Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Austin2002
Austin2002
Poem Published
Yesterday 3:39am
Yesterday 3:39am
You mother f**kers!
#sadness
#anger
#hate #frustration
#hate #frustration
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T_V_Walker
Poem Published
20th Apr 2018 12:21pm
20th Apr 2018 12:21pm
The right to bear books
Take up books
Instead of arms
To Make love efficient
And destruction cease
The lettered revolution
Needs no blood
Just languages understood
A book never shot a child
Though they can kill
In the hands of the ignorant
A loving teacher starts a peaceful revolution
In the minds of the pupils
Without a shot
Without a drop
Peace perches on a ledge
In a flock of pigeons
Above the growling street
Instead of arms
To Make love efficient
And destruction cease
The lettered revolution
Needs no blood
Just languages understood
A book never shot a child
Though they can kill
In the hands of the ignorant
A loving teacher starts a peaceful revolution
In the minds of the pupils
Without a shot
Without a drop
Peace perches on a ledge
In a flock of pigeons
Above the growling street
#peace
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Crimrosse
Poem Published
16th Apr 2018 7:45pm
16th Apr 2018 7:45pm
Toxic
You say you will beat me up
You say I should kill myself
Strong words for weakling like you
Telling me to be afraid
Let me tell you , I don't care
For the poison from your mouth
For the toxin that you dare
Like water just spill around
Let me tell you , shame on you
How emotions rule your mind
See how weak you have become
See how strong became your binds
Anger sadly is your answer
Rage keeps coursing through your veins
Every little tiny banter
You keep turning into pain
Let me tell you , take a breath
Stop...
You say I should kill myself
Strong words for weakling like you
Telling me to be afraid
Let me tell you , I don't care
For the poison from your mouth
For the toxin that you dare
Like water just spill around
Let me tell you , shame on you
How emotions rule your mind
See how weak you have become
See how strong became your binds
Anger sadly is your answer
Rage keeps coursing through your veins
Every little tiny banter
You keep turning into pain
Let me tell you , take a breath
Stop...
#anger
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lotuslover
Gypsy_Rose
Gypsy_Rose
Poem Published
16th Apr 2018 1:31pm
16th Apr 2018 1:31pm
Now or Never
Looking back to see your hateful face trying to knock my teeth out
Who issues correction and reproof of Prophectic doctrine besides the LORD OF LORDS Himself
Not trying to be disrespectful or give any credit due to those without clout
Pushed and pushed till GOD decided it was time to place your ass on a shelf
Bored with your games, going to bring back the power to keep the children safe
Not judging you nor myself but we both know who caused all this blood shed
I know in my heart that this is Truth, in that I have total belief
Now evil one, go grab your night...
Who issues correction and reproof of Prophectic doctrine besides the LORD OF LORDS Himself
Not trying to be disrespectful or give any credit due to those without clout
Pushed and pushed till GOD decided it was time to place your ass on a shelf
Bored with your games, going to bring back the power to keep the children safe
Not judging you nor myself but we both know who caused all this blood shed
I know in my heart that this is Truth, in that I have total belief
Now evil one, go grab your night...
#forgiveness
#identity
#inspirational
#SelfReflection
#redemption
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IcarusVStheSun
Poem Published
15th Apr 2018 6:45am
15th Apr 2018 6:45am
Is It Hate to Hate A Mother?
Oh Mother, how you mock me, so
With all the fine luxuries you own
Complaining to your friends and family
That you had to pay child support
For the child you chose to birthed
How can a woman like you live with herself?
You beg the court to lower your child support
Because you couldn't afford the rent
To your fancy house and designer clothes
While your child struggle to live in poverty
Continue to live poverty next to the factories
While you live in a nice apartment
With your new Alfa Romeo, having the nerves
To post...
With all the fine luxuries you own
Complaining to your friends and family
That you had to pay child support
For the child you chose to birthed
How can a woman like you live with herself?
You beg the court to lower your child support
Because you couldn't afford the rent
To your fancy house and designer clothes
While your child struggle to live in poverty
Continue to live poverty next to the factories
While you live in a nice apartment
With your new Alfa Romeo, having the nerves
To post...
#anger
#strength
#mother
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Miyalibra127
Poem Published
14th Apr 2018 7:20pm
14th Apr 2018 7:20pm
The demon in me
#anger
#hate
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Blackwolf
Poem Published
14th Apr 2018 7:13am
14th Apr 2018 7:13am
The Game And The Gamers
I've Lived In The Shadow , I've Lived In The Light ,
Seen What I Call Wrong And What I Call Right ,
My Ears For The Listening , Eyes For The Sight ,
Been Such A Wild Ride But I Held On Tight ,
And As Far As Authority I Don't Say No Sir ,
This Is My Life , Not Your Roller Coaster ,
I Won't Obey You , I Am Mine To Command ,
This Is My Tribe And I Stretch Out My Hand ,
If Blood Need Be Myself I Shall Sacrifice ,
Fate And Destiny And A Roll Of The Dice ,
I Have Spun The Wheel Of Future Fortunes ,
Swung On The Trapeze And Done Contortions , ...
Seen What I Call Wrong And What I Call Right ,
My Ears For The Listening , Eyes For The Sight ,
Been Such A Wild Ride But I Held On Tight ,
And As Far As Authority I Don't Say No Sir ,
This Is My Life , Not Your Roller Coaster ,
I Won't Obey You , I Am Mine To Command ,
This Is My Tribe And I Stretch Out My Hand ,
If Blood Need Be Myself I Shall Sacrifice ,
Fate And Destiny And A Roll Of The Dice ,
I Have Spun The Wheel Of Future Fortunes ,
Swung On The Trapeze And Done Contortions , ...
#identity
#freedom
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Missj2100
Jayy Love
Jayy Love
Poem Published
13th Apr 2018 4:49pm
13th Apr 2018 4:49pm
WHAT HAPPENED?
Drunk laughs and drunk tears
High moments and look what happen here
The thought of a promise that didn't even last
Moving forward and I still reminisce of our past
Who ever thought it would brake
So much secrets we can only take
Never believed it would hurt to see someone change
I guess is life, instead of you pulling me out you left me alone in the cage.
The birdie dies the gold will be spent
You with no heart who only kept it for rent
What about our dreams
I guess you shattered them it was fake as it seems
Why push me...
High moments and look what happen here
The thought of a promise that didn't even last
Moving forward and I still reminisce of our past
Who ever thought it would brake
So much secrets we can only take
Never believed it would hurt to see someone change
I guess is life, instead of you pulling me out you left me alone in the cage.
The birdie dies the gold will be spent
You with no heart who only kept it for rent
What about our dreams
I guess you shattered them it was fake as it seems
Why push me...
#anger
#heartbroken
#breakup
#conflict
#betrayal
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Ghost223
Poem Published
13th Apr 2018 8:04am
13th Apr 2018 8:04am
Blind
Do you hear that vague sound
Spewing out of your chest?
I promise your heart
Is trying its hardest.
Yeah that breakup was difficult,
But I need you to feel me.
You are down in a pit
And I am your way out.
Simply saying
“Oh, it's not so bad,”
Won't save you.
Tell me why you are feeling
Real pain
Over a fake love?
You can't be saved by crying.
I need you to feel me.
You need to be in my shoes.
You need to experience loss.
You need to experience pain.
You need to tongue kiss death
Until you are...
Spewing out of your chest?
I promise your heart
Is trying its hardest.
Yeah that breakup was difficult,
But I need you to feel me.
You are down in a pit
And I am your way out.
Simply saying
“Oh, it's not so bad,”
Won't save you.
Tell me why you are feeling
Real pain
Over a fake love?
You can't be saved by crying.
I need you to feel me.
You need to be in my shoes.
You need to experience loss.
You need to experience pain.
You need to tongue kiss death
Until you are...
#sadness
#breakup
#conflict
#lover
#dialogue
37 reads
3 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
12th Apr 2018 9:18pm
12th Apr 2018 9:18pm
My Lexicon
My lexicon is my weapon of choice for attacking minds
Entertaining and educating using witty poetic lines
Like Optimus Prime I'm fighting these Decepticons
Deceptive cons trying to divert all of our attention
With transmissions that can lead to life in prison
The Grand Wizard using tricks to distort your vision
The David Blaines of the game making lives vanish
Then justice says "no hablo ingles" like she speaks only Spanish
Goddamn this!! There's got to be more efficient ways
For the pendulum to bring to us some much brighter days
I'm going...
Entertaining and educating using witty poetic lines
Like Optimus Prime I'm fighting these Decepticons
Deceptive cons trying to divert all of our attention
With transmissions that can lead to life in prison
The Grand Wizard using tricks to distort your vision
The David Blaines of the game making lives vanish
Then justice says "no hablo ingles" like she speaks only Spanish
Goddamn this!! There's got to be more efficient ways
For the pendulum to bring to us some much brighter days
I'm going...
#sadness
#death
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drone
Poem Published
12th Apr 2018 7:32am
12th Apr 2018 7:32am
Violence
Your violence
only comes
from the inner pain
that you contain
that you refuse
to Name
only comes
from the inner pain
that you contain
that you refuse
to Name
#TruthOfLife
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AndyJHale
Poem Published
12th Apr 2018 1:18am
12th Apr 2018 1:18am
Revolution
The sun is setting in the West, is it voiding the East of light?
Does it equate to the night being evil?
Or only void of light?
Until the Earth has completed one revolution, the author orders Chaos!
Copyright © 2018 by Andy J Hale
Does it equate to the night being evil?
Or only void of light?
Until the Earth has completed one revolution, the author orders Chaos!
Copyright © 2018 by Andy J Hale
#utopia
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