Anger Poems Seeking Honest Critique
POEMS AND SHORT STORIES
Poetry about angst, activism and hate
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String Instruments
What's the point of so many rhythmic lines?...
Row, rhyme and rum
They are just waves in the same sea.
Seagull murmurs
like someone singing a fado or two
or it will come to sing much later.
Arrange drawers, sticks and prints
from left to right in an order
almost alphabetical.
Unhinged fairies blessing the sound
of a lute, a guitar and a banjo.
Without wings, without bones, like angels!
Pain descriptive nonconformities
that passes through the brain shamelessly
Bloodlust of a dark predator.
...
Row, rhyme and rum
They are just waves in the same sea.
Seagull murmurs
like someone singing a fado or two
or it will come to sing much later.
Arrange drawers, sticks and prints
from left to right in an order
almost alphabetical.
Unhinged fairies blessing the sound
of a lute, a guitar and a banjo.
Without wings, without bones, like angels!
Pain descriptive nonconformities
that passes through the brain shamelessly
Bloodlust of a dark predator.
...
#music
#rhyming
#lyrics
42 reads
4 Comments
Military Madness
Look into my eyes
I’m a human guinea pig
Born to be controlled
Forced into experimentation
I have no name
No words that mean anything
A little each day,
Psycho & possessed into a state
War inside my head
I can feel the pain
Can you?
I’m a human guinea pig
Born to be controlled
Forced into experimentation
I have no name
No words that mean anything
A little each day,
Psycho & possessed into a state
War inside my head
I can feel the pain
Can you?
#loneliness
#soldiers
#war
#MentalHealth
#military
58 reads
7 Comments
Experience
One has to ask
The Question
Is one
Living
The Human Minded
Experience
Or just
The sad
Monkey Minded
Racial
Experience
Of living
The Question
Is one
Living
The Human Minded
Experience
Or just
The sad
Monkey Minded
Racial
Experience
Of living
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
48 reads
0 Comments
Such a bitch
On a Tuesday
My soul was crushed
Smashed into dust
Skin turned to rust
She ripped out my spirit
A bitch, and she knew it
You look away for one minute
Pushed past your limit
Such a radiant beast
Yet you’ll be her feast
You are her meat
Forever deceased
Don’t be deceived by her hair
At her locks you must tear
For a daily fight I prepare
Her presence, I truly can’t bare
On my nerves does she grate
A person one can only hate
On my mind is a weight
In her grasps...
My soul was crushed
Smashed into dust
Skin turned to rust
She ripped out my spirit
A bitch, and she knew it
You look away for one minute
Pushed past your limit
Such a radiant beast
Yet you’ll be her feast
You are her meat
Forever deceased
Don’t be deceived by her hair
At her locks you must tear
For a daily fight I prepare
Her presence, I truly can’t bare
On my nerves does she grate
A person one can only hate
On my mind is a weight
In her grasps...
#anger
#hate
#hurt
92 reads
2 Comments
Shut Up and Read
Are you aware of the facts?
Racist fucking lies
Government is corrupt
Earth born Genocide
Do you truly give a fuck?
Society's ultimate demise
Warning before we deconstruct
Authorities killing minorities
So much useless crime
Who's serving the time?
Your told to obey these fools
You coward in the shadows
You act more like a pack of mules
Racist fucking lies
Government is corrupt
Earth born Genocide
Do you truly give a fuck?
Society's ultimate demise
Warning before we deconstruct
Authorities killing minorities
So much useless crime
Who's serving the time?
Your told to obey these fools
You coward in the shadows
You act more like a pack of mules
#corruption
#politics
#rhyming
#HumanRights
#inequality
95 reads
10 Comments
Women’s Rights
A zygote is a person
you say
In or out of the womb
God’s creation
you decree
So has rights!
Already a person
Until they are born
[a woman]
then
rights dissolve
[because its a woman]
A woman’s rights are now
dictated
by
another’s religion
Rapist’s conceptions
have more rights
[than the woman]
A fetus that won’t live
has more rights
[than the woman]
A baby, dying in the womb
has more rights
[than the woman who grieves and may die for the life...
you say
In or out of the womb
God’s creation
you decree
So has rights!
Already a person
Until they are born
[a woman]
then
rights dissolve
[because its a woman]
A woman’s rights are now
dictated
by
another’s religion
Rapist’s conceptions
have more rights
[than the woman]
A fetus that won’t live
has more rights
[than the woman]
A baby, dying in the womb
has more rights
[than the woman who grieves and may die for the life...
#anger
#politics
74 reads
5 Comments
WHEN IT RAINS IT POURS
Here I sit in my recliner with my silence of my thoughts, 🤔 for it is in these moments of lost time. WHEN I go back in time and I remember, what my grandfather use to say to me. For you will have to be your most strongest to learn, more about the establishment of life. That being trapped in a dark place for when it rains it pours, and it seems almost in possible to get out of the rain ☔☔🤨. For sometimes you just feel like giving up and you ask thyself what is the point, for it feels like the world is against you ever step you take in life. For I know I just have to...
#dialogue
#uplifting
#emotional
#metaphor
#StreamOfConsciousness
81 reads
2 Comments
Puberty
The rights
Of natural passage
Will be denied
To all
Of our young
And those
Who have passed through it
Will be
The last
Of your kind
Of natural passage
Will be denied
To all
Of our young
And those
Who have passed through it
Will be
The last
Of your kind
#honesty
49 reads
2 Comments
State of Mind
If one does not
Grow
Imagination
Empathy
Intuition
Then one is
Psychologically
Naked
In a field
Of competing fractions
Where they will
Look at You
As Prey
Grow
Imagination
Empathy
Intuition
Then one is
Psychologically
Naked
In a field
Of competing fractions
Where they will
Look at You
As Prey
#TruthOfLife
#honesty
65 reads
0 Comments
work no. 3
i abandoned all hope today
standing in front of the time clock
watched the glimmer drain
from my baby blue bloodshots
in the spiders web of software
honeyed flies they caught there
skipped lunch for stockholder cruises
i won't answer phones anymore
carpal tunnel, finger tip bruises
i'm running out of friends to ignore
standing in front of the time clock
watched the glimmer drain
from my baby blue bloodshots
in the spiders web of software
honeyed flies they caught there
skipped lunch for stockholder cruises
i won't answer phones anymore
carpal tunnel, finger tip bruises
i'm running out of friends to ignore
#depression
#money
#greed
55 reads
0 Comments
Who Cares?
And you torture yourself without reason
Who ever cares if you are the naive victim
The only scape-goat for all the world's evil
You torture yourself, just try to reason;
You cry out on much milk, well past spilled
You think your pain will never be healed
Like you bear Adams and Eve first ever guilt
Doomed to suffer, your fate has been sealed
Too much complaining, your own skin slashing
Self-torturing, moaning about the heart-breaking
As if life only around love must be spinning
Devil may care , he even might not be...
Who ever cares if you are the naive victim
The only scape-goat for all the world's evil
You torture yourself, just try to reason;
You cry out on much milk, well past spilled
You think your pain will never be healed
Like you bear Adams and Eve first ever guilt
Doomed to suffer, your fate has been sealed
Too much complaining, your own skin slashing
Self-torturing, moaning about the heart-breaking
As if life only around love must be spinning
Devil may care , he even might not be...
#anxiety
#hate
#heartbroken
#disappointment
#apathy
104 reads
3 Comments
They Can
It is said
The Human Minded
Can draw
More
Than what They Contain
More
Then what they believe
They can Do
But sadly
There are those
Who find it hard
To leave behind
Friends
Who pretend
Being Inticed
Infected
ON the net
By the Collective
The Human Minded
Can draw
More
Than what They Contain
More
Then what they believe
They can Do
But sadly
There are those
Who find it hard
To leave behind
Friends
Who pretend
Being Inticed
Infected
ON the net
By the Collective
#honesty
29 reads
0 Comments
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