Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
Today 2:00am
Today 2:00am
"Bitter Pills" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 20/7/08
Some People NEED To ... " CHILL " ...
Because I'm Getting SICK Or Better Still Quite ILL ... !!!
Because Some Seem To Think My Lyrics HIT Like BRICKS ... !!!!!!!!
I Guess That's True If That's Their View ...
But Come On Now ... Just Look Around ....
Are You REALLY Cool With Todays' News ... ?!?
CRAZINESS Cos' Governments ...
DON'T DO What's Best For The Masses STRESS ... !!!
VIOLENCE ... Causing DISTRESS ...
To Women Men And Our Children ... !!!
BITTER PILLS ... INDEED ... !!!
But YOU It Seems...
Because I'm Getting SICK Or Better Still Quite ILL ... !!!
Because Some Seem To Think My Lyrics HIT Like BRICKS ... !!!!!!!!
I Guess That's True If That's Their View ...
But Come On Now ... Just Look Around ....
Are You REALLY Cool With Todays' News ... ?!?
CRAZINESS Cos' Governments ...
DON'T DO What's Best For The Masses STRESS ... !!!
VIOLENCE ... Causing DISTRESS ...
To Women Men And Our Children ... !!!
BITTER PILLS ... INDEED ... !!!
But YOU It Seems...
#rhyming
#LifeAsAWriter
#PowerOfWords
#hypocrisy
#apathy
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fieryangelsouljia
Poem Published
Yesterday 4:00pm
Yesterday 4:00pm
Good Girls
#anger
#CallToAction
#freedom
#feminism
#culture
25 reads
4 Comments
RagingFlames
Poem Published
22nd Jan 2020 8:24pm
22nd Jan 2020 8:24pm
I don’t forget
You think you know me
But you don’t know anything
You expect me to come back
But I ain’t going back for nothing
I’ve changed
That’s something you didn’t notice
I still think about you sure
But only to make sure I never forget how much you hurt me
But you don’t know anything
You expect me to come back
But I ain’t going back for nothing
I’ve changed
That’s something you didn’t notice
I still think about you sure
But only to make sure I never forget how much you hurt me
#MovingOn
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jigg82
Poem Published
21st Jan 2020 9:20pm
21st Jan 2020 9:20pm
Migraine
To a higher power I beg of you.
Please make it stop.
Please make it stop.
#illness
24 reads
6 Comments
JHA
Poem Published
20th Jan 2020 00:49am
20th Jan 2020 00:49am
Litost
ESC Single quarters: Kriel Friday 27 march 1987
1:54 Am LITOST South of the Tropic of Capricorn
I can’t sleep at rest
A nightmare made me fell like this
‘cause my dreams don’t seem to be the best
Asleep or awake which could be worst?
I’ve tried living life like a poem
With challenges and death ever present
Using words so real to describe fantasy
Is my only rhyming problem
Governed by a clock that I resent
I tried existing like a song
Somehow the tune...
1:54 Am LITOST South of the Tropic of Capricorn
I can’t sleep at rest
A nightmare made me fell like this
‘cause my dreams don’t seem to be the best
Asleep or awake which could be worst?
I’ve tried living life like a poem
With challenges and death ever present
Using words so real to describe fantasy
Is my only rhyming problem
Governed by a clock that I resent
I tried existing like a song
Somehow the tune...
#TruthOfLife
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Thetravelingfairy
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 8:34pm
19th Jan 2020 8:34pm
Uh oh.. You Pissed off a Poet
pissing off a poet
is the worst offense
a poet can destroy you
without moving their lips
scary, isn’t it?
i’ll rip apart your ignorance
like I tear up notebook pages
i’ll dream a murder story
and send you the letter
my paper is a canvas
to paint my angered mind
but all your weapons are spoken
only to dissolve with a passing breath
my weapon’s built to last
and signed in red.
is the worst offense
a poet can destroy you
without moving their lips
scary, isn’t it?
i’ll rip apart your ignorance
like I tear up notebook pages
i’ll dream a murder story
and send you the letter
my paper is a canvas
to paint my angered mind
but all your weapons are spoken
only to dissolve with a passing breath
my weapon’s built to last
and signed in red.
#anger
#LifeAsAWriter
#WritingPoetry #PowerOfWords
#WritingPoetry #PowerOfWords
46 reads
4 Comments
David_Macleod
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 6:47am
19th Jan 2020 6:47am
Awakenings
#sadness
#abuse
#MeToo
#suffering
#nightmares
78 reads
6 Comments
BigVirge
Big Virge
Big Virge
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 3:45am
19th Jan 2020 3:45am
"Something For Them" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 21/6/2008
YES ... Something For THEM ... !!!
Those In The Audience Whose Acts Are ... " Pretense " ...
PRETENDING Their ... " Friends " ...
When They Really STAND AGAINST ...
The Ways Some EXPRESS Through Raps And Poems ...
SOME Like ME ...
Whose Poetry Invites The Weak ...
To Go And SEEK Some ... THERAPY ... !!!
Fiends Who Scheme BEHIND The Scenes ...
To ... SCUPPER Dreams of Speech That's FREE ............................
Speech That Deals In HONESTY ...
Because They Keep Their Closets DEEP ... !!!
DEEP With...
Those In The Audience Whose Acts Are ... " Pretense " ...
PRETENDING Their ... " Friends " ...
When They Really STAND AGAINST ...
The Ways Some EXPRESS Through Raps And Poems ...
SOME Like ME ...
Whose Poetry Invites The Weak ...
To Go And SEEK Some ... THERAPY ... !!!
Fiends Who Scheme BEHIND The Scenes ...
To ... SCUPPER Dreams of Speech That's FREE ............................
Speech That Deals In HONESTY ...
Because They Keep Their Closets DEEP ... !!!
DEEP With...
#anger
#jealousy
#dark #frustration
#dark #frustration
20 reads
1 Comment
RobynRenee
Poem Published
19th Jan 2020 2:02am
19th Jan 2020 2:02am
brothers
We were brothers in that moment.
Though he was older and wiser,
and I was younger and filled with the vigor of youth,
we were brothers, twins of the womb.
We were brothers in that moment for
we shared the bitterness in our eyes.
We were no strangers to sin,
but this was a fault we had played only the victim of,
never the perpetrator.
It was a crime we were familiar with.
As familiar as life, as familiar as death.
The injustice of it all stung but it was a bite we could not fight.
Instead we let the bitterness flow from our...
Though he was older and wiser,
and I was younger and filled with the vigor of youth,
we were brothers, twins of the womb.
We were brothers in that moment for
we shared the bitterness in our eyes.
We were no strangers to sin,
but this was a fault we had played only the victim of,
never the perpetrator.
It was a crime we were familiar with.
As familiar as life, as familiar as death.
The injustice of it all stung but it was a bite we could not fight.
Instead we let the bitterness flow from our...
#brother
30 reads
2 Comments
RagingFlames
Poem Published
18th Jan 2020 9:15am
18th Jan 2020 9:15am
Changed who I used to be
You changed everything I used to be!!!
Everything I one was
I use to be so trusting and caring
But now it’s had to trust
You’ve made it hard for me to love
Hard to feel emotions
You’ve played me
Using the same exact potions
But now I’m use to the effects
And they wore off
Now your nothing to me
So just fuck off
From being my best friend
To someone I never wish to see
That’s just what happens
When you change who I used to be
Everything I one was
I use to be so trusting and caring
But now it’s had to trust
You’ve made it hard for me to love
Hard to feel emotions
You’ve played me
Using the same exact potions
But now I’m use to the effects
And they wore off
Now your nothing to me
So just fuck off
From being my best friend
To someone I never wish to see
That’s just what happens
When you change who I used to be
#anger
#hate
#frustration
38 reads
0 Comments
SatInUGal
Kumar
Kumar
Poem Published
18th Jan 2020 5:29am
18th Jan 2020 5:29am
GASLIT
Congratulations
You who are asleep at the wheel
For having no idea
Of who you run over
The people you hit
Again and again
The painful breaking
Of their bodies
The crunch and
Final plunge
Into whatever is next
Not even background
To whatever dance
You’re tapping out
In dreamland
Congratulations
For achieving some kind
Of enlightenment
Let it be
Let it be
Let the tide of blood
Wash over me
A speck in the endless
Lack of reason to care
I fear that you
Know more than...
You who are asleep at the wheel
For having no idea
Of who you run over
The people you hit
Again and again
The painful breaking
Of their bodies
The crunch and
Final plunge
Into whatever is next
Not even background
To whatever dance
You’re tapping out
In dreamland
Congratulations
For achieving some kind
Of enlightenment
Let it be
Let it be
Let the tide of blood
Wash over me
A speck in the endless
Lack of reason to care
I fear that you
Know more than...
#anxiety
31 reads
4 Comments
kxdija
kxdija .H
kxdija .H
Poem Published
18th Jan 2020 3:49am
18th Jan 2020 3:49am
my soldier is breaking
you're hurting and i wish i could do something
and i would
cos you're worth it
i don't wanna see you break down
IM posed to be the wreck here
the mess here
but i see the pain in your eyes
read the hurt between the lines
of your lies
you're comin apart piece by piece
startin wit your heart
you just can't bear the pain
hear that devil in your brain
i know it
i once felt the same
but I was DESTINED for this heartbreak
for this pain
You?
you're an angel
i don't want...
and i would
cos you're worth it
i don't wanna see you break down
IM posed to be the wreck here
the mess here
but i see the pain in your eyes
read the hurt between the lines
of your lies
you're comin apart piece by piece
startin wit your heart
you just can't bear the pain
hear that devil in your brain
i know it
i once felt the same
but I was DESTINED for this heartbreak
for this pain
You?
you're an angel
i don't want...
#love
#strength
#soldiers
#friendship
#gratitude
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