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Posted: 30th August 2011 5:28pm
goodest
goodest
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2011
Forum Posts: 3007
& i put dis on "Where Do I Belong" by Blackwolf....

i like da things u jus described
but i dont think u r lookn 2 belong 2 a group or a tribe
u spoke about da individuals curse
it jus exists freely...it cant b rehursed
bcuz Life jus cums as we c it
& God wont do 4 us wut we can do 4 self so so b it
all we can do is simply giv da effort...jus try
da effort alone wil reduce many tears from da eye

Posted: 1st October 2011 8:13am
Edited: 1st October 2011 8:15am
poet Anonymous
Tender and so very beautiful Alip..like angel wings brushing across the page..peace Crim


http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/29588/

Posted: 1st October 2011 8:30am
Edited: 1st October 2011 3:20pm
lepperochan
lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Yemen 67awards
Joined 1st Apr 2011
Forum Posts: 14589
where that go?

Posted: 1st October 2011 11:41am
Edited: 1st October 2011 11:42am
poet Anonymous
From Miss_Sub
"This actually made me cry a little. The time we have is so precious. All we want for our children is for them to not make the mistakes we did in life.

Beautiful. A chronic reminder of the fragile state of human life. I hope your daughters have the life you wish for them."


http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/29588/


Posted: 1st October 2011 6:28pm
poet Anonymous
AliP said:From Miss_Sub
"This actually made me cry a little.

Well. I never made a comment I didn't mean

Posted: 17th May 2022 3:39pm
Edited: 17th May 2022 3:40pm
RevolutionAL
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Alistair Plint
Dangerous Mind
South Africa 29awards
Joined 24th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1257

No Ordinary Day

 
One day  
the sadness came
and it never went away
An understanding
we all have to die
and that meant everyone
and maybe everything  
in the whole world  
would leave one day too
Mother  
father
family and friends
kittens and dogs
and wishes and dreams
even the five year old boy
with a grubby tear in his eye
holding back in the playground line
waiting  
to bat out his turn
Written by Abracadabra
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It was No Ordinary Day!
It was a hilarious special day!




An interaction of comments,  I'll hold dear forever!

Posted: 20th May 2022 7:35pm
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 20th May 2022 7:45pm
Wafflenose
Wafflenose
Ellie
Dangerous Mind
United Kingdom 21awards
Joined 1st Aug 2021
Forum Posts: 1218
Lol @ reviving an 11 year old thread! It's a nice one though.

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