Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 11:33pm
3rd Mar 2025 11:33pm
Shop till you drop
#dirty
#lust
#sensual
#sex
#temptation
89 reads
0 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 5:07pm
3rd Mar 2025 5:07pm
Lords of the Lay Down (Character Personality Collaboration)
#sex
66 reads
8 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 3:17pm
3rd Mar 2025 3:17pm
The Maniquin Man
#fiction
#loneliness
#MentalHealth
#sex
#violence
58 reads
13 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
3rd Mar 2025 3:07am
3rd Mar 2025 3:07am
The desired pace
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
141 reads
0 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 5:34pm
2nd Mar 2025 5:34pm
A Vow of Devotion - for a friend's marriage ceremony
In the hush of this cherished night,
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
They'll step into a harmonious embrace,
A dance of hearts, a sacred rite.
And so, it begins, each gesture, a vow of devotion
In his gentle pressing he seeks to
honor and cherish his new wife.
And she, with grace, responds in kind,
Sharing the depths of her affection,
As the animals at their core fulfill
a timeless covenant with the
Mother of all creation.
#marriage
#nature
#sex
99 reads
2 Comments
PoetSpeak
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 4:03pm
2nd Mar 2025 4:03pm
Garrison Belt
The leather
It's not super soft
Nor particularly hard
It's just kinda right
When you're up against a wall
Slow strikes to start
Building in to a rhythm
A cracking sound against your ass
Thighs too when you get whiney
So far it's just the leather
The buckle is for other occasions
We've just started this journey
Wait darling....wait
It's not super soft
Nor particularly hard
It's just kinda right
When you're up against a wall
Slow strikes to start
Building in to a rhythm
A cracking sound against your ass
Thighs too when you get whiney
So far it's just the leather
The buckle is for other occasions
We've just started this journey
Wait darling....wait
#BDSM
#pagan
#risk
#ThrillSeeking
#TruthOfLife
143 reads
21 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 2:15pm
2nd Mar 2025 2:15pm
In Need Of Someone To Be Your First Subject
Before you
get the chance to meet my
daughter, I heard that you are taking
a photography class and in need of someone
to be your first subject. Let me slip
off my robe. Okay. She's
now ready.
get the chance to meet my
daughter, I heard that you are taking
a photography class and in need of someone
to be your first subject. Let me slip
off my robe. Okay. She's
now ready.
#corruption
#dialogue
#fiction
#home
#sex
87 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
2nd Mar 2025 2:30am
2nd Mar 2025 2:30am
As Ready As You Are
I'm ready, Gary. Are you?
Yes, Heather. As ready as you are.
Okay, Julianne. Let's do this.
Gary, press your naked body against Heather's.
And stand still while I snap pictures.
Yes, Heather. As ready as you are.
Okay, Julianne. Let's do this.
Gary, press your naked body against Heather's.
And stand still while I snap pictures.
#art
#dialogue
#fiction
#friendship
#sex
110 reads
2 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 11:36pm
1st Mar 2025 11:36pm
TRIGGER WARNING Intruder play 1 and 2 CNC story piece.
#BDSM
#dirty
#lust
#passion
#sexy
113 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 8:45pm
1st Mar 2025 8:45pm
Went Over To Mary's Place
#fiction
#friendship
#home
#lover
#sex
92 reads
0 Comments
LostViking
Lost Viking
Lost Viking
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 3:04pm
1st Mar 2025 3:04pm
Finding Love at the Waffle House
The Waffle House on the outskirts of Lebanon, MO, exudes an unmistakable aroma of sizzling bacon and fresh coffee that seems to hang in the air like a comforting cloud. This quaint establishment features vinyl booths in shades of fading turquoise and a counter worn smooth by the countless elbows of truckers, tourists, and townsfolk that have propped there over the years. The linoleum floor, a checkerboard of black and white squares, bears the scuffs and marks of time and the shuffling feet of daily patrons.
Maggie, a 42-year-old waitress, glides through the diner with practiced...
Maggie, a 42-year-old waitress, glides through the diner with practiced...
#coffee
#sex
#travel
101 reads
1 Comment
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
1st Mar 2025 1:55am
1st Mar 2025 1:55am
CherSakura Pussh
#sex
138 reads
10 Comments
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