Favourite DU Poem?
Duncan
Duncan Alexander
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Duncan Alexander
Dangerous Mind
1
Joined 4th May 2010Forum Posts: 2144
I don't know if this is my favourite but I think the end lines ring true and we all have to man up and face that at some stage in our lives. That or die.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9239-solitude/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/9239-solitude/
bastardofbodom666
Helvete Blod
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Helvete Blod
Fire of Insight
5
Joined 6th Apr 2011Forum Posts: 804
I don't know why but this is my favorite of mine. It's one of my oldest works so it's a lot different in style than my modern stuff.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/17306-prepare-for-the-nightmare/
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/17306-prepare-for-the-nightmare/
mjs211
MikeTheEngineer
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MikeTheEngineer
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 22nd Aug 2010Forum Posts: 1572
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/28611-madman-diaries/
I agree with Abra in a different thread (forgive me if I misquote, it's been awhile since I've seen it) when he said "my latest is generally my favorite." But I remember the feeling of accomplishment upon finishing of this one, so I'll go with it for now.
I agree with Abra in a different thread (forgive me if I misquote, it's been awhile since I've seen it) when he said "my latest is generally my favorite." But I remember the feeling of accomplishment upon finishing of this one, so I'll go with it for now.
Whitewand6
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Dangerous Mind
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Anonymous
hey opheliac
I love your willow tree .
Blue Skies
I love your willow tree .
Blue Skies
Duncan
Duncan Alexander
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Duncan Alexander
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 4th May 2010Forum Posts: 2144
Whitewand I really enjoyed that..
Oblivion sounds a bit lonely though.
;)
Oblivion sounds a bit lonely though.
;)
siphondarkness
Levi
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Levi
Dangerous Mind
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Fate and true love- 1tornheart
Karrabear
Question
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Question
Fire of Insight
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Joined 29th Aug 2009Forum Posts: 416
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/32051-rummors-feed-your-death/
this one, becasue i got really angry at some kids at school who i guess couldn't really understand the gravity of the situation that a kid was dead. Didn't matter if he went to our school or is it was almost halloween. A kid was dead and would never come home again.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/10566-the-future-belongs-to-the-present/
and this. hahaha...not sure what i was thinking, but i guess its okay.
(and if anyone wants to look, would y'all take a look at some of my poems {first two pages? recentish} and make a suggestion on what I can turn in for my english poem assignment? I haven't a clue)
this one, becasue i got really angry at some kids at school who i guess couldn't really understand the gravity of the situation that a kid was dead. Didn't matter if he went to our school or is it was almost halloween. A kid was dead and would never come home again.
http://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/10566-the-future-belongs-to-the-present/
and this. hahaha...not sure what i was thinking, but i guess its okay.
(and if anyone wants to look, would y'all take a look at some of my poems {first two pages? recentish} and make a suggestion on what I can turn in for my english poem assignment? I haven't a clue)
Drivel
O my fucking God!
I scribbled another piece of shit on the parchment
And when the monk returns from the city
He’s gonna kick my ass…again!
I am a brain dead scribe - still...
Still jotting down shit for a monk in a dank cave
In a mountain in Tibet.
I AM NO MONK! I am not even certain I wanna be (pompous Fuck!).
I haven’t been formerly trained and this fucking monk
doesn’t show me shit (damn selfish bastard).
Perhaps, my lack of correct syllable
Comes from way too much drink!
Hah! As if that monk saw through my dribble
Of which I continue (to think).....
to scribe.
I scribbled another piece of shit on the parchment
And when the monk returns from the city
He’s gonna kick my ass…again!
I am a brain dead scribe - still...
Still jotting down shit for a monk in a dank cave
In a mountain in Tibet.
I AM NO MONK! I am not even certain I wanna be (pompous Fuck!).
I haven’t been formerly trained and this fucking monk
doesn’t show me shit (damn selfish bastard).
Perhaps, my lack of correct syllable
Comes from way too much drink!
Hah! As if that monk saw through my dribble
Of which I continue (to think).....
to scribe.
Written by Tallen
(earth_empath)
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gothicsurrealism
Daniel Long
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Daniel Long
Thought Provoker
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Joined 26th Nov 2018 Forum Posts: 184
Psyche of the Dark Poet
Sanity is an unsympathetic creature lurking in our blind spots.
If the dusky rays of Gothic art can’t cast out this relentless foe,
Then our gift of imagination and will of expressionism
will ignite its stalking shadow with a vengeance.
I’m proud to be of another psyche.
Without it, would we write
with such metaphorical beauty?
I think not.
In fact,
all these words
would be ordinary.
The hell with ordinary!
I want my head to whirl around without the sense
of what is in front or in back of me.
Can a head spin 360 degrees?
Imagination could.
It can turn this head again and again
until it screws off its spine and lands by my feet.
Even then, I’m not spitting dirt,
I’m chewing what the world has discarded,
Whether it be taboo or the unspeakable,
it belongs to me.
My words, my feelings, my thoughts,
there’s no defined script for imagination.
Latch the hooks into our mouths
with what you think is true
but they will not open for you
or in a way in which you’d perceive.
The distinct silhouette of reality will be within sight,
the metaphor, however;
will have a shadow which blends
into the most potent of light.
Wherever the creature may lie,
its white eyes illuminated in some dark shadow.
Now and again
its claws sting the outer reaches of my body.
If the dusky rays of Gothic art can’t cast out this relentless foe,
Then our gift of imagination and will of expressionism
will ignite its stalking shadow with a vengeance.
I’m proud to be of another psyche.
Without it, would we write
with such metaphorical beauty?
I think not.
In fact,
all these words
would be ordinary.
The hell with ordinary!
I want my head to whirl around without the sense
of what is in front or in back of me.
Can a head spin 360 degrees?
Imagination could.
It can turn this head again and again
until it screws off its spine and lands by my feet.
Even then, I’m not spitting dirt,
I’m chewing what the world has discarded,
Whether it be taboo or the unspeakable,
it belongs to me.
My words, my feelings, my thoughts,
there’s no defined script for imagination.
Latch the hooks into our mouths
with what you think is true
but they will not open for you
or in a way in which you’d perceive.
The distinct silhouette of reality will be within sight,
the metaphor, however;
will have a shadow which blends
into the most potent of light.
Wherever the creature may lie,
its white eyes illuminated in some dark shadow.
Now and again
its claws sting the outer reaches of my body.
Written by gothicsurrealism
(Daniel Long)
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Still feel this piece is underrated!