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poetrician
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ooo, i really like the drama here. you lift the veil on the psychology and dynamic...i like this direction of style. nice write :)!
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Bluevelvete said:Unspoken Rose
he's waiting
she's late and hurried
~rattled~
an air of slight annoyance
mixes with submissive need
and blooms
into his obeyed commands
she begs, pleads and squirms
he
is
fucking relentless....
... and unyielding
she hides her knowing smile
.......... behind her ball gag..........
Both these words and the art accompanying them are perfect blue.
Nice job and nice choice on the art
he's waiting
she's late and hurried
~rattled~
an air of slight annoyance
mixes with submissive need
and blooms
into his obeyed commands
she begs, pleads and squirms
he
is
fucking relentless....
... and unyielding
she hides her knowing smile
.......... behind her ball gag..........
Both these words and the art accompanying them are perfect blue.
Nice job and nice choice on the art
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Bluevelvete said:Unspoken Rose
he's waiting
she's late and hurried
~rattled~
an air of slight annoyance
mixes with submissive need
and blooms
into his obeyed commands
she begs, pleads and squirms
he
is
fucking relentless....
... and unyielding
she hides her knowing smile
.......... behind her ball gag..........
Lovely!🙏
he's waiting
she's late and hurried
~rattled~
an air of slight annoyance
mixes with submissive need
and blooms
into his obeyed commands
she begs, pleads and squirms
he
is
fucking relentless....
... and unyielding
she hides her knowing smile
.......... behind her ball gag..........
Lovely!🙏
Wh1skeySwagger
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Bluevelvete
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his
s i l e n c e
leaves her on edge
mental meets physical
the duality intoxicates
as well as a slight
tinge of terrified
not because she didn't like it
but
because,
she loved it
Bluevelvete said:
his
s i l e n c e
leaves her on edge
mental meets physical
the duality intoxicates
as well as a slight
tinge of terrified
not because she didn't like it
but
because,
she loved it
You capture so well the exquisite nature of the thrill and terror of the wait. So many stories composed, so many scenarios all hinging on the results of that wait. I love this passage, "the duality intoxicates." The ending is packed with sensual dynamite. Brava, Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻
his
s i l e n c e
leaves her on edge
mental meets physical
the duality intoxicates
as well as a slight
tinge of terrified
not because she didn't like it
but
because,
she loved it
You capture so well the exquisite nature of the thrill and terror of the wait. So many stories composed, so many scenarios all hinging on the results of that wait. I love this passage, "the duality intoxicates." The ending is packed with sensual dynamite. Brava, Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻
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Awww.. Ty @ Wh1skey
Your smile is echoed with my own.
I'm glad you enjoyed it
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xo
Your smile is echoed with my own.
I'm glad you enjoyed it
🌹
xo
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Gahddess_Worship said:
You capture so well the exquisite nature of the thrill and terror of the wait. So many stories composed, so many scenarios all hinging on the results of that wait. I love this passage, "the duality intoxicates." The ending is packed with sensual dynamite. Brava, Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Like @ Wh1skey said, it's the anticipation...
My skin is goosebumps just thinking about it.
Ty for your lovely comments, BB 💋
🌹
X
You capture so well the exquisite nature of the thrill and terror of the wait. So many stories composed, so many scenarios all hinging on the results of that wait. I love this passage, "the duality intoxicates." The ending is packed with sensual dynamite. Brava, Blue🐻💋🐻💋🐻
Like @ Wh1skey said, it's the anticipation...
My skin is goosebumps just thinking about it.
Ty for your lovely comments, BB 💋
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