...time.
I'll give her a name, vanilla with the smell of caramel on her lips.
I want to give her a name that smells like a garden and attracts bees.
He must have a name that rings in churches.
that name sounds in my dreams.
The
time...time...time...time...time.
I am looking for a name that is unique in that it does not have one.
I am looking for a name who has a pure soul. aaaah
I search for a name, her eyes speak, her mouth is mute.
Why doesn't he have a name who deserves it,
I am here for her to live.
Written by Inside_Roare
(Ivo)
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