O FATHER O SATAN O SUN
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Poetry Contest Description
your best Behemoth inspired poetry
Behemoth, another favorite band of mine. Pure Satanic metal. I love it. Give me your best Behemoth inspired poetry. As per usual I will supply some links to get you in the mood.
https://youtu.be/4hVj32UmUyQ
https://youtu.be/Cx01fOYsc6E
https://youtu.be/P_Bmlh-IMWo
https://youtu.be/MRrHGTDi1L0
https://youtu.be/cXS13rZ2-UM
https://youtu.be/zzz0YVEgT5U
TWO WEEKS
MAX THREE POEMS PER POET
NEW WRITES
NO COLLABS
EDIT YOUR WORK
DID I MISS SOMETHING?
WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING?
https://youtu.be/4hVj32UmUyQ
https://youtu.be/Cx01fOYsc6E
https://youtu.be/P_Bmlh-IMWo
https://youtu.be/MRrHGTDi1L0
https://youtu.be/cXS13rZ2-UM
https://youtu.be/zzz0YVEgT5U
TWO WEEKS
MAX THREE POEMS PER POET
NEW WRITES
NO COLLABS
EDIT YOUR WORK
DID I MISS SOMETHING?
WHY AREN'T YOU WRITING?
HadesRising
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Bump
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the abyss awaits dear poets
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Embers, thank you for kicking this off!
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Cold lies the Epoch
Shadows of mine
brought from thine eyes
we wait on sands
of temples pyre
waste the light
of all mans time
bring the emptiness
flow and tide
saviours gone no will no lies
just the bathe for Abbaddon
bleed out for misery
cut the tie
no guiding light
just fire inside
seventh circle surrounds
we dine, we cry
the feast the fight
smothering life
fed by carcass
an epoch over
just demise
crawling darkness
eons die
saviours gone no will no lies
just the bathe
for Abbaddon
bleed out for misery
cut the tie
no guiding light
just fire inside
we rape the stars
snuff out the sun
suck out the marrow
leave it
all undone
we are the knife
to your whole thread
the will of man
stiff and dead
saviours gone no will no lies
just the bathe for Abbaddon
bleed out for misery
cut the tie
no guiding light
just fire inside
Shadows of mine
brought from thine eyes
we wait on sands
of temples pyre
waste the light
of all mans time
bring the emptiness
flow and tide
saviours gone no will no lies
just the bathe for Abbaddon
bleed out for misery
cut the tie
no guiding light
just fire inside
seventh circle surrounds
we dine, we cry
the feast the fight
smothering life
fed by carcass
an epoch over
just demise
crawling darkness
eons die
saviours gone no will no lies
just the bathe
for Abbaddon
bleed out for misery
cut the tie
no guiding light
just fire inside
we rape the stars
snuff out the sun
suck out the marrow
leave it
all undone
we are the knife
to your whole thread
the will of man
stiff and dead
saviours gone no will no lies
just the bathe for Abbaddon
bleed out for misery
cut the tie
no guiding light
just fire inside
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This rocks, Gabe. I read this with Nergal's voice. Well done!
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SWARM OF SUFERING
The beast was cast back
Into the bottomless pit
Those few who lived
Must bury the dead
And do it quick
What was vibrant life
Is now laid waste
Mountains of decay
Disposal demands haste
No time to morn rotting flesh
Hurry, hungry vermin await
Before they begin feeding
Scavengers never say grace
No sweet song bird sings
No little child laughs
What was once blue sky
Is sulfur tinted sad
But respite will come
After the masses interred
And the great pyramids
Of pyres are burned
Exhausted they fell
And slept within
The glow of children
And other lost kin
Till dawn’s early roar
Proclaimed a storm
But the boiling clouds
Were not God’s form
No plague of petulance
Had the world ever seen
As these man-like
Arachnidan league winged
Angry tiger faces
Upon exoskeletons
Scorpion tailed minions
They flew by the millions
With venomous tails
With excruciating sting
With sadistic glee
They’d attack everything
Inflicting pain unendurable
Chronic, yet never fatal
To kill would be charitable
Tormenting was more enjoyable
They reveled in their evil
They’re sadism was insatiable
A woman cried out
“Pray we all to God in Heaven!”
A man mocks, “see before you!
Monsters of pain and suffering
There is no God or Heaven!”
In agony she replied with shrill
“Then why must we dwell”
With these demons from Hell?
Surely if there is a Satan
There must be a Savior!”
But there were no trumpets
That could be heard
Above the piercing shrieks
From the suffering tortured
The above poem was inspired by Behemoth’s song, Day of Suffering, and the book of Revelations.
"I will swarm against you now
Gods perverse
Wickeds at my side
Misery," Behemoth's Day of Suffering
"7And the shapes of the locusts were like unto horses prepared unto battle; and on their heads were as it were crowns like gold, and their faces were as the faces of men. 8And they had hair as the hair of women, and their teeth were as the teeth of lions. 9And they had breastplates, as it were breastplates of iron; and the sound of their wings was as the sound of chariots of many horses running to battle. 10And they had tails like unto scorpions, and there were stings in their tails: and their power was to hurt men five months. 11And they had a king over them, which is the angel of the bottomless pit, whose name in the Hebrew tongue is Abaddon, but in the Greek tongue hath his name Apollyon." Revelations
Into the bottomless pit
Those few who lived
Must bury the dead
And do it quick
What was vibrant life
Is now laid waste
Mountains of decay
Disposal demands haste
No time to morn rotting flesh
Hurry, hungry vermin await
Before they begin feeding
Scavengers never say grace
No sweet song bird sings
No little child laughs
What was once blue sky
Is sulfur tinted sad
But respite will come
After the masses interred
And the great pyramids
Of pyres are burned
Exhausted they fell
And slept within
The glow of children
And other lost kin
Till dawn’s early roar
Proclaimed a storm
But the boiling clouds
Were not God’s form
No plague of petulance
Had the world ever seen
As these man-like
Arachnidan league winged
Angry tiger faces
Upon exoskeletons
Scorpion tailed minions
They flew by the millions
With venomous tails
With excruciating sting
With sadistic glee
They’d attack everything
Inflicting pain unendurable
Chronic, yet never fatal
To kill would be charitable
Tormenting was more enjoyable
They reveled in their evil
They’re sadism was insatiable
A woman cried out
“Pray we all to God in Heaven!”
A man mocks, “see before you!
Monsters of pain and suffering
There is no God or Heaven!”
In agony she replied with shrill
“Then why must we dwell”
With these demons from Hell?
Surely if there is a Satan
There must be a Savior!”
But there were no trumpets
That could be heard
Above the piercing shrieks
From the suffering tortured
The above poem was inspired by Behemoth’s song, Day of Suffering, and the book of Revelations.
"I will swarm against you now
Gods perverse
Wickeds at my side
Misery," Behemoth's Day of Suffering
"7And the shapes of the locusts were like unto horses prepared unto battle; and on their heads were as it were crowns like gold, and their faces were as the faces of men. 8And they had hair as the hair of women, and their teeth were as the teeth of lions. 9And they had breastplates, as it were breastplates of iron; and the sound of their wings was as the sound of chariots of many horses running to battle. 10And they had tails like unto scorpions, and there were stings in their tails: and their power was to hurt men five months. 11And they had a king over them, which is the angel of the bottomless pit, whose name in the Hebrew tongue is Abaddon, but in the Greek tongue hath his name Apollyon." Revelations
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HadesRising
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Thank you, Snuggle.
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Tick tock poets!
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Well done, poets, and congrats!
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Congratulations Soul !! :))