Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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stop fighting your inner beast man
fighting the illusion I hold onto truth
you have never loved anyone
you pity yourself for things you alone have caused
you set into motion a sequence of events
the day you crossed my path
you think to deliver me early to my undoing
wait we're just getting to the good part
vengeance is His alone
you thought I caused your ego issue no it was God
He will recompense for all of your ego polishing you do at my expense
a demon on your back
except it isn't a woman is it?
what you really crave is a man inside you
admit...
you have never loved anyone
you pity yourself for things you alone have caused
you set into motion a sequence of events
the day you crossed my path
you think to deliver me early to my undoing
wait we're just getting to the good part
vengeance is His alone
you thought I caused your ego issue no it was God
He will recompense for all of your ego polishing you do at my expense
a demon on your back
except it isn't a woman is it?
what you really crave is a man inside you
admit...
#dark
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She will disappear
Why don't you disappear
Sick of your face each year
Listen to me my dear
The end is growing near
You have tried to threaten me
You have tried to kill me
I'm stronger then you thought I would be
Open your mouth, taste my sweet addiction
Come a little closer, endure my depraved affliction
Accuracy & outcome, guided this conviction
No time for remorse, another crucifixion
Eat the bite
Rinse it down
Run for cover
Stroke the ground
Within is the rival
Must annihilate, for survival
...
Sick of your face each year
Listen to me my dear
The end is growing near
You have tried to threaten me
You have tried to kill me
I'm stronger then you thought I would be
Open your mouth, taste my sweet addiction
Come a little closer, endure my depraved affliction
Accuracy & outcome, guided this conviction
No time for remorse, another crucifixion
Eat the bite
Rinse it down
Run for cover
Stroke the ground
Within is the rival
Must annihilate, for survival
...
#dark
#hate
#murder
#relationships
#rhyming
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2 Comments
Pico de Gallo
Without hesitation, my hands furl
Sharpest blade, carbon steel
Satisfaction, skin splitting open
Guts, juices, spilling out, sweet
Tomato blood thick on these hands
How dare he bring her to my table
Screaming stocks leak chlorophyll
Cilantro, tearing, limb from limb
A hint of intrigue, a freshness
I hope it tastes like soap to you
Depedation and decapitation
Prying outer layers, for insides
Chopping, violent and precise
Onions, your tears, never enough
Tossed with serano and lime
With a smile, I deliver on time, ...
Sharpest blade, carbon steel
Satisfaction, skin splitting open
Guts, juices, spilling out, sweet
Tomato blood thick on these hands
How dare he bring her to my table
Screaming stocks leak chlorophyll
Cilantro, tearing, limb from limb
A hint of intrigue, a freshness
I hope it tastes like soap to you
Depedation and decapitation
Prying outer layers, for insides
Chopping, violent and precise
Onions, your tears, never enough
Tossed with serano and lime
With a smile, I deliver on time, ...
#anger
#betrayal
#food
#NaPoWriMo2024
#relationships
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C'mon Bring It On
A constant cacophony
of complete crap
playing the victim
when you're on the attack
an importation
of radicalisation
so hard done by
in an alien nation
if this
is the case
why are you still here then
two fucking faced
multiple benefit scams
then you deface
statues of the past
you just can't change
history to suit your path
or try to erase
the very place
which, within your at.
The introduction
of third world religion
whilst trying to suction
the production of salvation. ...
of complete crap
playing the victim
when you're on the attack
an importation
of radicalisation
so hard done by
in an alien nation
if this
is the case
why are you still here then
two fucking faced
multiple benefit scams
then you deface
statues of the past
you just can't change
history to suit your path
or try to erase
the very place
which, within your at.
The introduction
of third world religion
whilst trying to suction
the production of salvation. ...
#culture
#identity
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2 Comments
1864
Welcome ladies,
It is 1864 in Arizona
and
you have no rights to your bodies.
Unless,
of course,
you are going to die.
The Good ‘Ole Party of 2024
is
just fine with statutes from the 1800s.
Good,
wholesome
laws!
Family
values
laws!
Moral laws!
No legislative debate permitted
on an archaic law
that makes you a baby factory.
Because,
It is a good law.
Raped,
you will live
and carry a rapist’s child
Incest,
you will...
It is 1864 in Arizona
and
you have no rights to your bodies.
Unless,
of course,
you are going to die.
The Good ‘Ole Party of 2024
is
just fine with statutes from the 1800s.
Good,
wholesome
laws!
Family
values
laws!
Moral laws!
No legislative debate permitted
on an archaic law
that makes you a baby factory.
Because,
It is a good law.
Raped,
you will live
and carry a rapist’s child
Incest,
you will...
#anger
#politics
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4 Comments
Am I Back
Will I survive
Do i
Really want to know
If I'm
Back
In this fucking construct
Again
Simply because
I didn't Think
Do i
Really want to know
If I'm
Back
In this fucking construct
Again
Simply because
I didn't Think
#honesty
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Your Streets
Will it
Only be
When Your city street's
Have turned Into
Pathways
Full of rubble
Will Your
IF you Survive
Will Your Thinking
Change
Where Your
Regret
Sadly smiles
And explains to Your
Stupidly
There are No refunds
For your
Wilfull ignorance
You knew this was Coming
And Now
You Pay the Price
Only be
When Your city street's
Have turned Into
Pathways
Full of rubble
Will Your
IF you Survive
Will Your Thinking
Change
Where Your
Regret
Sadly smiles
And explains to Your
Stupidly
There are No refunds
For your
Wilfull ignorance
You knew this was Coming
And Now
You Pay the Price
#honesty
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0 Comments
Angry As SHIT!
#relationships
#breakup
#conflict
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1 Comment
Who am I?
Ludo.
#forest
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Why was dog was bitten?
Because it's
Was her
Birthday.
Was her
Birthday.
#forest
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Pigs
Pigs on the left
Tories on the right
What we gon’ do?
We’re gonna start a fight!
A fight between the classes
An uprising of the masses
A battle of ideology
We’ll rise from the ashes
The ashes of deprivation
Degradation
And alienation
The ashes of feudalism
Liberalism
And fascism
Oh why can’t we see beyond
All the bollocks
All the rhetoric
Why have we stopped seeking the truth
Seeking justice
Seeking equality
Tories on the right
What we gon’ do?
We’re gonna start a fight!
A fight between the classes
An uprising of the masses
A battle of ideology
We’ll rise from the ashes
The ashes of deprivation
Degradation
And alienation
The ashes of feudalism
Liberalism
And fascism
Oh why can’t we see beyond
All the bollocks
All the rhetoric
Why have we stopped seeking the truth
Seeking justice
Seeking equality
#corruption
#politics
#greed
#inequality
#poverty
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3 Comments
ghosted
..and all the pretty
things you gave me
suddenly
went
away
things you gave me
suddenly
went
away
#relationships
#honesty
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3 Comments
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