Dark Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
23rd Apr 2025 00:09am
23rd Apr 2025 00:09am
forget
Darkness Bane, my hurt is insane
curled into a ball, I balk
With shivers of madness, I tremble
Sleek with regret, I stutter
needful cage of a somber tone
Releasing these feelings, necessary
My keenness can be felt deeply
If you listen to the silent weep
Cloistered vision, I'm hard on myself
There is no value
incessant laughter says I'm a failure
unkempt rebellion I slack
Where I should be taught
speaking expletives into being
even those not heard of
because they reside in me
words formed...
curled into a ball, I balk
With shivers of madness, I tremble
Sleek with regret, I stutter
needful cage of a somber tone
Releasing these feelings, necessary
My keenness can be felt deeply
If you listen to the silent weep
Cloistered vision, I'm hard on myself
There is no value
incessant laughter says I'm a failure
unkempt rebellion I slack
Where I should be taught
speaking expletives into being
even those not heard of
because they reside in me
words formed...
#anxiety
#dark
77 reads
0 Comments
smackdownraven
Poem Published
22nd Apr 2025 11:36pm
22nd Apr 2025 11:36pm
fret
Darkness dread, my fear is fed
In the gothic gloom, squander
Feelings take a toll
expending them freely
leaves one with a dull ache
emptiness ensues with fretful thoughts
I'm not liked of this, I'm sure
spurned affections answer for me
Little lady, so bare
Cover your nakedness
a multitude of imperfections we see
needful redemption afflicted sorrow
Be it now or on the morrow
When you realize your folly
incessant chatter rankles my nerves
It's as if the bleak is giving a sermon
to which there is...
In the gothic gloom, squander
Feelings take a toll
expending them freely
leaves one with a dull ache
emptiness ensues with fretful thoughts
I'm not liked of this, I'm sure
spurned affections answer for me
Little lady, so bare
Cover your nakedness
a multitude of imperfections we see
needful redemption afflicted sorrow
Be it now or on the morrow
When you realize your folly
incessant chatter rankles my nerves
It's as if the bleak is giving a sermon
to which there is...
#anxiety
#dark
67 reads
2 Comments
Green_Arrow
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 10:49pm
21st Apr 2025 10:49pm
Left For Dead By Someone There
We
were on
our way home
in the pouring
rain before my best
friend had to stop the car
because he spotted some chick
laying naked on the road, rolled
her over and noticed that she was
drugged, raped and left for dead by someone there.
were on
our way home
in the pouring
rain before my best
friend had to stop the car
because he spotted some chick
laying naked on the road, rolled
her over and noticed that she was
drugged, raped and left for dead by someone there.
#dark
#dialogue
#fiction
#rain
#sex
79 reads
0 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 10:32pm
21st Apr 2025 10:32pm
A wicked reaction
As we exchange thoughts and insight and personal thoughts 🤔 for sure it seems that the whole damn world. 🌍 Has gone mad with pure chaos and drama and confusion and madness. For sure as we exchange thoughts what do you think is really happening, 🤨 right before our own eyes 👀
Don't it seems that some individuals are in attack mode trying desperately to stop what's going on in high sight 😞 For sure there are those who have become, snitches and hit squads 🤨 but yet we ask WHY??? For sure it is those enemies from within, that are involved in...
Don't it seems that some individuals are in attack mode trying desperately to stop what's going on in high sight 😞 For sure there are those who have become, snitches and hit squads 🤨 but yet we ask WHY??? For sure it is those enemies from within, that are involved in...
#corruption
#philosophical
#politics
#power
#StreamOfConsciousness
63 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 9:33pm
21st Apr 2025 9:33pm
Breadcrumbs
It's a good thing nobody is ignoring me.
I thought i was alone :P
I thought i was alone :P
#funny
#TruthOfLife
77 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 9:27pm
21st Apr 2025 9:27pm
empty
emptiness ensues when it's quiet
A lonely feeling cradles me
Something I can't escape
a big difference from the fullness I feel at other times
When I hear so clearly
Then blank nothingness
My soul is no longer connected
Earthbound, I can't touch the sky
fleeting feeling to believe
It all seems like a dream
My being rises so high
just to crash into my mortality
leaving me feeling all too human
a pressing moment
With all doors barred
With thoughts, I can't hack it
careening on edge ...
A lonely feeling cradles me
Something I can't escape
a big difference from the fullness I feel at other times
When I hear so clearly
Then blank nothingness
My soul is no longer connected
Earthbound, I can't touch the sky
fleeting feeling to believe
It all seems like a dream
My being rises so high
just to crash into my mortality
leaving me feeling all too human
a pressing moment
With all doors barred
With thoughts, I can't hack it
careening on edge ...
#anxiety
#love
78 reads
5 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
21st Apr 2025 12:38pm
21st Apr 2025 12:38pm
Two Lovers
#dark
#death
#illness
#sex
#war
111 reads
2 Comments
ShaleeSue
Shalee
Shalee
Poem Published
20th Apr 2025 8:39am
20th Apr 2025 8:39am
No Answer In The Room
#abuse
#hurt
#MeToo
#secrets
#shame
51 reads
0 Comments
AfterSexDilemma
Poem Published
19th Apr 2025 11:46pm
19th Apr 2025 11:46pm
Grandmother Spider
Let us connect to the ether,
A web, lighter than feathers.
To each other.
Sisters and brothers.
Rival clans.
In a fencing dance.
But really, we love each other.
We're just in a trance.
Let's open the sky,
To the narrow gate.
And forget the reasons,
We've learned to hate.
The web of lies,
Is what God creates.
Let's find the truth,
By being fake.
A web, lighter than feathers.
To each other.
Sisters and brothers.
Rival clans.
In a fencing dance.
But really, we love each other.
We're just in a trance.
Let's open the sky,
To the narrow gate.
And forget the reasons,
We've learned to hate.
The web of lies,
Is what God creates.
Let's find the truth,
By being fake.
#TruthOfLife
129 reads
4 Comments
summultima
uma
uma
Poem Published
19th Apr 2025 3:55pm
19th Apr 2025 3:55pm
~teaser #1 :: when the inner~ aghori unleashes…
this smiling yogic lips as if a deep purplish
to watery-coloured glassy mishmash emulsion
of a many bitten clotted beady clusters …
spread in a sensual scatter.. amongst
the foaming in rainy droplets in glisten..
of a daytime..
mutates sudden ..
over the overtaking maya
-a transitional twilight-ic switch
of a grave
yes, welcome to the liberational grave
that now, you are already in fateful entry.
your monstrous mouth of maggoty lies ...
to watery-coloured glassy mishmash emulsion
of a many bitten clotted beady clusters …
spread in a sensual scatter.. amongst
the foaming in rainy droplets in glisten..
of a daytime..
mutates sudden ..
over the overtaking maya
-a transitional twilight-ic switch
of a grave
yes, welcome to the liberational grave
that now, you are already in fateful entry.
your monstrous mouth of maggoty lies ...
#anger
#dark
#evil
#rebellion
#spiritual
93 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Apr 2025 3:25pm
19th Apr 2025 3:25pm
She was the creator
#dark
#evil
#fiction
#horror
#rhyming
58 reads
6 Comments
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