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Dark City

vortexman
Dangerous Mind
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no problemo.....Mrs.Atakti

lepperochan
CraicDealer
Guardian of Shadows
Palestine 67awards
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I'm not entering this one Atakti, because it placed in a recent comp, but I'd be grateful if you would consider it for publication in that there magazine, Cheers, missus


Harlequin


The bell tower in the old church  
rang out stupid-o'clock in the morning  
and I was falling up the street towards somewhere familiar  
half empty bottle of Jameson and a shot glass  
tucked into my jacket pocket  

this part of town  
had long since settled down into chaos  
with blood on the streets, whores  winking at passers by  
and packs of jackals roaming around  
hunting down the old, the lame and the wounded  

I'd found this place some weeks ago  
after falling up the street at stupid-o'clock in the morning  
gotten jumped from behind, no warning
and woken up to see my blood on the street  

it was then, I heard her, christ; what a voice she had  
sent the hairs on my neck to standing  
almost put colour to the dreary black and grey backdrop  
of burned out cars and boarded up windows  

then she turned the bow in her hand towards her cello  
played a song that'd have the hardest bastard haunted for a lifetime  
a song of pennies and fortunes, of puffs and powders, lusts and temptation  
of her, bare breasted,  standing over a dead man  
without a tear in her eye, because she could not cry for someone  
who needed death as much as a cloud needs water  

and I sat there through all her songs  
'til the last one, Harlequin, where something deep within  
clicked into place, and she knew; because she'd stopped  
and in the silence, her face had brightened
 
she stood up, brushed down her nightgown, picked up her cello  
turned to go, and whispered "y'know  ..I'll be here; same time tomorrow"

then I went falling back up the town, past the skinny tom cats
that had gathered around a fish supper
dropped by some drunkard
who'd needed her hands to hold her hair away from the vomit
pooling on her lap

past the old train-tracks, to my part of town
the cul-de-sac with fifteen four bedroom houses and fifteen neat brown garden sheds

I went to bed and lay down, pretended not to notice all the signs
scattered around the room
the empty pill bottle, broken mirror, and blood stained clothes on the floor
that screamed
another episode had occurred
 

Atakti
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Ok, Craic, noted, and thanks for the interest... How about a reading? Hmmmmm?

Go on....

(YouTube please...)

Deathpuppy
Thought Provoker
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Joined 17th May 2013
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Why plant a tree in Chicago

Whose job is this
To urinate in every corner of this city
Not one spot missed
Employee of the month for sure
The Ethos compared to other cities
Is the smelly kid in class
A Metropolis marinated
In a potpourri of
dumpster sludge
Rat fecal matter
And cotton candy
A petri dish of humanity
Or the lack there of
Contained by suburbs
A Army of Germaphobe's couldn't clean her
A city wide fire now would burn for years
The fish come to the river surface
as if to say "please kill me now"
Paint swatches match filth
Every honking horn
Represents anger
Pedestrians of Chicago
Invented Angry Birds
Thrown at cabdrivers
And each other
By the time a raindrop falls through
It's resembles Ink
Ink used for signs on cardboard
"Help me find a vein"
The sober and the junkie think the same
The higher you get from this place
The better off you are
Don't make eye contact
But I do
We both have the same look
How can you live like this
I walk
Building's like scabs on skin
Smaller on the outside
Taller in its center
Peel it
It grows bigger
Scrape and rape
I walk
Children playing
With a newly aborted fetus
At least a they gave it a name
They call it "Ball"
I walk
A 23-year-old grandmother
Discovers Jesus in a fetal position
Nursing from a bottle
Under a highway underpass
Being stepped on
By religious fanatics
Praying to the Virgin Mary
Stained on the concrete
From subway and pigeon droppings
I walk
2 million cases of
Stockholm Syndrome
Tell themselves lie after lie
One large glory hole
No face and nothing personal
Just get your business done
And leave the floors sticky
I walk
Eyeballs of racial injustice
from the bus stop bench
Hit me hard
Don't roll that chip
on your shoulder onto me
black man
I got for you some good news & bad news
Good news you're just like me
Bad news you're just like me
I walk
Two beat cops approach
Buttons screaming for life on there chest
Quizzing each other on effective racial slurs
They will be holding seminars
Teaching other cops from the country
How to reach their true asshole potential
A honest hard-working man they see
So I RUN













Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Thank you, puppy, for your entry!

BLLTPROOFHEART
Lost Thinker
United States
Joined 13th June 2013
Forum Posts: 6

"Dampened Streets"

The streets are filled with broken spirits that harbor fates that can't see their worth; never pouring into the seeds that yearn to know the reason why they cant earn what they deserve.  

Dreams that once were bright as day are now dampened by the pouring rain; but the city lights provide temporary release from the endless grief, and abiding pain.

Limitations are common-place, and make society go to war with mediocrity; for no earthy being will choose to believe that their cause is to be ordinary. 

Traveling mindsets that have come to be what many accept as insanity; yet embracing the cause that the city has given, and proving the unforgiven can still claim victory.




Indie
Miss Indie
Tyrant of Words
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souladareatease
Tyrant of Words
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Joined 28th Dec 2012
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Stain

Streets painted in pearlescent
black
shimmer among the shiver
of blood covered tracks
raining down often                                                              
                  u
                   p                                              
                    o                                              
                     n
                    hubris of news
shared hidden dreams
amidst silver lined smog
choke within the throat
soon as spoken at all

Drones filter fodder for slaughter
taken by a promise better tomorrows
but dark city keeps
hold prison to dreams
you who sleep few indeed
keep one eye open free to see
shady dank dealings and your freedoms
seized
on by ton dark city screams
weight of patience turns to aging
no escape lifes listless lingering
shackled to a cloud
mist
of no beginning or ending
dark city creeps as the belly craw
realizing bleak is the peak
and thrall of its awe
you hear the beat  but faced with a punch
leaning to scream but lungs are drowned out
by the din drips of bis  
obsidians kiss
dark city stains
remains
engrained


Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Thank you, BLLTPROOFHEART, Indie and soul for your entries! Gonna be tricky one to judge...

Gemini
Geminitalian
Fire of Insight
United States 9awards
Joined 28th Oct 2012
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Right on, Puppy! Now we have two Chi-Town poems in the mix!

HottNess
Thought Provoker
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Joined 6th June 2013
Forum Posts: 17

Thank you . For speaking the truth .

Deathpuppy
Thought Provoker
United States 4awards
Joined 17th May 2013
Forum Posts: 306

Gemini said:Right on, Puppy! Now we have two Chi-Town poems in the mix!
We should hang and fuck with some cops?

Gemini
Geminitalian
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Deathpuppy said:[quote-205390-Gemini]Right on, Puppy! Now we have two Chi-Town poems in the mix!
We should hang and fuck with some cops?[/quote]

Sounds like good fun to me, puppy.

MadameLavender
Guardian of Shadows
United States 91awards
Joined 17th Feb 2013
Forum Posts: 5731

The Angel Of Dawn


I walk alone the pre-dawn streets,
Dustbin in my hand,
I am the angel while the city sleeps
Within this Promised Land.

I sweep away the hardened hearts
And all their blackened sin,
For when a new day glows and starts,
They’ll begin it all again.

The lies, the greed, the wasteful lust
That leaves life so unfair,
And far from all in God we trust—
This world, trapped, ensnared.

But who will see the task I do?
They’re blinded and it’s missed.
They fail to keep their minds set new,
Each night by Heaven’s kiss.

There are some things one can’t erase
Each time I make my sweep;
The tears that course along my face
In pity for the weak.

But until the day the Lord rides through
On white horse in victory
And sets the Earth to start anew—
I’ll remain a-watch, this city.

Atakti
Tyrant of Words
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Thank you, ML, for your entry!

:)

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