Poetry competition CLOSED 10th June 2019 6:35am
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Naajir
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Poem of the Month - June 2019

crimsin
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paramporul~ the god particle

 
 
 
[in the details…’it' breathes & conspires...]
 
 
sugarcane inflorescence sways silken white  
in its gracefully maturing greyish ribbon  
hairs..bears the mating papilionids stuck over  
each other in devotional renditions  
of a stilled mesmerize...
suddenly flap in a wake of ruffling flutters  
just when the vermilion painted lady bird beetles  
hypnotize at the bud tips & tanning sun  
that’s gradually in a romantic dimming  
of the  yellow slanting holy turmeric  
limelight into
a crinkly charred darkening in a hauntingly  
digging chaos of the stridulating crickets  
with a rarity reversal curtaining down  
in their tighteningly stuck closing up  
touch-me-nots…orthodoxically facultative  
in a shrunken bridal shyness...against  
the drooping down fragile melancholy  
that these white-widowed capsicum buds  
are poignantly hung in a quizzical phasal  
clashing intermediary of a faintly reminiscing  
to almost forgotten inborne pungencies…
 
 
 
((existential bubble bursts eventual unto ‘its’ un-manifest ??
 
bubble . a bubble is a parallel 11 eleven  
grilled bars of its own isolated Andaman island’s  
Kalapani Cellulars… jailed in a flash of moment
 ..even the light fails them to be their so-selves  
 
‘No Fear No Fear Never Fear ..Fear is never ever there’
proclaims the red rebellion turban poet of freedom, Bharathi  
boldening ever unknown to fear, just to be in the ousting and  
busting out the inner demons & those nacreously veiled evils  
 
your tangentially drawn & provincially divisive  
pillared walls of plundering tactical equations  
in blindly bloodied shoot outs of your  
unleashed fascistic Generals Dyer’s  
bulleted rounds after rounds without any warring siren
…in a maniacally enacted Jallianwala Bagh massacre  
within your ruthlessly fallen enclosure of piled up corpses  
wouldn’t deter its unimaginably conjoined…the impossibly  
bent O of its Oneness Om- the God particle of Cosmic  
Consciousness in its vacuity of nothingness newness-

 
 
 
 ~'It’s'  an endless micromacrocosmic reservoir~
 
this burning hunger…
is not a deserted death in vacuity  
…its that coital clutching of our remnantal umbilical tissue  
in its infinitesimally infinite bled shreds & illumine dusts  
clumping as beautifully laboured births in breathing  
nascence  
 
and this heady quench...
is not never in an awkwardly gulped fulfilling  
complacence, of a noonish lazing swollen python  
in its still struggling wriggly devoured prey  
it’s that serially butterflying wavy dotted  
lightness continuum in a geometrical kolam
....an infinitely infinitesimal left out spatial ignorance  
of a child’s curious blinking peacockish eyelashes  
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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smackdownraven
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My  Dad's Wedding Ring

My dad and I had a complicated relationship
I've written of this before
About a year ago I found his wedding ring
To honor his memory I wore it for the past year
Then suddenly 2 nights ago took it off
Returned it gently to a metal box on my desk

I realized yesterday that I can't wear that ring again
He was a quiet man who kept his entire life secret
I am a poet and an artist
Everything is out in the open
He was always moral
I've had issues with that

Wearing his ring was an honor
I can't be him
I wouldn't want to
I don't think he'd want to be me
Flesh and blood
Even in death there is love and protest
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The winner of this competition and any runners up were decided by public vote.

Thank you to the following members for voting:

nutbuster, LivDiane, Kinkpoet, Hunterapsych, AspergerPoet56, SweetOblivion, Stoney223, JusTim_, TIG, Heaven_sent_Kathy, Erotic_Goddess, David_Macleod, ImperfectedStone, Amorous_tryst, crimsin, Juvenalis66, cold_fusion, brokentitanium, Marks, eswaller, PoetsRevenge, _shadoe_, SilverBeaver_42, SkyeCebh

poet Anonymous



congrats T`Allen ...

AspergerPoet56
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Congratulations on your win Tallen

Jade-Pandora
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People...

Tallen was the one who nominated “The Absence Of.....” written by Naajir.

Naajir is the trophy-winner, made possible by Tallen’s nomination - good choice, brother T !!👍🏼

And congratulations, Naajir !!👏🏼

poet Anonymous

Jade-Pandora said:People...

Tallen was the one who nominated “The Absence Of.....” written by Naajir.

Naajir is the trophy-winner, made possible by Tallen’s nomination - good choice, brother T !!👍🏼

And congratulations, Naajir !!👏🏼




Hmm ... maybe someone ought to change that Trophy then

Congrats Naajir


Tallen
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DevlinDLC said:



Hmm ... maybe someone ought to change that Trophy then

Congrats Naajir



The Webmiss will do this tomorrow.  It's how these nominating comps work.

This is my 2nd time where someone i nominated won  

Congrats Naajir!!  

AspergerPoet56
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Oops congratulations Naajir my mistake 😂😂

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DevlinDLC said:



Hmm ... maybe someone ought to change that Trophy then

Congrats Naajir


See, the system can’t tell the one who wrote the poem apart from the member who nominated it. For competitions where poems nominated are voted on, Webmiss comes in after some time, and she sets it right, being the only one who can.  So brother Tallen gets to have the trophy on his wall for the time being... keep it well-polished, T.

poet Anonymous

Jade-Pandora said:
See, the system can’t tell the one who wrote the poem apart from the member who nominated it. For competitions where poems nominated are voted on, Webmiss comes in after some time, and she sets it right, being the only one who can.  So brother Tallen gets to have the trophy on his wall for the time being... keep it well-polished, T.


Thank you for the clarifications.  Maybe I should spend more time educating myself on how this place works and a lot less time reading poetry.

And not to be rude to you, Jade or Tallen, but if I wanted an opinion to my comment I would have simply asked for it.



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My apologies, Naajir ... great poem and congrats!

Tallen
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DevlinDLC said:

Thank you for the clarifications.  Maybe I should spend more time educating myself on how this place works and a lot less time reading poetry.

And not to be rude to you, Jade or Tallen, but if I wanted an opinion to my comment I would have simply asked for it.




Was only meant as an education for not just You but everyone who didn't know.


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The winning poem is The Absence Of..... by Naajir (nominated by Tallen).

Congratulations to the winner and thank you to everyone who nominated and/or voted.

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Jade-Pandora said:
See, the system can’t tell the one who wrote the poem apart from the member who nominated it. For competitions where poems nominated are voted on, Webmiss comes in after some time, and she sets it right, being the only one who can.  So brother Tallen gets to have the trophy on his wall for the time being... keep it well-polished, T.


Thanks for clearing this up for people. I have updated the winner now. A recent change means we can at least see the winning poem immediately, as the winning post is highlighted within the thread


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