Dark Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Evil poetry and morbid poems about death and horror
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 9:40pm
20th Jan 2025 9:40pm
Only in life you'll feel this pain
Phone calls, friends, Valentine's Day cards, cats, birthday parties and the countless games that make people hurt, cry, laugh etc.
These things are hands that stick out the window and catch you and break your fall after you have thrown yourself off the roof
The sound of their voices, the pain they inflict, the games they play
The noise
The noise keeps you from going insane
It keeps your mind off your mind
Down the road in an ordinary house of the alive, there is darkness & silence
You can hear the water dripping off the roof of your skull
There's...
These things are hands that stick out the window and catch you and break your fall after you have thrown yourself off the roof
The sound of their voices, the pain they inflict, the games they play
The noise
The noise keeps you from going insane
It keeps your mind off your mind
Down the road in an ordinary house of the alive, there is darkness & silence
You can hear the water dripping off the roof of your skull
There's...
#betrayal
#friendship
#LifeStruggles
#manipulation
#suicide
52 reads
11 Comments
CasketSharpe
Poem Published
20th Jan 2025 6:39pm
20th Jan 2025 6:39pm
CSP-The Edge of Cyber Twilight (Cauldron Kill Series)
The digital spawn better known as the Cyber-Sin Princess,
Tech assassin of Lord IF.6 and daughter of a deleted mistress,
“Born and reprogramed from a corrupt virus file
As beautiful transparent digital flesh with a bizarre killing style,
“Through her veins flow numerical calculations
Problem solving within a micro-second without hesitation,
“With the ability to communicate with any machinery thru code
Always with respect while living flesh is treated ice cold,
“Lights of any kind glow brighter when her...
Tech assassin of Lord IF.6 and daughter of a deleted mistress,
“Born and reprogramed from a corrupt virus file
As beautiful transparent digital flesh with a bizarre killing style,
“Through her veins flow numerical calculations
Problem solving within a micro-second without hesitation,
“With the ability to communicate with any machinery thru code
Always with respect while living flesh is treated ice cold,
“Lights of any kind glow brighter when her...
#dark
#technology
44 reads
4 Comments
Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 10:55pm
19th Jan 2025 10:55pm
What is your dark side
Do you know what is your DARK side effect, that you call upon when you are at a point in your own life. That the things in your life, has taken a real dramatic change of direction, that you start to feel trapped in a vortex of insanity. Follow by just the pain and hurt and confusion, and drama and madness and chaos, with no escape route nor plan. TO move you out of the way. For the elders say that we have the ability to manifest that which is hidden in own spiritual entity. For do you know what your true beliefs, are of what is your spiritual faith, and entity is to you 🤔 For example...
#evolution
#metaphor
#morality
#philosophical
#StreamOfConsciousness
50 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 8:54pm
19th Jan 2025 8:54pm
Madness
altercating madness, conflicts in my soul
assaulting my senses with its insensitivty
inciting riots of thought
corrupt of vision, my imagination listens
creating demons to amuse me
hateful understanding the darkness is a part of me
sacred trust I incorporate it within my rituals
denying my lust only provokes it
sinsister need wants too
beautiful disaster, chaos reigns as a Queen
it is the deepest part of me
dasterdly desire, a victim of thr occult?
nay, it's inspiration
Midnight smiles licking her lips ...
assaulting my senses with its insensitivty
inciting riots of thought
corrupt of vision, my imagination listens
creating demons to amuse me
hateful understanding the darkness is a part of me
sacred trust I incorporate it within my rituals
denying my lust only provokes it
sinsister need wants too
beautiful disaster, chaos reigns as a Queen
it is the deepest part of me
dasterdly desire, a victim of thr occult?
nay, it's inspiration
Midnight smiles licking her lips ...
#dark
74 reads
0 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 8:32pm
19th Jan 2025 8:32pm
Circular Vision Games
The world is lame
Everyday is practically the same
Painful, and hard to explain
In order to live inside your brain
You must go insane
You have to die
Try not to cry
When you bid the world goodbye
You know you have to die to live in here
Circular vision games
Break down in calculated pain
You have to die to get by
To live in the world's eyes
You have to die
So you can look back
Then see yourself wave bye bye
Everyday is practically the same
Painful, and hard to explain
In order to live inside your brain
You must go insane
You have to die
Try not to cry
When you bid the world goodbye
You know you have to die to live in here
Circular vision games
Break down in calculated pain
You have to die to get by
To live in the world's eyes
You have to die
So you can look back
Then see yourself wave bye bye
#apathy
#boredom
#LifeStruggles
#rhyming
#suffering
65 reads
15 Comments
Lynxxey
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 2:28pm
19th Jan 2025 2:28pm
Fake earthquakes(ptsd)
Over me there lies a shadow
Dark in color, deep yet shallow
Looming vicious, clouding vision
Pouring down and building prisons
With walls of which you cannot touch
But I still fathom, this and much
It smashes through my daily grind
Taking both my body and mind
Giving burning shaking fits
I’ll sweat enough to drown a fish
Polished bottles calm the shakes
and the mental anguish
Of the fake earthquakes
Dark in color, deep yet shallow
Looming vicious, clouding vision
Pouring down and building prisons
With walls of which you cannot touch
But I still fathom, this and much
It smashes through my daily grind
Taking both my body and mind
Giving burning shaking fits
I’ll sweat enough to drown a fish
Polished bottles calm the shakes
and the mental anguish
Of the fake earthquakes
#dark
#MentalHealth
60 reads
2 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 12:12pm
19th Jan 2025 12:12pm
Broken
Within my flesh
My soul is torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
My soul is torn
Lost in a day
Not for the strong
Broken
Dreams I can't follow
If I die forever
Everlasting sorrow
#dark
#rhyming
#vulnerability #weakness
#vulnerability #weakness
81 reads
12 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
19th Jan 2025 9:42am
19th Jan 2025 9:42am
I AM WHO I AM!
I could be a 65 year old dude...
...or an 19 year old college student...
It's the Internet...be careful!
That lovely girl who needs help
paying her phone bill or rent -
she sends you a "not her" nude!
Get out your cash app!
You just got scammed!
Poor little you!
The Nigerian prince is
going to split his inheritance
some time next month, right?
So, you'll be ok! Whew! Just
text your mother's maiden name
and your childhood phone number!
If not...that lottery winner is just ...
...or an 19 year old college student...
It's the Internet...be careful!
That lovely girl who needs help
paying her phone bill or rent -
she sends you a "not her" nude!
Get out your cash app!
You just got scammed!
Poor little you!
The Nigerian prince is
going to split his inheritance
some time next month, right?
So, you'll be ok! Whew! Just
text your mother's maiden name
and your childhood phone number!
If not...that lottery winner is just ...
#deception
#evil
#horror
76 reads
3 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
4th Jan 2025 00:36am
4th Jan 2025 00:36am
Doggy girl!
#dirty
#dogs
#sex
136 reads
6 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 7:41pm
18th Jan 2025 7:41pm
Mob
dictate the madness
we march in step with the vibrations
hailing from a maelstorm
wicked little itch to appease the demonic need
hexing the night I come in
stop time for a moment
watching it fall heavy on everyone
evil feasts opening it's dark eyes
grievous error thinking to avoid it
into the maw, now mob for the hell of it
rising on the winds I take flight
a witch with you on her mind
Mr. zombie commanding an army
with your ritualistic offerings
an army of dread celebrating life
my humblists...
we march in step with the vibrations
hailing from a maelstorm
wicked little itch to appease the demonic need
hexing the night I come in
stop time for a moment
watching it fall heavy on everyone
evil feasts opening it's dark eyes
grievous error thinking to avoid it
into the maw, now mob for the hell of it
rising on the winds I take flight
a witch with you on her mind
Mr. zombie commanding an army
with your ritualistic offerings
an army of dread celebrating life
my humblists...
#anxiety
#dark
#music
45 reads
0 Comments
Paulajobi
Paula Jobi
Paula Jobi
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 5:33pm
18th Jan 2025 5:33pm
Ladies Room Conquest
You are crying...
I've been there and back...
...lean on me!
It's ok...
you don't have to
go back out there!
My name is Paula.
Nice to meet you!
You have a pretty smile.
Yes you do!
I have no reason to lie.
You're shaking.
Come here!
I will comfort you.
I will walk you out.
No one should make
anyone hurt this way.
You didn't deserve this!
They always say...
that it's your fault!
Honey, that's abuse!
I have been where you are.
No one comforted...
I've been there and back...
...lean on me!
It's ok...
you don't have to
go back out there!
My name is Paula.
Nice to meet you!
You have a pretty smile.
Yes you do!
I have no reason to lie.
You're shaking.
Come here!
I will comfort you.
I will walk you out.
No one should make
anyone hurt this way.
You didn't deserve this!
They always say...
that it's your fault!
Honey, that's abuse!
I have been where you are.
No one comforted...
#seductive
56 reads
3 Comments
Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
18th Jan 2025 12:32pm
18th Jan 2025 12:32pm
It will drive you insane
My sister & I are chained to a steel bedpost
Every few hours my mother comes in and beats me with a fire poker
She then sends one of her boyfriends to kiss my sister and hit her with his belt
They've often told my sister & I that they love us
Once we get out of here, we'll get our revenge
I'll wait until there sleeping
I'll use that same poker and beat their brains in until there unconscious
Nothing smells like human brains
A thick, sweet smell
It will drive you insane
Every few hours my mother comes in and beats me with a fire poker
She then sends one of her boyfriends to kiss my sister and hit her with his belt
They've often told my sister & I that they love us
Once we get out of here, we'll get our revenge
I'll wait until there sleeping
I'll use that same poker and beat their brains in until there unconscious
Nothing smells like human brains
A thick, sweet smell
It will drive you insane
#dark
#family
#horror
#revenge
#violence
61 reads
8 Comments
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