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[quote]Jestalessa said:
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it
:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it
:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/
Jack Heslop said:
[quote][quoted=poetry--425-15-27]Jestalessa said:
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/
oooh yes. that magnificent piece of work. i was going through my reading list yesterday and read it, but didn't read the comments...it's still perfect. [:
[quote][quoted=poetry--425-15-27]Jestalessa said:
I want to read this poem! Where? Which?
You already have read and commented on it
:http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9902/ oooh yes. that magnificent piece of work. i was going through my reading list yesterday and read it, but didn't read the comments...it's still perfect. [:
This wasn't on a poem of mine so I was hesitant to put it up, but it was just so hilarious after reading an erotic...
subject: they say
ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS
perhaps a condom would be needed
if this latest advice
has to be heeded
subject: they say
ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS
perhaps a condom would be needed
if this latest advice
has to be heeded
[font=Verdana]
"ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS"
[font=Courier New][size=2] ... and now I got coffee on my computer screen.
But moving on...
Since nobody's checking their egos at the gate on this here thread;
I thought: "Why not post comments you like that you (your genius self) gave instead of got?"
After a short, thoughtful, pause; I answered myself: "Why not, indeed?"
This comment was on:
"Genocide Graves" by Ava Renei (miss_masturbation)http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/12651/
"Now this is amazing... how intricately connected the images are; and
there's this repetition, rhythm that seeps in or oozes out or whatever.
Very affecting by its lack of emotion; like it died long ago (and of
course it did since it's death). But then (as poems are supposed to do),
it creates life again when read. Yep, I sure like this kinda writing."
"ORAL SEX NOW GIVES TAPE WORMS"
[font=Courier New][size=2] ... and now I got coffee on my computer screen.
But moving on...
Since nobody's checking their egos at the gate on this here thread;
I thought: "Why not post comments you like that you (your genius self) gave instead of got?"
After a short, thoughtful, pause; I answered myself: "Why not, indeed?"
This comment was on:
"Genocide Graves" by Ava Renei (miss_masturbation)
"Now this is amazing... how intricately connected the images are; and
there's this repetition, rhythm that seeps in or oozes out or whatever.
Very affecting by its lack of emotion; like it died long ago (and of
course it did since it's death). But then (as poems are supposed to do),
it creates life again when read. Yep, I sure like this kinda writing."
Anonymous
On: Last Dance
Subject: CoriStory
"Written on 31st January 2011 12:56pm by Hooded
great tempo, flow and structure. Rhyme is going out of fashion...but you have managed to salvage my despair by creating a wonderful rhyming piece.
It can be difficult to make a rhyme feel right and not 'forced' just to fit the rhyming word - you managed to make this feel effortlessly crafted together. If it was absolute hell writing it - don't tell anyone!!
regards,
Hooded"
:]
Subject: CoriStory
"Written on 31st January 2011 12:56pm by Hooded
great tempo, flow and structure. Rhyme is going out of fashion...but you have managed to salvage my despair by creating a wonderful rhyming piece.
It can be difficult to make a rhyme feel right and not 'forced' just to fit the rhyming word - you managed to make this feel effortlessly crafted together. If it was absolute hell writing it - don't tell anyone!!
regards,
Hooded"
:]
As this comment is the only one given by one of whom I have found to have been somewhat negative (in his preference of reading), as no-one else has truly critiqued, only politely commented, I am compelled to appreciate eamon for this comment and his one and only appearance to my humble window!
"what a great way you have of weaving a story into poem.it wasn't till the fifth i figured it was not going to be a nice drive for the victim.
i normally dont go for the rhyme you have on the fifth but in fairness i think it fits wonderfully into the make up of the pace you set."
"what a great way you have of weaving a story into poem.it wasn't till the fifth i figured it was not going to be a nice drive for the victim.
i normally dont go for the rhyme you have on the fifth but in fairness i think it fits wonderfully into the make up of the pace you set."
Anonymous
I recieved this from RedEmma,
On my Piece Tango Adorno.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27097/
"This left me speechless, your writing is so clever and flows beautifully, I noticed that you commented on my poems and I loved reading your positive feedback but to receive praise from such a talent means so much. Thank you for sharing."
I think I`m in love now!
On my Piece Tango Adorno.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/27097/
"This left me speechless, your writing is so clever and flows beautifully, I noticed that you commented on my poems and I loved reading your positive feedback but to receive praise from such a talent means so much. Thank you for sharing."
I think I`m in love now!
wel i received dis comment from my girl Spirit whose talent goes so far beyond da point of mind blowin.....but it was on my poem called "M.F."
This is a take a bow moment in poetry...how incredibly absolutely excellent!!!!!!!
i was so flattered dat i jus had 2 blush....
This is a take a bow moment in poetry...how incredibly absolutely excellent!!!!!!!
i was so flattered dat i jus had 2 blush....
