Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
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Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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drone
Poem Published
5th Dec 2023 12:07pm
5th Dec 2023 12:07pm
You Can. Run
One can Run
From one's fears
From one's assisted
Psychological
Problems
All those
Pretty coloured liquids
Powders and Pills
But the problem
WE all face
We cannot Hide
From our mind
Where our Fears
Reside
And when all those
Pretty coloured liquids
Powders and Pills
Run out
And they will
One's fears come back
LIKE a freight train
Stronger than before
The only way
To derail the fuckers
Is to Use Your Mind
From one's fears
From one's assisted
Psychological
Problems
All those
Pretty coloured liquids
Powders and Pills
But the problem
WE all face
We cannot Hide
From our mind
Where our Fears
Reside
And when all those
Pretty coloured liquids
Powders and Pills
Run out
And they will
One's fears come back
LIKE a freight train
Stronger than before
The only way
To derail the fuckers
Is to Use Your Mind
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
14 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 2:21pm
4th Dec 2023 2:21pm
Separating
Because
One's body
Is slowly
Breaking down
Doesn't mean
You have to do
The same
One's body
Is slowly
Breaking down
Doesn't mean
You have to do
The same
#honesty
34 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 2:11pm
4th Dec 2023 2:11pm
What We Could. Have Been
Though this Landscape
Of twisted perceptions
There's a pathway
We all avoid
For we are tought
From cradle
To our grave
That the price
Is to high
To pay
To Look
Within
To See
Of twisted perceptions
There's a pathway
We all avoid
For we are tought
From cradle
To our grave
That the price
Is to high
To pay
To Look
Within
To See
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
#philosophical
36 reads
2 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
4th Dec 2023 2:57am
4th Dec 2023 2:57am
Special Place
bring me to that special place of understanding
reincarnate your love for me
from lifetime to lifetime
manifest your face to touch
so I can feel you
gentle lover over faith
speaking things into to being
you surround me with your scorn
and spit in displeasure
all to prick my desire
it pleases you to see me need
salting old wounds
you watch me flinch
while squirming under the microscope
rushing from one to another for comfort
instead I find your displeasure in their rebuke
singled out for your...
reincarnate your love for me
from lifetime to lifetime
manifest your face to touch
so I can feel you
gentle lover over faith
speaking things into to being
you surround me with your scorn
and spit in displeasure
all to prick my desire
it pleases you to see me need
salting old wounds
you watch me flinch
while squirming under the microscope
rushing from one to another for comfort
instead I find your displeasure in their rebuke
singled out for your...
#love
#spiritual
59 reads
4 Comments
Casted_Runes
Mr Karswell
Mr Karswell
Poem Published
2nd Dec 2023 4:14pm
2nd Dec 2023 4:14pm
A Brief History of Hating Women
Since youth you’ve been obsessed
by how the ills of all society
are lain at women’s doors like skins.
From Potiphar’s wife to Mrs Clinton,
it’s always women’s fault.
She wasn’t a good enough mum,
she couldn’t keep mum,
she slept around all over town
or seemed at least like that’s
what she wanted. Or else she was frigid.
You realise in the end that no true road exists between the rock of what men want and what
you’d like to be, a hard place undefined.
The truth is that you’re just as flawed as men, as great, and grim,...
by how the ills of all society
are lain at women’s doors like skins.
From Potiphar’s wife to Mrs Clinton,
it’s always women’s fault.
She wasn’t a good enough mum,
she couldn’t keep mum,
she slept around all over town
or seemed at least like that’s
what she wanted. Or else she was frigid.
You realise in the end that no true road exists between the rock of what men want and what
you’d like to be, a hard place undefined.
The truth is that you’re just as flawed as men, as great, and grim,...
#women
#sex
#HumanRights #feminism
#HumanRights #feminism
44 reads
0 Comments
MsRockyJackson
Poem Published
1st Dec 2023 1:05pm
1st Dec 2023 1:05pm
Fall Back
#anger
#hate
#frustration
39 reads
0 Comments
da_poetic-edifier
Damon
Damon
Poem Published
1st Dec 2023 9:32am
1st Dec 2023 9:32am
It Was All A Scheme
They devised an elaborate scheme
Disappointedly deferring his dream
It had seemed to good to be true
Fortunately, he followed the clues
Instinctively he knew something was awry
Intelligently determined that it was all a lie
His third eye saw through the smoke and mirrors
Yet, he did come close to making a costly error
Now his anger wants him to seek and destroy
So that they'll never ever peek at such a ploy
His convoy of actions is notifying authoritarians
Hoping those factions bring their fraudulent acts to an end ...
Disappointedly deferring his dream
It had seemed to good to be true
Fortunately, he followed the clues
Instinctively he knew something was awry
Intelligently determined that it was all a lie
His third eye saw through the smoke and mirrors
Yet, he did come close to making a costly error
Now his anger wants him to seek and destroy
So that they'll never ever peek at such a ploy
His convoy of actions is notifying authoritarians
Hoping those factions bring their fraudulent acts to an end ...
#lies
41 reads
1 Comment
cabcool
Poem Published
29th Nov 2023 3:18am
29th Nov 2023 3:18am
mental shackles
There is little hope for us until we become tough-minded enough to
break loose from the shackles of prejudice, half-truths, and down-
right ignorance.”—Martin Luther King, Jr.
zoot scales fell from my eyes,
but i did not yet know
that light was mine, if only i would look;
brute chains fell from my thighs,
yet i did not know how
to move along where, years, no step i took.
when sighted men fall blind
by willful ignorance,
then shall all else, for vision-lack, bear blame?
when former...
break loose from the shackles of prejudice, half-truths, and down-
right ignorance.”—Martin Luther King, Jr.
zoot scales fell from my eyes,
but i did not yet know
that light was mine, if only i would look;
brute chains fell from my thighs,
yet i did not know how
to move along where, years, no step i took.
when sighted men fall blind
by willful ignorance,
then shall all else, for vision-lack, bear blame?
when former...
#oppression
#freedom
#prison
#escape
#FeelingTrapped
81 reads
3 Comments
Cen
Rakhi Rudra
Rakhi Rudra
Poem Published
27th Nov 2023 4:10am
27th Nov 2023 4:10am
Friday night.
She sways the winds of winter
Of glass frostem
From lake blue
In ocean white ice
Greek island
Often do you think about
Just feel better soon as you posted.
Of glass frostem
From lake blue
In ocean white ice
Greek island
Often do you think about
Just feel better soon as you posted.
#animals
42 reads
0 Comments
drone
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 10:30am
26th Nov 2023 10:30am
Does it
Does it Hurt
When
Your mind is Stretched
LIKE an elastic Band
With New information
New fronTears
New ideas
DOES it hurt
Your Feelings
Knowing
That unlike
An Elastic band
Your mind
Can Never go Back
TO your original
Comfortable
Perceptions
On how you See
Life
When
Your mind is Stretched
LIKE an elastic Band
With New information
New fronTears
New ideas
DOES it hurt
Your Feelings
Knowing
That unlike
An Elastic band
Your mind
Can Never go Back
TO your original
Comfortable
Perceptions
On how you See
Life
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
47 reads
0 Comments
SweetKittyCat5
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 7:42am
26th Nov 2023 7:42am
Methadone My Lady (It’s Free)
You have bowed enough to a man, get up off your knees
At..at.. what is Hades’ magic word, and it ain’t please
Until you remember it get back down on all fours until the sun eclipses the moon at ninety degrees
You came into my realm to seek that ultimate high
What are you willing to sacrifice besides your worthless life
It's nothing more sickening than a mother who leaves a wild child to the wolves tossed out like trash in the wind
An undeveloped brain that cannot compute in the real world, drop the act, blue-eyed devil, I...
At..at.. what is Hades’ magic word, and it ain’t please
Until you remember it get back down on all fours until the sun eclipses the moon at ninety degrees
You came into my realm to seek that ultimate high
What are you willing to sacrifice besides your worthless life
It's nothing more sickening than a mother who leaves a wild child to the wolves tossed out like trash in the wind
An undeveloped brain that cannot compute in the real world, drop the act, blue-eyed devil, I...
#dark
#war
193 reads
5 Comments
crimsin
Unveiling
Unveiling
Poem Published
26th Nov 2023 6:19am
26th Nov 2023 6:19am
Bet Your Bottom Dollar
Twist the knife deeper darlin
I don't feel your prick
you dig and don't touch the scars you left
Lingering in the shadows
with darkness sickness
invading the semblance of normalcy
with your fallic symbolism
Little boy with mommy issues
can't take the heat have to blame everyone else
for your family neurocy
Pick up a blade now and cut me
I'm prepared for more than you have to offer
I've loved you blindly
I loved your family
you think to inherit
you money grubber
Keep your...
I don't feel your prick
you dig and don't touch the scars you left
Lingering in the shadows
with darkness sickness
invading the semblance of normalcy
with your fallic symbolism
Little boy with mommy issues
can't take the heat have to blame everyone else
for your family neurocy
Pick up a blade now and cut me
I'm prepared for more than you have to offer
I've loved you blindly
I loved your family
you think to inherit
you money grubber
Keep your...
#dark
103 reads
6 Comments
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