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Poetry about Dreams, Fantasy and Fiction
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adagio
Poem Published
Today 2:45pm
Today 2:45pm
Neither Here Nor There
A distance dark
neither here nor there
no imagination or thought
without a scent
or shadow of a tear
just endless dark
listening to death
gasping for air
thump the ground
prowling in oblivion
neither here nor there
neither here nor there
no imagination or thought
without a scent
or shadow of a tear
just endless dark
listening to death
gasping for air
thump the ground
prowling in oblivion
neither here nor there
#nightmares
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I_IS_ME
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:38pm
Yesterday 12:38pm
Feeling Myself
What is there when your energy isn't positive or negative
When your universe doesn't recognize you and there is no take or give
Do you exist in limbo, trapped in the rift
Or do you join the multiverse and open doorways within it's midst
To have seen the things that I have, can boggle the mind
Totally destroying astrophysics, Einstein and the laws of Newton's design
The many worlds where humans aren't the supreme beings
You would be surprised by the peace that I've seen
Reptilians at peace with reptilians, but acknowledging all other species ...
When your universe doesn't recognize you and there is no take or give
Do you exist in limbo, trapped in the rift
Or do you join the multiverse and open doorways within it's midst
To have seen the things that I have, can boggle the mind
Totally destroying astrophysics, Einstein and the laws of Newton's design
The many worlds where humans aren't the supreme beings
You would be surprised by the peace that I've seen
Reptilians at peace with reptilians, but acknowledging all other species ...
#dragons
#magic
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oskar
Poem Published
Yesterday 12:18pm
Yesterday 12:18pm
the brotherhood of man
The brotherhood of man
When he came into the hall, his brother came down
the stairs, he had forgotten to buy milk
Outside, guns blasted his brother fragmented to
a hail of noise and blood on splattered asphalt.
The soldiers, in a killing mood, shot into the hall
he ran up to the third-floor flat where his sons sat
told them to flee to the roof of opposite buildings
They refused and had slingshots to defend themselves
he didn’t try to persuade the boys, undid a window
and jumped on the next roof as bullets of ill will
hissed past...
When he came into the hall, his brother came down
the stairs, he had forgotten to buy milk
Outside, guns blasted his brother fragmented to
a hail of noise and blood on splattered asphalt.
The soldiers, in a killing mood, shot into the hall
he ran up to the third-floor flat where his sons sat
told them to flee to the roof of opposite buildings
They refused and had slingshots to defend themselves
he didn’t try to persuade the boys, undid a window
and jumped on the next roof as bullets of ill will
hissed past...
#grief
#frustration
#greed
#emptiness
#fear
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I_IS_ME
Poem Published
28th Nov 2022 2:49pm
28th Nov 2022 2:49pm
Girl's Night Out
#women
#men
#conflict #humankind
#conflict #humankind
14 reads
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oskar
Poem Published
27th Nov 2022 4:46pm
27th Nov 2022 4:46pm
nuclear hide-out
Nuclear hideout
Deep under the garage in the basement of our building
they are constructing a nuclear, safe bunker, the shelter
is for those with a car and safe tenure, whose duty is to
buy canned food, water and warm blankets.
Those who fully own their apartment will get the best
corner and sit in the committee; those with a mortgage
will be second in line, alas mere renters are not wanted
they will have to find other accommodation.
It goes without saying children and dogs cannot enter.
The construction of the “dugout” has become...
Deep under the garage in the basement of our building
they are constructing a nuclear, safe bunker, the shelter
is for those with a car and safe tenure, whose duty is to
buy canned food, water and warm blankets.
Those who fully own their apartment will get the best
corner and sit in the committee; those with a mortgage
will be second in line, alas mere renters are not wanted
they will have to find other accommodation.
It goes without saying children and dogs cannot enter.
The construction of the “dugout” has become...
#fate
#apocalypse
#dystopian #curse
#dystopian #curse
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missjem56
Poem Published
24th Nov 2022 9:45am
24th Nov 2022 9:45am
A TRIP!
When i first entered
The fair land of Fae
I expected fairies
Witches, Unicorns, Dragons
Perhaps a fairy castle
And quaint little fairy houses
But instead
It was like a cocktail
Of Carnaby Street
Old Soho
A Midsummer Night's Dream
And Star Wars
It was really wild
I now in fact live there
The lunatics are on the grass
Playing music, and singing
And quaffing gallons of ale
I felt as though i was in Paradise
But ended up in jail
Apparently
I was found wandering around
Hastings
A quaint...
The fair land of Fae
I expected fairies
Witches, Unicorns, Dragons
Perhaps a fairy castle
And quaint little fairy houses
But instead
It was like a cocktail
Of Carnaby Street
Old Soho
A Midsummer Night's Dream
And Star Wars
It was really wild
I now in fact live there
The lunatics are on the grass
Playing music, and singing
And quaffing gallons of ale
I felt as though i was in Paradise
But ended up in jail
Apparently
I was found wandering around
Hastings
A quaint...
#funny
#fairies
#mythology #travel
#mythology #travel
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princeofrealness
Poem Published
20th Nov 2022 10:49am
20th Nov 2022 10:49am
Full moon part 1of 3
Just another night I hit my local bar.
Leaving my artistic studio,
Long off-white curtains on my windows,
Tall ceilings and hardwood floors that creek,
Constantly water drip drops from the sink,
Buildings hallways are hollow exit leading to an alleyway that is very narrow.
Flash backs of every mortal that I’ve been gifted
It’s the full moon that lifts the dead.
Something is different tonight there’s a new soul to be gifted
The gift of immortality, my thirst for tonight is not for quantity,
I blood🩸 rich and hot like fire...
Leaving my artistic studio,
Long off-white curtains on my windows,
Tall ceilings and hardwood floors that creek,
Constantly water drip drops from the sink,
Buildings hallways are hollow exit leading to an alleyway that is very narrow.
Flash backs of every mortal that I’ve been gifted
It’s the full moon that lifts the dead.
Something is different tonight there’s a new soul to be gifted
The gift of immortality, my thirst for tonight is not for quantity,
I blood🩸 rich and hot like fire...
#utopia
#heaven
#hell
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Nilknarfar
Poem Published
18th Nov 2022 12:02pm
18th Nov 2022 12:02pm
Moongrass
The light shimmers off the moon lit grass as the frost breaks it into an aroma of colors. It’s an otherwise calm night.
Her foot touches down as if being lowered from a machine. With the blood dripping off her toes, it could be a meathook she’s shrinking down from.
When he’s been around, she normally has a difficult time gaining her bearings. So it’s no surprise she doesn’t notice the blood or the frost stinging her bare feet.
She glances at the moon as if shooting a visual azimuth to steady herself; she can do this. She takes a step forward when she...
Her foot touches down as if being lowered from a machine. With the blood dripping off her toes, it could be a meathook she’s shrinking down from.
When he’s been around, she normally has a difficult time gaining her bearings. So it’s no surprise she doesn’t notice the blood or the frost stinging her bare feet.
She glances at the moon as if shooting a visual azimuth to steady herself; she can do this. She takes a step forward when she...
#BDSM
#ThrillSeeking
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I_IS_ME
Poem Published
17th Nov 2022 4:10am
17th Nov 2022 4:10am
Badge Of Honor
Three hundred and sixty degrees
Squared by three hundred and sixty degrees
Surrounded by three hundred and sixty degrees
Locked in by three hundred and sixty degrees
That's fourteen hundred and forty degrees in me
But what my enemies don't see I contain another seven hundred and twenty degrees
The runes of my history hides my pedigree with hidden angles
The seven hundred and twenty degrees are multiplied by war with four triangles
The ancient runes were bled from an older script
Two thousand- one hundred and sixty holds existence in...
Squared by three hundred and sixty degrees
Surrounded by three hundred and sixty degrees
Locked in by three hundred and sixty degrees
That's fourteen hundred and forty degrees in me
But what my enemies don't see I contain another seven hundred and twenty degrees
The runes of my history hides my pedigree with hidden angles
The seven hundred and twenty degrees are multiplied by war with four triangles
The ancient runes were bled from an older script
Two thousand- one hundred and sixty holds existence in...
#war
#humankind
#rebellion
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Kaden_Malis
Kaden Malis
Kaden Malis
Poem Published
15th Nov 2022 6:19pm
15th Nov 2022 6:19pm
Ominous dreams
Vision of the future
Through ominous dreams
Death beyond death
To see what i've seen
It's what i'll be missing
After i'm gone
That sends a sharp chill
Straight through to my bones
Years in the future
Boys all grown
Outside in the yard
With kids of their own
And my beautiful wife
Tears of joy in her eyes
Standing hand in hand
With someone else by her side
And I'm just a memory
That's fuzzy and gray
They try to cling to
Before my sickness took me away
I awake with a...
Through ominous dreams
Death beyond death
To see what i've seen
It's what i'll be missing
After i'm gone
That sends a sharp chill
Straight through to my bones
Years in the future
Boys all grown
Outside in the yard
With kids of their own
And my beautiful wife
Tears of joy in her eyes
Standing hand in hand
With someone else by her side
And I'm just a memory
That's fuzzy and gray
They try to cling to
Before my sickness took me away
I awake with a...
#grief
#SelfHarm
#addiction
#nightmares
#fear
85 reads
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Nilknarfar
Poem Published
14th Nov 2022 9:30pm
14th Nov 2022 9:30pm
Rendexvous
He has a big date tonight, a reunion actually. One that is way overdue. He’s known he needed to reconcile, but he’s just been cowardly, if he’s going to be honest with himself. But he simply has to see her one more time no matter what; he’s always known that and now the solution is suddenly so clear.
There have been plenty of opportunities but he’s been scattered. His mind has been so foggy. So many good memories buried under the smudge of a cascade of mistakes. Countless nights spent looking for the bottom of a bottle. He’s not even sure how long it’s been. It’s all too...
There have been plenty of opportunities but he’s been scattered. His mind has been so foggy. So many good memories buried under the smudge of a cascade of mistakes. Countless nights spent looking for the bottom of a bottle. He’s not even sure how long it’s been. It’s all too...
#regret
#ImSorry
#betrayal
#escape
#bittersweet
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Rew
Poem Published
13th Nov 2022 11:11pm
13th Nov 2022 11:11pm
X Rated...
I have no time for Mr Newman
those washed up washeruppers,
give me the rough and tumbling Tarzan
trembling me with the screams he utters,
swinging from curtains, this brute ape-man,
come again to make me his woman...
Modesty forbids me to be kissed and tell
when in the arms of my cave-man lover,
or how, even, he would be like a devil from hell
as he burns me beyond being a blusher,
and the neighbors would know from my yells
that master was home quelling his rebel...
And later when we both are satiated ...
those washed up washeruppers,
give me the rough and tumbling Tarzan
trembling me with the screams he utters,
swinging from curtains, this brute ape-man,
come again to make me his woman...
Modesty forbids me to be kissed and tell
when in the arms of my cave-man lover,
or how, even, he would be like a devil from hell
as he burns me beyond being a blusher,
and the neighbors would know from my yells
that master was home quelling his rebel...
And later when we both are satiated ...
#rhyming
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