Poetry competition CLOSED 18th January 2024 1:29pm
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CasketSharpe
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Forgiveness

digbar_toeliker999
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Strange Creature
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Lightning McQueen

My lord and savior
For whom I savor
Goes by a different name
He doesn't love thy neighbor

His name is Lightning McQueen
In his name we sing
Praises of old and new
And of his blood they drew

My savior gives us chicken wings
And saves our soul from Chick Hicks
He loves us
He feeds us
Written by digbar_toeliker999 (digbar)
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IDryad
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digbar_toeliker999, thank you for your entry.

PleasingDragon
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The Final Flight to Freedom

Silent through the years  
Like a giving tree  
You kept cutting branches  
Shredding me by decree  
   
Quiet as harmless rock  
Sitting by your side  
You kept smashing your hammer  
Cracking my core inside  
   
Heart blossomed like a flower  
So many times sitting beside
Hoping you would hold me tender  
But got plucked and discarded aside  
   
Finally, I became a bird  
In this heartless nest  
You tried to severe my wings  
But I soared and flew away, for the best.  
   
I forgive you for all    
That you have done    
My soul is free of you    
Finally my freedom has come  
   
Open blue sky with sweet release  
The light has touched me I am finally at peace .....
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IDryad
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Thank you for your entry PleasingDragon

personanongrata
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Forgiveness

Forgiveness is...
The awareness of oneness
Of that lack of perception of separation
It's the knowing of the human ego weakness,
liberation from the story that enslaves you
Letting go and accepting what is.
Forgiveness is empathy
It's the healing of your traumas
It has its reasons of existence
As the other pole of revenge
which is resentment
which is resistance
You cannot impose forgiveness
It's a consequence of self love
In this world of mad existence
Nothing stands as unforgiven
Written by personanongrata (Astral Gift)
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IDryad
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personanongrata thank you for your entry

wallyroo92
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Free Yourself

 
Forgiveness…forgiveness is about letting go
Letting go of the anger and resentment toward someone else
It’s about freeing yourself of the past that cast a heavy burden
And finally being able to breathe by coming up to the surface

Forgiveness is about getting rid of those emotional chains
Those that once bound you, those that wouldn’t let you move ahead
Is about being able to see the truth that beyond all façades
We’re flawed and thus we must find absolution and make amends

Forgiveness is about releasing the thorns embedded within
When memories bring nothing but misery and grief
It’s a veil that changes our perception because forgiveness…
Is about letting go of the pain and finally finding peace
Written by wallyroo92
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IDryad
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Thank you Wallyroo for the entry

TIG
Fire of Insight
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Joined 28th Mar 2018
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asking for forgiveness

I wonder therefore I am a dreamer
I am a dreamer therefore I create
I create therefore I am an artist
I am an artist therefore I am curious
I am curious therefore I have questions
I have questions therefore I am a seeker
I am a seeker therefore I am a hunter
I am a hunter therefore i must exercise
I exercise therefore I am physical
I am physical and have been given much
I have been given much therefore I donate
I donate therefore I am a giver
I am a giver because I love people
I love people therefore I have desires
I have desire therefore therefore I must discipline
I must discipline therefore I pray
I pray therefore I am a believer
I am a believer therefore I have faith
I have faith therefore I worship God
I worship God therefore I am thankful
I am thankful therefore I am content
I am content therefore I love
I love therefore I am loved
I am loved therefore I am humbled
I am humbled therefore my eyes have been opened
My eyes have been opened therefore I see I have sinned
I have sinned therefore I am a sinner
I am a sinner therefore I need to be saved
I need to be saved or I will not be redeemed
I will not be redeemed therefore I seek Jesus Christ for redemption
I seek Jesus Christ for redemption therefore I believe Christ died for my sins
I believe Christ died for my sins therefore I pray for forgiveness
I pray for forgiveness....
Written by TIG
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IDryad
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Thank you Tig for your entry

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IDryad
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flowergirl, thank you for your entry

Razzerleaf
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The last day's in May

He swapped the car in Phoenix
with a screwdriver and a twist of spark,
used a wad of money
like a maxi-pad over a deep red bullet wound
that oozed pink saline every time he moved.
 
She was probably with someone else.
He had no right to be heading her way,
asking for her charity after what he'd done.
The cool desert air made him feel drowsy
as the Buick's soft ride drifted from the road.
He could smell the creosote after rain,
a scent of home, a forgotten hiding place.
 
He picked all his words through the open window
and prepared to eat them like poison apples,
knowing he’d lost too much blood to explain.
The dust cloud settled outside her trailer,
the long stretching sound of the car horn
nudges her from a troubled sleep.
 
Maybe she'll be a forgiving nurse
with alcohol and tweezers,
give him clean sheets and chicken soup.
 
Maybe she'll tell him to get lost
and regret watching the tail lights
the moment they shrink out of sight.
 
Maybe she will get in the car to hold his hand,
stay there to watch the night give way
under the pressure of a fresh morning
and say "goodbye"
as she lifts the bag from the back seat.
Written by Razzerleaf
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IDryad
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Thank you Razzerleaf for the entry

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IDryad
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Thank you so much for participating everyone. All the entries deserved trophies. However, there are only three to give away so we congratulate CasketSharpe for Regardless-I’m There as the winner, first runner up wallyroo92 for Free Yourself and second runner up is Razzerleaf for The last day's in May. Thank you so much everyone, please be with me again in my next competition.

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