Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Green_Arrow
Poem Published
8th May 2025 2:32pm
8th May 2025 2:32pm
If He Finds Out, He'll Go Nuts!
Gloria's naked centerfold
inside the latest issue of
Hustler is one of the many
secrets that she has been
keeping from her own dad.
inside the latest issue of
Hustler is one of the many
secrets that she has been
keeping from her own dad.
#deception
#family
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#sex
94 reads
0 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
8th May 2025 1:02am
8th May 2025 1:02am
Kiss Me Hard Before You Go
our foreheads press together
like flamingoes
all pretty in pink
the eye contact is primal and speaks
to the holes we try to fill with dirt
and sex and lovers we left in
car accidents and goodbye notes
screaming it’s not you it’s me
we tried that with each other
tried to burn it all down and rise
from the ashes some mangled
phoenix that was all human and not designed
to survive that kind of heat
with you here now
the scent of you breaking
the doom clock
ticking away our last breaths ...
like flamingoes
all pretty in pink
the eye contact is primal and speaks
to the holes we try to fill with dirt
and sex and lovers we left in
car accidents and goodbye notes
screaming it’s not you it’s me
we tried that with each other
tried to burn it all down and rise
from the ashes some mangled
phoenix that was all human and not designed
to survive that kind of heat
with you here now
the scent of you breaking
the doom clock
ticking away our last breaths ...
#erotic
#lover
#obsession #regret
#obsession #regret
168 reads
5 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
7th May 2025 10:50pm
7th May 2025 10:50pm
Night Joining
On our way in the dark, pierced by moonlight
Hand in hand with speed for tonight
To a secluded place where written desires can be shown
No interference, no one to know
A closed door, A candle lit
A plush bed, A brushed kiss
On exposed golden skin
A yearn to begin
A taste, a touch, a nibble, a blush
All put into memory
Soft hands glide across hard planes
Rough hands seize soft spherule
A keening sound of delight
A whisper to take all that is given tonight
Close to a finish, lightning strikes
Flashes...
Hand in hand with speed for tonight
To a secluded place where written desires can be shown
No interference, no one to know
A closed door, A candle lit
A plush bed, A brushed kiss
On exposed golden skin
A yearn to begin
A taste, a touch, a nibble, a blush
All put into memory
Soft hands glide across hard planes
Rough hands seize soft spherule
A keening sound of delight
A whisper to take all that is given tonight
Close to a finish, lightning strikes
Flashes...
#fire
168 reads
9 Comments
4calligraphee
Calligraphee
Calligraphee
Poem Published
7th May 2025 2:16pm
7th May 2025 2:16pm
Farewell
#dirty
#erotic
#FreeVerse
#sadness
#sex
168 reads
5 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
7th May 2025 6:49am
7th May 2025 6:49am
AGONY QUESTION (ANOTHER FOUR LINER)
#frustration
#marriage
#sex #temptation
#sex #temptation
121 reads
1 Comment
Trome
Poem Published
7th May 2025 4:54am
7th May 2025 4:54am
FELLATIO FROM KRISTINA X
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
#women
199 reads
4 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
6th May 2025 10:33pm
6th May 2025 10:33pm
You ruined me and I wanted to be ruined
My kind of play time
Inspired by your creamy skin
Push your panties aside
I need to lick
Rome will burn
I will too
No problem
Inspired by your creamy skin
Push your panties aside
I need to lick
Rome will burn
I will too
No problem
#sex
194 reads
13 Comments
Betty
Poem Published
6th May 2025 10:06pm
6th May 2025 10:06pm
After(Care)
#BDSM
#erotic
#obsession #passion
#obsession #passion
238 reads
12 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
6th May 2025 9:14pm
6th May 2025 9:14pm
Lauryn's Passing
Letter to Lauryn's poetry friends.
It grieves me to share this with one of Lauryn’s writing communities. She shared her writing on this site with me though I’m only now reading into the past of her life. I loved Lauryn very much and, even though we recently parted, it crushed me to learn of her death.
Our time together was a time of healing for both of us. She seemed to always be living near death and her writing I’ve looked at so far confirms this. Her life took a negative turn after she and I separated but that seems to be the pattern she’s followed for several...
It grieves me to share this with one of Lauryn’s writing communities. She shared her writing on this site with me though I’m only now reading into the past of her life. I loved Lauryn very much and, even though we recently parted, it crushed me to learn of her death.
Our time together was a time of healing for both of us. She seemed to always be living near death and her writing I’ve looked at so far confirms this. Her life took a negative turn after she and I separated but that seems to be the pattern she’s followed for several...
#death
#sadness
168 reads
3 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
6th May 2025 8:32pm
6th May 2025 8:32pm
Chapter 3 - Room 762
It seemed like an eternity until 1 o’clock. Finally, at the exact time, he approached room 762. Rachel must have been watching for him because the swung slowly open before he could knock. Then Rachel appeared, wearing a short summer dress with small daisy prints. It was cut low and her cleavage was smooth with several freckles glistening.
" I'm so glad you came," Rachel whispered, her voice barely above the hum of the air conditioning.
Jacob's throat felt tight, but he managed to find his voice. "I wouldn't have missed this, Rachel."
...
" I'm so glad you came," Rachel whispered, her voice barely above the hum of the air conditioning.
Jacob's throat felt tight, but he managed to find his voice. "I wouldn't have missed this, Rachel."
...
#betrayal
#lust
#sex
111 reads
0 Comments
Nevermindthegaps
Poem Published
6th May 2025 1:00pm
6th May 2025 1:00pm
Continuations
#obsession
161 reads
4 Comments
Solomon_Song
Poem Published
6th May 2025 6:05am
6th May 2025 6:05am
THE SHAPE OF HER BREASTS
#holiday
#obsession
#travel
170 reads
1 Comment
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