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Erotica Done Right 18+!!!

Kinkpoet
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elsiesan
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"innate feminine scent"

It's hot outside  
Skimpy dress
Naked underneath
Nipples protruding
You intent on reading
I walk close by
Me on a mission
My innate
Feminine scent
Your nostrils
Cannot deny
My draped nakedness
Brushing past you
Resistance impossible  
Reaching out to me
"Come closer"
Turning toward you
You reel me in
As I stand
Between your legs
Desire beginning
To rage
Your nestled breath
Haunts my nipples
Your restless tongue
Wets my dress
As you kiss
Hardened nipples
Through my dress
Your head
In my hands
I hold you close
Your hands move
Exploring my behind
Fingers ever so slightly
Touching me
My posture
Imploring you
To ignite
Our journey
Of delight
Of star burst prisms
Of who we are
Finger on my bud
Pressuring it
Know what I like
Slipping down
Into the space
Of pure delight
Holding it there
Teasing me
"Make me want you"
I whisper in your ear
Your steely member
Peaks out
Your underwear
Your hands
Around my waist
You sit me atop
Your hardened man
At the pleasure door
To the inner me
Gazing into my eyes
You hold me there
In lustful stillness
Hips move
Opening the door  
Wanting you to feel
Intensity of my need
My true desire
My want
Breathless, you lift me up
Trying not empty me
Arranging me
Beginning your assault
Of my deep within
I begin to fully
Accept you
Your swollen man
Your girth
Your want
Your skin
I cradle you  
Tears begin rolling
As I whisper
"I must have you"
Can be no other way
Please help me
I'm falling deeply
Into a crevasse  
Swallowing me
Thought I was ok
Ams wrapped bout me
You have ignited a fire
Almost too dangerous
To hold within

Written by elsiesan
Published 15th Mar 2020 | Edited 16th Mar 2020

Author's Note
The photo above I have had on my iPad home for sometime now. I love that seductive nature of the placement of the penis.

Kinkpoet
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Perfect Date

you merged into me on the couch
shoulder nestled into armpit

Robert Anton Wilson on the TeeVee screen
explains quantum physics while we make out

tongues snaking down throats
fingers squeezing nipples

dick and clit engorging and engaging
as minds are blown

© 2020 Raibeart Bruis

Blackwolf
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Are you familiar with Crowley and Sex Magick , Kink ?

Let alone I was answering Valeriya's posts after she
posted them , regarding the brain , sex magick , and
other things along  that line , such as rituals...

So , I believe everything , at it's core , was dealing with sex , and the brain...

As well , the effects of magick , and ritual , to effect the brain...

Valeriyabeyond
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Kinkpoet said:Perfect Date

you merged into me on the couch
shoulder nestled into armpit

Robert Anton Wilson on the TeeVee screen
explains quantum physics while we make out

tongues snaking down throats
fingers squeezing nipples

dick and clit engorging and engaging
as minds are blown

© 2020 Raibeart Bruis


Haha good response Kink
I have a sexual response to just about everything
Big words make me cum
I see yoni's in nature

elsiesan
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Forum Posts: 122


"Young Girl Fantasy"

To be held in your arms    
To be cradled atop your lap  
To be enveloped by you  
Slow and deliberate movement    
Of your hands on my body    
Cuddling me    
Caressing me  
Brushing across my nipples    
I could feel myself blush    
Even if you could not see it    
 
He doesn't realize the    
Depth of Intensity    
I am under his spell    
Pulling me in deeper    
Tugging at me    
His maleness I could tell    
My own desires welling up    
 
He has me in his caress    
Atop his lap    
His hand so slightly    
Brrushes my breasts    
Embarrassed, I giggle a bit    
Making believe I didn't notice    
 
Still cradling me    
Atop his lap    
A blanket he did place    
I get quiet    
I like secrets    
Under blankets    
Oh, so much fun    
 
Still cradling me    
He squeezes my foot    
One and then the other    
Massaging my feet    
And toes each individually    
Moving up to my legs    
Around the ankle at first    
Then my calf    
Kneading each one to life    
 
Fingers barely touch me elsewhere    
Lighting up repressed emotions    
Suppressed physical feelings    
Accidentally, touching my private parts    
I didn't think too much about it    
Hands moved up my legs to my thighs    
Where my privates meet my legs    
I felt a stirring    
That familiar feeling i only felt    
in my uncle's bed    
 
Hands are massaging    
My thighs one hand on each thigh    
As you look at me,    
I look away    
Hoping you will not see    
The moment in me    
 
He then lifted me    
Carried me to bed's edge    
Never took eyes off me    
His hands still rubbing me    
Then all of a sudden    
Drawing a deep breath    
He took hold of my panties    
Said lets take these off    
I say ok,    
Not really sure of what I was saying    
Only knowing    
Every move of his hand    
His fingers upon my body    
Was so delightful    
Filled me with bliss    
Near breathless    
Even though I knew not why    
 
Your hands tugged at my panties    
I lifted my rear    
You pulled them down    
The length of my legs    
Removing each leg gently    
Laying each    
Upon the edge of the bed    
Then the other    
 
There, there you said    
May i keep rubbing your legs    
Let me feel your your muscles    
And your soft skin    
I said ok    
 
Under the blanket    
As you looked into eyes    
To see how I would be    
Massaging, gently stroking    
Up and down the length    
Of my thighs    
Your hand barely touches    
My private parts
I could feel you    
Across my fleshy mound    
Your fingers the slit you find    
I lay ever so still    
 
What will you do next    
As I anxiously await    
I squirm, your finger pressing    
The slit of me    
You run your moistened finger    
The tiny length of my slit    
Again and again until    
You push it into me    
Opening me    
You hold it there    
As if to see my reaction    
I do not move    
Not even an eyelid flutter    
 
Then to my astonishment    
Your finger reaches into me    
A bit deeper, then deeper still    
And, as if giving my permission    
A little gasp I did release    
You move into me deeper yet    
Your other hand finds    
That funny part of me    
That nodule, my clit    
A gradual pressure on it    
With a finger    
Making me breath funny    
Your other hand, its finger    
In between the sllt    
Inside my girl privacy    
Your finger still on my clit    
You pull your other finger out    
Inserting it again    
And again, as I am near delirious    
You remove your finger    
 
You tell me turn over    
So on my tummy I go    
I could feel you    
Pull the cover from me    
Cupping each side of my bottom    
Your hands stroking my butt    
Long gentle strides    
One hand stops    
Other keeps moving    
Stirrings tickling my innards    
Feeling me with your fingers    
All over my bottom    
Touching so you don't    
Miss my crack    
Hands move along the entire length    
Of my bottom's crack    
 
Suddenly stopping    
You push your finger down in,    
Down in, stroking me    
And down in again.    
Your hands goes down in again    
Reaching for the front private part of me    
You say ok hon    
I want you to turn back over    
But first, you tell me,    
A toy to insert in my butt    
I say ok    
You promise it won't hurt    
I say ok again    
 
You spread my butt cheeks    
Apply cold wet stuff    
With the tip of a finger    
It got all wet and messy    
You push in deeper    
And deeper yet    
Removing your finger    
Toy in me you begin to insert    
A little at first    
Waited and pushed    
In some more    
I kind of screeched    
Not knowing what to expect    
But gentle and reassuring    
As you slowly inserted it    
I could feel it hurt a bit    
As I jerked    
You said it's ok hon    
We are almost there    
You can do it    
Just relax and let me do it    
I relaxed as best I could    
It hurt but I let you do it    
Cause you wanted to    
You seemed to like it    
And I knew I would be ok with you    
 
Leaving it in and turn me back over    
Your hand starts rubbing    
On my belly and chest    
Pressing down on my belly    
Makes me feel like I had to pee    
Your hand finds it way    
To where I pee    
Fingers stroking me    
I laid there    
Using me as you pleased    
Pushing his index finger    
Into my opening    
Pushing my legs apart    
I lie perfectly still    
A teasing finger dipping into me    
And deeper still    
I feel him    
Not knowing what to do    
Finger going deeper still    
Reach into the forbidden deep    
Suddenly and without warning    
You pull your man out    
Firmly holding me into place    
Spreading my legs all way    
Holding your penis    
You press into my tight    
Pussy, barely    
Inserting it into me    
Then with a slight thrust    
You push into the virginity of me    
Pushing yourself into me    
I feel how you are    
Am fearful and calm    
You go up and down    
Pushing in me, out of me    
In me, out of me    
Eventually stopping    
You take it all the way out    
Turn me over again    
Wanting to push into my butt    
I say ok not realizing    
How much it will hurt    
I am a big girl
I can do it    
 
Push it into my bottom    
Pulling me into you    
Pressing into me causing me to shriek    
In pain as you entered me from behind    
You have complete and total control of me    
I'm wet, messy    
Can barely move    
You go up and down in my rear    
Moaning deep and faster    
With each thrust    
I want to please you    
So I do this for you    
You are my daddy    
And as you explode    
I love you I say    
I want to play again    
Someday I say    
You say, ok hon so do I

Written by elsiesan
Published 24th Aug 2019 | Edited Today

Author's Note
elsiesan
elsie = L.C. little connie, my inner little girl
san = the 1st three letters of Sicilian birth name

Elsiesan has been awakened from a dormancy. She has scratched and clawed her way to the surface and is where my sexuality stems.

As a victim of molestation, I have come to appreciate and own that part of me, embracing her story. In my opinion, religiosity has succeeded in fragmenting our natural systems, recked havac and censored until we no longer recognize our core-beings thereby altering the foundation of our existence.

Thus this poem. And although, not entirely true, is representative of elsiesan's story. I chose to acknowledge her existence. Condemnation is no longer valid for me.

I apologize for triggering. I must be me, all of me

Valeriyabeyond
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Shocking response we've discussed previously in private before Elsie
Much Love V

elsiesan
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Yes.  I do not condone any tyoe of violence, however I think it apprapo that these things be included into our stories. We cannot become, if we do not include. Thank you for your comment.

Kinkpoet
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Blackwolf said:Are you familiar with Crowley and Sex Magick , Kink ?

Let alone I was answering Valeriya's posts after she
posted them , regarding the brain , sex magick , and
other things along  that line , such as rituals...

So , I believe everything , at it's core , was dealing with sex , and the brain...

As well , the effects of magick , and ritual , to effect the brain...


II am here to enjoy erotic writing and discussion of such, not analysis and promotion of belief systems. I will refrain from further commentary,on those aspects and focus  on the other aspects of the forum.

Valeriyabeyond
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Kinkpoet said:https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/389900-first-date/

Why yes it does Kink
A master after my own heart

elsiesan
Fire of Insight
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Forum Posts: 122

I want to thank Blackwolf, Sky_dancer and Valerlyabeyond for the education and insight into various philosophies.  I think these concepts are inherent in our systems and all hold truths in some fashion, some more than the others, even the philosophical mores of the religious zealots that condemn our work. It's just too bad they cannot see beyond the written page as they expound on it at face value and continue the brainwashing and falsehoods into world societies.  

I often speak of living in fairy tales, afterall fairy tales are based in reality.  I am really quite uneducated in these concepts. I rely on my inner intuitive nature and, although I am aware, I am an unreliable source of information. I wish i would have been more of an avid learner. My base instincts controlled me early, careening me nearly out of control.  I have an extremely difficult time sitting still for any length of time and the situation is far more worse as the years go by.  

And yes, these are very much a part of our base instincts albeit an altered state. We have come a long way through the various stages of humankind. I hope we do not become extinct with our modes of thought.  It is amazing how destructive humankind can be and how totally thoughtless in ignorance. The old saying. "Ignorance is bliss," speaks for itself.

Thank you.  

Kinkpoet
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Valeriyabeyond said:

Why yes it does Kink
A master after my own heart


🤠

Valeriyabeyond
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I've been both places Elsie
the fantasy world that revolves around sex
And I've been to the analytical place where I would analyze my sexual feelings
I had to know psychologically why?
Now I mostly just create perversion in my head and enjoy my space
I haven't had sex in almost two years my writing and my kinky friends here keep me alive
And a big Thank you to my fav poet CasketSharpe

souladareatease
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Worships Kiss


O encompass me 
young lady of light
I swell within Your grasp
fall under every
hidden spell

She 
loved in starlight
kissed by sunshine
arches of respite , call
my siren, my queen for restless night 

Dream, my mind cries 
as lines form address  
driven urgent swirl and wrest 
we enclasp with jovial touch 
eyes lock heat and eternal flame 

O heroine held precious
swoon thy sighed 
woken, lush by midnights moon
we shall shatter together 
sweating deviant under vices grip

Grandiose lavish pours to skin
swallowing every drop drip by drip
such known valley's travelled
grown tall upon vital peaks
whole presence personify, love

Valeriyabeyond
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Beautiful magic
Soul

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