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Anonymous
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Your best Lune poem

Posted: 9th January 2018 6:38pm
snugglebuck
snugglebuck
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Poetry Contest

Give us your best lune poem.
A lune  is a 13-syllable, self-contained poem that has 5 syllables in the first line, 3 syllables in the second line and 5 syllable in the final line.

This winner of this competition will be decided by a public vote.

Posted: 10th January 2018 3:15am
eswaller
eswaller
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Eyes Lune

Your eyes, they light up
Like fireworks.
They see the sunset.

Posted: 12th January 2018 1:29pm
OctoberArts
OctoberArts
October
Fire of Insight
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B****

Finger twisting hair
Eyes rolling
Pink bubblegum pops




Posted: 13th January 2018 5:48am
Edited: 13th January 2018 5:54am
Shonuff666
Shonuff666
Lost Thinker
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The scares that you see
Openly Are mine
Never meant for your eyes

Posted: 13th January 2018 12:50pm
kiko_the_poet
kiko_the_poet
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Joined 23rd June 2017
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Success

Is it possible
Amazing
When dreams become real
Written by kiko_the_poet
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Posted: 13th January 2018 4:03pm
ManorMyth
ManorMyth
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You are not alone
I am there
Loving you always

Posted: 14th January 2018 12:22pm
berea440oh
berea440oh
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I looked into her
eyes and saw
pure sin behind them.

Posted: 14th January 2018 2:23pm
hardallover
hardallover
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oh why plagiarize
cut and paste
Robert Lee Brewer

Posted: 14th January 2018 2:25pm
hardallover
hardallover
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earth


life must die for life
to live it
all boils down to this

Posted: 14th January 2018 6:57pm
Miss_Swan
Miss_Swan
Strange Creature
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The Lune

Thirteen syllables
A Lune poem
Three lines, 5,3,5
Written by Miss_Swan
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Posted: 17th January 2018 3:31pm
poet Anonymous
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Posted: 17th January 2018 6:34pm
ManorMyth
ManorMyth
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Cast aside your hate
Let the light
Shine in on your fate

Posted: 18th January 2018 7:30am
AtoMikbomb
AtoMikbomb
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Butane Games

Sticky flame flickers
From a Bic
Toys for us tricksters
Written by AtoMikbomb
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Posted: 19th January 2018 6:04pm
poet Anonymous
Related submission no longer exists.
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/297566-paper-boats/

Posted: 20th January 2018 8:41pm
Edited: 22nd January 2018 9:01pm - edited 2 times
chump
chump
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Purpose

Born doomed, soul is groomed
Then consumed
While your ashes broomed....

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