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Being too good
billu1109
Seul Billu
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Seul Billu
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Poetry Contest Description
Diabetes
Being too good,
is bad for friendships
and for (relationships),
just like eating too much,
sugar can lead to diabetes.
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Grace
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Sugar Sweet Suicide
ice cream and chocolates
moist fruitcakes, marzipan
creamy topped puddings
cinnamon and meringue
cheese pizzas
sugar powdered doughnuts
fried chicken and pie
hamburgers
and different flavoured soda
delicious sweetness
pushing me down
gently and sweetly
into the ground.
Written by Grace
(IDryad)
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Fire of Insight
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Hi Bilal KHOGYANI is your competition about " being too good" or about " diabetes? "
billu1109
Seul Billu
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Seul Billu
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Being too good is like diabetes is dangerous for health
billu1109
Seul Billu
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Seul Billu
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Jordan
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The Danger to the Health of the Starving Child Near Death
or
Seriously Low Blood Sugar Levels on Skipping All Meals a Full Year
"Most every human's nature is sweet in tooth and bear claws."
-- the worldwide deadly diabetes to die for
*
So few have any appetite for being too upright --
the sugar highs full leaving each yet somewhat less than bright.
*
a dedication of Respect
for
the Pain of the baby whose candy
greediness diseased still steals with ease
a revolving helios couplet menippean satire on
severe brain freeze
on wolfing a starbucks frappuccino iced, blended coffee
topped with whipped cream and cinnamon dolce syrup
august, 2023 -- yet countless starving children getting not one spoonful of sugar
to help the alprazolam tranquillizers go down in a most desperate attempt to keep
the Pain sedated
Seriously Low Blood Sugar Levels on Skipping All Meals a Full Year
"Most every human's nature is sweet in tooth and bear claws."
-- the worldwide deadly diabetes to die for
*
So few have any appetite for being too upright --
the sugar highs full leaving each yet somewhat less than bright.
*
a dedication of Respect
for
the Pain of the baby whose candy
greediness diseased still steals with ease
a revolving helios couplet menippean satire on
severe brain freeze
on wolfing a starbucks frappuccino iced, blended coffee
topped with whipped cream and cinnamon dolce syrup
august, 2023 -- yet countless starving children getting not one spoonful of sugar
to help the alprazolam tranquillizers go down in a most desperate attempt to keep
the Pain sedated
Written by Jordan
(D.O.C.)
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Fire of Insight
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I still haven't a clue and inexplicably got a trophy for...???
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
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Interesting. Where's the entry?
Rew
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Fire of Insight
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There isn't one.
lepperochan
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Lads and ladies.... If you run a comp, READ THE ENTRIES before you pick a winner. If a person posts a comment on a comp thread he/ she will be included in the choice to pick as a winner
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.
Thank you to the following members for voting:
Kinkpoet, dimpy, Northern_Soul, ajay, PAR, robert43041, WillowsWhimsies, MidnightSonneteer, Phantom2426, ReggiePoet, Tallen
Thank you to the following members for voting:
Kinkpoet, dimpy, Northern_Soul, ajay, PAR, robert43041, WillowsWhimsies, MidnightSonneteer, Phantom2426, ReggiePoet, Tallen
Grace
IDryad
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IDryad
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Thank you so much for the honour. Humbled 🌹
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Fire of Insight
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Yeah, 114, already