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Dear Black Girl...

KayBeeMapes
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 14th Oct 2018
Forum Posts: 14

This is beautiful

LibraSoul96
Fire of Insight
United States 1awards
Joined 1st July 2015
Forum Posts: 541

Thank u so much sister😊😊😍😍 I appreciate that. When I seen the topic at hand I felt that I need to put my pen to work and give my input on this title. For we are all one in the same and has to except that our skin is beautifully made.

lebombo
Vizual Assassin
Lost Thinker
South Africa
Joined 9th Mar 2016
Forum Posts: 19

Being On The Edge

Being On The Edge
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wallyroo92
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 11th July 2012
Forum Posts: 1867

Dear Black Girl...

Dear black girl on the 6 o’clock 44 bus,
I still remember you after all this time,
How your “man” got on and sat at the back,
While you struggled with your babies,
He was on his phone talking smack.

Dear black girl, for some reason I felt your strain,
Your sick child asleep in your arms in pain,
Trying to keep the other from moving around the bus,
While the jerk off in the back talked brashly and cussed.

Dear black girl, your silence spoke volumes out loud,
Frustrated with the situation amidst that small crowd,
But you kept your cool, that fool didn’t treat you right,
Because I know after this, you two were going to have a fight.

Dear black girl, I’m sorry for the way this “man” behaved and acted,
The worries you must’ve carried, you looked so distracted,
And when you tried to call him he said “Don’t interrupt I’m on the phone!”
It pissed me off for that disrespectful tone.

Then he told someone else, “I gotta be a man first”
Dick,
That’s the mother of your children,
You are just the worst,

Then I saw some strength somewhere surface within you dear black girl,
You sat a bit more upright like you were about to take on the world,
Your silence was deafening, a resilience so threatening,
As if your courage and fury was about to become unfurled.

Dear black girl, I sat on that bus quietly in admiration,
With those beautiful twins in your arms you had resignation,
And like a picturesque portrait of the sun reflecting on your face,
There was hope in your eyes, filled with faith and grace.

Heaven_sent_Kathy
Thought Provoker
United States 9awards
Joined 1st Nov 2017
Forum Posts: 177

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KayBeeMapes
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 14th Oct 2018
Forum Posts: 14

Wow. Such story telling

runaway-mindtrain
Dangerous Mind
United States 8awards
Joined 30th July 2017
Forum Posts: 903

Invocation

 
To hear a bird of happiness melodic theme
Flowing music rhyme into a wedding dream
Nature splashes our new love color scheme,
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Attuning these planes of thought extension
Singing dimension into a spiritual ascension,
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Her circle into my mind of concentric rings
A base of forms, our love across everything,
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We flow in day thru night, our sleeping rite
New creating soul feeling a heart forthright,
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Ain-soph shows our ancient number in key
From a formless dot, all things do proceed,
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Bringing the spirits from union to absolute
Unmanifested desires grow forbidden fruit,
To ride our bird of happiness with no refute...
Written by runaway-mindtrain
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CasketSharpe
Tyrant of Words
United States 16awards
Joined 12th June 2013
Forum Posts: 161

A Woman’s Choice

 “Most people cannot comprehend
That a pimp can have a woman as a friend,
 “She don’t always have to be that track star
Bumping and grinding out the backseat of a car,

 “The world’s oldest profession since the beginning of time
And you can impress me without selling behind,
 “Sell your conversation. Use what’s in your head
Without giving head and tearing down the bed,

 “Just because it’s on your ass don’t mean it’s an asset
And that’s something a woman should never forget,
 “Remember knowledge is the ultimate source of power
That’s why I’m collecting pimp dollars by the hour,

 “Pockets constantly fat from the money I collect
Helping the girl upstairs, because she was short on her welfare check,
 “To pay me back I could’ve put her on the stroll
Letting tricks hit that cookie and booty hole,

 “But I convinced her to pursue what she was yearning
Going back to school and complete her learning,
 “Because to me a woman’s more attractive with knowledge
So I fulfilled her wish and sent her to college,

 “Now four years had passed
As I’m watching her graduate at the top of her class,
 “I’m glad she made something of herself
Because anything can be accomplished with a little help,

 “Later we both went out for a bite
With her ending up at my house that night,
 “But before things got hot and erotic
I held back and told her to stop it,

 “She was a little shocked and understood
And from that moment all things were good,
 “Some may say this is strange for a hardcore pimp
But I knew from the beginning we had a special friendship.”
Written by CasketSharpe
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DijahDidDat
Strange Creature
Joined 30th Oct 2018
Forum Posts: 1

Beautiful!

KayBeeMapes
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 14th Oct 2018
Forum Posts: 14

This is vivid. The story, the voice behind it. I'm in love.

CasketSharpe
Tyrant of Words
United States 16awards
Joined 12th June 2013
Forum Posts: 161

Thank you. Had to show a different side of friendship.

Fetchitnow
Thought Provoker
2awards
Joined 20th Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 156

This Is Ghetto

As the gangsta dies
On a hot and humid Florida mornin'
A poor grievin' young wife is torn
This is ghetto
And his crew cries
'cause if there's one thing that they don't need
it's another corner boy to bleed
This is ghetto

Society, don't you understand
the hood needs a helping hand
or they'll grow to be all angry young men one day
Take a look at them and me,
are we too black to see,
do we simply shut our mouths
and speak in another way

While the hood rolls
and an inspired young boy with a funny jive
deals on the corner as he collects high fives
This is ghetto

And his crib burns
so he starts to scare the folks with fright
and he teaches how to deal
and he teaches how to bite
This is ghetto

Then one night in conversation
a young rat screams aloud
She buys a toy, steals a heart,
tries for fun, but it won't even start
Then her man tries

As the crew gathers 'round a stupid young hoe
face down in the pillow with a dildo in her snatch
This is ghetto

As the neighbourhood sighs
On a hot and humid Florida mornin'
Another poor grievin' young wife is torn
This is ghetto
Written by Fetchitnow
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Dear Black Girl

Fetchitnow
Thought Provoker
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Joined 20th Apr 2015
Forum Posts: 156

This is Killadelphia

Do you want all those dudes hangin' in front of ya momma's crib?  
Keep yo' churrin' off the streets and away from where the big boys fib  
I'm the king of hardcore and deserve a whole lot of respect  
My girls got a badonkadonk butt, it's so ballerific, it's what I expect  
I told her to stay the hell away from my precious new hooptie  
She tried to give me the third, but I just waved the no finger and popped her booty.  

Pimpin' aren't easy man, it's just that I've got that pimp juice, all the girls be wanting  
Art lovin' Landis, was the best damn scratcher & foolin' all the museum high pillows  
The women from the hood, come work for me, b'coz they're all the ghettos widows  
The jury couldn't charge him, but the so called art experts keep up their taunting  
Some have so much ice on their hands, I could do a figure eight on my skates  
If he would only paint his own, he would truly be one of this centuries greats.  
 
They told me if I don't pay, they're gonna pop a cap in my ass  
Man, I am ass out this month. I ain't got no kinda funds, I be on the nut, like glass  
These streets are crazy out here, it's just the way, it's the nature of the street  
While the popos and bulls are dancin' like great white sharks  
Barbering to us and cuttin' us no slack, be real with me son, damn narcs  
But we don't like to look like a punk in front of our boys, that'll be defeat.  
 
Their killing cats for real, all over the hood, where they don't belong  
Damn your pimp juice, your game is too strong  
He's the drug lord out here, the big boss dog  
The rest of his crew are little more than corner boys  
We are the ultimate big tymers, me and my son, cruisin' in da fog  
My boo be real and we be ballin-outta control with our toys.  
 
The cars windows were so dark, I could've got shot by a gun  
All the backstreet junkies now payin' for the big guns on the run  
We just heard Boom Boom Boom, we know not to bother  
Is he a relative? Yeah man, it's her dead brother  
We don't see anything, it's the hoods mentality  
Everybody's a curb side lawyer, but when we go to court, we lose that ability.  
 
Man, that chickenhead was booey, I want my 50 bucks back  
Chickenheads will always be on the prowl for some easy berry stack  
A thug is a way of life, made bad choices, now tryin' to survive  
This is Philadelphia, where we won't & don't shake hands to the jive  
Last year we were also known as Killadelphia  
So go home, breeze and call it a night, without no fear.
Written by Fetchitnow
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Dear Black Girl

Fetchitnow
Thought Provoker
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When I Wish Upon A Porn Star

Channelling Nostradamus from the sixteenth century  
Did you see what you just wrote  
Or did you just dream what we see?  
When your prophecies come true  
I'll say, You only had one view  
So good luck to you and your future note  
One shan't believe from an invisible visionary  
 
When I wish upon a porn star  
It makes me appreciate who we are  
Everything that she'll be requiring  
I'll think about you and make it inspiring  
 
The Nigga’s bitch always seems to wear lingerie  
That always looks, just a little vulgar  
But never ever, do they slavishly try  
To imitate their true identity or culture  
Not like those Kardashian dogs, that dress up  
Always trying to stylise society, for a very large fee  
Speaking of canines, where's that poodle named Paris  
She had some real talent, didn't she?  
 
When I wish upon a porn star  
It makes me appreciate who we are  
Everything that she'll be requiring  
I'll think about you and make it inspiring  
 
I wish upon a porn star of mine  
Whilst screaming up to ones heaven  
Most pussycats lives, end in about nine  
But my time was all over, in about seven  
Maybe I really could, make it all alone  
On this place god calls, my extraordinary rendition?  
Or shall I live this false life, as some sort of robotic clone  
Not truly knowing oneself, therefore, failing my own audition?  
 
When I wish upon a porn star  
It makes me appreciate who we are  
Everything that she'll be requiring  
I'll think about you and make it inspiring  
 
Well, just get back on that bronco horse, named Toff  
Dust off that hat, once worn by certain gent  
For they will forever try and attempt to buck you off  
You the rider, of this very serious event  
So, forget about the fame and good times  
and the overhyped lives of most Hollywood stars  
Live within your means and save your silver dimes  
In your half empty or half full, glass money jars  
 
When I wish upon a porn star  
It makes me appreciate who we are  
Everything that she'll be requiring  
I'll think about you and make it inspiring  
 
When I wish upon a porn star  
My dreams start to become truth by far.
Written by Fetchitnow
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Whynotme
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 4th July 2017
Forum Posts: 6

ok....another one...NOW!!! whoa!! really thoughtful and smooth ...quite the poetic conversation. thank you!!

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