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[quote]Jestalessa said:
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it
:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it
:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/
Jestalessa
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Dangerous Mind
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Jack Heslop said:
[quote][quoted=poetry--425-15-27]Jestalessa said:
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/
oooh yes. that magnificent piece of work. i was going through my reading list yesterday and read it, but didn't read the comments...it's still perfect. [:
[quote][quoted=poetry--425-15-27]Jestalessa said:
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it
:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/ oooh yes. that magnificent piece of work. i was going through my reading list yesterday and read it, but didn't read the comments...it's still perfect. [:
opheliac
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Dangerous Mind
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With so few words
you paint - for me - a picture that fills me with emotion.
Lovely
S
(written by Laugharne on my poem Leaf Haiku)
i can't thank you enough :))
you paint - for me - a picture that fills me with emotion.
Lovely
S
(written by Laugharne on my poem Leaf Haiku)
i can't thank you enough :))
RavenofSorrow
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Fire of Insight
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Written today at 11:55pm by DementedDamsel
why is it that your so good at poetry ! I DONT KNOW HOW YOU GOT SO AMAZING... you never fail to amaze me mister R.O.S X
why is it that your so good at poetry ! I DONT KNOW HOW YOU GOT SO AMAZING... you never fail to amaze me mister R.O.S X
Viddax
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Lord Viddax
Guardian of Shadows
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Hemihead:
"You bastard
I will wallow in bitterness for years and years...."
(Well if flattery gets you nowhere, you should just insult the poet right?)
"You bastard
I will wallow in bitterness for years and years...."
(Well if flattery gets you nowhere, you should just insult the poet right?)
ImperfectedStone
The Gardener
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The Gardener
Dangerous Mind
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Opheliac:
"you're becoming my favourite sweet LA!
you've done an amazing job" =] [Made my night]
"you're becoming my favourite sweet LA!
you've done an amazing job" =] [Made my night]
opheliac
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Dangerous Mind
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The words still move like only your words can.
by my beloved Jack Heslop on my poem "untitled love"
by my beloved Jack Heslop on my poem "untitled love"
Jestalessa
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Dangerous Mind
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This wasn't on a poem of mine so I was hesitant to put it up, but it was just so hilarious after reading an erotic...
subject: they say
ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS
perhaps a condom would be needed
if this latest advice
has to be heeded
subject: they say
ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS
perhaps a condom would be needed
if this latest advice
has to be heeded
rayheinrich
Death Plane for Teddy
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Death Plane for Teddy
Tyrant of Words
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[font=Verdana]
"ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS"
[font=Courier New][size=2] ... and now I got coffee on my computer screen.
But moving on...
Since nobody's checking their egos at the gate on this here thread;
I thought: "Why not post comments you like that you (your genius self) gave instead of got?"
After a short, thoughtful, pause; I answered myself: "Why not, indeed?"
This comment was on:
"Genocide Graves" by Ava Renei (miss_masturbation)http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12651/
"Now this is amazing... how intricately connected the images are; and
there's this repetition, rhythm that seeps in or oozes out or whatever.
Very affecting by its lack of emotion; like it died long ago (and of
course it did since it's death). But then (as poems are supposed to do),
it creates life again when read. Yep, I sure like this kinda writing."
"ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS"
[font=Courier New][size=2] ... and now I got coffee on my computer screen.
But moving on...
Since nobody's checking their egos at the gate on this here thread;
I thought: "Why not post comments you like that you (your genius self) gave instead of got?"
After a short, thoughtful, pause; I answered myself: "Why not, indeed?"
This comment was on:
"Genocide Graves" by Ava Renei (miss_masturbation)
"Now this is amazing... how intricately connected the images are; and
there's this repetition, rhythm that seeps in or oozes out or whatever.
Very affecting by its lack of emotion; like it died long ago (and of
course it did since it's death). But then (as poems are supposed to do),
it creates life again when read. Yep, I sure like this kinda writing."
Anonymous
On: Last Dance
Subject: CoriStory
"Written on 31st January 2011 12:56pm by Hooded
great tempo, flow and structure. Rhyme is going out of fashion...but you have managed to salvage my despair by creating a wonderful rhyming piece.
It can be difficult to make a rhyme feel right and not 'forced' just to fit the rhyming word - you managed to make this feel effortlessly crafted together. If it was absolute hell writing it - don't tell anyone!!
regards,
Hooded"
:]
Subject: CoriStory
"Written on 31st January 2011 12:56pm by Hooded
great tempo, flow and structure. Rhyme is going out of fashion...but you have managed to salvage my despair by creating a wonderful rhyming piece.
It can be difficult to make a rhyme feel right and not 'forced' just to fit the rhyming word - you managed to make this feel effortlessly crafted together. If it was absolute hell writing it - don't tell anyone!!
regards,
Hooded"
:]
ALLforJADE22
sad.beautiful.tragic
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sad.beautiful.tragic
Lost Thinker
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such as life
ALLforJADE22
sad.beautiful.tragic
Joined 21st Feb 2011
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sad.beautiful.tragic
Lost Thinker
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:)
lisa777
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LisaB
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As this comment is the only one given by one of whom I have found to have been somewhat negative (in his preference of reading), as no-one else has truly critiqued, only politely commented, I am compelled to appreciate eamon for this comment and his one and only appearance to my humble window!
"what a great way you have of weaving a story into poem.it wasn't till the fifth i figured it was not going to be a nice drive for the victim.
i normally dont go for the rhyme you have on the fifth but in fairness i think it fits wonderfully into the make up of the pace you set."
"what a great way you have of weaving a story into poem.it wasn't till the fifth i figured it was not going to be a nice drive for the victim.
i normally dont go for the rhyme you have on the fifth but in fairness i think it fits wonderfully into the make up of the pace you set."
Anonymous
I recieved this from RedEmma,
On my Piece Tango Adorno.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27097/
"This left me speechless, your writing is so clever and flows beautifully, I noticed that you commented on my poems and I loved reading your positive feedback but to receive praise from such a talent means so much. Thank you for sharing."
I think I`m in love now!
On my Piece Tango Adorno.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27097/
"This left me speechless, your writing is so clever and flows beautifully, I noticed that you commented on my poems and I loved reading your positive feedback but to receive praise from such a talent means so much. Thank you for sharing."
I think I`m in love now!
goodest
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Dangerous Mind
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wel i received dis comment from my girl Spirit whose talent goes so far beyond da point of mind blowin.....but it was on my poem called "M.F."
This is a take a bow moment in poetry...how incredibly absolutely excellent!!!!!!!
i was so flattered dat i jus had 2 blush....
This is a take a bow moment in poetry...how incredibly absolutely excellent!!!!!!!
i was so flattered dat i jus had 2 blush....
