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'Scarred-Harlot...'
She,
such a
pitiful mess
hollow, she'd wallow
within her sunken breast
A cusp,
that gust of
wind flew by hope...
Dredging
up those scheming
'life freeing' demons again
Addicted
to the exuberant fall,
this fiend-next rises
transfixed on the HIGH-rising...
such a
pitiful mess
hollow, she'd wallow
within her sunken breast
A cusp,
that gust of
wind flew by hope...
Dredging
up those scheming
'life freeing' demons again
Addicted
to the exuberant fall,
this fiend-next rises
transfixed on the HIGH-rising...
Published 13th Jun 2017
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13th Jun 2017 9:18pm
well shit in god's beard o.O
this was fucking epic.
that is all.
to the reading list it goes.
xo
this was fucking epic.
that is all.
to the reading list it goes.
xo
13th Jun 2017 10:11pm
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13th Jun 2017 11:17pm
I enjoyed this, PoetikOne. It's filled with Hope.
Reminds me of the Stevie Windwood song "Higher Love".
The only way to go when down is up.
Reminds me of the Stevie Windwood song "Higher Love".
The only way to go when down is up.
14th Jun 2017 00:58am
Aaawww, my wonderful n gifted friend...you honor me n I'm indebted...thank-you! :)
14th Jun 2017 8:27am
there's a recklessness
reeking here...as if convicted by the abandonment ...
the emptiness...
reeking here...as if convicted by the abandonment ...
the emptiness...
14th Jun 2017 11:21am
Yea, you nailed it bro! N I'm very happy to see you back, stay awhile please I've missed my brotha from anotha motha! :) grateful always :)
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16th Jun 2017 9:43am
Guess it would be very hard to fly in that condition huh? :)...thank you sweetie, appreciate you muchly! :)
20th Jun 2017 2:48pm
It's so beautifully read. Followed your words, I can imagine a scarred-harlot, just like that. I am impressed with the vivid imagery.
RoseJasmine
RoseJasmine
20th Jun 2017 2:55pm
Your thoughts are very much cherished my sweetheart, thank you so much for that n the RL add ..I'm honored. :)
Anonymous
20th Jun 2017 8:27pm
you're something else honey, i have not much to say about this
i shalt not speak on it, lol---> :-o <-- that's me
i shalt not speak on it, lol---> :-o <-- that's me
20th Jun 2017 8:38pm
Aaawww...you're sooooo sweet my dear... Flattered I am, thank you so much! :)
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13th Jul 2017 4:56pm
Man this is a really nice piece.
I enjoyed every part of it
Every word.
Thanks for sharing.
I enjoyed every part of it
Every word.
Thanks for sharing.
13th Jul 2017 6:49pm
