Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about angst, activism and hate - Honest critique has been requested for these poems. Want to learn the art of critique? Join our Honestly Crafted Critique group.
rowantree
Rowan E.
Rowan E.
Poem Published
Yesterday 00:32am
Yesterday 00:32am
superego scolds aloud
you mean to tell me you breathed all of that in?
with what intention?
how is this helping your fitness?
you say it's important to feel? how important is feeling when your bare feet are only friends with the texture
of the ground on the way
of that slippery, unforgiving shore of shards?
you could be stepping
you could be stepping towards goals
you could be shedding
that fucking buzzzzzz buzz buzz back
back of the head buzzz
shedding that
like an actual August
fur coat, unzipped, shirked
soaked,
dead, ...
with what intention?
how is this helping your fitness?
you say it's important to feel? how important is feeling when your bare feet are only friends with the texture
of the ground on the way
of that slippery, unforgiving shore of shards?
you could be stepping
you could be stepping towards goals
you could be shedding
that fucking buzzzzzz buzz buzz back
back of the head buzzz
shedding that
like an actual August
fur coat, unzipped, shirked
soaked,
dead, ...
#anxiety
#LifeAsAWriter
#addiction #honesty
#addiction #honesty
12 reads
0 Comments
HaiItsMo
Mo
Mo
Poem Published
13th Oct 2018 8:56pm
13th Oct 2018 8:56pm
Dear Diary Pt. 3
I think the bones in my fingers have grown, long enough to hold a gun or a hand.
My mother comes to my door much less often. She knows my blood no longer sleeps in my veins but on the floor next to all the hours of darkness my mind has been so intimate with.
She calls every once in a while, we talk about how nice the weather is. We don’t talk about how her heart shattered the very first time he hit her. We don’t talk about the last time she found me half past dead, shaking in a pool of my own blood. We don’t talk about how they’ve decided to finally get a divorce. ...
My mother comes to my door much less often. She knows my blood no longer sleeps in my veins but on the floor next to all the hours of darkness my mind has been so intimate with.
She calls every once in a while, we talk about how nice the weather is. We don’t talk about how her heart shattered the very first time he hit her. We don’t talk about the last time she found me half past dead, shaking in a pool of my own blood. We don’t talk about how they’ve decided to finally get a divorce. ...
#sadness
#depression
#mother
#parent
#SelfHarm
11 reads
0 Comments
DecipherMe
Poem Published
13th Oct 2018 7:42pm
13th Oct 2018 7:42pm
Dead Islands
Dear friend,
if you can't punch Hitler,
we've strung another in the bag
for the pulse of your love.
The world continues, proving every person who savored moments regressive.
Your rage,
nonetheless,
is future, present and past
as the Reaper who selects humanity
in a dormitory town that burns its quaintness through into your perfection.
Their discomfort justifies blow horn truth
until the lack of their sleep
diffuses the sap of their judgement ...
if you can't punch Hitler,
we've strung another in the bag
for the pulse of your love.
The world continues, proving every person who savored moments regressive.
Your rage,
nonetheless,
is future, present and past
as the Reaper who selects humanity
in a dormitory town that burns its quaintness through into your perfection.
Their discomfort justifies blow horn truth
until the lack of their sleep
diffuses the sap of their judgement ...
#politics
#satirical
#morality
8 reads
2 Comments
Chey
Cheyanne
Cheyanne
Poem Published
13th Oct 2018 11:42am
13th Oct 2018 11:42am
Furious
You become furious when the dishes aren’t done.
You become furious when dinner isn’t made.
You become furious when the house is a mess.
You become furious when you think I haven’t don’t anything all day.
You become furious when you think the bills aren’t paid.
You become furious when you only see what you want to see.
However,
You don’t notice that our child has a 100 degree fever.
You don’t notice all the medicine, the ice packs, the throw up stained shirts.
You don’t notice that I actually did make it to the store today.
You don’t...
You become furious when dinner isn’t made.
You become furious when the house is a mess.
You become furious when you think I haven’t don’t anything all day.
You become furious when you think the bills aren’t paid.
You become furious when you only see what you want to see.
However,
You don’t notice that our child has a 100 degree fever.
You don’t notice all the medicine, the ice packs, the throw up stained shirts.
You don’t notice that I actually did make it to the store today.
You don’t...
#marriage
#abuse
21 reads
3 Comments
David_Macleod
Poem Published
13th Oct 2018 10:23am
13th Oct 2018 10:23am
Random 4 Liners 5.0
(i) Pain
Pain is the great human leveler
Whether physical or mental
Rich man poor man beggar man, thief
We all at times require pain relief
(ii) Frailty
Consider the frailty of others
Before kicking the shit out of them
Deliberate attacking a frail person
Makes you and evil coward
(iii) Use By Date
Shelf life is a consideration
When choosing a wife
she should be fit for life
with no signs of stagnation
(iv) Bravery
Keyboard warriors abound
Brave in the face...
Pain is the great human leveler
Whether physical or mental
Rich man poor man beggar man, thief
We all at times require pain relief
(ii) Frailty
Consider the frailty of others
Before kicking the shit out of them
Deliberate attacking a frail person
Makes you and evil coward
(iii) Use By Date
Shelf life is a consideration
When choosing a wife
she should be fit for life
with no signs of stagnation
(iv) Bravery
Keyboard warriors abound
Brave in the face...
#LifeStruggles
#TruthOfLife
29 reads
4 Comments
David_Macleod
Poem Published
13th Oct 2018 9:57am
13th Oct 2018 9:57am
The Future
The sun has turned scarlet red
and yet the sky is blacker than black
the wind no longer blows it inhales
it is drawing the breath for inside my soul
despite the strong red sun I am so very cold
but warmth emanates from the blackened sky
acid rain flow upwards to the black sky
the ground beneath me becoming barren
all its moisture vacuumed slowly skyward
the crops have failure written on them
the meat we ate are all rotting carcases
The science that we all relied on, debunked
the logic and reason illogical and unreasonable ...
and yet the sky is blacker than black
the wind no longer blows it inhales
it is drawing the breath for inside my soul
despite the strong red sun I am so very cold
but warmth emanates from the blackened sky
acid rain flow upwards to the black sky
the ground beneath me becoming barren
all its moisture vacuumed slowly skyward
the crops have failure written on them
the meat we ate are all rotting carcases
The science that we all relied on, debunked
the logic and reason illogical and unreasonable ...
#death
#nature
#evolution
24 reads
3 Comments
Penknife
Poem Published
11th Oct 2018 2:29pm
11th Oct 2018 2:29pm
Led by the blind
We are being led by the blind,
and can not see where we are going.
They say their way is best
but all their flaws are showing.
They instruct us not to question
They order us to stay in line.
but they are leading us far away
from the light of the divine.
And now the world's in darkness
but we keep on marching on,
fading into blackness
as we vanish one by one.
We need to break away!
but we don't know where to run.
So all we do is pray
and hope to see the sun.
And all...
and can not see where we are going.
They say their way is best
but all their flaws are showing.
They instruct us not to question
They order us to stay in line.
but they are leading us far away
from the light of the divine.
And now the world's in darkness
but we keep on marching on,
fading into blackness
as we vanish one by one.
We need to break away!
but we don't know where to run.
So all we do is pray
and hope to see the sun.
And all...
#politics
#spiritual
27 reads
5 Comments
Eerie
Poem Published
10th Oct 2018 5:53pm
10th Oct 2018 5:53pm
F*ckwit
The anger is seething today.
A ball of dark energy writhing
in the pit of a world gone fucking mad.
Where hope seems to have tripped over
itself and lost it's fucking mind.
Dammit! Pull yourself together;
you're so sloppy in your presentation.
Honestly, it's just pathetic.
A ball of dark energy writhing
in the pit of a world gone fucking mad.
Where hope seems to have tripped over
itself and lost it's fucking mind.
Dammit! Pull yourself together;
you're so sloppy in your presentation.
Honestly, it's just pathetic.
#anger
#frustration
51 reads
14 Comments
RagingFlames
Poem Published
10th Oct 2018 1:26am
10th Oct 2018 1:26am
What is you deal?
How do I feel about her?
Huh... Didn't think about it
But it's no where near the same
What do I feel?
I can talk to her
That's it
That is literally it
I'm glad I'm moving
I don't want to deal with this drama!
I'm going to quote my favorite musical ever
Quote from the Heather's
"Are we going to have a problem; you got a bone to pick. You've come so far, why now are you pulling on my dick! I'd normally slap your face off, and everyone here can watch! But I'm feeling nice here's some advice. Listen up bitch!" ...
Huh... Didn't think about it
But it's no where near the same
What do I feel?
I can talk to her
That's it
That is literally it
I'm glad I'm moving
I don't want to deal with this drama!
I'm going to quote my favorite musical ever
Quote from the Heather's
"Are we going to have a problem; you got a bone to pick. You've come so far, why now are you pulling on my dick! I'd normally slap your face off, and everyone here can watch! But I'm feeling nice here's some advice. Listen up bitch!" ...
#anger
#hate
#frustration
23 reads
0 Comments
RagingFlames
Poem Published
10th Oct 2018 1:08am
10th Oct 2018 1:08am
Who the f**k do you think you are!
I see this going bad...
Dumb cunt!
False information can cause so much shit!
1 I don't like her
2 I said I didn't fuck her!
3 you're a cunt
I'mma trust your friend not to tell you
Because fuck you!
You don't know shit!
Apparently you didn't hear shit!
Argh!
You're lucky I can't punch a girl!
You are seriously fucked!
Who the fuck do you think you are!
If you got a problem with me tell me!
I'll tell you to fuck off!
"I would tell him to fuck off too, now"
😡
I'm trying...
Dumb cunt!
False information can cause so much shit!
1 I don't like her
2 I said I didn't fuck her!
3 you're a cunt
I'mma trust your friend not to tell you
Because fuck you!
You don't know shit!
Apparently you didn't hear shit!
Argh!
You're lucky I can't punch a girl!
You are seriously fucked!
Who the fuck do you think you are!
If you got a problem with me tell me!
I'll tell you to fuck off!
"I would tell him to fuck off too, now"
😡
I'm trying...
#anger
#anxiety
#hate #frustration
#hate #frustration
19 reads
0 Comments
graham_brodie
Poem Published
9th Oct 2018 11:16am
9th Oct 2018 11:16am
f**k da polis
#GunControl
#MentalHealth
#CallToAction #HumanRights
#CallToAction #HumanRights
30 reads
0 Comments
David_Macleod
Poem Published
8th Oct 2018 4:38pm
8th Oct 2018 4:38pm
Nobody Told Me
Nobody told me
I couldn't get up an at em
I resolve to fight
I couldn't get up an at em
I resolve to fight
#CallToAction
44 reads
4 Comments
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