The moon and the sea

Love this… it flows so well… touching deep…

Thank you so much, dear poetess... I'm so honoured by the RL add...😊🌹

You write some of the most beautiful pieces Lady, totally digging it. Tight work as always

Your words mean a lot to me, dear Me. Such high praise from a brilliant poet like you puts my on cloud 9😊 thank you so much  🙏

Beautiful poem on the moon and the sea
You are always creative and your imagination is wide and special
You pull me to write you the end of your poem without feeling if I do that because I am sailing in your poem.

"Finish playing a shy in disguise!
Let's find the perfect sunrise, sunset surprise.

Put my arms around you
Allow my moon to reflect off your sea

Too much time has passed  by me
Come outside with and view the horizon up high

Follow me beyond the distance of chemistry.
I expose my moon and explain the physics of your sea.  

Give me another chance and you will see!
my moon, is skin deep, needing water from you."

you are always creative
My greetings

Thank you so much, MP for your generous comments. I very much appreciate you taking time to read and leave such kind review. Thanks for sharing your thoughts. 🙏

Dear ID,

I’m going to ignore the slight you gave yourself in your authors note  about this being possibly crap. It most definitely is not. I got sucked in completely  by “yet I feel a pull towards you
You are the moon
and, I ,the sea
Though it's not in our destiny
to be together” as it defines a past amore. All these years later it’s him I still think of in times of melancholy. You can never go wrong with the moon and the sea!  A lovely poem from start to finish. H🌷

Thanks a tonne, dearest Honoria  for your thoughtful and sweet words 😊 I wrote this on a whim...but yes, had someone in mind with whom I'm no longer in touch with ....
Usually I work on my pieces, do editing,some tweaking .... But with this piece I just posted  it 'raw'.  
Sorry, for the 'crap' thing... I'll delete it....😊

Once again thanks a lot for reading my work. It's such an honour  to have my poem on your reading list.  😊🌹✨

The moon controls the tides of the sea.  Keep on writing.

Thank you, dear Francisco 🥀

Romantic read, noting that the moon has a place in romantic lore. Favourite lines:

yet I feel a pull towards you
You are the moon
and, I ,the sea
Though it's not in our destiny

So glad you liked this piece.... 😊
Thank you so much, dear Solomon for sharing your thoughts 🥀

I don't even know how you question your writing. You make masterpieces.

I for one am very glad you posted this lovely gem 😁

Oh, thank you so much, dearest friend... You are a sweetheart 😊
Thank you so much for your constant kind support. 🙏

I wish that I could write the stream of consciousness that you, yourself, have insulted!  You have complimented my two favorite entities, the moon and sea.  I enjoyed this very much!
-Ted

Wow.... Great to know that, dear poet.... I'm in love with the moon n sea...😍
Basically, I'm a nature lover n love writing poems using nature to represent love...

Your comment about my poem has put me on seventh heaven, dear Ted... I'm very much honoured by the RL add🌷🌷🌷

You have a beautiful way with words.

You made my evening, my dearest poet 😊
I'm so over the moon to see that this piece has made it to your reading list... Wow😊
Thanks a bunch, James🥀🌻🌼

I am a big fan of your work my friend. Your poems are strong and I look forward to reading them.

God! I'm speechless!  You are an awesome writer n  I think so highly of you... And such comment from you means a LOT to me....  
I thank you from the bottom of my heart 🙏 🥀💕

Thank you for your kind words.
Regards
James

A beautiful flow
Could be interpreted in so many ways
Loving your new avatar too
You're just what I needed this morning

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Oh, thank you so much, dear poet. Love your presence on my page 😊  I'm so honoured by the RL add, 😊🥀

Hey, thanks for the big compliment. 😊 I took that selfie yesterday 😁

Unrequited love, but giving kindness and appreciation. I love your writing very insightful.

Awwww.... You made my day, dear poetess 🥀 Thanks a bunch ! 😊

Another excellent body of work 👌 queen 👸 marvelous you inspire to write ✍ about my feelings of love!! Except I don't truly or fully believe in love am I wrong for this??

Thank you so much for the encouraging comment. Appreciate you stopping by. :)

Kudos on the lovely words! I really dig how this poem paints the picture of a strong connection and deep yearning between two totally different entities, showcasing the true essence of love in such a heartwarming manner! Bravo!