Poetry competition CLOSED 31st March 2017 5:31am
WINNER
mel44
mel44
RUNNER-UP:
KDAmB
Twelve steps
Anonymous
Great stuff everyone. did I mention it needed to be written in ancient Hebrew ? ...I'll leave it out of this one since it's already underway
Anonymous
KDAmB said:Wow! Some works both Mel44 and Lady Dev!! Thanks for bursting my bubble of joy thinking 💭 I was the only one with an entry but both the entries from youse hit the ball outta the park ⛲!
Oye, KD
!
Thanks for the nod.
I felt out of place
with my 1st
entry so I
came back with
something that
conforms to Ari's
previous request.
But yours & Lady
Mels ... Awesome
!
Oye, KD
! Thanks for the nod.
I felt out of place
with my 1st
entry so I
came back with
something that
conforms to Ari's
previous request.
But yours & Lady
Mels ... Awesome
! 
Anonymous
much as I hate to disturb stuff so beautiful, I need to post this before I scrap it and start over. [for those still trying to get ten lines of ten. StOP ! ..for the love of god stop and eat something]
a ska fan's moose sank on an ocean of canoes
feces, so says an agency ..of one cocky sofa mouse
c'mon ..a mouse sunk fake feces on an oaf's sofa
you mean, feck, ×a sneaky cognac× [..sneaky cognac chase, yes?]
was gonna say suck on some goose, Kong ..y'know
*edited* dunno who snuck the I's into my first post ..but damn you!*
..please allow me to forgive myself for any confusion
a ska fan's moose sank on an ocean of canoes
feces, so says an agency ..of one cocky sofa mouse
c'mon ..a mouse sunk fake feces on an oaf's sofa
you mean, feck, ×a sneaky cognac× [..sneaky cognac chase, yes?]
was gonna say suck on some goose, Kong ..y'know
*edited* dunno who snuck the I's into my first post ..but damn you!*
..please allow me to forgive myself for any confusion
Dazed and Confused
Almost tripped and kind of fell
Face first into an ocean of my feelings
Whenever you come near
My mind says go-my wretched heart says stay
Dazed and confused-so lost in my thoughts
Holding my breath praying the pounding of my heart you can't hear
A golden ticket to hell-thats what I got
Don't you ever see the yearning in my eyes?
Want to rip this cursed, devil heart from my chest
And lay it bloody, still beating at your feet
Go, come, stay, kind, over, fell, near, ever, yearning, and
Face first into an ocean of my feelings
Whenever you come near
My mind says go-my wretched heart says stay
Dazed and confused-so lost in my thoughts
Holding my breath praying the pounding of my heart you can't hear
A golden ticket to hell-thats what I got
Don't you ever see the yearning in my eyes?
Want to rip this cursed, devil heart from my chest
And lay it bloody, still beating at your feet
Go, come, stay, kind, over, fell, near, ever, yearning, and
Written by Afroqn73
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Anonymous
hello. congrats and appreciations to you all, and you're very welcome for the challenge
loved them all for different reasons. had to make a choice ( who knew)
gonna go with
Mel
Lady Dev
Kdm'B
afroqueen
Me
big twist in this game is I'm all the contestants so can't accept the trophy
loved them all for different reasons. had to make a choice ( who knew)
gonna go with
Mel
Lady Dev
Kdm'B
afroqueen
Me
big twist in this game is I'm all the contestants so can't accept the trophy
Anonymous
Hey, Mel ... CONGRATS on your first Win, Lady
! &
KD, my Friend & ally in anagrams ... excellent
to be standing next to you
! Ari, great head-scrambler-of-a-comp; definitely worked my brain!
So as ``Runner up`` ... my Bridesmaid dress is sea-foam green!
