Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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drone
Poem Published
Today 7:03am
Today 7:03am
Based In
Are one's opinions
Failable
Do they become
Mortality Wounded
When one Listens
To the high Possibilities
That one's opinions
One's Perceptions
Are not based
Neck deep
In Probable facts
Failable
Do they become
Mortality Wounded
When one Listens
To the high Possibilities
That one's opinions
One's Perceptions
Are not based
Neck deep
In Probable facts
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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Summerrain75
Poem Published
Yesterday 6:07pm
Yesterday 6:07pm
Did I Plagiarize?
Did I plagiarize?
NO, never in my life will I
It's a great insult
My integrity
Won't allow me to do it
For any reason
I don't need to use
And copy works of others
It's not worth the time
Why should I rely
On other people's writing
When I can do it
Fame is meaningless
When it is gain through stealing
Why not work for it
NO, never in my life will I
It's a great insult
My integrity
Won't allow me to do it
For any reason
I don't need to use
And copy works of others
It's not worth the time
Why should I rely
On other people's writing
When I can do it
Fame is meaningless
When it is gain through stealing
Why not work for it
#anger
#haiku
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drone
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2022 1:35pm
2nd Dec 2022 1:35pm
Useing the Third
In one's
Imagination
There should be
No complications
There should be
No fortifications
To defend
What is clear
To those
WHO use
Their eye
That Cannot Be Seen
Imagination
There should be
No complications
There should be
No fortifications
To defend
What is clear
To those
WHO use
Their eye
That Cannot Be Seen
#honesty
35 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2022 1:20pm
2nd Dec 2022 1:20pm
Worth More Than
When one's job
One's habits
Have a Value
That Are worth More
Then one's morals
One's
Principles
One has now become
A Master
At being
A Slave
One's habits
Have a Value
That Are worth More
Then one's morals
One's
Principles
One has now become
A Master
At being
A Slave
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
1st Dec 2022 10:56am
1st Dec 2022 10:56am
Corrupted
If one
Does not have
The freedom
Of information
That affects us all
Then one has to
Play the game
Of connecting the dots
IF one
Does not play
Then one does not have
The freedom
To think
Clearly
IF one does not have
The freedom to think
Clearly
Then one
Does not Have
The Freedom
To Speak
Clearly
One has become
Corrupted
In One's Thinking
That leads to a life
With No Meaning
Just a desperate need
To ignore
What...
Does not have
The freedom
Of information
That affects us all
Then one has to
Play the game
Of connecting the dots
IF one
Does not play
Then one does not have
The freedom
To think
Clearly
IF one does not have
The freedom to think
Clearly
Then one
Does not Have
The Freedom
To Speak
Clearly
One has become
Corrupted
In One's Thinking
That leads to a life
With No Meaning
Just a desperate need
To ignore
What...
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
1st Dec 2022 10:13am
1st Dec 2022 10:13am
Linear Question's
One asks
For answers
To linear question's
That one
Hasn't understood
For one hasn't
Created a space
Within one's mind
To listen
To the answer's
That are rarely
IF ever
Linear
Continuous
Unbroken
For answers
To linear question's
That one
Hasn't understood
For one hasn't
Created a space
Within one's mind
To listen
To the answer's
That are rarely
IF ever
Linear
Continuous
Unbroken
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
29th Nov 2022 10:23am
29th Nov 2022 10:23am
Scoring Point's
Is one's life
One's way of Living
Mostly dark clouds
With rain
Occasional flashs
Of hollow happyness
Scoring point's
On others
For them
To be the same
With one's
Voluntary misery
Discribing
One's history
With excuses
To ease your pain
Where Conceit
Becomes your vanity
Your pride
On scoring points
Trying to fill
What has become Hollow
In One's Life
One's way of Living
Mostly dark clouds
With rain
Occasional flashs
Of hollow happyness
Scoring point's
On others
For them
To be the same
With one's
Voluntary misery
Discribing
One's history
With excuses
To ease your pain
Where Conceit
Becomes your vanity
Your pride
On scoring points
Trying to fill
What has become Hollow
In One's Life
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
28th Nov 2022 9:34am
28th Nov 2022 9:34am
Personal. Space
You gotta sort through
The garbage
In one's head
One's own
Personal Shit
You gotta wade though it all
Choking on the smell
Of it All
Before one can breath
Deeply
In a clean space
That's Only reserved
For You
The garbage
In one's head
One's own
Personal Shit
You gotta wade though it all
Choking on the smell
Of it All
Before one can breath
Deeply
In a clean space
That's Only reserved
For You
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
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drone
Poem Published
28th Nov 2022 8:56am
28th Nov 2022 8:56am
The Greatest
The Greatest fear
One faces
Today
Is to hear
The words
Of Honesty
One faces
Today
Is to hear
The words
Of Honesty
#TruthOfLife
#philosophical
31 reads
1 Comment
EdibleWords
Poem Published
24th Nov 2022 10:48pm
24th Nov 2022 10:48pm
Restore my Wasted Terrain
As above
so below
There was a
microscopic
war in heaven
as we observe
News-fantasy-tv
A demon
was cast down
from my heaven
Germaphobia
hands tied and
falling from
a slippery slope
An Angel of terrain
Thessalonica
arose with
wholistic healing
upon the feathers
of her fruited plain
She restores my health
again
so below
There was a
microscopic
war in heaven
as we observe
News-fantasy-tv
A demon
was cast down
from my heaven
Germaphobia
hands tied and
falling from
a slippery slope
An Angel of terrain
Thessalonica
arose with
wholistic healing
upon the feathers
of her fruited plain
She restores my health
again
#science
#nature
#healing
59 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
23rd Nov 2022 10:13am
23rd Nov 2022 10:13am
Losing Your Grip
You gotta Grip the road
For there is
No cruise Control
To keep you on the road
To where
You want
To Go
You gotta Watch behind
For the Past is well inclined
To spin you around
Again
To lose the grip you had
To where
You Want
To Go
For there is
No cruise Control
To keep you on the road
To where
You want
To Go
You gotta Watch behind
For the Past is well inclined
To spin you around
Again
To lose the grip you had
To where
You Want
To Go
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
40 reads
2 Comments
drone
Poem Published
22nd Nov 2022 12:14pm
22nd Nov 2022 12:14pm
True Thoughts
It is When
One's true Thoughts
Are married
In a Unified
Energy Field
It is then
The Birth
Of your true Actions
Are Born
One's true Thoughts
Are married
In a Unified
Energy Field
It is then
The Birth
Of your true Actions
Are Born
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
36 reads
0 Comments
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