Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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drone
Poem Published
Today 9:26am
Today 9:26am
Inside
When your
Psychological spotlight
Apears
Out of nowhere
Catching you
On your road
Of dispair
With nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide
Would you acknowledge
Those cold hearted facts
Do you Dare
The facts to Prove
What your Hiding
Inside the place
That you Fear
Psychological spotlight
Apears
Out of nowhere
Catching you
On your road
Of dispair
With nowhere to run
Nowhere to hide
Would you acknowledge
Those cold hearted facts
Do you Dare
The facts to Prove
What your Hiding
Inside the place
That you Fear
#TruthOfLife
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Stoney223
WOLF BAY33
WOLF BAY33
Poem Published
4th Oct 2024 4:57am
4th Oct 2024 4:57am
WHAT IS THE POINT OF IT ALL
What is the point of all of this nonsense, that we have to learn to deal with time and time again. 😞 YET things are more worser, than they ever have been, in the world of today. But yet they tell you it's gonna get better by telling us more, lies with propaganda to cover up the lies. yet nothing has really change the very Dynamics of the suffering. Which causes your misery of the deepness of your own hurt and pain. For sure we need to ask thyself is this the kind of world, 🌎 that you want your own children's to live with and be apart of there life. 🤔 For even as I sit...
#corruption
#deception
#ignorance
#politics
#power
57 reads
2 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 9:40pm
3rd Oct 2024 9:40pm
Stole Geronimo
Stole Geronimo for skull n bones
Scouting for food and shelter
A horse stands up on red rocks
Feathers hide dangerous dreams
Living on the land of fruit of plenty
Birds scatter lightning is coming
Thunder of the Four Horsemen
Dirt kicks out under their shoes
Feel a steal a coming
Take land that is theirs
Slaughter innocent children n women
So I take any scalp I can carve
They steal our land and claim American
Geronimo is an American King
...
Scouting for food and shelter
A horse stands up on red rocks
Feathers hide dangerous dreams
Living on the land of fruit of plenty
Birds scatter lightning is coming
Thunder of the Four Horsemen
Dirt kicks out under their shoes
Feel a steal a coming
Take land that is theirs
Slaughter innocent children n women
So I take any scalp I can carve
They steal our land and claim American
Geronimo is an American King
...
#aliens
#America
#angels #apocalypse
#angels #apocalypse
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 11:45am
3rd Oct 2024 11:45am
War is never the solution
No one is victorious in war
Ruthless, heartless leaders, decide your country & mine that a bloodbath is needed
The innocent & poor will always lose this battle
War is money
War is power
War is dominance
War is pain
War is death
War is hell
Hell is war
One day, compassion & empathy will prevail
People will unite to overthrow government, big corporations & big pharma
If & when that day comes,
The people of this world,
You & I
Will live freely & happily forever
Ruthless, heartless leaders, decide your country & mine that a bloodbath is needed
The innocent & poor will always lose this battle
War is money
War is power
War is dominance
War is pain
War is death
War is hell
Hell is war
One day, compassion & empathy will prevail
People will unite to overthrow government, big corporations & big pharma
If & when that day comes,
The people of this world,
You & I
Will live freely & happily forever
#corruption
#greed
#hope
#peace
#war
58 reads
8 Comments
drone
Poem Published
3rd Oct 2024 10:20am
3rd Oct 2024 10:20am
This Arena
Man
This Arena
Pisses me off sometimes
What are you talking about
You dick
The world is not an arena
Your crazy
You don't get it
Do you
Everything
You see
Touch feel
Hear taste smell
Is in this realm
The only time you leave
Is when you sleep
Where freedom comes
In many forms
Depending
On how You Think
This Arena
Pisses me off sometimes
What are you talking about
You dick
The world is not an arena
Your crazy
You don't get it
Do you
Everything
You see
Touch feel
Hear taste smell
Is in this realm
The only time you leave
Is when you sleep
Where freedom comes
In many forms
Depending
On how You Think
#courage
#frustration
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oldmanG
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 1:13pm
1st Oct 2024 1:13pm
Put Down the Gat
Put down the gat
I’m sick of this shit
Wake up and wonder if my kids are ok
Not like they’re fighting for our country
Or policing their territory
Jesus fucking Christ they’re our future
Tryin to learn the basics of life
How many more thoughts and prayers
Should we suffer till we say
This shouldn’t be the new normal
Metal detectors and shelter in place
Dont solve anything when the perp
Has more fire than the police
Ar 15 or ak47 weapon of war
Gotta ban that shit
Did it for 10 yrs and mass shootings ...
I’m sick of this shit
Wake up and wonder if my kids are ok
Not like they’re fighting for our country
Or policing their territory
Jesus fucking Christ they’re our future
Tryin to learn the basics of life
How many more thoughts and prayers
Should we suffer till we say
This shouldn’t be the new normal
Metal detectors and shelter in place
Dont solve anything when the perp
Has more fire than the police
Ar 15 or ak47 weapon of war
Gotta ban that shit
Did it for 10 yrs and mass shootings ...
#children
#GunControl
#violence
45 reads
4 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
1st Oct 2024 4:28am
1st Oct 2024 4:28am
Te Te Te TENNESSEE
Te Te Te TENNESSEE
This is the land where we come from
Democracy dyin in the Sun
Run for a seat and get elected
Stand in the well and get ejected
Just for standing with the people
Who put me in place
decided my race
Te Te Te Tennessee
Little justice for me if I live in Tennessee
Injustice killin our babies
God forbid if I stand up
Rising sun of Tennessee
Democracy dies in the valley
This will not stand in the Sun
9 yrs old and in a pine box
Seems like Te Te...
This is the land where we come from
Democracy dyin in the Sun
Run for a seat and get elected
Stand in the well and get ejected
Just for standing with the people
Who put me in place
decided my race
Te Te Te Tennessee
Little justice for me if I live in Tennessee
Injustice killin our babies
God forbid if I stand up
Rising sun of Tennessee
Democracy dies in the valley
This will not stand in the Sun
9 yrs old and in a pine box
Seems like Te Te...
#apathy
#hate
#sacrifice #sadness
#sacrifice #sadness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 7:22pm
28th Sep 2024 7:22pm
You'll then see it my way
Taking what's mine is mine
Taking what's yours is mine
How can I strive to be the best when everyone has something I want?
I've been rejected all my life
Now it's time for me to get what I want, what I need
If you don't want to let go, that's perfectly fine
I have your name & number
I'll find you
Force it out of your grip and annihilate you
You'll then see it my way
Taking what's yours is mine
How can I strive to be the best when everyone has something I want?
I've been rejected all my life
Now it's time for me to get what I want, what I need
If you don't want to let go, that's perfectly fine
I have your name & number
I'll find you
Force it out of your grip and annihilate you
You'll then see it my way
#bullying
#greed
#manipulation
#SelfReflection
#tragedy
70 reads
15 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 5:16pm
28th Sep 2024 5:16pm
Machine don’t feel(especially.001 percent)
Machine don’t feel(especially .001 percent)
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute
Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and sows seeds of anger
Get angry...
Fuck the machine
I’m real not Artificial
Algorithm set the money
Dweebs with not enough honey
The Zusk of Muckerberg
Trolls of the .001 percent
CEOs of social media
Now it’s where some read the news and
Thought Orange and Mueller with Q
Would execute
Uphold Christian values
P T Orange said there’s a sucker born
And stacks roll in on a stolen lie
Of a free and fair election
All the while Zusk of Muckerberg
Count stacks and sows seeds of anger
Get angry...
#dystopian
#greed
#humankind #money
#humankind #money
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oldmanG
Poem Published
28th Sep 2024 9:15am
28th Sep 2024 9:15am
Price of Silence
Price of Silence
Nightmares in dreams
Wake up screaming save me from myself
Cowards live when we don’t scream
Bullies behind a pulpit of hate
Price of the silence to silence me
I’m a tree Redwood against the crowd
Can’t silence me in my dreams
I’m fucking woke up I’m an iceberg
Chasing me I can’t sleep in my dreams
The price of silence is immense
Cowards hide behind the quiet
On keyboards typewriter bully
Pull back the shade show you a coward ...
Nightmares in dreams
Wake up screaming save me from myself
Cowards live when we don’t scream
Bullies behind a pulpit of hate
Price of the silence to silence me
I’m a tree Redwood against the crowd
Can’t silence me in my dreams
I’m fucking woke up I’m an iceberg
Chasing me I can’t sleep in my dreams
The price of silence is immense
Cowards hide behind the quiet
On keyboards typewriter bully
Pull back the shade show you a coward ...
#abuse
#bullying
#fear
#hurt
#ignorance
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
27th Sep 2024 8:22pm
27th Sep 2024 8:22pm
Judgement Day
Good Morning,
Another morning I woke up alive. Today will be different. I need to start eradicating all of the evils that are involved in my life. The 1st one on my hit list is you!
Another morning I woke up alive. Today will be different. I need to start eradicating all of the evils that are involved in my life. The 1st one on my hit list is you!
#anger
#hate
#MentalHealth
#minimalist
#murder
63 reads
6 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
25th Sep 2024 12:08pm
25th Sep 2024 12:08pm
1600 Bailey Street
1600 Bailey street
Smell the powder of the gun
3 yrs old dancing in the street
Not on a perp sheet
Braids of sunshine in her hair
Innocence meet violence
Sorry but it’s the wrong time
To be young without gunshots
Bailey street seems sweet
But without a bullet proof soul
Can’t cut between the cars
Or jump some hopscotch
Having to keep looking over my shoulder
And duck for cover
Bailey street is just like America
More guns than people
2nd Amendment is Bible to them...
Smell the powder of the gun
3 yrs old dancing in the street
Not on a perp sheet
Braids of sunshine in her hair
Innocence meet violence
Sorry but it’s the wrong time
To be young without gunshots
Bailey street seems sweet
But without a bullet proof soul
Can’t cut between the cars
Or jump some hopscotch
Having to keep looking over my shoulder
And duck for cover
Bailey street is just like America
More guns than people
2nd Amendment is Bible to them...
#culture
#GunControl
#violence
46 reads
0 Comments
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