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Poetry competition CLOSED 15th September 2018 3:26pm
WINNER
Eerie
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RUNNERS-UP: Jade-Pandora and LunasChild8

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DRINKING, SMOKING AND SCREWING

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brokentitanium
k.
Tyrant of Words
Canada 12awards
Joined 18th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 1230

Ambrosia

 
Sweet nectar of relaxation
Before I pour there’s trepidation
Internal talk of slippery slopes
Fear of judgement dashing hopes
leading to stealthy action

Pour quietly to avert detection
Casually contradict objection
Just a little bit, I say
The tension’s running high today
This will bring satisfaction

First sip gives desired reprieve
Loosening pressure I perceive
Anxieties about my folding
Seem like undeserved scolding
for such a minor infraction

The glass is gone, it doesn’t matter
Calm now instead of a mad hatter
I can just pour another one
Full-body buzz would sure be fun
In lieu of interaction

Another?  Sure - I feel alright
I could laugh or fuck or dance all night
Resistance is futile; keep it coming
Problems are gone and my mind is humming
Tomorrow I’ll regain traction

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snugglebuck
Dangerous Mind
United States 77awards
Joined 3rd Feb 2014
Forum Posts: 1873

Such great entries, from each and everyone of you.  This was DU at its best.  With such a field of excellence there is no way I could choose the winner.  

So, I requested a public vote.  

Jade-Pandora
jade tiger
Tyrant of Words
United States 154awards
Joined 9th Nov 2015
Forum Posts: 5134

Thanks to host Kim for the opportunity of this comp...

And my appreciation for those who voted, for our winner Eerie, Luna & my humble self.

Congratulations to all who participated!

Eerie
Dangerous Mind
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Joined 29th July 2018
Forum Posts: 891

A big thanks to Snugglebuck for hosting the competition! Congrats to Luna and Jade! And congrats to everyone who participated!
Thanks for the votes, guys. This really made my day :):):)

SatInUGal
Kumar
Dangerous Mind
United States 25awards
Joined 31st Dec 2015
Forum Posts: 941

I voted for the winner! Awesome! Congrats, Eerie!

LunasChild8
Dangerous Mind
Canada 21awards
Joined 27th Dec 2017
Forum Posts: 540

Thanks to snugglebuck for hosting this fun competition! Congratulations to Eerie for her well-deserved win, and to to my fellow runner-up, Jade. Kudos to everyone else who participated.

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