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poetrician
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ooo, i really like the drama here. you lift the veil on the psychology and dynamic...i like this direction of style. nice write :)!

Bluevelvete
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poetrician said:ooo, i really like the drama here. you lift the veil on the psychology and dynamic...i like this direction of style. nice write :)!

Ty my dear poetrician
🌹
xo

Wh1skeySwagger
Swagger
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Bluevelvete said:Unspoken Rose


he's waiting
she's late and hurried
~rattled~
an air of slight annoyance
mixes with submissive need
and blooms
into his obeyed commands
she begs, pleads and squirms
he
is
fucking relentless....
... and unyielding


she hides her knowing smile
.......... behind her ball gag..........



Both these words and the art accompanying them are perfect blue.

Nice job and nice choice on the art

Bluevelvete
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Wh1skeySwagger said:

Both these words and the art accompanying them are perfect blue.

Nice job and nice choice on the art


Ty very much, Swagger
I was excited for you to see it!
I appreciate your lovely sentiments
🌹
xo
;)

SweetKittyCat5
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Forum Posts: 2087

😘

Kinkpoet
Dangerous Mind
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Forum Posts: 1080

Bluevelvete said:Unspoken Rose


he's waiting
she's late and hurried
~rattled~
an air of slight annoyance
mixes with submissive need
and blooms
into his obeyed commands
she begs, pleads and squirms
he
is
fucking relentless....
... and unyielding


she hides her knowing smile
.......... behind her ball gag..........







Lovely!🙏

Bluevelvete
Tyrant of Words
United States 74awards
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Forum Posts: 2349

Kinkpoet said:

Lovely!🙏


Ty, KP
🌹
;)

Wh1skeySwagger
Swagger
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 10th Dec 2019
Forum Posts: 940

Kisses Upon The Moonlight

SweetKittyCat5
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SweetKittyCat5 said:

LOVED THIS SKC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bluevelvete
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Forum Posts: 2349




his
s i l e n c e
leaves her on edge
mental meets physical
the duality intoxicates
as well as a slight
tinge of terrified

not because she didn't like it

but
because,

she loved it

Gahddess_Worship
Osomajestuoso
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Forum Posts: 840

Bluevelvete said:

his
s i l e n c e
leaves her on edge
mental meets physical
the duality intoxicates
as well as a slight
tinge of terrified

not because she didn't like it

but
because,

she loved it

You capture so well the exquisite nature of the thrill and terror of the wait. So many stories composed, so many scenarios all hinging on the results of that wait. I love this passage, "the duality intoxicates." The ending is packed with sensual dynamite. Brava, Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻

Wh1skeySwagger
Swagger
Fire of Insight
United States
Joined 10th Dec 2019
Forum Posts: 940

Bluevelvete said:

his
s i l e n c e
leaves her on edge
mental meets physical
the duality intoxicates
as well as a slight
tinge of terrified

not because she didn't like it

but
because,

she loved it



This is B-E-A-UTIFUL blue  

put a smile on my face

nothing like the thrill of anticipation

Bluevelvete
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Awww.. Ty @ Wh1skey
Your smile is echoed with my own.
I'm glad you enjoyed it
🌹
xo

Bluevelvete
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Forum Posts: 2349

Gahddess_Worship said:
You capture so well the exquisite nature of the thrill and terror of the wait. So many stories composed, so many scenarios all hinging on the results of that wait. I love this passage, "the duality intoxicates." The ending is packed with sensual dynamite. Brava, Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻


Like @ Wh1skey said, it's the anticipation...
My skin is goosebumps just thinking about it.
Ty for your lovely comments, BB 💋
🌹
X

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SweetKittyCat5
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