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Not Ours.........
people will always disappoint you.....
if you allow them to
I’ve become aware lately.....
that luv can change a soul
but only if it truly is capable.....
to feel and know luv it’s self
precious luv that we are capable of....
isn’t always accepted by another
as being a true gift....
from a luving selfless soul
they mistreat us....
cause that’s all they know
they only see into us....
when it’s convenient for them
deep inside they know the truth....
that our luv is true and rare
they just don’t know how....
to let another soul luv them
well....
guess what my friend
it’s their problem
not ours
it’s their mistake
not ours
it’s their misfortune
not ours
we are better off to hear their silence
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
if you allow them to
I’ve become aware lately.....
that luv can change a soul
but only if it truly is capable.....
to feel and know luv it’s self
precious luv that we are capable of....
isn’t always accepted by another
as being a true gift....
from a luving selfless soul
they mistreat us....
cause that’s all they know
they only see into us....
when it’s convenient for them
deep inside they know the truth....
that our luv is true and rare
they just don’t know how....
to let another soul luv them
well....
guess what my friend
it’s their problem
not ours
it’s their mistake
not ours
it’s their misfortune
not ours
we are better off to hear their silence
Copyright © 2018 Flowergirl All Rights Reserved
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Re. Not Ours.........
Anonymous
28th Jan 2018 1:29am
Thank you.
Respectively
Beth
Respectively
Beth
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Hey Beth.......thank you for smiling upon my ink.......great respect sent back your way.......honored by the rl add on.......purple luv & hugs your way xo :)
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28th Jan 2018 1:35am
Flower.. this is beautifully, and brilliantly done.. into my list it goes.. much love, and respect..
Dave
Dave
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Hey Dave.......you’ve made me blush......respect and luv sent back your way.......honored by the rl add on.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Jan 2018 4:06am
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30th Jan 2018 1:34am
Hey Naajir.......always a blessing to see your smile upon my ink......thank you for sharing thoughts with me.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Jan 2018 4:14am
Love these wise words dear flowergirl. so heartfelt to your points of view, and I feel the pain from your heart too. They are like Bible proverbs... truly beautiful...
much love
RoseJasmine
much love
RoseJasmine
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30th Jan 2018 1:43am
Awe Rose.......your graceful words make me smile and feel glad I came back here.......this point of view came at a cost........it’s not just my heart I felt thru inking this.......thank you my friend......purple luv & hugs xo :)
Re. Not Ours.........
28th Jan 2018 6:10am
Loved the write and the damn I'm telling it as it is lines at the end with determined vision of what you want from yourself and others
Love between two is just that, between two and sure to let others in to witness such bliss is to share in its happiness too
Though those with jealous ideals or selfish awareness need not apply to be friends
Love between two is just that, between two and sure to let others in to witness such bliss is to share in its happiness too
Though those with jealous ideals or selfish awareness need not apply to be friends
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30th Jan 2018 1:49am
Hey Rose........luv your way of thinking.......this ink took a lot to write.......my heart isn’t the only one felt here.......I don’t understand how some can treat others the way they do and act like it’s ok when all they do is use and abuse.......just not right.......thank you for your thought provoking comment......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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30th Jan 2018 5:33am
Yes agreed
Many people going through tough difficult times trying to understand in the aftermath of why some choose the paths they do
Many people going through tough difficult times trying to understand in the aftermath of why some choose the paths they do
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31st Jan 2018 00:59am
Hey Rose.......I’m sure I will ever understand why others refuse luv from a pure heart that has everything to give......appreciate your thoughts.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Jan 2018 1:25pm
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30th Jan 2018 1:55am
Hey Bro......appreciate your awareness.......sometimes you just need to ink the emotion out.......thank you for your words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Jan 2018 4:06pm
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30th Jan 2018 2:00am
Hey Avahati.......thank you for your warm words.......sometimes we have to let reality drip from pen to paper.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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30th Jan 2018 2:04am
Hey Sista.......I hesitated after I wrote that thought.......I remembering thinking.......do they really know the hurt they’ve caused us deep within.......that we gave them so much more than they needed to be given.......thank you for your thought provoking words.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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28th Jan 2018 8:26pm
Such a beautiful poem Flowergirl and so true. Purple luv and hugs to you. x
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30th Jan 2018 2:07am
Hey Purple........thank you for gracing my page with your purpleness........thrilled you enjoyed this.......honored by the rl add on.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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29th Jan 2018 8:03am
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30th Jan 2018 2:09am
Hey David........I’m so happy you enjoyed this........am always thrilled to feel your hugs......thank you.......sending purple luv & hugs back your way xo :)
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10th Feb 2018 3:21am
Hey Avalon.......thrilled to see you smile upon my ink.......yes you and I have talked about this.......thank you for sharing trust and thoughts with me........will look forward to hearing from you.....purple luv & hugs xo :)
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5th Feb 2018 6:24pm
Hey Purple! You've still got the magic! Yes, you write as good as you always have and I have missed reading your beautiful words. You are such a beautiful soul. This poem is not only brilliant but is also deeply moving and full of wisdom. Love it.
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10th Feb 2018 3:39am
Awe Faith........I humbly thank you for the tremendous blessing of your words.......beautiful souls like yours is why I keep on.......feeling the luv you’ve poured out upon my page.....sending purple luv & hugs right back your way xo :)
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12th Feb 2018 7:27pm
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Hey Jeff........thank you for smiling upon my ink......thrilled you enjoyed it......honored by the RL add on.......purple luv & hugs xo :)
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24th Feb 2018 4:15pm
Another great poem. Beautifully done. How many times have we all wished that we could unhear the spoken words of love.
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28th Feb 2018 2:16am
Hey BD......you’re so right in your thoughts........many times I’ve found luv harsh.....leaving my heart weeping.......wishing I had not heard it’s voice.......thank you for a thought provoking response.......purple luv & hugs xo :)