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Ahavati said:Treasure Island
Man is no island
until he swallows toxicity;
but, those that in darkness lay
possess an opportunity
to discover the treasure
of lubency—
should they choose
to believe
~
Wise words
The overall atmosphere of this piece is that of Nostradamus
Great use of the word of the day!
Thank you
Man is no island
until he swallows toxicity;
but, those that in darkness lay
possess an opportunity
to discover the treasure
of lubency—
should they choose
to believe
~
Wise words
The overall atmosphere of this piece is that of Nostradamus
Great use of the word of the day!
Thank you
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Bluevelvete said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/398390-white-knuckled-a-tale-of-lubency/
Blue this is a gem very thought provoking
Thank you
Blue this is a gem very thought provoking
Thank you
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Magnetron said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/398385-ode-to-bishops-filling-station/
*Screeeeeeeech*
This one's for you this time !!
Like this too much borders on love
I especially like the first stanza and double word usage
The way you used daffadowndilly is exceptional .
I always want to say your name like a superhero with my fist in the air
Thank you
*Screeeeeeeech*
This one's for you this time !!
Like this too much borders on love
I especially like the first stanza and double word usage
The way you used daffadowndilly is exceptional .
I always want to say your name like a superhero with my fist in the air Thank you
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Valeriyabeyond said:
*Screeeeeeeech*
This one's for you this time !!
Like this too much borders on love
I especially like the first stanza and double word usage
The way you used daffadowndilly is exceptional .
I always want to say your name like a superhero with my fist in the air
Thank you
Thank you for the opportunity to hone my poetic compression cylinders.
*Screeeeeeeech*
This one's for you this time !!
Like this too much borders on love
I especially like the first stanza and double word usage
The way you used daffadowndilly is exceptional .
I always want to say your name like a superhero with my fist in the air Thank you
Thank you for the opportunity to hone my poetic compression cylinders.
Blackwolf said:The Scrutiny Of Perceptiibility
I Confess To Thee , Profess To Thee ,
With Propensity My Probability Of
The Art Of Viability With Language
Of Fluency Stating My Base Of Lubency
Without Truancy To Assist The Community
Can We Take This Opportunity To Agree
Without Ambiguity ?
Great post BW
Reading this calmed the waters inside me
It brought me into the now, placing my emotions where they needed to be
Thank you V
I Confess To Thee , Profess To Thee ,
With Propensity My Probability Of
The Art Of Viability With Language
Of Fluency Stating My Base Of Lubency
Without Truancy To Assist The Community
Can We Take This Opportunity To Agree
Without Ambiguity ?
Great post BW
Reading this calmed the waters inside me
It brought me into the now, placing my emotions where they needed to be
Thank you V
Valeriyabeyond said:
Your post insults the intelligence, of those who contribute to this thread In a positive way.
To assume we are under the direct power of someone that you have issue with is diminishing us as individuals.
It gives us the opportunity to spread love within this harsh world
I am requesting that you remove your post for all the reasons stated above
Appreciate your cooperation David
Much Love V
This was an innocent mistake although the complainants may not have portrayed it that way. I simply did not read the guidelines and dived right in You know what most men feel about reading the instructions for anything.
I have taken on board your stated guidelines with respect and will follow them to the letter. I apologize unreservedly and personally to you for not having read the guidelines of this tread thoroughly and firstly.
Valeriyabeyond said:
Your post insults the intelligence, of those who contribute to this thread In a positive way.
To assume we are under the direct power of someone that you have issue with is diminishing us as individuals.
I will however take issue with you on these to statements. This, I will contact you about, privately as not to affect in any way the ethos of this thread. Needless to say, I disagree with the framing of it
Once explained I would ask you to consider removing these two statements only.
Love and Respect as always - David
Your post insults the intelligence, of those who contribute to this thread In a positive way.
To assume we are under the direct power of someone that you have issue with is diminishing us as individuals.
It gives us the opportunity to spread love within this harsh world
I am requesting that you remove your post for all the reasons stated above
Appreciate your cooperation David
Much Love V
This was an innocent mistake although the complainants may not have portrayed it that way. I simply did not read the guidelines and dived right in You know what most men feel about reading the instructions for anything.
I have taken on board your stated guidelines with respect and will follow them to the letter. I apologize unreservedly and personally to you for not having read the guidelines of this tread thoroughly and firstly.
Valeriyabeyond said:
Your post insults the intelligence, of those who contribute to this thread In a positive way.
To assume we are under the direct power of someone that you have issue with is diminishing us as individuals.
I will however take issue with you on these to statements. This, I will contact you about, privately as not to affect in any way the ethos of this thread. Needless to say, I disagree with the framing of it
Once explained I would ask you to consider removing these two statements only.
Love and Respect as always - David
Deeper Things
Each first light, misty
opportunity disperses
our sleep into routine—
unveils the art of kaizen
We strive for perfection
in the everyday mundane—
brewing a pot of tea;
clearing our sacred space
asking not that others change
to suit our needs;
but, that we walk more patiently
understanding deeper things
~
opportunity disperses
our sleep into routine—
unveils the art of kaizen
We strive for perfection
in the everyday mundane—
brewing a pot of tea;
clearing our sacred space
asking not that others change
to suit our needs;
but, that we walk more patiently
understanding deeper things
~
Written by Ahavati
(Tams)
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