Erotic Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Erotica and sex poetry
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Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 10:30pm
12th Jan 2025 10:30pm
Tie your tighty whities...
#dirty
#sex
104 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 8:35pm
12th Jan 2025 8:35pm
Got Room For One More?
Kelly spotted Catherine
humping Mark, stripped
down and joined them.
humping Mark, stripped
down and joined them.
#fiction
#FreeVerse
#friendship
#LGBT
#sex
71 reads
2 Comments
PAR
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 6:44pm
12th Jan 2025 6:44pm
Glitch
Toep, the drow, with eyes like midnight,
wanders smlaer where swodahs peerc
in his grasp, taolfa a secret tight
guarding mysteries in the ecnelis deeps.
He traverses smaerd, a phantom's guide,
in the labyrinth of the dnim's design,
carrying taolfa, where samgine hide,
in the dnim, where worlds eniwtne.
Whispering through the sliev of thought...
Toep, the keeper of smlaer neesnu.
In his presence, reality is wrought,
a dance of swodahs, where truth has neeb.
wanders smlaer where swodahs peerc
in his grasp, taolfa a secret tight
guarding mysteries in the ecnelis deeps.
He traverses smaerd, a phantom's guide,
in the labyrinth of the dnim's design,
carrying taolfa, where samgine hide,
in the dnim, where worlds eniwtne.
Whispering through the sliev of thought...
Toep, the keeper of smlaer neesnu.
In his presence, reality is wrought,
a dance of swodahs, where truth has neeb.
#rebellion
#rebirth
#revenge
57 reads
10 Comments
Nizana
Lauryn
Lauryn
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:43pm
12th Jan 2025 2:43pm
First Night
He gazed at his lover with awe,
A body without any flaw.
She was a newborn fawn
With grace now adorned,
Their bodies were deeply enthralled.
For years I had watched her grow sure,
Her skills and her confidence pure.
The boy by her side,
Saw the pride in my eyes,
For my daughter, whose heart was unstirred.
In silence, they lay close together,
Clinging so that no mother could sever.
In the hallway, I stood,
Heard the creaking of wood,
Their whispers as soft as a feather.
Beneath them, a...
A body without any flaw.
She was a newborn fawn
With grace now adorned,
Their bodies were deeply enthralled.
For years I had watched her grow sure,
Her skills and her confidence pure.
The boy by her side,
Saw the pride in my eyes,
For my daughter, whose heart was unstirred.
In silence, they lay close together,
Clinging so that no mother could sever.
In the hallway, I stood,
Heard the creaking of wood,
Their whispers as soft as a feather.
Beneath them, a...
#sex
#teens
121 reads
2 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:30pm
12th Jan 2025 2:30pm
Goddess on Goddess
Four large breasts bang together. Smacks not unlike balls slapping furiously on plump ass cheeks!
But there are no men allowed - they are locked out!
Today's is only for the "great" women. Their rubenesque curves make the skinny servant slaves sigh with jealousy. They stand awaiting orders from
their mistresses.
The breasts of the dark skinned Kali have long nipples on dark areola currently being suckled by Tara who is the fairest female never seen in the region. The goddesses meet secretly Tara's light areolas blend to be barely visible. Her...
But there are no men allowed - they are locked out!
Today's is only for the "great" women. Their rubenesque curves make the skinny servant slaves sigh with jealousy. They stand awaiting orders from
their mistresses.
The breasts of the dark skinned Kali have long nipples on dark areola currently being suckled by Tara who is the fairest female never seen in the region. The goddesses meet secretly Tara's light areolas blend to be barely visible. Her...
#sex
90 reads
1 Comment
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 11:32am
12th Jan 2025 11:32am
Some horny f**k is down in my cellar
#erotic
#funny
#orgasm
#SelfDiscovery
#sex
113 reads
15 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 6:21am
12th Jan 2025 6:21am
Dildo girl (Rocket man be gone!)
#erotic
#sex
77 reads
1 Comment
Drifting
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 4:46am
12th Jan 2025 4:46am
Sex and Savagery (Working Title)
Our bodies are a battleground
And this sex is a war.
Don't make love, make hate to me
Until I can't take it anymore.
Fuck the soul out of me,
Make me a used and empty shell,
Leave me raw and writhing,
Cast my body back to hell.
Nightmares of your fingertips,
Nailpolish of dripping blood,
Throw the dirt into my eyes,
Tears and sweat making mud.
Fire in your eyes,
Your teeth upon my skin,
Show me what they mean
When they say original sin.
Crush...
And this sex is a war.
Don't make love, make hate to me
Until I can't take it anymore.
Fuck the soul out of me,
Make me a used and empty shell,
Leave me raw and writhing,
Cast my body back to hell.
Nightmares of your fingertips,
Nailpolish of dripping blood,
Throw the dirt into my eyes,
Tears and sweat making mud.
Fire in your eyes,
Your teeth upon my skin,
Show me what they mean
When they say original sin.
Crush...
#dirty
#erotic
#lust
#passion
#sex
136 reads
3 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 2:43am
12th Jan 2025 2:43am
The Enticement
Am I the Goddess to your God
Feeding you the fruit of life
When life has diminished in your eyes?
Open up to me
And I will take you on a journey
Where desires are fulfilled
And tears of passion are shed.
Feeding you the fruit of life
When life has diminished in your eyes?
Open up to me
And I will take you on a journey
Where desires are fulfilled
And tears of passion are shed.
#emotions
#passion
#sensual
133 reads
19 Comments
fianaturie8
Fia Naturie
Fia Naturie
Poem Published
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
12th Jan 2025 00:15am
The DUP Court
Ladies and Gentlemen
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
Jurors of the DUP court
Allow me to paint you a picture
It’s a crime of the heart
(Of the heart, he said?)
Yes, you heard me correctly.
For those of you with delicate dispositions
Or have never heard of some positions
Please allow me to finish this crime of hate
(wait, he said heart, now hate)
I know I am making you wait
It's too long, so here it goes.
She found him in the bed with Gwendolyn
Gwendolyn, in her words, is her best friend
They grew up in a time of...
#ForbiddenLove
#girlfriend
#husband
#lust
#wife
122 reads
8 Comments
averageJoe69
Ron Summers
Ron Summers
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 11:40pm
11th Jan 2025 11:40pm
Electricity in her kiss
#lover
#passion
#seductive
#sensual
#sexy
108 reads
0 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
11th Jan 2025 4:16pm
11th Jan 2025 4:16pm
Is He Cheating On Me Or Not?
Crystal felt something near her.
She saw Scott humping her friend Kirstie.
She woke up screaming "no".
She saw Scott humping her friend Kirstie.
She woke up screaming "no".
#betrayal
#fiction
#home
#nightmares
#sex
80 reads
0 Comments
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