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Erotica Done Right 18+!!!

Sky_dancer
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Irony that I should start this thread, but here I am to open the gates. A lot of us here LOVE sex, erotica and writing about it. Time to shine pervs!

There's no rules here, just do no harm. Do. No. Harm. I fucking mean it. Don't be a cunt is the only rule, ok? We're all here to share beautiful erotic writing, freely, without shame, without judgement. Let's heal here. Let's use our sexual creativity together. And, let's discuss it without any bullshit either. Don't oppress free speech. Fuck, another rule. Ok, two rules...

That's all. Get your fucks on!

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My most read stuff is my favourite genre to write in...

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/sort/poems-by/Sky_dancer/most-reads/

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Holding off posting here as we're having a good debate. A mass one. Should we have a group?

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Sky_dancer said:Holding off posting here as we're having a good debate. A mass one. Should we have a group?

A group for discussion? And posting
Would be an idea it would keep away the ones who don't appreciate the many different forms of writing styles of erotica.
It would feel more liberating

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Valeriya said:

A group for discussion? And posting
Would be an idea it would keep away the ones who don't appreciate the many different forms of writing styles of erotica.
It would feel more liberating


I think so. I'm bored of judgemental puritans looking down on erotica like it's below them. They even come into erotic poetry comps just to add their judgemental "this isn't art, it's just porn" comments. *slow clap*

I don't get muggles, at all. Make no sense to me.

I'm glad you're on board Val! I'd like a safe space for us to feel like we can share our filth without fear of someone coming along just to announce their disapproval.


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Dreaming Of Venus

She wrapped her lips around the head of the long-necked bottle
sucking back white frothy foam and the last drips of its golden aged perfection.

Her eyes moved seductively to the corner where I lay, bound helpless by silk scarves and naked for over an hour, my cock taut purple; ready to peel out of its skin.

Earlier as She had coaxed me onto the bed and secured me to it, she began winding a purple ribbon round and about my jewels slowly forming a barber pole pattern to the length of my girth; fashioning a knot just under the head.
She said, "when Your meat matches the colour of its prison, you'll be ready for proper carnal knowledge."

The wicks of the candles danced by ceiling fan as flames coursed their way up my inches, spreading heat across my whole body, my mind was with constant struggle, trapped in trance by her legs and slow measured clicks; to her heels that stood straight buckled at the calf wrapping the white of my eyes to ultimate sin.

She leaned over the bed letting her sheer blouse fall open, just enough for my tongue to produce copious amounts of juice; the delicate fingers trimmed by French allure, slowly unwrapped my throbbing flesh, not once looking away for me to lose myself in her eyes; I glistened.

Whispering heated tones with nuzzle to my ear, her tongue explored the notes welling up from my throat; a nail then two scraping the twitching flesh, rubbing a soft forefinger to collect her owned juices that leaked profusely from my member.


~She swirled a collection mixing the lotion between both hands, plunging one hand to part my lips and the other to hers locking eyes with an animals moan.~

Lifting her leg she slid her shin and shoe along my thigh and stomach,
Positioning herself to straddle my body.
Her shining fingers slowly raised up the ebony skirt, showing off the beauty that embodied the elixir in bare cunning fashion; I melted savoring this view and what was to come.

Eyes locked in level till she rose up grasping my hair into a clenched grip, guiding my head, lips, tongue and breath to inhale and exhale every bit of living heaven; it was her world and she let me know it, grinding my face and steering my locks as my tongue lavished and flickered with hum and absolution.

I sucked at the sides of her butterflied lips between each treasured lick holding a lock to her push-start button to begin the type of moan I feverishly desired to hear;
Her grip tightened and clawed between my hair as I popped my lips fervently darting my tongue to match her flutter.
The world breathed and pulsed matched by my own pumping blood, reaching in screams as the decent of the waterfall lay flood covering and filling all below; this was my mess to clean up and hungrily though gently, I consumed all that was delivered.

~She came down from the heavens like the Goddess she was, turning from man only to smirk at his allegiance.~

The holy temple now empty, she sought to rectify this instantly, raising herself up to hover the ivory tower; slowly descending with cries from us both that split the night, her  Nirvana closing tight around my Manna, she roamed the length with slow twist and a heartbeat pulse to a rocking-horse ride.

~The buck of the stallion kicked as she began to gallop, reaching for the perfect speed with which to run wild~

Throbs beckoned as I clenched my teeth, thumping harder to shoo them away.
Her ass danced with spirited rhythm while moans, grunts and Oh's escaped from the dance floor.
The drips of gasoline lit she grabbed tight to my sides; this told me we were headed straight for the first sunset.

~Fires burning hot we sweat out every impure deed that lusted within our eye~

The grounds shook with the rumble
and screams were heard by every neighbor, the walls rattled with picture-perfect travesty; as we both exploded like the very first mountains, enraptured by the spilling over laying waste to all within and out.

~Ties unwind and other wraps begin to bear presence, as the kisses deliver and the occasional nip, works it's way back to where all heavenly birthdays began~


 
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Hey Sky,
I'm posting one here for Your thread...
I never Write this style, but there are times I've tried.
When first coming to DU I started off trying to Write Erotic in nature....it was God-awful.
Slowly my writing got a little better (at least in my own mind)
somewhere I moved away from wanting to write in that style (cuz I had pounded it into the ground)
This one came along a little later at an attempt to try a little better.
Anyhooo
Many come to Write erotic and it is proven to have the most reads...addiction for some, fun for others, fun with others
But I think many have the view, its like a Burger King commercial....
One  loves such junky goodness...especially slow motion over the creamy parts......when it is put on constant repeat...it begins to lose its flavor and appeal .......thing is ...essentially - YoU choose to click and read, so if it offers up disgust, there  is only one person to blame.

For me...I change with the weather...Camel in the desert to sentimentalist.
Taste well...that's a personal journey isn't it?
I may never really write well in this manner...yet it is a style like any other that has it's place.
There are many here at DU that Write smoothly in this genre.



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I agree with the dear poet above me that erotica may lose its flavor after sometime I have found that in my own writing There are only so many words or phrases to describe an erect penis.  I have written several different types of erotica from smut to romance and also some very sexy what I would definitely consider poetry.
The key is to have a good plot story line or excellent characters Miki49 the Peeping Tom Saga which I loved is a good example of steamy dirty erotica done right her lead character if you will was interesting enough to read again and again
I would like to hear more

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Amazing, thank you Soul and Val!

I'll begin posting some of my faves soon...

I began here with erotica, it's the genre that, for me, is the most beautiful. I love nature and that's the beauty of nature for me.

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The best erotic writer here in my audacious opinion:

https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/sort/poems-by/Kinkpoet/most-reads/

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Okay i just found this thread and have no idea why i did not find it back when it was created.

it has not posted in awhile so here is an attempt to revive it i will try to give it CPR as long as i can, hoping the OP and others participate

My poems are all over the map but my home page says this is my favorite genre , and my home page would not lie to me would it ?  

So here we go ...

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Rule Number Three :

We have no reason to heal , if we post erotica...

Fuck That Thought !

Anyone who does not embrace their whole self ,
which includes what some would separately term
the erotic , is , what some would term psychotic ,
and mentally fragmented , let alone , magnetically ,
and electrically , closed down...

I shall be posting in here , as I will , without condemnation , or *any* judgement...

That is how I *rock and roll*...


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Blackwolf said:
I shall be posting in here , as I will , without condemnation , or *any* judgement...

That is how I *rock and roll*...



And I will be raising my glass to this newly declared judgement free zone!!!!!

cheers to erotica / porn/ sexuality/ hot / wet/ whatever the fuck you wanna call it

It now has a home

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Better be a large glass , for four 9 percent Rasputin's every night...:)

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Blackwolf said:Better be a large glass , for four 9 percent Rasputin's every night...:)

you say this like people drink whiskey out of small glasses

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