Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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oldmanG
Poem Published
Today 3:55am
Today 3:55am
Truth Stands Above
Truth stands above
Step by step inch by inch
Noose tightening around my neck
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Feel the pressure
Closing in tight as a vice
World around me is sinking in
Step to the Lord to argue my case
My lies leave me nothing
but blank thoughts
Don’t have a leg to stand on
My urge is to rage on
Spouting falsities
Hope it sets me free
How about some distraction
To play on my fiction
Earth is flat
Mars is blue
Anything to...
Step by step inch by inch
Noose tightening around my neck
Thread by thread
Strand by strand
Feel the pressure
Closing in tight as a vice
World around me is sinking in
Step to the Lord to argue my case
My lies leave me nothing
but blank thoughts
Don’t have a leg to stand on
My urge is to rage on
Spouting falsities
Hope it sets me free
How about some distraction
To play on my fiction
Earth is flat
Mars is blue
Anything to...
#deception
#hypocrisy
#lies
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oldmanG
Poem Published
Yesterday 5:22am
Yesterday 5:22am
Cop City
Cop city ( in ATL)
There’s a state of emergency and it’s in cop city
Try and level the land and shoot protesters down
85 acres of beauty trees why would we
Flatten it out for the new world order
Police are the new military
In our community
Smoke bombs and pepper spray they
Gotta put em down
Can’t let the peasants gain the upper ground
Don’t know the heavy hand
is a losing proposition
Would think I’m talking about a far away land
But It’s in our backyard way
Down in Atlanta
Is it really...
There’s a state of emergency and it’s in cop city
Try and level the land and shoot protesters down
85 acres of beauty trees why would we
Flatten it out for the new world order
Police are the new military
In our community
Smoke bombs and pepper spray they
Gotta put em down
Can’t let the peasants gain the upper ground
Don’t know the heavy hand
is a losing proposition
Would think I’m talking about a far away land
But It’s in our backyard way
Down in Atlanta
Is it really...
#anger
#corruption
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drone
Poem Published
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
13th Dec 2024 7:15am
The Harvest
It is said
There are people
Who are like
Factory mushrooms
Who like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
There are people
Who are like
Factory mushrooms
Who like
Being kept in the Dark
Being fed on Bullshit
Until the harvest
When their brought
Into the Light
Where Reality waits
With a Bat
Where their Screaming
Begins
#honesty
#TruthOfLife
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 7:47pm
12th Dec 2024 7:47pm
The Honey of Mortal Blessings
Ugly swine, glad your not mine
Spit the apple into your eye
This dirty piggy never made it home
The lords helper, ran for shelter
Couldn't escape the boiling swelter
Pulverize you like the sheep you are
Oh man I could destroy you if i wanted
Murder you with my own two hands
Oh man I'd be so fucking happy
Murder you like a sacrificial lamb
You are nothing but a scared animal
Branded "A Coward" right on your back
A sight so divine, a sight so prime
Numerous ways to skin a cat
All sliced up ...
Spit the apple into your eye
This dirty piggy never made it home
The lords helper, ran for shelter
Couldn't escape the boiling swelter
Pulverize you like the sheep you are
Oh man I could destroy you if i wanted
Murder you with my own two hands
Oh man I'd be so fucking happy
Murder you like a sacrificial lamb
You are nothing but a scared animal
Branded "A Coward" right on your back
A sight so divine, a sight so prime
Numerous ways to skin a cat
All sliced up ...
#anger
#corruption
#hate
#religion
#weakness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
12th Dec 2024 7:43pm
12th Dec 2024 7:43pm
I'll Play That Fiddle For You
As odd as it may seem
This reality is only a dream
Like millions of insects freezing to death
Sociopath is my mathematics
The final answer is zero
C'mon, you'd love to be the superhero
The processed foods of your labors
Have decayed into disease
And the sweat you are dripping
Is the milk you consume with ease
Pick the peddles off of my flower
I'll reveal the lies you told during the last hour
Your passion is sour
My control is power
This reality is only a dream
Like millions of insects freezing to death
Sociopath is my mathematics
The final answer is zero
C'mon, you'd love to be the superhero
The processed foods of your labors
Have decayed into disease
And the sweat you are dripping
Is the milk you consume with ease
Pick the peddles off of my flower
I'll reveal the lies you told during the last hour
Your passion is sour
My control is power
#manipulation
#power
#vulnerability #weakness
#vulnerability #weakness
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Vision_of_insanity
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
11th Dec 2024 7:32pm
The Truth Will f**k You Dry
If you could disappear, I'd be a happy man
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
What does not kill you, only makes you much more vulnerable for the next time
Take a huge bite of my psychotic addiction
Come a little closer, I'll knife you in the kitchen
Consequences and truth led to your conviction
Trial made up of errors, another crucifixion
Eat it whole
Guzzle it down
Vomit it up
Fuck the ground
The enemy is within you
Kiss your ass, as you are your only friend
#angels
#CallToAction
#dark
#hate
#lies
62 reads
8 Comments
oldmanG
Poem Published
11th Dec 2024 5:06am
11th Dec 2024 5:06am
Bobbi Wilson
Bobbi Wilson
9 yr old environmentalist
Tryin to control and spray the lantern flys
Doing her part with help from Tik tok
Made up a mix to get rid of them
Dish soap n apple vinegar
Sprayed on the trees and sidewalk
Now this is where the bigotry seeps in
Man calls 911 said some little black woman
Was causing a stir
Said he doesn’t know what hell she’s doing
Scares him though
Mom went to a council hearing
Said she doesn’t want to label
But she’s black and a mom
Wants to share point of view
Man...
9 yr old environmentalist
Tryin to control and spray the lantern flys
Doing her part with help from Tik tok
Made up a mix to get rid of them
Dish soap n apple vinegar
Sprayed on the trees and sidewalk
Now this is where the bigotry seeps in
Man calls 911 said some little black woman
Was causing a stir
Said he doesn’t know what hell she’s doing
Scares him though
Mom went to a council hearing
Said she doesn’t want to label
But she’s black and a mom
Wants to share point of view
Man...
#childhood
#environment
#heroic #racism
#heroic #racism
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Maya404
Maya545
Maya545
Poem Published
10th Dec 2024 4:41am
10th Dec 2024 4:41am
nothing stays mine
Whatever i do,
however i do
It is never enough.
No perfect family,
no perfect love,
I did think I had my own person,
God never did.
I wish to live in my own world?
or was i forced to?
I never knew.
Have you ever seen scars on wrists?
or semi-colons in life?
you didn't, i see,
why don't you meet me?
I don't want love, i don't need care.
I'm all alone, i just need some air.
Even if i get someone, I always know
They are destined to let go.
however i do
It is never enough.
No perfect family,
no perfect love,
I did think I had my own person,
God never did.
I wish to live in my own world?
or was i forced to?
I never knew.
Have you ever seen scars on wrists?
or semi-colons in life?
you didn't, i see,
why don't you meet me?
I don't want love, i don't need care.
I'm all alone, i just need some air.
Even if i get someone, I always know
They are destined to let go.
#emptiness
47 reads
1 Comment
drone
Poem Published
9th Dec 2024 8:12am
9th Dec 2024 8:12am
IT Stays On
Morning grey
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me ...
Is gonna be the day
When it all comes back to you
Some how
You've realised
What you're gotta do
You now don't believe
In Anything
That is said to you
Anymore
You gotta leave
You've gotta clean your head
Find your own
Polnt of view
IF you stay
Your gonna Pay
In way's you can't Conceive
THEY will say
Anything
For you
to stay
But the leash stays on
Until
your in your grave
But lately
I found the one that saves me ...
#honesty
#philosophical
#TruthOfLife
55 reads
2 Comments
prometheus5290
Poem Published
8th Dec 2024 1:26pm
8th Dec 2024 1:26pm
The things we need to do
These are the things we need to do in America:
Stop working for and buying from evil- this will take what some might call sacrifice, but we might call responsibility. Affecting bank accounts and profits is the only to change some minds.
Start working for, buying from, and otherwise contributing to your community in as many ways as you can: volunteer, donate, bake and give locally and directly. Remove government, beaurocrocy and waste from what you give to and take from others.
Violence might help the process, but cannot stabilize us afterwards.
Stop working for and buying from evil- this will take what some might call sacrifice, but we might call responsibility. Affecting bank accounts and profits is the only to change some minds.
Start working for, buying from, and otherwise contributing to your community in as many ways as you can: volunteer, donate, bake and give locally and directly. Remove government, beaurocrocy and waste from what you give to and take from others.
Violence might help the process, but cannot stabilize us afterwards.
#consumerism
#fear
#responsibility
55 reads
6 Comments
drone
Poem Published
7th Dec 2024 1:26pm
7th Dec 2024 1:26pm
Doesn't Look Back
She looks up
To the man with the lens
Sir can you help me
I'm hungry no place to to sleep
A little humanity would help me
He closes his lens
Doesn't look back
Injoying his vacation
Not thinking twice
About his comfortable life
Just happy to have it
As she looks on
In sadness and grief
At humanity fading
As she listens to his Unconscious words
OH don't look twice
IT will ruin your vacation
In paradise
To the man with the lens
Sir can you help me
I'm hungry no place to to sleep
A little humanity would help me
He closes his lens
Doesn't look back
Injoying his vacation
Not thinking twice
About his comfortable life
Just happy to have it
As she looks on
In sadness and grief
At humanity fading
As she listens to his Unconscious words
OH don't look twice
IT will ruin your vacation
In paradise
#honesty
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oldmanG
Poem Published
6th Dec 2024 2:18am
6th Dec 2024 2:18am
Poison Blood
Says they’re poisoning our blood
While he poisons American me and our history
Selling lies and gold sneakers
Says you’re not one of US
When he came from land of immigrants
Father Fred born of a German barber
Land of the free what does that mean to me
They turn around and tell you when and what
You can do with your female body
Talk about freedom but all they do is close you in
If you think forward not in the past
You’re too woke you communist
Wallowing...
While he poisons American me and our history
Selling lies and gold sneakers
Says you’re not one of US
When he came from land of immigrants
Father Fred born of a German barber
Land of the free what does that mean to me
They turn around and tell you when and what
You can do with your female body
Talk about freedom but all they do is close you in
If you think forward not in the past
You’re too woke you communist
Wallowing...
#anger
#apathy
#betrayal
#conflict
#deception
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